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Molly

@nick_bon

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Posted: 17 years ago

#891

you know you should publish this... it can turn out be a great book.

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Shabz.

@Shabz.

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Posted: 17 years ago

#892

sorry for the late reply JC...i loved the update, alaap seems really guilty about what prachi seems to be going through, lets hope this makes him turn a new leaf. im glad u revealed where anjali is, kavya was talking about an appointment, and he seems to be taking care of her, does that mean anjali had an accident and he is taking care of her while she recuperates? looks like anjali has developed feelings for kavya, interesting.

thanx for the update, eagerly waiting for the next part 😊

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@-JC-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#893

Originally posted by: panache
ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR EXAMS!!! ROCK IT GAL!!!

Thanx Sangs. I did well on the last two. Got 3 more to go.😊

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@-JC-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#894

Originally posted by: optimist
i had the part 2 written but someone convinced me that it could be different and so i'll try to improve now. Honestly i am lacking a bit in inspiration cause my mind currently is revolving around diseases, meds and children...can't think romance right now.😆😆😆 I'll clear my mind on Saturday and try to write again.
Awaiting it. Is it going to be a Neesha track? By the way when are you going to deliver on your promise regarding them?
Well i tried to deliver. You tell me how it was. I don't think it came out quite as passionately as i wanted it to...but i didn't know how else i could have done this.😕

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@-JC-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#895

Originally posted by: nick_bon
you know you should publish this... it can turn out be a great book.

lolz..ya rite. But thanx for the complement. Appreciate it.

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@-JC-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#896

Originally posted by: shabzc1
sorry for the late reply JC...lolz thats ok.i loved the update, alaap seems really guilty about what prachi seems to be going through, lets hope this makes him turn a new leaf.It will im glad u revealed where anjali is, kavya was talking about an appointment, and he seems to be taking care of her, does that mean anjali had an accident and he is taking care of her while she recuperates? yup looks like anjali has developed feelings for kavya, interesting. yup😆

thanx for the update, eagerly waiting for the next part 😊
Next part i up

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Shabz.

@Shabz.

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Posted: 17 years ago

#897

wow JC...part 2 is brilliant..the more i read about ur neesha the more i hate the creatives 😡 i loved the scene at the dinner table, its a shame he clicked on late that it was ayesha who made the halwa and not PL.but i loved the way he tried to placate ayesha 😊 neesha were on fire...i loved the detail you used when writing about the dance...they were so in tune with one another...and the last paragraph was so perfect, neesha have finally become one and im sure their relationship will grow stronger 😳

thanx for the update...good luck with ur remaining exams 😊

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Heeba

@Heeba

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Posted: 17 years ago

#898

hey JC...

Really enjoyed this part...Neev is just soo cute...
"A smile crept up on his face as he bent down and pecked her lips. "umm…no you taste sweet to me" he said matter-of-factly."....love this line...

And the dance...LOVED IT...both of the songs..its the first time i heard the first song "sway with me"...I can actually imagine both of them dancing...

In all...even if there wasn't any Michi...i enjoyed this part...however...hope to see them soonnn

Thanks JC

P.S. GOOD LUCK WITH UR EXAMS

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Panache

@ppanache

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Posted: 17 years ago

#899

JC...*This time i did not forget your name!! 😆 )...This part was brilliant.

The more you write about Neev and Ayesha the more i like their pair and i love their storyline more than Michi's.

The scene at the dinner table was awesome..Very beautifully written...But it was so realistic...Neev realising later that it was Ayesha who made the halwa...
Neesha in your FF are truly a passionate couple......You have united Neesha here...I think now oyu are going to concentrate more on the Michi track...rite...

Thanks for the update sweetie...Hoope your exams are going well... 😳

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Rima

@PourQuoi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#900

Okay JC jaan....you already know what I think...BRILLIANT! 😃 But I can NEVER have enough of my Neesha!! 🤗 ❤️ ....They're both so beautiful...and of course you can have Mr Cutie...but only to share!! 😆

I agree with Heeba about the dialogue...was soooo cute!! I loved how Neev...though he was so tired...could not resist dancing with her...just loved it hun!

I Know Michi part is important but are you still going to have some Neesha? 😳

Thank you hun!! 👏

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