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Hey all!
I'm so sorry, I have been busy with school so I forgot that I had this already typed out on my computer! It's the first part of the character sketch, and I will (hopefull) be adding in photos when I find them.. Enjoy!
The Maan Parivaar
Balraj Maan
The head of the household, he is the pillar of his family. He adores his daughters, as well as his brother's children. He treats them all equally, and wants the best for all of them. He has seen his brother slip away from him under his wife's influence, and he wishes to keep the children from following the same path. He loves his wife, and is constantly flirting with her in front of the youngsters, something that amuses them to no end, and embarrasses her. He is waiting to get his daughter married off to his best friend's son, and despite the lack of contact over the last 18 years, has not lost his faith.
Teji Maan
Balraj's wife of many years, she is the shelter to all her kids. They come to her with all her problems. Her world begins and ends with her family. She is Heer's support, Meher's protector, Ash's advisor and Shaurya's bhagvan. She worships her husband, but is constantly arguing with him over small things. She tries to see the best in everybody, and she is the only reason Balraj has not thrown his brother and wife out of their lives and adopted their kids as their own. She is worried about her children's future, but her faith in her Waheguru (which she has passed on to the kids) keeps her strong.
Balwant Maan
He is Balraj's younger brother, and he used to be Balraj's shadow in their younger years. His adoration of his brother however, has been all but wiped away by his wife's influence. He has become a joru ka ghulam, and he will do anything his wife says. Originally, he was fida over his wife's looks, but he does love her. He loves his children, and even his brother's children to some extent. His wife's influence on him however, is too great for him to do much on his own.
Daljeet Maan
Every story needs a villain, and in ours, she is the main one. She is Balwant's wife, and she loves her family, but hates her husband's brother and his family. She will do anything to put her family in a better position. She is very mercenary in nature, and had initially married Balwant for money. Her main aim in life is to get the money that Balraj's land is worth, and to get her children settled in rich families so she can live comfortably. She resents Teiji and Balraj because her younger two children seem to be closer to them then their own parents.
Vishaka Maan-Singh
She is the eldest of the next generation. Balwant's elder daughter, she is her mother's parchai. She is married to Prashant Singh, Mercenary and self-centred, they want the money that is in Balraj's name. She is her mother's chamchi, and not close to her siblings due to that fact. Not a major character, though she does make a few appearances.
Shaurya Maan
He is Vishaka's younger brother and the only son in the household. He grew up around his Ma-Papaji rather than his Mom and Dad, and due to this has remained uninfluenced by his Mom. While he does love his parents, he is not oblivious to their reality, and so he lives with his Ma-Papaji. Closest in age to Heer, he treats her more as a friend due to the fact that they not only grew up together, but went to school together as well. He was a flirt once upon a time, but has since mellowed out do to situations in life. With his Papaji's help, he is now successfully running a steadily expanding business.
Heer Maan
Noted to be one of the sweetest and prettiest girls in Ambala, Heer is our protagonist. She is extremely intelligent, but very shy and quiet. A traditional sort of girl, she is much like her mother. Heer has been engaged to her father's best friend's son since she was little, and has spent the last 18 years of her life waiting for him. While it often seems like she is meek, she is very passionate about her ideals and values, and will not compromise them for anything. Her temper, when aroused, is a sight to be seen.
Ashlesha Maan
The youngest child of Balwant and Daljeet Maan, she is nothing like her elder sister. The most modern from all the Maan children, she is the most reputable beauty in Ambala, as well as in Ludhiana. She is vivacious and lively, and has boys falling at her feet. While she is very particular about her looks, she is also smart. She loves her Ma-Papaji tremendously, and is often at their house rather than her own due to the differences in her and her mother. She is extremely close to her cousins and her elder brother, and would do anything for them.
Meher Maan
The youngest in the Maan household, she is not one to be trifled with. While she is not conventionally beautiful, Meher is outgoing and loud, and it is next to impossible not to like her. She loves to eat, almost as much as she loves her family. Together with her best friend Ash, she has the whole of Ambala dancing to her tune. She is bossy and quick to temper, but loyal to her friends and family. She is also a little insecure due to her slight chubbiness, and is both eagerly awaiting and dreading the day her sister will be happily married off.
Hope you enjoyed that! (I can't find the type of photos I want, so I'll only post photos after my exams..) The next part will probably be posted only sometime in early October. Sorry, but I'm having my prelims at the moment, and am swamped with school! I'll try to post earlier, but we'll have to wait and see!
Love
Radz
Edited by Anhdara13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aw its great!!
btw is saurya played by iqbal khan? or who?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That was really a neat character sketch..nice addition of Shourya..looking forward to read the rest..pls continue whenever u r free..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ranrags

That was really a neat character sketch..nice addition of Shourya..looking forward to read the rest..pls continue whenever u r free..

Aw, thanks! ๐Ÿ˜ณ I have the next bit mostly typed out, just have to read through it again, edit it maybe.. It should be up sometime next week! Hopefully, with pictures!
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice character sketch
will be waiting....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello to all! Unfortunately, I was having trouble signing in for the past few days, so I couldn't post the second part of the character sketch. It's been burning a hole in my computer! Also unfortunately, no pictures as of yet.. Still in the process of gathering all of them.. And my friend is helping me, but she's busy as well.. We only attain complete freedom in December, after our exams..
Now, mini-rant! Why the h**l did the creatives have to give Dheer the name Shaurya? Dheer was perfectly fine! I didn't like that name! But I like the name Shaurya! ๐Ÿ˜ก Stupid creatives... Dheer is always going to be Dheer to me! Shaurya is my jaan from Kkavyanjali! Not this stupid weirdo.. Okay, end of rant.. ๐Ÿ˜Š
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The Juneja Parivaar
Lalit Juneja
The patriarch of the family, he is a sometimes long-winded individual with a heart of gold. He initially was married to Shipra, but after she passed away due to cancer, he married her younger sister in order for his elder two children to have a mother. He loves his wife in part due to her acceptance of his children and her sweet nature. While sometimes his actions seem odd to his children and even wife, his intentions are always good. Though he has lived in Canada for the past 18 years, he wants to return to his desh for good, and fulfil the promise he made to Balraj years ago.
Gayatri Juneja
She is Lalit's second wife, but first in the hearts of all her children. She treats Lalit's eldest two children as her own, and sees no difference in all five children. She is a sweet, soft-spoken individual who can read her children's hearts very easily. Her temper largely comes into play when her husband refuses to take care of himself, or when her youngest son starts to tease his father. She can be very stubborn, and though she has lived in Canada for such a long time, she is still a traditional woman and has instilled these same values in her children.
Kulraj Juneja-Malhotra
The eldest of the Juneja children, Kulraj is married to a middle-class man. She is a sweet individual who is proud of the fact that her husband stands on his own two feet. She is close to all her siblings, and is like a second mother to them. She has three of her own children, Gautam, Rishi and Tanu.
Prem Juneja
Shipra and Lalit's eldest son, and the centre and strength of the family. He is the apple of Gayatri's eye. Strong-willed, smart, and some might say silent, he embodies every girl's dream husband. Unknown to him, he was engaged to Heer at a young age. While he believes that there is a girl somewhere made for him, his parents' word is law, and he will do anything they say. At first glance he may seem shy, but his eyes express what he does not say.
Harman Juneja
The eldest child of Gayatri and Lalit, Harman is a smart and sweet man. A lawyer by profession, he is surprisingly quiet outside of the court. Understanding and unconventionally handsome, he is unsurprisingly quite popular with the ladies, but his unassuming nature results in his unawareness to this fact. He is close to all his siblings, and has a hidden flair for art. He adores both his brothers, and they are known as the Three Musketeers among the family.
Preet Juneja
He is the prankster of the family. Preet believes himself to be God's gift to women, and changes his girlfriends about as often as he changes his clothes. He loves to annoy his Bauji due to their different mindsets. However, it is not to say that he does not love his family. He is closest to his brothers, and to him (and Harman), Prem is the Ram to their Lakshman and Bharat respectively. He wants his family's happiness, and so is not upset about returning to India. He works in the family company, or should be anyways. Preet often gets his straight-laced brothers into trouble, and is one of the few people who can get them to loosen up.
Veera Juneja
The baby of the family, Veera comes across as a spoilt brat. Her siblings pamper her, and her father gives in to her every whim. However, her mother is the guiding principle in her life, and she has a good heart despite everything. She is very modern, and does not want to leave Canada. However, she does not want to stay without her family either. Veera has just completed school, and works with Harman sometimes as she is a social worker.
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Hope you enjoyed! There's still another part to the character sketches.. A lot of characters, I know.. but no worries! The main focus is Prem/Heer, and the few people instrumental in their getting together!
Also, to Rinks (can I call you that?) how many stories do you have?? Seriously! And where do you find the time and patience to write them all?? I mean I have loads of plot bunnies chasing themselves around my brain (and doesn't that sound weird) but I never seem to find the time, or focus to write any complete one! Pray for me that I complete this!
Love,
Radz
Edited by Anhdara13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Hello to all! Unfortunately, I was having trouble signing in for the past few days, so I couldn't post the second part of the character sketch. It's been burning a hole in my computer! Also unfortunately, no pictures as of yet.. Still in the process of gathering all of them.. And my friend is helping me, but she's busy as well.. We only attain complete freedom in December, after our exams..

ish just fine
Now, mini-rant! Why the h**l did the creatives have to give Dheer the name Shaurya? Dheer was perfectly fine! I didn't like that name! But I like the name Shaurya! ๐Ÿ˜ก Stupid creatives... Dheer is always going to be Dheer to me! Shaurya is my jaan from Kkavyanjali! Not this stupid weirdo.. Okay, end of rant.. ๐Ÿ˜Š
yay!! someone else who agrees with me!! -high five- i know rite? saurya=iqu ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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loved the intros hun, cant wait to see the actual parts!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Hope you enjoyed! There's still another part to the character sketches.. A lot of characters, I know.. but no worries! The main focus is Prem/Heer, and the few people instrumental in their getting together!
Also, to Rinks (can I call you that?) how many stories do you have?? Seriously! And where do you find the time and patience to write them all?? I mean I have loads of plot bunnies chasing themselves around my brain (and doesn't that sound weird) but I never seem to find the time, or focus to write any complete one! Pray for me that I complete this!
course! everyone does ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ uh rite now three or four or maybe five-six -looks away- hehe but i stopped like three of em, am finishing one by sunday and the other two are going pretty good ๐Ÿ˜† arre yaar, patience and me...dont mix, see its cuz i love writing so i take just a couple of things i wanna write in the part and it ends up getting longer because i start going into details and stuff, as for time, high school is tough but i try to finish my hw during class or i do it in the period before its due so i always make it, if i dnt have it, i make an excuse and teachers fall for it ๐Ÿ˜† and i spend my time during my chem lectures taking notes on the stuff i wanna write in the nxt part, a piece of advise, always have paper or a notebook with you to write stuff for ur fic in, whenever u think of something write it in there and then go back to it when ur wrkin on the part, its rlly helpful during stressful time and it wrks for me, so maybe it'll wrk for you too ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ahh i have many bunnies running around too, just ask kimmu, apparently i tell her a new idea for a new fic at least 3 times a week ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ dont worry this is ur first one right? you'll get the hang of balancing everything!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ dnt wrry yaar, am sure u will complete it! ๐Ÿ˜‰
Love,
Radz

~Rinkz
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Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

course! everyone does ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ uh rite now three or four or maybe five-six -looks away- hehe but i stopped like three of em, am finishing one by sunday and the other two are going pretty good ๐Ÿ˜† arre yaar, patience and me...dont mix, see its cuz i love writing so i take just a couple of things i wanna write in the part and it ends up getting longer because i start going into details and stuff, as for time, high school is tough but i try to finish my hw during class or i do it in the period before its due so i always make it, if i dnt have it, i make an excuse and teachers fall for it ๐Ÿ˜† and i spend my time during my chem lectures taking notes on the stuff i wanna write in the nxt part, a piece of advise, always have paper or a notebook with you to write stuff for ur fic in, whenever u think of something write it in there and then go back to it when ur wrkin on the part, its rlly helpful during stressful time and it wrks for me, so maybe it'll wrk for you too ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ahh i have many bunnies running around too, just ask kimmu, apparently i tell her a new idea for a new fic at least 3 times a week ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ dont worry this is ur first one right? you'll get the hang of balancing everything!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ dnt wrry yaar, am sure u will complete it! ๐Ÿ˜‰
~Rinkz

Four,five or six?? You, my friend, are my idol! ๐Ÿ˜† I love writing too.. I went through this phase awhile back where I had a new story idea everyday! But not for these serials at that time.. Then it was for my beloved books and TV shows.. still have those stories.. Need to type them out.. *mutters quietly to self* and complete them.. hmm.. where was I? Oh, yeah.. I have a book like that! I thought I was the only one! Nice to see I'm not! ๐Ÿ˜† And 3 times a week? Aiyaiya, Rinkz, we're too alike! I do that to a friend of mine too! Bhav gets super annoyed with me! And she always has to sit through my serial story ideas, and she doesn't even watch them! ๐Ÿ˜† But she listens anyways.. Maybe from now on, I should bug you with the ideas! ๐Ÿ˜† Nah... Let you update your stories, and keeping your plot bunnies away from mine ๐Ÿ˜† otherwise they'll multiply, like rabbits! or bunnies ๐Ÿคฃ I have an odd sense of humour.. ๐Ÿ˜†
Love,
Radz
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Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Four,five or six?? You, my friend, are my idol! ๐Ÿ˜† I love writing too.. I went through this phase awhile back where I had a new story idea everyday! But not for these serials at that time.. Then it was for my beloved books and TV shows.. still have those stories.. Need to type them out.. *mutters quietly to self* and complete them.. hmm.. where was I? Oh, yeah.. I have a book like that! I thought I was the only one! Nice to see I'm not! ๐Ÿ˜† And 3 times a week? Aiyaiya, Rinkz, we're too alike! I do that to a friend of mine too! Bhav gets super annoyed with me! And she always has to sit through my serial story ideas, and she doesn't even watch them! ๐Ÿ˜† But she listens anyways.. Maybe from now on, I should bug you with the ideas! ๐Ÿ˜† Nah... Let you update your stories, and keeping your plot bunnies away from mine ๐Ÿ˜† otherwise they'll multiply, like rabbits! or bunnies ๐Ÿคฃ I have an odd sense of humour.. ๐Ÿ˜†
Love,
Radz

yesh its bad no? i cant stop posting em! the bunnies start bouncing in my heads! ๐Ÿ˜ก lolz aah yup i used to write stories for harry potter ๐Ÿคฃ that was like 4 yrs ago though now am stuck on these shows! ๐Ÿ˜ณ nah...i do that all the time, i have like five books started, two or three are filled with ideas abt stories but they're for movies like HP or Fast and Furious ๐Ÿ˜† ahh i tell em to either kimz or toni, my friend at my skool, she loves my stories, though i think she doesn't get hindi as much ๐Ÿ˜† but she's trying to get it ๐Ÿ˜† she has all my stories that i've ever done on IF, completed or not and still hasnt finished reading em, ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜† ah its okay, u can rant to me ๐Ÿ˜† im always listening to pplz ranting and wrkin on my fiks at the same time, mostly my chem teach ๐Ÿคฃ aah i like the humor though! its like mine, kinda wack and out the world ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ aah bunnies multipying=more haunting in my dreams and thoughts! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
rinkz
Edited by ~Rinki~ - 16 years ago
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yesh its bad no? i cant stop posting em! the bunnies start bouncing in my heads! ๐Ÿ˜ก lolz aah yup i used to write stories for harry potter ๐Ÿคฃ that was like 4 yrs ago though now am stuck on these shows! ๐Ÿ˜ณ nah...i do that all the time, i have like five books started, two or three are filled with ideas abt stories but they're for movies like HP or Fast and Furious ๐Ÿ˜† ahh i tell em to either kimz or toni, my friend at my skool, she loves my stories, though i think she doesn't get hindi as much ๐Ÿ˜† but she's trying to get it ๐Ÿ˜† she has all my stories that i've ever done on IF, completed or not and still hasnt finished reading em, ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜† ah its okay, u can rant to me ๐Ÿ˜† im always listening to pplz ranting and wrkin on my fiks at the same time, mostly my chem teach ๐Ÿคฃ aah i like the humor though! its like mine, kinda wack and out the world ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ aah bunnies multipying=more haunting in my dreams and thoughts! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

rinkz

You're my new best friend Rinkz! ๐Ÿ˜† Finally, someone who gets me! I've got so many stories just waiting to be written, but when I try, I get stuck.. ๐Ÿ˜† I have no idea how I manage that.. And those that I have completed, I have yet to type out.. I get too lazy.. ๐Ÿคฃ Yay! Same ishtyle sense of humour! So sarcasm's also your thing? If yeah, then expect no holding back from me! Full-frontal assault of sarcastic-goodyness! ๐Ÿคฃ
Love,
Radz
Edited by Anhdara13 - 16 years ago

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