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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey...nice yaar...plz update na if u can.........
abd congratz..that u become a senior member
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: zenia

hey...nice yaar...plz update na if u can.........

abd congratz..that u become a senior member


Hi Zenia..thank u..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: mireen19

vry well written shabo👏

Hello Mireen..this is Rani..not Shabo😆..and thank u so much..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hello rani i am also amreen not mireen 🤣& ur wellcome sweety
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: mireen19

hello rani i am also amreen not mireen 🤣& ur wellcome sweety


Ha ha..I was wondering.. but thought it would be safe to go with the ID..😆..hello Amreen..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Heer is getting ready..it comes to her maangtika(I'm so sorry..what do u call it..which Gaya3 gave to Heer while distributing the jewelry?)..she is not able to put it on her head..so she goes to Kulraj's room to get it done properly..in Kulraj's room..Kulraj has already left..

H:Di..searching here and there..everywhere..di??lagta hai di baahar hall chali gayi..ab kya karun phir se try karti hoo..she is trying very hard to fix it but not able to..

Here in Prem's room..Prem is not able to set his sherwani properly..he is confused..so thinks of taking his di's help..so he comes to Kulraj's room as well..he enters the room..Heer is totally unaware..and still struggling with her maangtika..

H:arre..mujhse yeh nahi hoga baba..jaake kisiko bulake laati hoon..and she turns around..and is confused as to what to do..now that Prem is there..she doesn't know what to say or do..so she walks towards him slowly..and tries to go out of the room..but Prem takes this oppurtunity..and blocks her way..exactly how she had done once in the outhouse..

H:mujhe jaana hai..

P:jaao..

H:she doesn't know what to do..and keeps quiet..he is still staring at her..who is now running her fingers through the maangtika in her hand nervously..he seems to know that she is feeling very shy..he breaks the silence..

P:Di se kuch kaam tha?

H:haan..

P:kya?

H:woh..woh kuch nahi..

P:abhi toh kaha kaam tha..

H:haan..par..

P:par?

H:kuch nahi..and she continues to play with the maangtika..looking down..Prem knows it has to do something with it..and he looks up to her hairdo..which is lilttle bit spoilt because she was trying to put that tika on her head..and..

P:yeh maangtika?

H:haan..isiliye toh aayithi..yeh maangtika mujhse nahi laga ja raha..he understands..he takes it from her..brings her to the mirror..turns around so that she can face the mirror..and he stands behind her and puts the maangtika on her head..she is blushing and still looking down..so he comes infront of her and lifts her face with chin..and says..acha lag raha hai..she couldn't see him so she turns around to leave..but he grabs her hand..she is trying to free it off..

P:abhi tak tumne nahi kaha?

H:kya?

P:wohi jo meine shaam ko tumse kaha tha..saying this..he pulls her gently towards him..she is trying to get off..

H:woh baad mein..

P:baad mein kab?

H:sagaai ke baad..abhi mujhe jaana hai..

P:nahi..abhi kaho..

H:please..chodo na..koi aajayega..

P:teek hai jao..she is somewhat thinking that he left her easily..and she starts to walk off..stops and turns around..

H:tum yahan kyun aaye the?

P:hm?mein..kuch nahi yeh sherwani ka button nahi lag raha tha isliye..

H:aao mein laga deti hoon..saying this she walks to him again..he is somewhat surprised because he hadn't imagined that she herself would come to him..

P:teek hai..and he moves forward too..she comes to him and starts to put the buttons properly..and all the while Prem is just staring at her..he thinks to himself how beautiful she looks..so innocent and everything..she is done buttoning the sherwani..

H:ab mein chalti hoon..

P:ek minut..tumne ashlesha ko kahin dekha hai?

H:Ashlesha ko..nahi toh..kyun?

P:uska chhalna mere paas hi hai..humare uss sagaai ke din usne mujhe pehnaayaata..usse wapas karni hai..

H:she knows it's her ring..wapas karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hain..

P:he looks at her puzzled..zaroori nahin hain?kyun?

H:kyunki woh meri ring hai..maa ne mujhe Diwali par diya tha(tears well up in her eyes..while saying all this)..woh uss din tumhari aur ashlesha ki sagaai ke din..chaachi ne mujhse woh li thi..kyun ki Ashlesha uski ring kahin pe rak dee thi..

P:hearing this Prem is shocked..and suddenly it flashes to him..that..this was the reason why Heer had come to his room that night..and that's y she was taking that ring..tumne mujhse kaha kyun nahi..saying this he moves towards her..and holds her cheeks with both his hands..huh?kyun nahi kaha mujhse?

H:mein darr gayi thi..he wipes her tears..khair chodo..mein tumhe wohi ring pehnadoongi..teek hai..

P:haan haan..kyun nahi..I'm sorry..

H:sorry?sorry kisliye?

P:woh tumhe itna kuch sehna pada uss chaachi ke wajah se..iss liye..

H:she doesn't know what to say..she just takes the ring from him..and walks to her room..Prem is thinking to himself..that he'll keep her happy always..because she has sufferred a lot already..and that he wants to see her happy always..thinking this he goes to get ready..

Down in the hall everyone r waiting eagerly for the sagaai to take place..all r ready..and Prem is there aswell..Gaya3 asks Kulraj to bring Prem's bride..

Gaya3:beta Kulraj..jao..Heer ko le aao..

K:jee maa..abhi gayi..she gives a smile to her brother who is eagerly waiting for his Heer..in the room she takes Heer..and brings her to the stairs..all r looking up towards the stair..to see how Heer is looking..Prem who was seated on the couch..gets up seeing his love..

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hope u liked so far..the reason I gave two updates today is..if incase I'll not be able to post an update tommorrow..then this part would fill in for it..and about the ring scene..I wanted to bring the ring in some or the other conversation..but today..one of the reader(sorry I don't know the name) also asked for it..so here it is..but I hope..this fills in for it..pls leave ur comments..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was superb, loved the premeer scenes please continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow, Rani......I loved it so much......u explained the ring scene really really well......I wish EKTA bring the ring clarification to PREM in the upcoming epis......we as audience know that, but PREM should know the reason as well...........I truly loved it........u got such a creative mind.......its ok abt tomorrow, coz I can survive tomorrow after reading this FF, but plz, update on Sunday, only if u hv free time......okie?.......tfs.....Luv Yaa.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: zindagi001

wow, Rani......I loved it so much......u explained the ring scene really really well......I wish EKTA bring the ring clarification to PREM in the upcoming epis......we as audience know that, but PREM should know the reason as well...........I truly loved it........u got such a creative mind.......its ok abt tomorrow, coz I can survive tomorrow after reading this FF, but plz, update on Sunday, only if u hv free time......okie?.......tfs.....Luv Yaa.....


Hi Zinki..was wondering where u were..how r u?thank u dear for liking it..actually the ring scene I wanted to have..but today someone from the forum too had asked for it..so I was able to squeeze it in..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nice dear very good i hope u will cont soon i will be waiting

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