Yeh Hai Ashiqui~ SaRuv SS~ part 7 updated pg-12 *today* - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Priya u said u ll update everyday..
its been days since am waiting...
plx update am waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
If u ll nt post updates such ll happen..
tell me hw much cmnts u need 2 update nxt immideately nd I ll cmnt 4 u...
nw m ur loyal reader nd I read ur story v v carefully nd wid interest nd love..
if u ll bring such long breaks, I ll start 4gettng it nd lose interest nd wont cmnt much, just gud story blah blah nd response wud b dismal..
so plx update 4 me at least if nt 4 any1
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I totally loved your SS...read the second and third part together. Read the first part earlier. Firstly I loved your writing style and your DV was marvelous...he was so soft and loved the dialogues you had given him...the dargah part was superb but when I read the Dils house part I was speechless. The last line which Dils said made the most sence...want to see Saachi doing the same what she did in ur SS and understand that sacrificing her love is the most foolish thing she will do.
Keep updating...I love reading it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
who say that we dont like ur ss i love it really i mean it
so plz updte soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG thanks guys!! Sorry update got delayed.. like I said earlier.. will not ditch this SS :)

In fact I'm planning to write it as my way of how the show goes on... till saruv marriage :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: tinatartari

Priya u said u ll update everyday..
its been days since am waiting...
plx update am waiting



update is on the way Tina... one will come today n the other 2morro. Thoda late hogaya sorry😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tinatartari

If u ll nt post updates such ll happen..
tell me hw much cmnts u need 2 update nxt immideately nd I ll cmnt 4 u...
nw m ur loyal reader nd I read ur story v v carefully nd wid interest nd love..
if u ll bring such long breaks, I ll start 4gettng it nd lose interest nd wont cmnt much, just gud story blah blah nd response wud b dismal..
so plx update 4 me at least if nt 4 any1



ohh thanks Tina.. I know u're such a loyal rader. actually I have typed half of the update. I dint recheck.. now I'll check n will post asap..
2days is a long break huh?? 😆 kabhi kabhi lazy hojati hu main.
Will update regularly dont worry.
N thanks for all ur support, coz of u that I'm taking this SS further🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinee_vinee

I totally loved your SS...read the second and third part together. Read the first part earlier. Firstly I loved your writing style and your DV was marvelous...he was so soft and loved the dialogues you had given him...the dargah part was superb but when I read the Dils house part I was speechless. The last line which Dils said made the most sence...want to see Saachi doing the same what she did in ur SS and understand that sacrificing her love is the most foolish thing she will do.

Keep updating...I love reading it.



yeah that's what I want to see in the show! I want to see Sachi standing up for her love... she will stand up in my SS.
Thanks a ton for ur sweet feedback dear🤗 Really means so much. Glad u liked😃 Thanks agai🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: viny_queen

who say that we dont like ur ss i love it really i mean it

so plz updte soon



OMG.. thank you so much🤗🤗 will be updating today. This really means so much, thannk you😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part four: Together Again


"Addu woh meri phone nahi utha rahi hai..kuch kar na yar!!"

DV was pacing back and forth in his room talking to Addu who was smiling at his antics.

"mera muu kya dekh rahe ho? Woh gift dediya?"

"Offo! DV sau baar keh chuka hu. Dediya.. aur Taai ko woh dress achhi lagi.."

"Sach mei? Acchi lagi na.. I know woh dark colours nahi pehenti. Dilz bhi saat thi jab humne woh Anarkali type dress select ki. Dilz woh acchi tho hai na?"

"DV, tum select karo aur achhi na ho, kaise ho sakta hai?" Dilz calmed him down.

"bahar kyu nahi aayi ab tak.." DV was mumbling, "kahi fir se iraada tho nahi badaldiya darr k maare.."

"chill karo DV! Aajayegi.. kyu ki Taai ko darga jaana accha lagta hai. Taai aaj bohot khush lag rahi thi.. I was right DV! Tum dono ek dusre k liye bane ho. Aap dono humesha saat ho, yahi duwa karunga main uperwale se.."

"thanks addu.."

"Accha main chalta hu.. warna Ulka kaku ko shak hojayega ki main ithni der tumse kya baatein kar raha hu..."

"yakkin nahi hota ki ithna kuch hogaya, Ulka kaku ne.. ithna sab kuch hogaya ab Aaji aur Naani ji kaise maanenge?" DV remarked thinking about that incident when Ulka spotted him with Saachi.

"Maan jayenge DV! Come on dude! Chill karo.. mere honewale Jija ji.."

DV smiled upon hearing Aadu's last words.

"thanks Addu.."

"thanks tho mujhe tumse bolna chahiye DV. Tumhe pata hai.. maine Taai ko ithni khush kabhi nahi dekha.. woh tumse bohot pyar karti hai. Aur haan, Mere taai ko humesha khush rakhna, agar unhe zara bhi pareshaan kiya na tumne; tho dekh lena.."

"Ohh mujhe dar lagta hai Addu.." DV made a face and they laughed.

"DV you're so funny! Shayad isliye Taai impress hogai. Das baje tak darga pohoch jaana, woh aajayegi..."

Addu left and DV realized what he heard.

"Izzat nikaal diya yar issne. I mean Saachi ji iss liye impress hui kyu ki main joker hu?"

"DV stop it.. time dekho. Jaldi ready hojao.." Dilz patted his back and DV just smiled.

10 AM, Peer baba's Darga:

"yeh tho peer baba ka aashirwaad hai ki hum dono saat hai DV.." Saachi smiled after praying.

Together they went to tie the holy thread. He watched her pray.

"Aap ko yeh darga ithna kyu pasand hai.."

"woh iss liye kyu ki mere aayi baba yaha aaya karte the. Unhone yaha duwa maangi aur main paida hui.."

"Ohh matlub aapko peer baba ne mereliye bheja hai?"

"DV main tumse badi hu? Yaad hai?"

"Arey yar!! OK baba, pehle aapko bheja hai, fir mujhe. Traffic jam mei atak gaya hoga main waha upar, ithne logo ko bhejte hai bhagwan ji dharti pe har roz.."

She laughed at his remarks and he smiled.

"DV.. main nahi chahti ki humara saat kabhi chute.." she became serious again, "kabhi judaai naa ho. Bas hum dono humesha aise hi saat rahe.."

She took his hand and gave it a little squeeze. He looked at her as she let it go to see that she has her eyes closed in prayer again.

"aise hi rahenge. Aur yahi duwa karenge. Ithni shiddat se maangege naa, tho jaldi qubool hogi.."

He closed his eyes and prayed. They tied the holy thread and walked out of the darga.

Outside:

"DV, mujhe abhi bhi yakin nahi ho raha. Hum aaji Naani ko manaayenge kaise?"

She asked him once they came out.

"main hu na.. trust me. Main abhi aaya.."

"kaha jaa rahe ho DV?"

He ran inside again n kneeled down in front of the almighty.

"Hey bhagwaan, khuda.. Jesus! Jo bhi ho, uperwala.. mujhe khud nahi pata ki main aaji naani ji ko kaise manaaunga! Ya fir mere parents ko. Maine Saachi ko yakkin dilaadiya ki main unhe manaaunga. Par mujhe khud nahi pata ki kaise. Aap tho jaante hai na main unse kitna pyar karta hu. Main kisi ko bhi chot nahi pohochana chahta.. yeh kaam main carefully karna chahta hu, bina kisi ko chot pohochaaye. Koi sahi raasta dikhao aap, please!"

When he walked out a few minutes later, Saachi smiled at him.

"Ithni der.. kya duwa kar rahe the tum unn se? chalo ab"

"jithni der karo uthna achha hoga na.."

"hmm.. oh no! Aaji Naani!"

He jumped at once at looked in the direction she was pointing.

"arey yar! Yaha kyu aagaye.."

"Oh no!" Saachi was panicked, "Oh no DV! Aaji Naani.."

"Oh no DV aaji Naani.. kya kar rahi ho? Khadi kyu ho! Marwayegi kya? Agar tumhe aise mere saat dekhliya na tho humari shaadi iss janam mei tho nahi hogi.."

She smiled at him sweetly.

"Kya.."

"tumne mujhe tum kaha.."

"baad mei khush hoke sharmaana. Ab jaldi se yeh burka pehno.."

"burka?"

"haan tumhareliye hi laaya tha main, ab chori chori milna hai tho burkha pehen k nikalna padega aapko.."

"Nahi DV.."

"Bas ek baar pehenlo na.. please!"

"nahi.."

"thik hai.. woh jo budda Rajeev aayega na, usse karlo shaadi!"

"tumne Rajiv ko budda kaha? He's just 35 mujhse ek saal bada hai woh mutlab.. main.. mujhe tumne.."

"arey nahi.. yeh waqt naraz hone ka nahi hai. Please pehenlo.. Ulka kaku bhi saat hai unke.. pehenlo jaldi.."

"Kya?? Ulka kaku.."

Saachi got worried as he saw Ulka and company approaching them. She obeyed him and reluctantly put on the burka, the long full body cloak which Muslim women generally wear. She was found of all traditions and she knew what value burka has got for women in their religion and prayed to god to forgive her for using it here.

"baal baal bach gayye!" DV took a deep breath as they ran away from there.

He paused for a deep breath when he heard someone shout.

"Arey DV!! Tum yaha puttar?" He was shell shocked to see Nani ji coming closer, "kaha bhaage jaa rahe the?"

Aaji, Nani, Ulka spotted them and reluctantly he went to greet them.

"Arey aap sab log yaha? Namasthe.." DV flashed a nervous smile.

"yeh kaun hai.." Ulka asked upon finding the duo.

Saachi got panicked but DV holds her hand. Aaji, Nani, Ulka fail to recognise as she's behind the veil with only her eyes visible to them.

"yeh woh.. aapne bilkul sahi kaha tha Nani ji. Mujhe meri soul mate milgayi hai, peer baba ne milaaya hai.. yahi woh ladki hai jisse main shaadi karna chahunga.." DV finished with a smile. Saachi couldn't help but smile nervously behind the veil.

"Deva re deva! Yeh aaj kal k ladke bhi na.. kal tak apne se badi ladki ka deewana bana firaa tha. aur ab kisi aur k saat hai..." Ulka kaku commented.

"Ulka.. tum chup raho. DV puttar kaun hai yeh? Aur ithni jaldi pyar kaise hogaya tumhe? Koi jald baazi mat karna puttar ki baad mei pachtaana pade." Nani tried to reason.

"Nahi nahi Nani ji, thank you. inhe tho bohot pehle se jaanta hu, aaj yaha maatha teka aur bas ehsaas hogaya ki yahi woh ladki hai.."

"fir tho thik hai. acche bacche ki rehna aur khush rehna humesha.." Nani smiled at the duo.

"Arey isska dharam dekho, usska dekho. kaise hogii inki shadi? koi sahi ladki nahi milti hai iss DV ko pyar karne k liye.." Ulka commented.

"Nani ji, Aaji.. saachi ji se naa sahi, aashirwaad dijiye na ki mere khayalon ki mallika, mera mutlab inke saat meri shaadi hojaye!" DV asked them smartly.

He took hold of saachi's hand and together they touched Aaji, Nani's feet.

"jaldi se byah karke khoob khush raho.." Nani blessed them both. Aaji too smeared their heads.

Saachi was elated as her Aaji, Nani indirectly blessed them.

"Mujhe tho shak horaha hai iss par.." Ulka was gazing at Saachi who's in burkha.

"Zara isska chehra tho dikhaa.."

Both Saachi n DV began to panic. Ulka almost removed Sachi's veil but Naani stopped her.

"Kaisa sanskaar hai yeh? Uss kudi ko akela chod do.." Aaji, Nani walked away. Ulka too followed them reluctantly.

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DV asked her to remove the burka so that he can see her beautiful face.

"thank you DV.."

she looked at him lovingly with tears in his eyes.

"hmm.. ab yeh thanks kisliye?"

"Aaji Naani ka aashirwaad dilaane k liye! Ab mujhe thoda thoda yakin ho raha hai, ki sab sahi hojayega.."

"of course! Aur kuch hi din mein pura yakkin hojayega.."

They shared a laugh.

"Arey deva! Yeh wohi hai.. arey aapki poti ne aapko fir se dhoka diya.."

Duo were shocked to hear Ulka kaku shouting from a distance.

Saachi panicked but DV ran away taking her along. They hid behind a tree.

"Arey chup kar Ulka, Saachi tho office mei hogi.." Nani replied angrily as she joined Ulka.

"Office mei nahi bhaag gayi woh apne aashiq k saat.."

"Office chalke dekhlena tu.."

"haan tho aap log bhi chaliye.."

The three of them quickly left the place and DV groaned.

"Oh no.. ab aap ko office jaana padega!"

She smiled at him, "hmm.. tum kaho na apne lagoge."

He smiled back at her but made a sad face.

"Kya hua.."

"socha aaj kuch akele waqt bitaaunga tumhare saat.. par ab tum.."

"kya.. main samjhi nahi.."

"bohot arrangements ki thi maine.. date k liye."

"Par tumne mujhe.."

"surprise tha.. ab sab chaupat hogaya!"

"hmm koi baat nahi, ab tum mujhe office drop kar do, hum kal bhi date pe jaa sakte hai.."

"seriously? Aap kal aayengi?"

"Of course aaungi. Mai apni puri zindgi tumhare saat bitaane wali hu tho kya tumhare saat date pe nahi jaa sakti?"

He grinned n hugged her and together they headed towards farm.

Ulka was taken aback to see Saachi sitting in her cabin. Aaji, Naani gave Ulka disgusting looks and praised Saachi. Little did they know, DV was hiding under her table.

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NEXT Part:

DV, Saachi bajaofy Ulka kaku's band. Some Saruv romance😳 Ulka tries to expose them but fails. Rajeev arrives. DV talks with his mom about his love.

Stay tuned. Hope you guys liked this part 😃 Tina, Vinee, Viny thanks so much for ur support🤗

See u soon with a new update. Thanks for liking n commenting.😊

Edited by Priyamvada - 11 years ago

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