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Posted: 17 years ago
As always brilliant!!! 👏 👏 👏
The Michi part was better and in detail this time...i love u for that.... 🤗
Waiting impatiently for the next whole MICHI chapter. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi JC, as much as i loved the previous part 30, i can see why you decided to re-write it, this version is soo much more better and it flows really well.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey JC.....How is it going?
I just read Chapter 30. Just need a little clarification. So you removed the 2nd chapter of Chapter 30.....that is the scene where Neesha dance at the wedding? And you replaced that with the Michi scene? Is that right?

The new Milind -Prachi is good. Prachi having only 3 sarees 😆 😆 Maybe Milind will buy her a few now 😉 😆
The way he asks her to get out is just like him! But I wonder if Prachi did a good thing by continuing to sit in the car? Maybe she should have shown some self respect?? But I liked the chapter.

Next chapter, again make it half Neesha and half Michi...please!! 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Hey JC.....How is it going?
I just read Chapter 30. Just need a little clarification. So you removed the 2nd chapter of Chapter 30.....that is the scene where Neesha dance at the wedding? And you replaced that with the Michi scene? Is that right?
I did remove the wedding part because i also changed a little bit of Neesha track...because the other one was a little too much too soon. I might delete that wedding part completely from my FF. I didn't replace it with Michi scn. Michi scn was supposed to be there. What happens to Neesha after this and Michi will be in the next part. Or it might just be Michi for the next part. And Neesha will come after.
The new Milind -Prachi is good. Prachi having only 3 sarees 😆 😆 well she doesn't wear them. She is a salwar type of gal. Maybe Milind will buy her a few now 😉 😆 well considering she doesn't know how to wear them...and she might end up in more embarrassing situations...i donno if he will risk it.😉😆😆 But you never know.
The way he asks her to get out is just like him! But I wonder if Prachi did a good thing by continuing to sit in the car? Maybe she should have shown some self respect?? But I liked the chapter.
Well, i think she has more self respect because she sat there instead of doing as he asked.😆😆
Next chapter, again make it half Neesha and half Michi...please!! 😆 I don't know because the next Neesha part has to come at the end of the two week period in the FF. So i think Michi might dominate the next part.

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Posted: 17 years ago
jc, r u going to update now? 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Wonderful part JC... both Michi and Neesha were awsomeee...
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ah JKC it's been quite a time I commented here but the fact is everytime you update I hardly get a chance to write my comments tonite fortunately I have the electricity supply running smoothly here. 😊 I read a lot of parts don't remember numbers though and I loved all of them. I liked the fact that Anjali seems to be the most mature of the group, somehow she gauged both the couples expertly and also helped Neev and Ayesha bond on a better note. I really must applaud you for the dance you mentioned it being from "Shall we dance" well I've seen the movie and the images of Richard Gere with Jennifer Lopez flashed while I read the sequence you penned down. 👏 I think the way Michi are progressing are commendable it's natural for him to draw closer to her and her to restrain herself since she considers herself as a catalyst in Sukriti's bond with her child. 😊 Do update soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Ah JKC it's been quite a time I commented here but the fact is everytime you update I hardly get a chance to write my comments tonite fortunately I have the electricity supply running smoothly here. 😊 Thank God😆 I read a lot of parts don't remember numbers though and I loved all of them. I liked the fact that Anjali seems to be the most mature of the group, somehow she gauged both the couples expertly and also helped Neev and Ayesha bond on a better note. I really must applaud you for the dance you mentioned it being from "Shall we dance" well I've seen the movie and the images of Richard Gere with Jennifer Lopez flashed while I read the sequence you penned down. 👏 Thankx I think the way Michi are progressing are commendable it's natural for him to draw closer to her and her to restrain herself since she considers herself as a catalyst in Sukriti's bond with her child. 😊 Well... hehe...don't be so quick to judge...there is always more than meets the eye. Do update soon. I'll be updating wednesday night. Got a major exam to study for...need to focus.😕

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Posted: 17 years ago
Lagta hain...Jaan lene ka irada hain...

Wednesday, seems so far away! 😭

but

but

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GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!!!! I'm sure you'll ace it! 👍🏼 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
To my own surprise...i am updating tonight. 😃 I took a break and i won't be hitting the books until tomorrow so thought i'd write an update.

This one is a long chapter but i may not finish the whole thing tonight. So will update the first part (which is on Neesha) soon. 😃

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