MICHI FF:KAYAMATH TAK..Pt20, pg59 26/6

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Hi Guys, I m pissed at the current PA track so I thought of writing a small story. I m new to writing so plz excuse me for any mistakes.

The MAIN CHARACTERS:
PRACHI: A Simple Down to earth girl who loves her parents a lot. She is not afraid of anyone or anything and has a bubbly nature.
SAUMYA: Prachi's sister
INDER: Prachi's dad, a big zamindaar
PREMLATA: P's mom
NEEV: P's childhood friend who is studying in US
MILIND: Neev's Best friend who is a heart throb of the university with every girl drooling over him which he enjoys but never gives any girl the time of the day. He still hasn't found the one who could make him drool or make his heart skip a beat.
SUKRITI: Milind's sister
MISHRAJI: Milind's father who loves his kids dearly, both his kids r afraid of him especially Milind who never refuses to anything Mishraji says.

Part 1: page 1

Part 2: page 1

Part 3: page 2

Part 4: page 4

Part 5: page 6

Part 6: page 9

Part 7: page 12

Part 8: page 13

Part 9: page 14

Part 10: page 17

Part 11: page 20

Part 12: page 23

Part 13: page 25

Part 14: page 30

Part 15: page 36

Part 16: page 41

Part 17: page 45

Part 18: page 50

Part 19: page 54

Part 20: page 59

The story starts with Prachi running in the fields of a farm carelessly...Her dupatta is flying in the air along with her. She stops when she hears her sister voice echoing in the farm" Didi, where r u??..didi???" Prachi quicky turns back and starts running towards the voice. "Kya hai?"(what?) Prachi enquired. " Ma bula rahi hain"(mom is calling) S replied. Both the sisters ran home.

AS the girls ran past the front door, Prachi bumped into dadi who got mad at her this behaviour. " Yeh ladki kabhi dekh kar nahi chalti..toofan hain isko paairon mei....titli ki tarah udhti firti hai"(This girl never sees where she is going like there is a rush in her feet, always running around like a butterfly)
Inder was amused at her daughter and replied to his mom" ma aap bhi na...ladkiyan to panchi ki tarah hoti hai, ek din apne desh udh jaayengi"( mom , girls are like birds who will one day fly away to their new house)
Dadi who was still mad said" tune hi isko bigaard kar rakha hai...dekhna ek din pachtaayega"(U r the one who has spoiled her rotten...u will be sorry one day)
Inder just smiled and went over to premlata to grab his morning tea. PL" ma theek keh rahi hai..aapne usko bahut sir par chada rakha hai"(mom is right. u do pamper her a lot). Inder just sipped his tea quietly ignoring his wife's comment. He knew they were right.,he loved his daughters but he wanted to give all his love to them before they got married and went far away from him.

Just as Prachi entered her room, her phone rang. She quickly picked it up and jumped on the bed and said "hello". A smile came on her face as she heard the voice on the other end. It was Neev, her childhood friend.

So guys do u like it or just hate the whole concept.....
plz reply..if u want me to continue..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Very good start!
Do continue soon!
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gr8 start...plz continue soon 😊
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Part 2
Prachi acted all mad and said: U have called me after so many days..what did u get a new mem that u forgot ur friend??" Neev laughed and said:" prachi, jab dekho danda le kar tyaar rehti ho. (u r always ready to hit with a stick)I had my exams, this semester is finally over,,me and my friends are gonna go to florida for a few days and then maybe I will come to India. Mom has been after me for along time so I thought I will come for the Lohri" Prachi was estatic hearing this...'Oh my god...U r coming to India?? When?? and u better get some good things for me" .Neev just laughed" Did u not hear it clearly?? I said i m coming for lohri..punjab mei rehti ho aur yeh bhi nahi pata ki lohri kab hoti hai" (U live in punjab but don't know when is lohri)
prachi got irritated" I know I know...its on 13th Jan but was asking which date r u coming?? Don't tell me ur flight will land on the 13th. This year we r having a big Lohri celebration and ..." Prachi went on and on...Neev listened to his friend with patience and then said "Ok prachi, i have to go Milind is waiting for me." prachi got sad but said" Go to ur other friend but when u r here, i won't even let u talk to that Milind. He is always hovering over u. Are u sure u guys are just friends???" prachi said mischieviously and winked... Neev laughed so much that his stomach hurt. " Prachi u haven't changed a bit...chal meri ma ab main jata hoon..bye take care" and he disconnected the line. Prachi smiled and kept the phone down, She then went to the kitchen to help her mom.

Milind was standing leaning at the door as Neev talked to his friend. He was always amused looking at his best friend talk to some girl named Prachi. Neev seemed so happy whenever he was talking to her. She was one thing that reminded him of this home back. He did talk to his mom and dad but it was just that talking to Prachi always made him feel better. She was always full of life n energy.

"Chale ab??" (should we leave now?) milind inquired?
Neev got ready to leave. They were gonna have so much fun in florida. Milind had everything planned out. He got the tickets and had booked a hotel. He was a responsible guy. He had packed his stuff and wanted to leave the dorm before any of his admirers came looking for him. Not that he didn't enjoy the attention the opposite sex gave him , he was in no mood to miss his flight. But then Neev had to make his call....aaaahhh the call to that Prachi, Milind thought.. He had heard a lot about Prachi from Neev. Milind always teased himand called Prachi as his GF back home but Milind knew well that Neev's heart belonged to one and only diva, Miss Ayesha.

Milind put his bag in the back of the car, the girls standing nearby couldn't take their eyes off him. He wore a tight white shirt with torn jeans and his hair went neatly tucked behind his ear and he had shaved making him look like a cute choclate boy. As he kept putting his and Neev's bag in the back of the car, his biceps and his six pack was quite obvious. He was indeed a good catch and girls just couldn't ignore his charm.
Starting the ignition of the car, Milind yelled" Neev aa raha hai ya main jaaun??" (Are u coming or should I just leave?)

Neev jumped into the passenger seat and said" Ok dude...lets go and have some fun" And they made their way to the airport.
Once inside the plane Milind had just closed his eyes when neev reminded him of his promise. "Ab main tere saath vacation par ja raha hoon, as u promised u have to come with me to India" Milind just kept his eyes shut. He knew he had promised his friend and there was no backing now. He was just not ready to leave his sister all alone in US. But a promise is a promise.
Edited by milindkidewani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey..just read the first two parts...gr8 start...
Love Prachi and Neev's conversation...

Do continue 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oho cool yaar a new cute ff. 😊 Update soon I like this biceped and 6 packed Milind. 😆
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pls yaar continue m eager 2 knw wat happens next 😉
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Originally posted by: blind horizon

Oho cool yaar a new cute ff. 😊 Update soon I like this biceped and 6 packed Milind. 😆

He he...i like this Milind too....😳

will update soon

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Part 3:

Prachi was helping her mom in the kitchen when Inder called her. "Prachi beta, Ur studies r almost over, what do u have in mind for ur future?" to which Prachi replied "papa, this is my last year of college. I want to do something important in life so that u can be proud of me and plz don't talk about marriage. I have no intentions of getting married ever..." Hugging she told her dad. Inder just smiled and said "aree beta, u have to get married. some prince will come and take my princess away." To which prachi just pouted , made a face and left.

Over in Florida, US. Neev and Milind were having the time of their life. No studies..no college...cool air and beach. U could see the blue ocean and people enjoying themselves. They were lying facing the ocean. Milind opened a soda can and handed it over to Neev "le teri jaan aa gayi...aaj isko kuch bolega ya nahi??" (ur love is here, r u gonna say something to her today or not?)Neev turned around to see Ayesha walking towards them in a green bikini.

neev: BAhut sahi time par soda diya yaar..usko dekh kar to mera hi sukh gaya tha..aaj kitni achchi lag rahi hai.(U gave me soda at a good time man, looking at her my mouth went dry, she is looking so beautiful today)
M: tujhe to woh roz hi sundar lagti hai...aaj kya khaas baat hai??(she looks beautiful to u everyday, what is special today)
N: tu meri nazar se dekhega to pata chalega na. Tujhe koi ladki sunder kyun nahi lagti?(u will find her beautiful if u look from my way, by the way why don't u find any girl beautiful?)

Ayesha came over to the boys and went straight to Neev and said " hey guys what r u upto today??"
Neev jumped to his feet and quickly replied" Nothing Ayesha, we r free, what do u want to do??"
A: how about we all go to this club at night, it has been a long time since we all went out together?
neev nodded while Milind just rolled his eyes. He wanted to stay in that night but he had no choice, his best friend has just said yes to Ayesha and they both were now making plans for the evening.

Back in room, "neev yaar tu chala ja, main nahi ja raha" (neev, u go, i m not going)
N: don't say that, it will be fun plus 2 hunks rocking the night club, what more can the girls ask for?? Also I promised Ayesha we will be there. Now don't make excuses. Anyway tomorrow we r leaving this heaven so chill dude.
Figuring its no use arguing, Milind went to take a shower and quickly got ready for their night out.

They reached the club and once inside, they spotted Ayesha and her other friends dancing to the tunes of Usher. Neev waved and joined them while Milind walked over to the bar and ordered a drink.
Neev and Ayesha walked over to him, "come on yaar, don't be a spoil sport, join us." Ayesha just took MIlind's hand and took him to the dance floor. Neev followed thinking" yeh ayesha mera haath pakad kar dance kyun nahi karti kabhi??"(why doesn't Ayesha dance with me holding my hands?)

Milind had a blast with ayesha and her friends. They were all cheerful n full of life. Once the dance was over, he walked back to the bar. Ayesha took the seat next to him. "aren't u having fun?"
M: oh yes, i m...thanks for inviting us. it has been a good night.
A: Milind, tell me sonething, why r u so uptight around girls??
Milind looked at her with a question in his eyes.
A: I mean , I have seen girls drool all over u but u seem to be not interested in anyone, why?
"I don't know....but i have to tell u, I do enjoy the attention " he replied winking at her..
Ayesha laughed" boys!!!" and then looked over to see Neev dancing with some girl. A smile came on her face which didn't go unnoticed by Milind.

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A week later, neev was supposed to be at the airport but he was late again. Milind was yelling at him " tu ab uske paas hi ja raha hai..vahan ja kar baatein kar lena apni Prachi se"(u r going there only, u can talk to P there.)
Neev laughed and said " was talking to mom". "Ok then lets go" said Milind.
N: tu aa raha hai na agle hafte??(u r coming next week , right?)
M: yes, yes, but i have to meet Sukriti first.
Saying Milind drove the car and dropped neev at the airport and then he went over to meet sukriti.

Sukriti, was Milind's little sister who was studying medicine. He had called her and told her that he was gonna come and meet her before he left for India. Sukriti was excited, she wanted to know about his florida trip, also she wanted to talk to him about Saket but didn't know how. She knew Milind would never approve. he would probably beat the guy black and blue. so she thought she would just tell him about Saket once he comes back from India.

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Milind arrived at sukriti's apartment. She flew into his arms hugging him. They lived in different cities about 3hrs apart but coz of both their busy college life couldn't meet so often. Milind often drove to see his sister but this time it had been a few months. Both brother sister talked about their studies and their dad . Milind told her about his trip to India. S got a little sad since she couldn't go. Taking medicine as her field she knew she will not get any free time. Milind promised her that he will go meet dad and stay with him for the most time.

(Mishraji was in delhi and didn't want to leave the house his 2 kids had been brought up. He was more than happy that his kids were pursuing their dreams n he was not worried abt Sukriti as he knew Milind would take care of his sister.)

After talking for hours, they went out to get some food. Sukriti wanted to call saket and say him goodnight but she feared her brother would get suspicious. So she decided to meet him at college the next day.

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Guys plz comment if u like this ff.....i m gonna rush through things here so that MICHI can meet eachother.

So what do u all think???

Edited by milindkidewani - 17 years ago
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wow..datz nyce...wicked ayesha again hehe...n ya i do wana see MICHI 2gether soon...update soooooon

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