FF:Aankhein(MP/NA) Complete, Pages 1, 2 and 3 - Page 54

Originally posted by: Anushka

Fab update hunThanks Anu...😃

Neev is just toooooo cute. I love the PL-Neev bonding I agree...it's pretty special😉😃

Felt bad for Ayesha the childhood picture scene was so emotionalI know right...it must have been so tough for her growing up...

NA scene was sweet. Cant wait for Ayesha to admit her feeling she will...but soemthing's going to jolt her into it first...😆

Missed Milind. Waiting for a Michi sceneNext part will be on them...😃

Originally posted by: sweet_JAY_FAN

Hi Rima😊

I am deactivatong my account of I-F😭aww Shriya sweetie...I hope everything's okay...

so im leaving forever and I wanted to sy bye one last times and i think ur really gr8 person plz dont change😭awww hun...🤗...thats very sweet...

will miss u tons😭will miss you too...

luv u Shriya😭

btw even thoughi am leaving i will still be a silent reader of ur FFs and i luv them and ur the best FF wrier Ive evr met. UPDATE DAILY or else😡😊 I stil will be reading them and since i wont be ab;e to personally comeent here's a heads up comment to all the parts: Lovely update i am sure u will rock every update

and plz also i have one personal request. Always support Jay in what he does an dont let anyone say something against him. Luv u soooooooooooooooooooooooooo muchThank you so much for the compliment hun...really means alot...I hope everything's well with you and Best of luck for everything in the future.😊...I assure you...I'm gonna be there for him...😊

😭

-Shriya😊😭

First and final good-bye

Originally posted by: panache

O.k...here i go!!!Shoottttttt!😉

PL - PL in this story is a bit different from the PL that we see on screen...By that i mean, here is not the serious mom who keeps giving advice to Prachi....The Neev/PL relationship is more beautiful in this FF than on the screen...PL seems to generate love, loyalty and affection even with a character like Ayesha who has a very hard shell....Even knowing that PL is the woman in her mom's place.....Do you think...she's not always serious...she often has this mischievious smile sometimes...I'm just exaagerating that side to her in this I guess...but her motherly side will come out as well...nothing has happened so far for her to behave so...she's oblivious to it atm...thats a real nice compliment hun, but I really love Neev/PL in the show...they dont show enough of it....😡😆...as for Ayesha...I contemplated her hating PL but why blame a woman that doesn't know what went on?...its not her fault, is it and I like to think Ayesha's a smart girl...plus like you said she's drawn to PL's nature too...who wouldn't be...

Neev - What should i say! Neev is absolutely marvelous here! He seems to know how to handle ayesha...Bringing her slowly out of her shell...Neev is a badmaash when he wants to be and he is serious when he has to be...The Neev/Ayesha/PL - Combo seems to take more precedence in your story than Michi...😆(Probably, Jay ka effect hoga!)Is it me or are you writing this story mainly as Neesha as the lead pair!!😕LOL...Sangee...Neev is all those things and he'll be much more...I can understand why you think Neesha have precdence and they do in certain updates...mainly due to time constraints but also because I need them to carry the story forward to get to Michi's part...😆...I think with mine like JC's...the Neesha story comes to a climax first and then Michi...thats why it seems like this at the moment...also...because this is my first time writing Neesha...I'm just enjoying it so much...😊

Prachi - Well, this prachi is the same! I hope that Avinash goes to hell!!!😡 I feel bad for her...but i guess the seperation was necessary to bring them back together...Prachi burning her hands was very poignant and i believe has more significance than the words you have written for it...It truly shows how deeply she has fallen for Milind....On a side note, i had actually planned a chapter where Prachi burns her hand with a cigarette..but after reading yours..i don't think i will do much justice in my FF...😆You'll like what I've got planned for Avi hopefully😉😆...yes a seperation is necessary...very much so...they'll both be fairly different when they do meet again...about the scene...I guess I'm trying to keep it minimalistic so I guess I probably didn't do that scene justice...but omg...you had a similar idea...wow...great minds na😉...do add it to yours please...it'll be different and in a different context so how can there be comparisons seriously...

Milind - The atypical angry young man!! with a drive to suceed! I think he will come back with a bang! Can't wait to see his return.....Yes...it'll beeeee good...or so I hope!😃

Finally, Ayesha.....- This should have been the Ayesha onscreen...Alas! they have turned her into a vamp on the small screen but i guess there is still hope!I knowwww😡😡...no one can be normal in these showss....they have to extremes

As promised.....i did comment!! LOLLol...😆...I know how much effort that must have taken...you deserve theseeeeee🤗

By the way, this one is terrific!Thank you Sangee...😊

Originally posted by: jess.amit_3

Rima after reading this..im in tears..im literally in tears!😭 Our Neesha! Apna sapna ab kabhi poora nahin hoga! I hate the creatives...hate them like freaking hell!😡..Oh well atleast Neesha is still in ur story..thank u!it's okie Jessu...that what I console myself with too😭...sttttupidddddddddd freaking creativeeeeeeeeeeees😡UFFFFFFF! Uff!! uff!😭

Okay let me start off with the cheer!😆hehe ...Yay🤗...btw..

*Whistling* W-O-O-O-H-O-O-O-O!! Shabaaaaaaaaaaash meri jaaaaaaaaaan! *Pats Rima on the back..punjabi way..more like smacking on the back*😆LOL...Jaanni...thats how my dad does it too🤣 my brother started tearing up one timeeeee😆😆😆

Okay ab yeh Avinash ki kahaani jaldi se khatam karde ..i want more michi moments😳..waise im so glad k Ayesha was feeling bad when she saw Prachi walking with Avinash..im glad she knows dat Milind is da one in Prachi's dil😳haan haan...Chi sirf Mi ki hain...promise...lekin bechare Avi ne kya bigaada hain tera?😆...yaar har update mein romance nahin ho sakta😭😭😭...but I'll try😃

Premlata and Ayesha..i can just imagine them..sitting on da ground going thru albums..having a sorta mother daughter moment..when Neev pops outta nowhere😆LOL🤣...you know what...nobody questions me anymore..."where did Neev come from?" "Doesn't he have work..."😆😆😆 kyunki jawaab mere paas bhi nahin hain....😆😆

Neev is just ADORABLE! haila..Neev&PL are too adoooooooooriiiiblaaaaaaaa 😍😆..I love how PL plays along with him too..its just so sweet..i love her😆😳..love how shes like..were not alone😆😆😆Exactly...she's a classy lady😆

The Neesha scene..''RIMA DARLING' that was FANTABULOUS...the whole neev taking Ayesha's hand and slapping his cheek..and than the funny part..where shes like 'agli baar meri jhooti kahega'..I LOVE AYESHA🤣😆love u and ur dialougues.. 🤗..Fit the characters to the T!!👏😳 Kaash hum aisa hi scene asli mein dekh paate..i love neesha so much..only because of u!awwww...so sweet Jess,🤗 but I'm sure some of the credit goes to the creatives😡 (thou begrudgingly) that gave us them😃...I'm glad you like that part...there whole thing is always fun to write as well...
Awwwwwe the next scene was so sad..that picture was of Ayesha..im glad to know Inder actually had a picture of her!😊..and haila..apna hero already knew k it was Ayesha..shabaash rima k sher😎😳..true lover right there😳Lol...yes, there are many times about Inder which we dont know... and right you are!!...Neev's just a clever guy I guess...😉😆

This part was Awesomyyyyyyyy!! it was an all-rounder..funny,cute,emotional..JUST TOO GOOD!🤗awww Thanks...glad you thought so...

Loveeeeeee uuuuuuuuuuu!!🤗same here sweetie😃🤗

Jiyondi Re..lambiyaan umaraan maane meri rima🤗ahaha...
UPDATE THE NEXT PART PLEAAAAASE!will try soon...
muwah!❤️

Jessu<3

p.s. main subha se yehi soch rahi hoon..k how did i miss this update😕im actually 6 pages late😕..thats really sad....im sorry! and hun i love u so much for the 'peace offering'..i read it every night as my bedtime story now🤣!!!..it was brilliant😳..ur brilliant.😉It's okie Jessu...I thought you must have been busy ya kuch...😃...but glad you liked the peace offering...😆😆😆...it's freakyyyyyy😕😆...I think I have the "sight"😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Heeba

hey Rims....its me heeba...lolawww seetiw...we've not forgotten you...I hope you're well man... ...I know its been ages that i have posted something....i'm just caught up in a lot of stuff....i've never been this busy in my life....but thinks are getting better now...okie...thats fine...but take care of yourself and let us know how you're getting on...

just letting you know that i read both parts and LOVED them both...will comment properly once i get some time in my hands...dont worry about that...I'm just glad to see your post...take your time and hope things get sorted out....😊

Miss you all very much...same here Heebs...🤗 love you too

Lov e, Heeba