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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 16 years ago

Okay, I've read many brilliant fanfictions on Kis Desh.. and I now hope to write one of my own! Only, my Hindi is practically non-existent, and I was hoping someonw could help me beta? So that anything I attempt to write in Hindi/Punjabi will be grammatically correct.. Help would be greatly appreciated, and if you would like to read my very first fanfiction on this forum, please do let me know! I have the characters and storyline more or less planned, now all I need is to find sometime to type it all out! (My exams finish in November though, so until then updates will probably be scarce..)

Please do let me know if you're interested in reading, and especially if you can help me out! Thank you!

- Radz

*edited*

contents:

character sketch 1 - page 2

character sketch 2 - page 3

character sketch 3 - page 4

part 1 - page 11

part 2 - page 12

part 3 - page 15

part 4 - page 17

note - page 19

part 5 - page 19
part 6 - page 23
part 7 - page 25
part 8 - page 26
part 9 - page 27
part 10A - page 29

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tadashi

Edited by Anhdara13 - 15 years ago

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guju_angel

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Posted: 16 years ago

ellow lol.. urm.. hindi help?.. dnt ask me for dat.. cuz am not veri gud at it either.. n abt ur ff lol.. do post it wen u have time.. n also post the link ov it in the FF collection topic by *Shifali* or pm me with ur ff's link so i can put it up in the list of FFs so it's easier tu find ff's for readers..

x. Radhika

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Nadia

@naddiya26

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Posted: 16 years ago

lol i my self a fool so i use english only write in which you are comfortable over here ever one like other no formality ok see how many stupid mistake i make in my ff take naddi help she is ready

Edited by pisces26 - 16 years ago

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khaleda aktar

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Posted: 16 years ago

I can help you!!if u need my help pm me ok friend?

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omera

@maryam91

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey, i can help you if you need to write anything in panjabi,

i would really like to read your first fanfic, so let me knw once you've done it.😊

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: guju_angel
n abt ur ff lol.. do post it wen u have time.. n also post the link ov it in the FF collection topic by *Shifali* or pm me with ur ff's link so i can put it up in the list of FFs so it's easier tu find ff's for readers..

x. Radhika

Thank you! It'll probably be quite awhile till I post anything, though the character sketch may come out soon.. Thanks again!

-Radz

(Gods, I love this forum.. Everyone's so warm and friendly!)

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Sunayna

@x.sunayna.x

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey!

Sorry i can't help with Punjabhi. . . hindi maybe!

Can't wait till you post!

and Good luck with your exams!

?xXx?

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey!

Just an update to let you know that the first part of the character sketches will probably be posted by next week, and to thank you for all your interest and offers of help! And the character sketches have been broken up into three pages.. I'll probably post them about a week or two apart as I find pictures and write out the first part..

Also, I hope no one will be offended if my fanfiction resembles anything you have read.. I am often subconciously influenced by what I have read, and if you think my storyline is going the way of someone else's, please let me know and I'll change it!

Love,

Radz