KDMHMD-Weekend!!Updated-Page 9

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I thought of stopping my FF's last weekend itself..because when I read other FF's..I was amazed
as to how good all the other writers are..I mean they have immense talent to come up with beautiful
scenes and the way they put all the scenes together with appropriate songs..really made me feel very
..m..what do I say..it just made me feel that..my FF is not that nice..and people around here r too good
to notice it and appreciate it.But I again thought(see how much I think)..what if u guys really like the
FF..and who knows I may get better at this stuff in coming days..so I will continue to do weekend FF.
I have no idea as to what I've just typed..pls excuse if it's boring..irritating..blah blah blah..if u want
to read the FF..u'll have to bear with this bak bak too..it's like buy one and get one.I'll continue with
where it stopped on thursday..i.e.,Veera slapping Dheer..seriously I don't want to include these two
namoonas in the FF..but I can't do anything because the BT creatives have already put them in the show..
and have left us with no options at all..so bear with these two and also with my following FF.Do leave
a comment..good or bad..(don't take this bad thing seriously)..but pls yaar acha comment chodna..teek hai..

L-Lalit
Gaya3-Gayathri
P-Prem
H-Heer
Pr-Preet
M-Meher
Ash-Ashlesha
K-Kulraj
V-Veera
D-Dheer
H-Harman

Lalit:VEERA!!yeh sab kya hai?huh?kya ho raha hai yeh sab?

V:Dad aap ise jaante nahi..subah se mujhe pareshaan karke rakha hai..pata nahi kya samajhta hai apne aapko

L:bas..ek aur shabd nahi..maafi maango iss se..abhi isi waqt

V:par dad..meine kya kiya..ise apna aukad dikhaya bas..

L:aukad..arre Gaya3..kya hua hai iss ladki ko..Veera maafi maango

D:rehne deejiye uncle..maafi toh mujhe maangni chaahiye..shaayad mein hi..apne aapko is ghar ka member samajhne laga

L:nahi beta..tum kyun sorry maang rahe ho..galti Veera ki hai..aur Veera hi tumse maafi maangegi..shaayad tumne teek se suna nahi Veera..Maafi maango..

V:nahi dad..mein maafi nahi maangoongi..aur iss se toh bilkul bhi nahi..

L:raises his voice again..but Prem comes to his dad and places his hand on his dad's shoulders and

P:Bauji..mein baat karta hoon..he goes to his little sister..Veera..bauji ne kaha..maafi maango..toh maango..aur iss tarah koi apne mehmaan ka insult karta hai?

V:lekin bhayya..aap jaante nahi..Prem stops her in the midway and holds his hand infront of her so as to say stop

P:meine kaha maafi maango..hum iss baare mein baad mein baat karenge..teek hai..ab jao..maafi maango..

Veera goes to Dheer..who btw is not at all affected by the slap..and asks sorry..

V:sorry

Dheer:it's ok..and smirks at her..she gets annoyed and leaves the hall..

L:to Dheer..beta mein tumse maafi maangta hoon..pls usse maaf kardo..

D:arre uncle..aap kyun maafi maang rahe hain..usne galti maan li..toh chodiye na..

P:baoji mein Veera se baat karunga..

Gaya3:ji..aap apna mood kharab mat keejiye..Prem ne kaha na woh Veera se baat karega..lekin sagaai ke baad..ab chalo sab log..apne apne kaam pe lag jao..aur jo hua bhool jao..woh..Veera thodisi naadaan hai..samajh jaayegi shaayad usse boora lagraha hai kyunki humne usse baahar apne friends se milne se roka..hmm..ab jao..tayyar ho jao..Prem zara dekho Heer aayi ki nahi..aur agar nahi aayi hai..toh phone karke poochlena..agar usse koi help chaahiyeh toh..(I know I wasted ur precious moment with this stupid Veera and Dheer..but I'm really sorry)

P:maa..mein?!?

Gaya3:haan..tu..kyun?

P:he is feeling very happy to help Heer..but cannot express that infront of his mom so..he is feeling shy..

Gaya3:Prem..kya hua beta..arre sharma raha hai..mera buddu beta..ab jao..khade khade kya dekh rahe ho..He goes out to the hallway..to call Heer..but when he takes out his cell..it's battery is down..so he sees
Kulraj paasing by..

P:Di..

K:haan Prem..

P:Di..aapka cell de sakti hain?meri cell ki battery low hogayi hai..

K:haan haan..kyun nahi..aur yeh kya formality hai..seeda seeda maang nahi sakta..

P:cell phone deejiye..

K:yeh hui na..lo..kisse phone karna hai?

P:he hesitates a bit..and then he goes..Heer ko..

K:aaha..kitna sharma raha hai..abhi yeh haal hai..toh shaadi ke baad kya hoga..

P:he just blushes and goes off..and then he calls Heer on her cell..

H:hello Di..

P:he knows she thinks Di has called..so..Di nahi Di ka bhaai bol raha hai..

H:she knows now that it's Prem..Prem!tum..kuch kehna tha?

P:kehna toh bahot kuch hai..lekin filhaal..maa pooch rahi thi ki tumhe koi help chaahiye toh..

H:help??hmm..she is standing at the end of the hallway..because she is already back from where she had gone to bring the sarees..but she is in teasing mood too..so she waits and continues the conversation..but little does she know..with whom she is taking panga!!

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OK..so this is for thursday..warm up..hopefully I'll be able to continue it tommorrow too..I know it's very
short..but pls yaaron..kaam chala lena..teek hai..and if..and IF I'm not able to continue it..then pls don't mind..because see I've a toddler to take care of..and I've to write all this when she is sleeping or when she is playing by herself..so..hope u all understand..

And guys pls congratulate me(ok..didn't mean it literally)..as I've become a senior member😃 now..woohoo..u know what I joined IF..somewhere in mid 2005..and I was totally inactive..or not active whatever..but now in 2008..I've been very active and specially in KDMHMD section..really liked the humour all of u have here..hoping to be as active as now in future too!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awww it was very well written......enjoyed reading it////do continue if u can!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@Shabo24-hey there..thank u..will definitely continue it tommorrow..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey, Rani......nice to see you back.......I totally loved it......excellent job......can't wait till tomorrow's FF........plz, plz, plz, continue till sunday.......last weekend I survived only coz of yr FFs.......plz, continue this weekend as well......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Rani, please, have more faith in yourself as a writer. Be confident that we all love your FFs and for most of us, they're our only salvation through the long Premeer-less weekend.

I for one have become addicted to your weekend FFs.

Love this one...I understand about having to deal with the bit on Veera/Dheer - loved how Veera apologized upon Prem's asking. Also loved Prem/Kulraj's talk in the hallway about the cell phone. The best part was Prem saying "Di nahi, Di ka bhai bol raha hai" hehehe...that was too cute!

I won't be around to read the rest this weekend, but I hope you will continue so I have something to look forward to when I get home on Sunday.

Aaaw, you have a little toddler! Thats soooo cute, I LOVE children. I bet she's adorable. IF, and only IF you end up getting tied up with her, then I will excuse you if you don't find time to continue the FF. Kids should be a top priority, and they deserve our love and attention and affection - esp. at that age. So, if you happen to be spending time with her and don't get to come update your FF, then I will not be disappointed.

BTW, CONGRATS on becoming a senior member!

Love,
~Payal
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Rani this is my first time reading your weekend FF and im kicking myself
cause now i've realized what i've been missing out on, on the weekends...

This was amazing... jus how i imagined Monday's episode might go...
well except the cell phone part... nice touch there, showing brother sister bond...
and Prem and Heer convo.... dont worry Dheer and Veera scene was needed
or else it wouldn't be realistic right sooo hopefully it does go this way
and Veera apologies cause Prem asked her....

You have a toddler... awww sooo sweet....
From me a long overdue congratulation.... do continue if and only if you have to time and energy.... also congrats on finally becoming a senior member...😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: zindagi001

Hey, Rani......nice to see you back.......I totally loved it......excellent job......can't wait till tomorrow's FF........plz, plz, plz, continue till sunday.......last weekend I survived only coz of yr FFs.......plz, continue this weekend as well......


Hey Zinki..thanks a lot..glad u liked the first update..will continue soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: IndianPari



Rani, please, have more faith in yourself as a writer. Be confident that we all love your FFs and for most of us, they're our only salvation through the long Premeer-less weekend.

I for one have become addicted to your weekend FFs.

Love this one...I understand about having to deal with the bit on Veera/Dheer - loved how Veera apologized upon Prem's asking. Also loved Prem/Kulraj's talk in the hallway about the cell phone. The best part was Prem saying "Di nahi, Di ka bhai bol raha hai" hehehe...that was too cute!

I won't be around to read the rest this weekend, but I hope you will continue so I have something to look forward to when I get home on Sunday.

Aaaw, you have a little toddler! Thats soooo cute, I LOVE children. I bet she's adorable. IF, and only IF you end up getting tied up with her, then I will excuse you if you don't find time to continue the FF. Kids should be a top priority, and they deserve our love and attention and affection - esp. at that age. So, if you happen to be spending time with her and don't get to come update your FF, then I will not be disappointed.

BTW, CONGRATS on becoming a senior member!

Love,
~Payal


Hello Payal..thank u so much for liking my FF's..I really thought the FF's were a bit lame/lousy at times..but then again..I can experiment on all FF readers right??the one in my avatar is my kiddo..she allows me to browse all the time so..no worries..only at times..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: salma_786786

Rani this is my first time reading your weekend FF and im kicking myself
cause now i've realized what i've been missing out on, on the weekends...

This was amazing... jus how i imagined Monday's episode might go...
well except the cell phone part... nice touch there, showing brother sister bond...
and Prem and Heer convo.... dont worry Dheer and Veera scene was needed
or else it wouldn't be realistic right sooo hopefully it does go this way
and Veera apologies cause Prem asked her....

You have a toddler... awww sooo sweet....
From me a long overdue congratulation.... do continue if and only if you have to time and energy.... also congrats on finally becoming a senior member...😃


Hi Salma..thank u for liking it..no worries u didn't miss much.. started writing weekend FF from last weekend..so I guess u didn't miss much..and moreover there r other FF's which r far better..will continue..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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This was very well writen, I really liked it. 10 out of 10 for FF, Rani. 👏 Well done!👏 👏

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