Sangs is it okay to take Ideas from our fics??? or shall we make up new ones?
**okay so..I've literally stolen my own now...but I'm dying to see these...😳 Also the Shabbir Panchi ones...I've just edited to make Milind-Prachi
1.Going on Yas's theme of rain...She pressed her fingers against the cool glass as she heard rain drops smash against it. As if in a trance, her feet acting on their own accord, she climbed the steps towards the terrace. The air was humid, but she was unaware. The raindrops hit her skin, thick and wet, she let the water wash over her. Her face upturned, she spun on the spot, outstretching her arms, she closed her eyes, savouring the feeling. She was unconscious to the person watching her; it appeared as if though Milind had the same intention as her.
Milind walked soundlessly towards her in quick long steps, she stopped, sensing his presence. He stared at her through the rain but she turned away from him, embarassed. Milind captured her hand in his quickly, pulling her back towards his chest slowly. She quivered against his body and Milind, still holding her hand; spun her around to face him and pulled her in hard. His free hand claimed her waist, she jerked at the contact. He looked down at her as she blushed, her sari clinging to the curve of her body.
His eyes were wet but she couldn't tell that there were tears mingled in with the water from the rain that clung to his eyelashes. He moved his hand from her waist to her back, drawing her close. His hand reached up to move her hair from her face, and she laid her head against his chest.
They swayed lightly to the sound of the rain. Milind's hand moved up her back and gently pushed her hair aside form her neck. His touch caused her skin to tingle. Her mouth opened as she gasped when Milind bent his head, grazing his lips against the skin of her shoulder.
2.He held her hand as they walked towards the house, Prachi walked awkwardly; she had wished she had gotten her mother to help her with her sari like always. It felt pretty loose and she was holing it up as she walked.
Once they had gotten to the door, Prachi stopped Milind from knocking.
"Milind, tehro…meri sari…" she said, lifting her pallu to examine the damage. The sari had come loose from the skirt, Milind laughed, pushing it back in.
"Milind! Dhere se…" Prachi giggled as Milinds hands brushed across her stomach.
"Prachi, stand still…" Milind ordered but his fingers were tickled her, "Prachi!" he said again sternly but she fell against him clutching her chest.
3.He took her through an opening towards the lake; it was beautiful, the trees were plush and green and the water was calm and still. It looked like paradise, with little boats bobbing, Prachi hoped they would be able to take a ride before it rained.
She was not disappointed, Milind moved her towards a small pier and began untying a boat. Prachi stepped inside, grabbing Milind as the boat moved under the weight. She shrieked slightly and saw Milind laugh at her.
They were silent as Milind rowed, Prachi was transfixed by the muscles contracting under Milind's shirt. When he caught her watching, she turned to look out at the shore quickly, though from her red cheeks, Milind guessed what she was doing. When they had reached the middle, Milind stopped rowing and Prachi turned back to look at him. She smiled broadly, showing him how much she appreciated the gesture.
4.They got out of the car and Prachi guide him towards the beach, they had both started a journey there and now that a new one had begun, she felt it apt to celebrate there.
Milind opened his eyes, they widened slightly from the recollection and he looked at Prachi. She looked down at the ground; a tiny voice came from her,
"Happy birthday Milind"
He slowly lifted her face and said, "Thank you" immediately he pulled her to him, holding her firmly.
It wasn't extravagantly decorated; a simple blanket on the sand and candles surrounded them. She told him to sit down and went to get the cake she had made earlier. She lit it and took it towards him.
"Janam din mubarak ho Milind."
He closed his eyes and blew out the candles indicating he had made a wish. She fed him cake and put it to the side. She turned to find him laying on his back and holding a hand out towards her.
She fell onto him and lay resting her head against his chest, the rhythmic sound of his heart beating soothed her. He stroked her hair and closed his eyes; they lay there for some time until Prachi asked,
"Prachi…mera tofa?" he said as she produced the small box, and Milind opened it carefully.
Inside was a watch, Milind looked at it carefully, it wasn't new, infact it was quite worn but evidently of the highest quality. It was silver and had a large diamond dial. He was a little confused but smiled reassuringly at Prachi.
She took the watch from him and put it on his hand, "Yeh mere Papa ki ghadi thi…Milind mere Papa hamesha mere saath the, maine une mera adaarsh mana, jab wo humhe chood ke...lekin aab meh jaanti hoon ke aap hai, to muje unki kamhi mesoos nahi hoti. Maa bhi chahati hai ke yeh aap pehene aur..." she felt chocked, she stopped but knew he had understood her perfectly
A layer of tears glossed over Milind's eyes, he kissed the back of her hand. Words were not needed to express how he felt. He was proud and honoured and stared at Prachi in awe.
"Kuch aur bhi Milind…" she said shyly and produced another small box, he opened it and inside laid a perfect silver rattle.
I'll think up some other ones that are new......
Edited by zcbcc34 - 17 years ago