Yeh Hai Ashiqui~ SaRuv SS~ part 7 updated pg-12 *today* - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: preity_d

Oye wait for my comment will read tomorrow 😃



thanks pree. Would love to read how u felt😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinee_vinee

I will comment tomorrow. ...read half and loved it...aadu DV part was very good. ...and traffic jam part mein I was rolf



aww thank you Vinee... glad u liked. Seriously thanks for the support🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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guys I'm planning to write the dialogues in English.. What say?
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hey guys! I'm sorry... update got delayed a bit. Jus moved back to my University; meaning cant devote much time to our show n forum..
but will try to update regularly :)
Tina, Vinee, everyone.. thank you🤗
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Part 5: Complicated

"Aaji Naani? Ulka kaku.. What's the matter?" Saachi smiled at them casually.

"Where is DV? Kider hai woh ladka?? Kaha chupakar rakha hai.." Ulka began to take a close look around her cabin when Nani shouted at her.

"Stop it Ulka. DV is not here. Woh yaha kyu hoga.. Sachi puttar ko kaam karne de tu. Let her complete her work.. Let's leave!"

Nani, Aaji, Ulka left the cabin. Ulka tried to get information out of Mugdha but failed. Saruv breathed in a sigh of relief.

Coming out from under her desk he gave her a sweet smile then broke into a giggle.

"Kya hai.. has kyu rahe ho?" (why are u smiling)

"Bhai manna padega! Iss tara aap se chori chori milne ka maza hi kuch aur hai!"

Saachi smiled a bit and rolled her eyes.

"Ab chori chori hi miloge, ya khullam khulla haat pakadne ka iraada hai kabhi?" she asked him in a low voice which he heard.

"Aap- Arey wah mutlab, aap chahti hai ki hum.. sab kuch khullam khulla karein huh?? Kya baat hai!!"

With his trademark naughty smile he goes to hug her but she stopped him.

"Jaao yaha se DV bohot kaam hai mujhe.."

"Nahi.." he smiled again holding her in his arms.

He noticed that her smile was missing.

"Kya hua?"

"kuch nahi.. kaam bohot hai just go!"

She distanced herself from him and went to sit in her chair. Dv began speaking.

"Dekho meri taraf! Dekho na.. agar tum nahi bataaogi.. tho kya mujhe samajh mei nahi aayega?"

She got up and stood facing her mom-dad's picture.

"upset ho na ki aaji Nani ko jhoot bola right?"

"You know what DV? I lied to them.. pehli baar jhoot bola hai unko.. bohot guilty feel kar rahi hu."

"Kithni acchi hai na aap? Accha chodiye, yeh yaad kijiye- maine kal raat aapse kal kya kaha? Kal raat ko hi humari baat hui thi yaad hai? Yaad kijiye, yaad kijiye"

"ah- yahi ki johoot bolna galat hoga. Par manage karna nahi. hum manage karlenge. Hum aaji, Naani ko sach keh denge.."

"exactly! Waise how sweet! Meri saari batein yaad hai aapko.."

His sweet smile took away all her stress. Involuntarily she smiled at him shaking her head.

He went on, "Mujhe bhi bohot bura lagraha hai. But what can we do? we'll let them know everything. But this is not the right time. Tho kuch waqt aur, thoda aur patience hmm? Ab smile karo na.."

She nodded smiling at him.

"tum nahi hote tho main kya karti DV?"

"uhh.. let me think. May be kisi se shaadi hi nahi karti!"

"You-"

"Ah- ab kaise karti? koi nahi milta na aapko, main bichara aap ka chehra dekh ke, aise hi fasgaya. Lekin aap ka yeh rona dhona, naak pe woh gussa, aap k teacher wali daant kaun sunega?? Huh?"

"tho tum bichaare ho?? huh!! Aur kya bola tumne- mujhse koi shaadi nahi karega.. aur main buddi hu, ruko abhi bataati hu main tumhe.."

He ran around the cabin with her at his heels. Mugdha and Yadav ji who watched this were mesmerized to see this change in Saachi.

Inside, DV was laughing hard. Saachi was laughing too while chasing him. He stopped to take a breath. She caught up and started hitting him playfully and he laughed more.

"arey yeh kya kar rahi hai aap!!? apne honewali hubby ko maar maar k ghayal kardogi kya? Arey stop! Main aap ka suhaag hu.."

"DV tum.. you're impossible"

She stopped hitting him; blushing a little. He took this chance to hug her.

"DV.. chodo! Sab dekh rahe hai, yadav ji aur Mugdha.."

Reluctantly he obeyed her. She smiled up at him.

"thanks DV.. tum bina bole hi sab kuch kaise samajh jaate ho. Pata nahi kaise karlete ho tum!"

"hmm aap k feelings na.. aap bhale hi na bataao, lekin aap k chehre pe likha hota hai. aur main yu pad leta hu. Aur yeh thank you thank you kya laga rakha hai aapne? Apno ko thanks nahi bolte.. jataate hai pyar se!"

He took hold of her hand and pulled her closer.

"DV! Kya kar rahe ho! mujhe bohot kaam hai, ab jao mujhe disturb mat karo.."

"Main disturb kar raha hu?? Huh?"

"Haan.. ab jaao!"

He was still holding her hand and smiling at her.

"DV jaao na..."

"Naa.."

"Keh rahi hu na.. jaao.."

"Dil se nahi keh rahi hu.."

"Pure dil se keh rahi hu baba! Jao.. baad mei milte hai."

"Baad mein kab?"

"Arey baad mei.."

"Wohi kab?"

"Baad mei. Ab jaao warna Ulka kaku aajayegi..."

"Kiska naam leliya aapne.. retired hurt hogaya main. Alvida.."

He obeyed her and left her cabin after gently kissing her hand.

xxx

that afternoon DV went to greet Aaji n Nani.

"Good afternoon my zohra and Jabi..." he stood in the doorway when Nani asked him to get inside.

"Ajaao puttar! Andar aao.."

"Arey tum log isey abhi bhi andar aane de rahe ho? Bhoolgaye issne kya kiya aap k beti k saat, ya fir sach kahu tho kya kar raha hai aap k beti k saath.." Ulka spat.

"Bas Ulka.. hume apne bachon pe pura vishwaas hai. Ajaao beta.."

DV hesitated but Aaji too welcomed him and he beamed.

"Ajaao na bara.."

"Aise hi vishwaas karo fir ek din yeh aur woh aap ki beti aap ki aankhon mei dhul jhokenge!"

"Ulka bas.. koi bhi ab DV ya Sachi k bare mein baat nahi karega. Rajiv aata hi hoga. Bas Sachi ki shaadi Rajiv se hojaye sab thik hojayega.. tab tak tu apna muu band hi rakhna samjhi.." Aaji said in a serious tone and Ulka left.

"wow! Sachi ji ka rishta mujhe bhi milna hai unse.. par woh mujhe kaam hai! So excuse me my ladies.."

DV got up unable to hear the argument only to bump into someone in the doorway.

It was Rajiv. He was tall with dark brown hair, with dark grey eyes and striking features. There were traces of ageing under his eyes which looked tired but DV thought he looked handsome n well mannered.

"Main tho yaha business k kaam se aaya hu. Lekin Sachi se milke hi jaunga.. aaj woh kaam mein busy hai tho kal hi milunga.."

DV walked out of the house, suddenly feeling tensed. How would he convince Aaji Nani now? Rajiv looked like a perfect match!

xxx

All day long Sachi was busily working. It was almost 11pm when she finished dinner. She was disappointed to see DV's room was all dark. Where did he go at this hour of the night? And why dint he wish her good night?

Reluctantly she switched off her mobile and went to sleep.

1AM:

Saachi was about to doze off but woke up with a jerk upon hearing a crash. For a moment she smiled thinking it must be DV. She rushed to her balcony but she found none.

"DV.. kaha chupe ho?"

"Peeche mud ke tho dekho.."

She was stunned to see DV who's clad in a nice black tux holding out a rose and smiling at her.

"May I have this dance please?"

"Ab yeh kya naya programme hai?"

"Midnight waltz.."

"Paagal.."

"Dance.."

"Dance yaha.. mujhe neend se jagaa k?"

"Aap sach mei sogayi? Mujhe tho aisa nahi lagta.. Aisa lagta hai jaise aap mera wait kar rahi thi.."

"very funny, ab jaao.."

"Dance with me!"

"Paagal ho tum! Kabhi bhi koodke aajaate ho mere balcony mei! Dobara aisa kiya na tho dekhlena- Jaao aur so jaao.."

"Nahi nahi sweetheart.. sone k liye nahi aaya hu main! Dance karne aaya hu."

"dance yaha mere room mein? Waise bina music k koi dance karta hai kya? DV just go.. kisi ne dekhliya tho gazab hojayega.. chalo chalo"

She pushed him towards where the ladder is kept.

"Aap ko andar thik nahi lagta na, tho hum neeche dance karenge! Lekin dance tho aapko karna padega mere saat.."

"DV.."

"sochlena warna kisi aur propose karlunga main.. line mein khadi hongi ladkiyan jo mere saat dance karna chahengi.."

She huffed and glared.

"ithna gussa!? Baap re! Ab aapke hote hue kisi aur k saat dance nahi nahi. Aisa kaise ho sakta hai!"

She smiled a bit and he went on.

"Aur gaana.. woh tho main khud hi gaaunga aap k liye.."

He dragged her along holding her hand and they descended the ladder one after the other. He then took her to the small garden in front and began singing.

"DV.. kaha lejarahe ho mujhe? please jao na..."

"Hum tere bin ab rah nahi sakte.. tere bina kya wajood mera..."

She laughed as got down on one knee with his arms wide open. Never in her life, had she imagined someone doing such things for her. She stood there admiring him for a moment. When he got up and extended his hand, she wasn't in her senses any more. She did not mind if someone would see them; it did not matter if Aaaji, Nani or Adu would come down shouting at them hearing something.

She gently put her hand in his and the waltz began.

He twirled her around once, twice and pulled her closer in an embrace. She gave him a shy smile in return when their eyes met. He kept singing.

"tujhse juda agar hojayenge tho khud se hi hojayenge juda.. Kyu ki tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho.. zindgi ab tum hi ho.. chain bhi mera dard bhi.. meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho.."

He smiled as he sang and they got into an eye lock; his one hand holding hers, his other around her waist. She had her hands pressed against his chest looking at him lovingly, relishing the warmth of being in his arms again.

What good deeds did she do that she had found this man! She felt blessed, secured, more importantly felt loved. Tearing her eyes off from him, she hugged him tightly and he hugged her back.

"Arey deva!" a familiar voice boomed from behind.

They both parted and were shocked to see Ulka kaku glaring at them and rushing towards Prabhu Nivas.

"Arey deva re deva.. aadhi raat ko shuru hogaye! Arey darwaza kholo.." she banged on the door.

"Ulka kaku yaha? DV Yeh hum pe jaasoosi kar rahi thi?" Saachi wondered alound.

"Hume dance bhi nahi karne degi yeh. Aadhi raat ko bhi peeche padgayi. Careful rehna padega... chaliye.. apne room mein seedi se wapis chale jayiye" DV pulled her along .

"Arey zara bahar aake bhi tho dekho, kya kya dekhna padraha hai... dance programme chal rahi hai aadhi raat ko! Jaldi aao sab log!!" Ulka was still banging on the door.

Addu woke up and sensed something was wrong.

"Taai k room ka light on hai, iss waqt..."

He reached there and smiled to himself as he saw his Taai struggling on the top most step of the ladder. His smile changed into a grin as he looked down at DV who's holding the ladder for Saachi.

"Kya baat hai Taai, raat ko chori chupe.. huh??"

"Chup karo aur apna haat do mujhe Adu!"

He helped her climb back into the balcony and smirked.

"mujhe tho laga sirf DV hi paagal hogaya hai pyar mei, ab tho aap bhi haan.."

She hit him on his arm slightly n laughed.

DV waved them and ran back into the garden.

xxx

Finally Aaji, Nani opened the door. Ulka was tensed.

"Arey jaldi chalo.. chalo jaldi mere saat. Deva re deva! Woh sab dekh k aap ki aanhkein phat jayengi.."

They all came out and were pleased to see Dilz, Addu and DV chatting happily.

"Aaji, Nani, Ulka kaku aap log yaha?"

"yahi dikhaana tha kya tujhe Ulka!?" Nani scolded her sleepily.

"arey magar yaha tho Sachi aur yeh DV.."

"chupkar. Ek baar kehdiya na tujhe! Koi undono k bare mei kuch bhi galat nahi bolega. Kuch bhi nahi.." Nani reminded her firmly.

"arey baccho ne galati ki aur humne unhe maaf kia, bas hogaya! Ab so jaao.. Aur kya horaha hai yaha? Ithni raat ko sab log bahar kya kar rahe ho?" Nani inquired.

Ulka smirked while Aaji gave a questioning look.

"Arey hum tho sirf baatein kar rahe the.." DV smiled, feeling relieved that Aaji, Nani dint turn up soon.

"baatein! Ithni raat ko? Aur Ulka kya kaha tha tumne.. dance! Kaun dance kar raha hai yaha.." Nani was irritated.

"woh neend nahi aarahi thi na..." Dilz reasoned.

"Par ab hum karlenge kyu Dilz.. Tera mera rishta hai kaise.. ek pal duri gawar nahi.. I love you! You are such an amazing person!" he looked at Sachi who was standing in her balcony, "thanks Dilz.."

"Chalo... ab so jao sab log. Arey aadhi raat ko bhi shararat. Aur Ulka! Tumhe tho main kal dekhlungi.."

Giving one last glance at Sachi, DV walked away with Dilz.

Next part: Saruv ka date :) DV asks her for a kiss. Chalo Tina we're coming close.. ;)

This one's crazy, but it will be good if you can imagine the scenes. I have a feeling u guys will love the next part. Dunno when I'll manage to post, studies will be keeping me busy.

If someone needs the dialogues in English lemme know :)



Edited by Priyamvada - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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read the update in the 1st go priya..u write so fab bt ur idea of translating ur dialogues into english is really good 1 cx i dnt understand most of them nd i need 2 ask my frnd 4 help..though i ve learned hindi bt still m nt so v gud at it.. :( i usually repeat sentences nd its easy 2 read in english bt the flavour is delicious when reading hindi plus english nd this way i can learn 2...
superb update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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at 1 am ulka z spying them??lolx...
superb!!what a lady!!(btw tat ws a sarcasm)lolx...
nd dancing in midnight nd outside after coming dwn 4m ladder...rofl!!!
nd am dying 2 read kiss finally!!!
plx plx plx update soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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though nw kiss has lost its flavor in front of me..am tired nd bored demanding kiss sequence 4m cvs on serial nd ppl in their creative works bt seeing it in ur ss wud b a treat 2 read..lolx...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i knw uni life is hectic but am sure u ll manage an update 4 me soon as u knw am 2 enthusiastic 2 read ur update...
hope u dnt mind my this frankness...
actually i ws kinda free 4m hectic daily routine in exams so i ws on IF all the time nd had nothng 2 do xcpt stdy wich i already did throughout so i kept nagging u guys 4 updates nd all..
soon i ll be resuming my studies nd then i d nagg u less as i ll b having lots of work 2 do..
i ll come on IF nd cmnt bt my cmnts wud b lil less naughty nd my demands wud b less cx i d b havng less time 2 read...
till then plx manage ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tinatartari

priya priya priya

muaahhh!!!



aww meri sweetie *kisses back*

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