Scenes - Ideas for the creatives at BT - Page 21

Sarala, loved your scenarios. 👏 👏

Hey dear really liked your scenario I thought I'd extend it a bit hope you don't mind me doing that.😊

It had been late and Prachi had still not returned Premlata paced the hall nervously Milind had been keeping tabs on Prachi's arrival yet when Ramu kaka negated her return the fourth time he decided to have a word with her mother. Coming down the stairs he noticed PL's distracted figure pacing "Woh Prachi" he inquired as if waiting to share her worry Pl walked briskly to him . "Milind dekho na itni raat ho gayi or woh abhi tak nahin aayi mujhey darr lag raha hai." "Aap fikar mat kijiye main dekhta huun." Saying so he grabbed his car keys from his room and sauntered out in the dark night.

Gearing up at full speed he reached the wedding venue within minutes but on reaching there he was informed that the baraat had left with the bride. The couple was flying out the very morning and so a stayover of friends or family was out of question. Frustrated he ran his fingers through his wild curls "Kahaan hai tuu Prachi..." he questioned her in his vision. His mind advised him to check out the airport and if needed the police station and hospitals but his heart guided him to the large expanse of the restless sea. "Main yahaan.... " he screeched his car to a halt as if shaken from a dream. Why was he at the beach he had no clue yet some magnetic force pulled him to the wet sands, in the distance the waves lapped at the beach in tirelessly.

Taking his shoes off he walked barefoot down to the beach loving the wet feeling underneath his feet he could see a white gazebo in the distance. As if by magic his feet were drawn towards it, approaching it he saw someone hunched by the gazebo crying in obvious pain. Was someone hurt, if so he/she might need help. He saw a girl sitting on the sand her back to him , her head laid on her knees tucked underneath her. Wait a minute why did the dress look familiar, even the hair... is it possible, is it Prachi? He could not believe she was sitting on a deserted beach at 2 in the morning. He wanted to give her a piece of his mind but was stopped when he heard her whimper his name "Milind" she had said ,his name had never felt so sweet to him. "Aap ko kyun kuch yaad nahin aata, kyun aap mujhey bhuul gaye kyun Milind kyun. Meri kiya ghalati hai, kis gunaah ki saza hai yeh?" What was she saying he had no clue yet he wanted to hear more he sat down near her on his haunches. The sea breeze blew her loose hair over her face yet she remained unmoved. Her eyes were closed yet tears seemed to find their way beyond her closed eyelids. Her lips quivered as she cried silently how he wished he could pull her in his arms and kiss those tears away. "Kab aayengey aap Milind ........kab aayengey apni Prachi key paas, kaisey jiyun main aap key bina...kaisey. Har din ka har pal aap key liye jeeti huun or aap... aapko main yaad nahin. Humara rishta yaad nahin, yeh yaad nahin keh main aapki patni huun. Saat janmon ka rishta hai humara. Aap to issi janam main bhuul gaye Milind saat janam kiya nibhayengey." Milind's ears could not believe all this she.. his wife, when did this happen. Was it true? He could bear it no longer gently carressing her cheek he pulled her soft tendrils away from her face, her eyes opened with a start and were filled with wonder when she saw him sitting beside her.

Wiping away her tears she stood up immediately ,"aap yahaan" she questioned him. "Tuu ghar nahin lauti thi to teri maa pareshan ho rahi thi. Is liye main....." he stopped she looked beautiful tonite her wet eyes enhaced her beauty "Tuu jo abhi keh rahi thi sach hai kiya Prachi?" he had asked her without a moments delay. She gazed at him her eyes pleading him to consider everything as true yet her lips remained silent. "Bol na Prachi....kuch to bol" he was thoroughly agitated now for the past few weeks he had had a turn of feelings for her and he kept brushing them aside considering her as off limits for himself yet here she claimed to be his wife. Could it be that his heart remembered her yet his mind did not. He wanted answers and he wanted them now.

Seeing her remain unresponsive he held her by her shoulders and shook her gently "Bata na Prachi kiya tuu meri patni hai.. kiya humari shaadi hui thi? Kyun main tujh sey itni pyaar kerta huun kiya yeh pyaar jayez hai ya nahin. Bol Prachi nahin to main pagal ho jaunga yeh soch soch ker keh tuu us Neev ki hai or main eik ghatia insaan huun. Mera terey pey koi haq nahin ..... keh tuu meri nahin. Bol na Prachi tujhey meri qasam." Prachi put her hand over his lips silencing his out burst "Prachi sirf aapki thi hai or hamesha raheygi Milind" she had answered his queries in one simple sentence. "Yeh jagah yaad hai aapko Milind" she turned pointing to the gazebo "Hum yahin per eik huey they sirf jism sey hii nahin dil sey, aatma sey , har lihaaz se. Main ney sirf aapsey pyaar kiya hai Milind or haan humari shaadi hui thi or main ab bhi aapki patni huun." Saying so she produced her mangalsutra which she had tucked away neatly under her shirt. "Yeh aap ney mujhey diya tha Milind humari shaadi per. Yeh saboot hai iss baat ka keh aap merey pati hain. Or agar yeh saboot kam hai to apney dil sey puchiye jawab aapko khud hii mil jayega."

She turned to leave but he stopped her clasping her arm in his hand "Meri ho ker bhi mujh sey duur rehna chahti hai?" he had asked softly his eyes met hers and he found the same raging passion in them that clouded his own. Pulling her to him he cupped her face in his palms and placed a tender deep kiss on her plush lips. He could taste her tears as they flowed down her cheeks, releasing her lips he slowly kissed away her tears placing soft kisses on her eyelids and chin. They could hear the waves crashing on the rocks in the distance, he picked her up in his arms and entered the gazebo placing her down he proceeded to kiss her throat , her shoulders and every inch of her skin. It was a wonderful night and the stars shone down as two hearts became one.

In the morning Milind had driven her to a nearby temple where they had taken their vows again infront of the holy fire and this time he intended to complete them with all his heart. They had arrived at the Shah mansion hand in hand giving all present a shock of their lives. Pl had been overwhelmed at this sudden good turn in her daughter's life. Milind announced that he had married Prachi in the temple and she was now his lawfully wedded wife. Neev had congratulated both of them while Ayesha had stood there as a statue, she had cried her heart out and raved and ranted in pain but Milind stood firm on his ground. He asked her why she wanted to marry him knowing very well that he was a married man and that had put a stop to her madness at once.

Once in their room Milind had asked Prachi to fill him with every detail of their past life together and she had , not keeping anything from him. He had kissed her on her forehead after she finished apologizing for putting him through so much pain in the first place, she should have told him earlier but was afraid that he might fall ill. "Tuu itni raat ko akeli wahaan chali gayi Prachi tujhey kuch ho jaata to" he had asked her concern evident from his voice "Mujhey kuch nahin hota Milind, na jaaney kyun kal mera dil mujhey wahan ley gaya. Shayad uper waaley ki yehi marzi thi keh hum dobara wahaan eik hon." she had replied gently touching his face "Lekin ab eik vaada ker " he had stated somberly " "Kiya?" she had asked puzzled "Yehi keh merey bina raaton ko beach per nahin jaayegi. Jaana hai to merey saath jaana " he had winked at her and she had smiled hugging him tightly "Promise!" she had said softly agaist his ear.

@blind horizon,,i absolutely love reading ur scenario 👏 ,,i just wished this would happen.. 😭

aww muneeza, i absolutely love ur scenario 👏 👏 , i could visualise the whole thing. thank u 😃

wow!! Loved that scenario, Muneeza. That is just perfect. 👏 👏

Thx people I so miss writing ffs on Michi so tried cramming all my thoughts in this scene. Hope you guys liked it. 😊

Muneeza loved ur scenierio ,,,very nice but i dont think they will copy this scene as for creatives even we say without any sharam copy the scenes they feel below dignity.

Hope they lift this scene of yours and show us in KYM.
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Omg! Muneeza that was such a good scenerio! WOW!

"Lekin ab eik vaada ker " he had stated somberly " "Kiya?" she had asked puzzled "Yehi keh merey bina raaton ko beach per nahin jaayegi. Jaana hai to merey saath jaana " he had winked at her and she had smiled hugging him tightly "Promise!" she had said softly agaist his ear.

loved the ending too😆

awesome..keep it up!👏

jessu<3

OMG Muneeza darlig,wonderfully written. 👏 How I hope this whole scenario would be played out in the serial.Hihg hopes I know but still.Once again wonderful dear. 👏 👏

beautiful scenario blind horizon
LOVED IT
But i doubt they would have such a beautiful idea like u
They like to make us suffer

Thanks hun!