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Rima

@PourQuoi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#541

Originally posted by: fahimataq
jus felt like bringing it to the first page...😆
rima i hope u know what u have to do, no pressure (😈)😆😉

🤣Right...no pressure!😆😆😆...I'll see hun!...you know my commitment to work at the moment😭😆...but maybe thursday or friday...😉...or better still SOON!

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Rima

@PourQuoi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#542

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Delena

@Delena-cious

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#543

wow rima...this is one hot update...i can almost feel the heat😆...i just loved this possessive milind to the core...so this chawl milind mishra is gonna become the tycoon miind mishra huh?eagerly waiting for the next update hun😊...continue soon

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@-JC-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#544

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Panache

@ppanache

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Posted: 17 years ago

#545

Rima...i read it in one go........ Lord!! you have written this part with a vengence!!!! 😛

Couldn't stop myself from smiling while reading through the entire part...... If Neesha are passionate these two are sensual beyond belief....

I specifically liked the fact that you brought out Milind's posssessive streak which i think is an integral part of Milind's character.... The threat said out loud and vaguely understood by the recepient! I liked that....

It still think Milind needs a stronger push to move out of the chawl and come back as a tycoon business man....i don't know how you are going to accomplish that...but i would definitely want to see a stronger reason for him to leave the chawl!!

But this part was written beautifully! Great work yet again! Love!

Edited by panache - 17 years ago

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Divya

@dbr_kmichi

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#546

hi i'm divi

nice update👏

i'm very happy⭐️

update soon😆

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soul76

@soul76

Sparkler

Posted: 17 years ago

#547

Hai hai hai Rimu maar diya yaar inna sohna update Michi all the way what a spectacular scene. Jealous obsessive and possessive haila itney saarey emotions bechara Milsi...... can't see his gal with that Avi... budha avi.... I don't like that kebab main haddi at all. Inder ko kiya pari hai to get her married that soon abhi to bachi hai woh tell him to get Ayesha married first she's older anyways. Loved loved loved the night scene darkness, proximity, tension, it was perfect she could sense his every move feel his touch and desired it that's the best part. So wish he had kissed that scar of hers haii tamanna hee reh gayii meri... so he's planning for them wants to be something for her. Poor Ali chai bhi gir gayi becharey per tsk tsk tsk chalo dosti main sab chalta hai... please give us more parts like these....

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139271

Hibernated

Posted: 17 years ago

#548

awesome update! loved the michi chemistry! but Inder had to come in between!😡😆 pls continue soon

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GratefulDead

@GratefulDead

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#549

Rimaaaa…kill me…kill me… kill me..i missed two parts…Read both at one go…too much to handle ..im still panting…

Well to start with your latest update…perfervid, blazing, fiery, flaming, impassioned, stirring..I still have some thousands butterflies flying in my tummy☺️…Uffff wht passion☺️…just adore this arrogant and possessive Milind!!!!!😳 To some extent I find him narcissistic…the way he ignored her wound on her palm😕….he is only bothered abt his own love and passion.. just love the part where he used her dupatta to erase the touch by Avi😳😆….this guy wildly loves Prachi man…!!Same time our doll enjoying his possessiveness.!:)😳 please….continue soon..and get that Avinash out of Michi's way soon..😡

Well ,Part 9..one more treat😃…I always dreamt of a Neesha Track😍…love this naughty and playful Neev who is also passionate and possessive but ofcourse nothing compared Milsi's wildness!!😳Neev PL relationship is too cute…😛

Please update soon.🤗.till then let me come down to mother earth..and get rid of all the butterflies that have been creating ruckus in my stomach…shoo shoo..🤢