FF: Rishtey(MP-NA)- new prt updtd 12/25 new thread - Page 59

Originally posted by: dipsyworld

From your comments in the beginning of the chapter i realized that i missed a part 2 update that u did earlier 😕. I guess i always miss a part 2 update and read it only when u update the topic name with the next chapter number .
lolz sorry.
I read it all over again and found some things missing from the previous Neesha update. Did you change the Neesha part too?
Yes i did make changes. As i am changing the way Neesha will come together. it just seemed odd to me that my Ayesha would one fine day turn into a chatter box and share her whole life history with Neev. Thats not the Aeysha i introduced and i guess if she does some day talk to Neev like that...it has to be gradual.
I am glad Michi is back in your ff😃. Milind is attracted to Prachi and cant get her image out of his mind😳. Asha tai sounds an interesting character..i think she will try to bring Michi closer.

I didnt listen to the songs from U, Me aur Hum movie yet. Will check it out soon as now i am curious to hear the 2 songs u used in the chapter.
yes a nice album actually but its just a coincidence that i used both songs from there. But I chose the songs carefully.😉

Originally posted by: panache

JC....Mwuah....i read the redone part of Michi....Now, i know what you missed..... 😆 😆
You just Plunged them into accepting their feelings the first time around..but the redone part works marvelously... Enjoyed it very well... hehe ok are you talking about Neesha or Michi?????lolz.

Is Asha tai like Shanta tai from KIT!!! 😆 OH no way. Not at all. Tho it would be funny. Asha tai is very different. Mabye if i tell you who to imagine playing that role...you can imagine somebody like Aruna Irani or Reema Lagoo to play Asha tai. Those are the ladies i have in mind.

Also, I would like to see how you develop Rithwick and Milind's interaction...so far all i have seen is that Rithwick is still attached to Prachi more than anybody...

I would love to see the bond btw Milind and Rithwick!!...
😳
its coming Sangu. Don't worry. I wouldn't let Ritwik not have the joy of enjoying an uncle like Milind.😃

Originally posted by: optimist

Loved the redone Chapter JC. The flow is back and the narration is perfect. the next time never be swayed by all our pleading. Promise. And if i do then you can remind me or lend me your saucepan to whack myself.😆 Post the chapter only when you are satisfied with it because that means it will be brilliant.aww thanks *feeling too proud* *chane ke jhaad here i come* Noticed tht you subtly introduced Prachi's dialogues of the waterfall scene in Prachi's recollection of Milsi (the reference to the first face seen in the morning and the last, at night).You know i noticed that only after i wrote that sentence. But i left it cause thats so Prachi. Waiting for Part II. Keep waiting 😆😆😆lolz. By Friday I think I'll be able to do it.

Originally posted by: Magno

I can't say for the deleted parts because I didn't get to read them hahaha but these revised parts are superb just like the previous parts and more. Soooo goood, and I'm not lip servicing!
I know you never do.😃 And i love you.🤗for it.
Loved that bit when Ayesha replied rather calmly that the dress was made by her mother. Now just like Neev I got to know that even though the dress must had been really ugly indeed, little Ayesha was proud and happy to wear it, and that's simply very touching to me. I love this kind of delicate detail in your FF.
lolz. haha...yes she was very happy to wear it. *sniff* i love Ayesha so much.
Milind was rather mean 😆, and errrm understandably distracted as a healthy man 😆.
lolz.☺️ i do have a hard time with him. I don't know if i justify him properly sometimes. and yes he was understandably distracted and angry with himself for being so.
Waiting for the next parts. Oh and please don't forget the translation dear for chapter 30. The last time I did wait till you posted the translation though I didn't reply again 😳 translated