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Posted: 17 years ago
Thx ppl I'm so honured really. 😊 I wish they would copy it honestly I won't mind that at all. šŸ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago
WOW Blind Horizon, you are so gifted....this scene is much much better than anything those PA track creatives can conjure up....god, I wish they use your scenario, better yet, you should apply for a job with these channels, you are an amazing writer...I've re-read the scene twice already!!! You go girl! šŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
Wonderful Muneeza. Kaash itna jaldi itna achcha hota.
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey sarala can u write a nie ute scene of michi right from thrusday episode where it ended. want to see milind comforting shaken prachi. 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanx Suni lemme try. U mean from Thursday i.e after the lift epi right. OK.
It starts again with him thinking that if Prachi was not here he would have lost his life. Prachi comes and holds his hand and exclaims 'Milind thank god.' and gives him a look what would happen if U went before. She is shaken and grabs him out of the place and asks him 'Milind how can U be so lost in your thoughts. If anything happens to U' and tears roll down her eyes. He looks down at her with puzzling eyes and thinks why does she care so much for me.
Milind hesitantly brings her close and says 'Its Ok now' At the intimacy of both he remembers black and white scenes of party in which she comes close in the dance. Even before he comes out of his thoughts she tells him 'Chalo Milind Ab Ghar chalte hai and they both go out.( Now U guys shd forget abt the carriage and also that she would have come in a separate car). She goes and sits in his car.( Driver also will not be there). He drives the car and she sits beside him.
He is all of a sudden silent and Prachi wonders why. She asks him 'Kya Milind U R looking dull after having lunch(Prachi it is U who spoilt everything- Why did U give the way for Milind to misunderstand that Neev presented kangan)
He looks at her and says ' Kuch Nahin' and puts ont hr FM radio. (Guys do U remember the picnic episode when a love song is played in the radio). The same song plays and both of them keep looking at each other in glances and he is trying to recollect something and Prachi remembering the earleir situation. In the meanwhile his mobile rings and he picks up and Ayesha is on the other side. Prachi is tensed bec she tells lie abt lunch.

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When Ayesha asks him abt lunch he briefly says ' Mera Khana ho gaya' and keeps off saying he is in driving. Prachi is relieved.
Milind in his thought will wonder "Kyun mujhe aisa lag raha hai hi eh safar kabhi katham na ho, Kyun Mai Prachi ke saath Waqt Bithana chahtha hoo" and will think she is such a nice girl and today she saved my life and I should always let her be happy.
He looks at Prachi and tells her 'Prachi I will drop U and I will go out and come after sometime. tell Baba. OK.' Prachi is a little disappointed and says 'Mujhe bhi kuch kaam nahi hai.. Can I come with you' He gives her a smile and tells her 'The palce Iam going is not for sweet and decent girls like you. I want to go to my Chawl house. I feel at peace in that house and go there whenever I feel lonely. U will hate to come ther. So I will drop U and go' Prachi says 'How can you forget that my life has started there only and if U dont want to take it is a diff question' He doesnt talk and take a turn towards Chawl. Prachi rememebers last coming tothe house to remove snaps of hers with Milinds and also remembers the sweet moments spent in the chawl.
The Chawl has ahouse keeper these days.
As the car stops in fronnt of the house his friends surround him and wish Prachi as Bhabhi. Milind is like surprised as to why they are addressing her as Bhabhi.


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Prachi gestures to them and they tell him ' Milind Prachi Bhabhi keeps coming to chawl along with baba and she ensures good maintenance of the house. Milind is like surprised and his friends tell him 'Milind Jhao andar and aur bahut din ke baad aye na- hum sab bhi ayenge thodi dher me'. They go inside and the house keeper wishes both of them and gives the keys to Prachi and tells him he will get some milk from shop and leaves.
Milind asks her 'Prachi tho thum Chawl ka bhi dekhbaal karthi ho. kyun itna Khayal Rakthe ho hamere.' She answers 'Milind baba is like my fatehr and U R taking care of our business and thus our entire family is taken care by U and it is my duty'
He says 'Prachi Thumhe patha hai meri Ma is ghar se his chali gayi- Isliye mujhe is ghar se bahut lagaav hai.' She slowly comes and puts her hand on his. He presses her hand with another hand and his eyes are moist and he says chal mai tumhe meri ma ki kamra dikhathe hai and takes her tohis moms bed room. She remembers the past when he took her to his mom's bedroom in the same manner. She doesnt say anything and slowly follows him. He tells her how much he loves his mom and how good she was and how she is used to take care of him when he faught with his papa and unknowingly she comes closer to him and says ' Milind Aapke mama bahut achcha hai. Is liye aap ka dil bhi bahut achcha hai' He looks at her as if he searching something in her eyes and slowly embraces her and says 'You are just like my mother- How can U be so good Prachi' She doesnt answer and puts her head on his chest. Milind is like hope we remain like this forever. Prachi slowly asks 'MIlind why are you feeling lonely today. Can I help U anyway in reducing your pain' He presses her close and tears roll down his eyes and says 'Prachi in my moms room I cannot lie but like I said to U earlier I feel conencted to U somehow and I feel I cannot bear your absence. Inspite of trying my best I cannot stop thinking about you. I cant bare the sighjt of anyone near U and the very thought that this Kangan is given by Neev could not be taken by me. I am in love Prachi. I cannot live without you. I know it is wrong. tell me what I should do. I do not want to take the happiness from U and I know Neev is your happiness but' and he just starts crying. Tears start rolling down her eyes and she tells him "Even I love you very much Milind and this Kangan is not given by Neev but given by U' and she hugs him tight.
Milind is now startled.
Thdam thadam. Episode ends &n bsp;

Howzatt guys.
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Posted: 17 years ago
its nice but never going to happen today,
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Posted: 17 years ago
Very true......a fascinating tale, but one that will not be shown in the show.

If they show something like this, then that would mean an end to Prachi's misery and how can that happen. šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 17 years ago
ok guys read all the scenarios.oneword,awesooooommeeee 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
šŸ‘ Really wicked scenerios guys...please keep it up! love reading them 😊

I read a poem recently, I think it was by Ghalib...but somewhat reminded me of Milind...thought I'd post it here...

1. fir mujhe deeda-e-tar yaad aaya
dil jigar tashna-e-fariyaad aaya

[ deeda-e-tar = wet eyes, tashna (or tishna ) = thirsty ]

2. dam liya tha na qayaamat ne hanoz
fir tera waqt-e-safar yaad aaya

[ hanoz = yet/still ]

3. saadgee &nb sp;haay tamanna, yaanee
fir wo nai_rang-e-nazar yaad aaya

[ nai_rang = fascinating ]

4. uzr-e-waamaaNdagee 'ei hasarat-e-dil
naala karta tha jigar yaad aaya

[ uzr = excuse, waamaaNdagee = tiredness ]

5. zindgee yoN bhee guzar hi jaatee
kyoN tera raahguzar yaad aaya ?

6. kya hee rizwaaN se laDaayee hogee
ghar tera KHuld meiN gar yaad aaya

[ rizwaaN = doorkeeper of paradise, KHuld = heaven/paradise ]

7. aah woh jurat-e-fariyaad kahaaN
dil se tang aake jigar yaad aaya

[ jurat = courage/valour ]

8. fir tere kooche ko jaata hai KHayaal
dil-e-gumgashta magar yaad aaya

[ koocha = a narrow street/lane, gumgashta = missing ]

9. koee weeraanee-see-weeraanee hai
dasht ko dekh ke ghar yaad aaya

[ dasht = desert ]

10. maiNne majnooN pe laDakpan meiN 'Asad'
sang uTHaaya tha ki sar yaad aaya

[ sang = stone ]

source, www.smriti.com
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Posted: 17 years ago
lovely scenario k_sarala šŸ‘

love the poem rima 😊
Edited by shabzc1 - 17 years ago

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