FF:NO GREATER LOVE(MP):Updt pt31B 11/02 pg121

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so guys I took a break from studying and since i was in MI land😳😆typed an FF..please read it and let me know if you guys like it; if you do like it I shall continue...Muchos Gracias😃😃

Index:

Part 1-Page 1

Part 1(i)- Page 3

Part 2- Page 6

Part 3--page 8

Part 3(i)- Page 16

Part 4- Page 18

Part 5- page 21

Part 6(i)- page 24

Part 7-page 25

Part 8- page 28

Part 9- page 32

Part 10 - page 34

Part 11- page 36

Part 12 - page 38

part 13 - page 40

part 14 - page 42

part 15-page 46

part 16 - page 50

part 17-page 52

part 18-page 56

part 19-page 61

part 20-page 63

part 21-page 67

Part 22- page 70
part 23-page 73
part 24-page 76
part 25 - page 78
part26a-page 81
part26b-page 85
part 27-page 88
part 28-page 92
part 29A-page 98
part 29B-page 102
part 30A-page 109
part 30B-page 112
part 31A-page 117
part 31B-page 121
Part 1:
It had started raining heavily, as Prachi made her way back home from the MM Corp offices. She hoped Milind was in a good mood today. Why did he always have to wear a scowl on his face; why did he not understand that she was nothing like her brother Alaap, that she genuinely cared for him. With a sigh she turned into the mansion's driveway and noticed that Milind was already home."How is it possible, its only 4" she asked herself.

As she ran in to save herself from getting drenched, she noticed that the househelp was huddled in a corner whispering. "Whats wrong kaka?" she asked the old cook "Beta, Sukriti tried to hurt herself again" he said.
Anxiously she rushed upstairs towards sukriti's room and on her way upstairs someone tugged at her sari. It was Sukriti's son little Ritwick;"Pachi come play", he said. He had always called her Pachi and it made her smile but today she just patted his head and said "No Beta, go play downstairs with ramu kaka"; Kaka please take ritwick she called; and the old man hurried up and took the toddler to his playroom.


As Prachi got to Sukriti's room, she saw Dr Suri come out with Milind and heard him say, "Mr Mishra I think you should seriously consider getting her admitted for a psych consult"Milind held up his hand and glared at the Doctor saying "I can bloody well take care of my sister. Thanks for coming, you may leave now". As he turned to go back in he noticed Prachi walking towards Sukriti's room. He stopped her at the door and said, "why are you pretending as if any of this matters to you". "Look Milind, I am in no mood to argue, I care about Sukriti too, she s just like a little sister to me." saying this Prachi rushed past milind into the room and suprisingly after he had heard the genuine tone of her voice he made no attempt to stop her.

Prachi stared at the young girl who had become so weak & fragile after her husband Saket had died in a car crash, and she couldnt help but wonder if what the doctor had said was right. "Milind, I know you said you could take care of her but are you sure you know what you are doing"


Prachi asked. All she got was a furious glare but she continued, "Milind, this is the second time she s tried to hurt herself: first the sleeping pills,now she slammed her hands into the fish tank. I really think we need a pysch consult and some therapy as well as anti depression medicines for her."
"Prachi, I said I can take care of her". he loudly exclaimed "Oh surely, what with the new hotel deal, and the contracts in hand, and working at the office till 8 pm;sure you can take care of her. Do you even know when she eats or drinks or sleeps or even if she washes her hair or showers. You cant do this", she answered.
Yes I can, you'll see" pat came the reply.

Milind please I am not asking you to admit her--she can be an outpatient, and i can help take care of her BUT please can you NOT see that she needs help. Prachi tried to reason with him.

Stay out of my business Prachi and let me do this, its just a phase she will get over it"

You cant do it alone Milind, you have no idea what you are doing, you will make it worse" Prachi said


As she turned to leave, she heard a whisper "Yes I do know what I m doing Prachi, I did it years ago for someone. I couldnt save her Prachi but I will do all I can to save my sister" His voice caught and he turned away to leave but not before she saw tears fall from his eyes.

She made sure that Sukriti was sleeping peacefully, and noticed that her hands were bandaged and turned to go after him. She got to his room and saw him sitting on the bed.
"Sorry Milind", she whispered. "I had no idea, sorry about everything..."her voice trailed off
"Yes whatever, he brushed her away
"No. I am really truly sorry. I had no idea that you had been through this"
As she said it, she put a hand on his shoulder; angrily he pushed it off, but Prachi smiled and put it back on his shoulder only for it to be pushed off again. She sighed and got up to leave but he held her hand and when she turned he whispered---"will you stay with me Prachi, just for a while,please", and suddenly she saw that he was crying--"please, prachi, stay please"
And as Prachi sat down beside him, wondering if this really was the gruffy, rude, temperamental Milind she knew, he uncharacteristically buried his head in her shoulder and cried while Prachi was left wondering in shock and surprise. What had he been reminded of that had caused this outburst???

Edited by legallyblonde21 - 16 years ago

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ppanache thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Let me read and will come back to comment!
PourQuoi thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great start...

Continue soon... 😃

btw...did his wife die??

Thanks for the update hun...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ohhh Sheena..i was just about to log off when i saw ur post...

Interesting part...so Milind lost someone in the past...

But got a question...Milind and Prachi are married???

GR8 start...continue soon... and Thanks 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Great start...

Continue soon... 😃

btw...did his wife die??

Thanks for the update hun...

nope, it wasnt his wife; lets just say some1 in his past😊

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Originally posted by: legallyblonde21

nope, it wasnt his wife; lets just say some1 in his past😊

Okay Hun...Ayesha?

Just thought I'd hazard a guess...we've had his wife die in two fics now...mine included...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Heeba

ohhh Sheena..i was just about to log off when i saw ur post...

Interesting part...so Milind lost someone in the past...

But got a question...Milind and Prachi are married???

GR8 start...continue soon... and Thanks 😃

Yes, they are--the latter parts shall reveal more about their story as well as the story of who he lost

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Okay Hun...Ayesha?

Just thought I'd hazard a guess...we've had his wife die in two fics now...mine included...

Yes, ayesha; and btw ur FF is awesome---love it😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Very nice start indeed...enjoyed it....Sheena...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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BTW...Sheena...you have to read Sang's fics... 😳 Trust me...you're in for a pleasent surprise... 😎 😆

Sangs aka Panache😊

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