FF:NO GREATER LOVE(MP):Updt pt31B 11/02 pg121

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Aish

@AishwaryaRathod

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: its me tan

its good ,its great and its superb, but you made a huge mistake showing me your FF:

coz if you do not participate in FF contest, i will, i am not going to lose a superb entry like something you did here

take this entry--i know nothing of RA..lets use MP😃😆

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mi-neepearl

@mi-neepearl

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#32

when r u upating next sheena? just love your ff now!

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246851

Hibernated

Posted: 17 years ago

#33

you dont need to know ra, just read the contest declaration once, ff writers from all over if are palnning to attend this contest(okay its a lil exaggerated but still)
and most of them know anything about teh show, read the decalaration in FF

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Aish

@AishwaryaRathod

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: azam12neelab
when r u upating next sheena? just love your ff now!

awww how sweet--lolll hun as soon as i finish the next one--perhaps 2morrow😃

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Aish

@AishwaryaRathod

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: its me tan
you dont need to know ra, just read the contest declaration once, ff writers from all over if are palnning to attend this contest(okay its a lil exaggerated but still)
and most of them know anything about teh show, read the decalaration in FF

hmmmmmmmm..be happy with Michi and this FF😆

Edited by legallyblonde21 - 17 years ago

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@-JC-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#36

You already know what i feel about part I but when i read the second part i thought i missed something and went back to read...and gosh i would have missed the hug if i hadn't. 😳 😳 Awww..i totally understand Prachi's bewilderment at Milind's actions. And really enjoy that Milind doesn't let Prachi know what he truly feels. Because he is egoistic and proud. 😆 😆 😆 I am wired. I find romance in the unromantic. 😳 I find Milind's actions so cute that he behaves the opposite of what he feels.

Would be very interesting to see this relationship grow and to see Milind one day telling her how he feels.

Loving your FF so far. Please continue.

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Quietude

@Quietude

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+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#37

Interesting part Sheena 👏

Loved every bit of it... liked the hug and waiting for more Michi interactions

Cont soon

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Rima

@PourQuoi

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#38

OH MY GODDDDDDDDDDDD

Sheeeeeenu!! That was so cute!!okay my favourite bit EVER is likkle Ritwik baby...what an adorable bacha...can I have him??? 😳 😆 ..."Pachi milk" AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW 😆

Aha...Pa Mishra is like my favourite 😉 ...and I'm so glad that Michi are married even if it is because of him...

Tou Mr Mishra...why is he so uptight...just relax dude...you find her attractive...only natural... I'm glad he's given her an office...maybe they've heard...the boardroom is the new bedroom... 😆

Prachi is a sweetheart!! But isn't she always... 😃 I LOVE herrrrrr....but Milind's gruffness 😆 towards her will lessen with time I'm hoping (like jaldi!)
😳

Okay Jaan...LOVED IT... 😃 😉
Jappi pa le 🤗 Thank you for the update... 😆

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Aish

@AishwaryaRathod

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#39

Shergill Group 5:30pm

Neev Shergill wanted the hotels in Goa at any cost. MM could not get those. If Milind managed to acquire them his stocks would rise,and he would be among the top hoteliers in south asia. "Mr Sharma, I want that deal; if MM bids 50 million you bid 100; if he bids 400; you bid 500;Bid higher than him and under no circumstances should that wife of his know that you work for Shergill Group.Am I clear? Very well, you may go now." 'Prachi', he fumed, 'you rejected my love for that egoistic arrogant Milind. I was ready to give you everything and yet you walked away saying you never loved me. Now see how I destroy the man you left me for. I will ruin him and then you shall have to come to me begging for your husband's ego, pride, respect, standing. You shall realise what it feels like when something is taken away from you'

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Mishra House

It was 10 30 when the wind caused an open window to close shut and Prachi woke up from where she had slept with her head on sukriti's bed.She had been sitting on the floor watching sukk and ritwick after she had managed to feed sukk a few morsels. sukk hadnt talked, she had just stared and gone back to sleep and prachi had also drifted. she got up and ran downstairs. She heated up the food that kaka had as always placed on the tray for her and Milind and took it to the study.

Milind pretended to be engrossed in his work but he had in actuality been waiting for her and had started to get impatient when she hadnt come in with his food. "Milind, dinner." she said softly and he just grunted while he continued typing on his laptop. As Prachi walked around the study tidying it up, he wondered if like everyday for the past 4 months she hadn't eaten either waiting to eat with him. He looked up and saw her neatly place his files on the shelf, put the CDs back on the rack and perhaps make a mental note about getting the maid in to vacuum the carpet on Monday since no one had the courage to enter his study in his presence.

She often wondered if he had always been this way clammed up, gruffy, short tempered, rude. The earlier outburst had told her that something had gone terribly wrong for him, that his heart had been broken, that someone had hurt him, caused him pain; and that made her wonder if he had once laughed--had he ever laughed; what did his laughter sound like?

She suddenly realised that it was 11;and he had eaten nothing. Milind please eat. I saw you had not had lunch either, please eat."Why does it matter to you if I eat or not. I can take care of myself and I am busy typing as you can see I am sure" he remarked.

Prachi said nothing but took the tray and walked to his side of the large oak desk. She put the tray on the side, and mixed the daal with the rice, and took a spoon up to him. He stopped typing for a second to look at her, and she smiled at him. His normal reaction would have been to smack the spoon out of her hand but he realised that the rice and daal would drop on the carpet or on his papers, and she would have be saddened. Why does that bother me?; i know the rice can be cleaned off the carpet; i could strategically make sure the contents do not land on my work so why am i just looking at her instead.

And then much to both their amazement. He opened his mouth and she smiled again as he ate.Thank goodness; he ate. She sighed loudly and he wondered if she was tired. The office,his sister and her son, and he knew he too wasnt easy and yet he had not once heard a complaint. Prachi...he began but then stopped himself... had he really been thinking of the contents of the song that had reminded him of her while driving to work that morning. How silly would he sound saying to her..."Sone dildaraa tere pyaar toh mein varriyaa;
meriyaa duawaa tenu lagjaan saariyaa". She d wonder if he had lost his mind and get him a psych consult too. What he didnt know was that the words from that song would have meant the world to Prachi if he had said them.

'Milind, did you say something..Prachi asked.
Yes..sorry for the outburst earlier..i didnt mean to..' Prachi looked at him and took his hand into her own and squeezed it tight. She hoped he would understand that it was okay; that she was there for him when he needed her whether he asked or not. She left his hand and continued giving him the rice-daal. "Enough" he brushed her away after eating most of it; As she left he thought "thank you my love" but his expression was stoic as he returned back to his work. Then he realised something... she hadnt eaten either; he wanted to rush to the kitchen, to make sure she ate but he stopped himself--"No Milind No...dont; if you let Prachi know your feelings; you will only get more pain. Stop; But Prachi's nothing like her; she never cared for me; never thought of me; thought of herself only; and she never thought once of what I would feel when she .....and Prachi isn't like that. But no..i can't' he thought as his eyes teared up, he sighed and went back to his work hoping that Prachi would eat and not stay hungry.

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12:30 pm; MM Corp

Prachi picked the phone up in her office as it rang. "This is Prachi", she said into the receiver. "Beta how are you? Hows Milind and Sukriti?
Oh gosh, it was Baba--what was she to say about sukriti. How are you Baba, when are you coming?I know Milind misses you. "I ll be a while longer beta". He didn't want to worry her but he had actually come to Delhi for tests because he knew if he had them done in Mumbai, Milind would worry as would Sukriti and his dear Prachi. he didnt want to worry either, esp Milind who would not have been able to deal with his illness. So he had asked his old friend to let him come and stay while he had tests done.He wished he could tell his daughter-in-law; she was mature and responsible and would be able to understand but did she not have enough to deal with already."I am glad you are well beta; and I ll speak to you soon. Call me if you need anything. Bye" "Bye Baba. Take Care". She sighed as she put the phone down. Why was he not telling her. Dr Suri had told her when she had gone to get Ritwick's vitamins. She knew the real reason he was in Delhi and she knew that after the previous day's events she would not be able to tell Milind. He was dealing with enough. Oh God please let everything be fine. Please let Baba be well, and Sukriti and let my Milind be happy. Please. As she closed her eyes, Milind stopped to look at her as he walked by, unaware of his Baba's health or of Neev's wicked plans.

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P.S. thanks for reading and liking my FF

Edited by legallyblonde21 - 17 years ago