FF: Rishtey(MP-NA)- new prt updtd 12/25 new thread - Page 91

Originally posted by: shabzc1

wow JC...part 2 is brilliant..the more i read about ur neesha the more i hate the creatives 😡 i loved the scene at the dinner table, its a shame he clicked on late that it was ayesha who made the halwa and not PL.but i loved the way he tried to placate ayesha 😊 neesha were on fire...i loved the detail you used when writing about the dance...Thankyou. I do feel that it wasn't as good as thier first dance...it really has to do with me not being too excited about writing currently..yet i did try to make it good. I am glad you liked it. they were so in tune with one another...and the last paragraph was so perfect, neesha have finally become one and im sure their relationship will grow stronger 😳
Yup Neesha are set. Their relationship is cemented and they'll only get stronger and stronger from here.
thanx for the update...good luck with ur remaining exams Thankyou 😊

Originally posted by: panache

JC...*This time i did not forget your name!! 😆 )Congrats...you are saved from my bullets...This part was brilliant. Thanks.

The more you write about Neev and Ayesha the more i like their pair and i love their storyline more than Michi's.
hmmm...lets c what we can do about that.😊
The scene at the dinner table was awesome..Very beautifully written...But it was so realistic...Neev realising later that it was Ayesha who made the halwa... ya neev is just a bit slow.😆😆😆
Neesha in your FF are truly a passionate couple......You have united Neesha here...I think now oyu are going to concentrate more on the Michi track...rite...
yup. Now Michi really need to get their story going. And Neesha together will only help.
Thanks for the update sweetie...Hoope your exams are going well... 😳 Thanx Sangs. My two past exams went really well. I have a break for a few days then 3 more...

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Okay JC jaan....you already know what I think...BRILLIANT! 😃 But I can NEVER have enough of my Neesha!! 🤗 ❤️ ....They're both so beautiful...and of course you can have Mr Cutie...but only to share!! 😆
ok we can share ...only with you n me.😃
I agree with Heeba about the dialogue...was soooo cute!! I loved how Neev...though he was so tired...could not resist dancing with her...just loved it hun!
ya hes a sweetheart and he really did want to.😆😆😆
I Know Michi part is important but are you still going to have some Neesha? 😳
some...yes...But hopefully you'll enjoy Michi as much as Neesha too.
Thank you hun!! 👏 Thankyou darling.😊

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Btw...I can sooooo relate to Neev's love of Halwa...and it just makes me love him MORE!! 😆

Originally posted by: pop77

nice part Jc..i finally catch up some parts today i read new part..i skip 😉 some..i gonna read later...nice songs..

Originally posted by: dipsyworld

That was brilliant, JC. Loved it.

The whole part was very beautifully written. I could visualize the dinner table scene and it is very typical of Neev to pull Saumya's leg. Actually after reading this scene, i feel like eating Gajar halwa😕 lolz. haha...more halva lovers.

Awwww.....the dance was so passionate.😳 Thankyou. I was hoping it didn't come out too fizzed out. but 'passionate' is better.

Finally everything is perfect for Neev-Ayesha. 😳 😊 yup.😃

Good luck with your exams. 😊 Thankyou