FF: Rishtey(MP-NA)- new prt updtd 12/25 new thread - Page 158

Originally posted by: blackcurrant

JC! 😉 Was Asha Tai asking for understanding about the Prachi in your FF or the one on the show? 😆 hehe..lolz...you didn't miss that ploy did you.😆😆😆 Umm..i'd like to believe that the Prachi in my FF is as close to the Prachi in the show as possible..so the request for understanding...but at least i know my Prachi won't do anything like Panchi Dasgupta. I liked that Milind can admit he misses her inspite of being angry with her. He is pretty honest about his feelings...he doesn't hide much..what he feels, he'll express. I hope things don't turn nasty in a battle for Ritwik. hmm...maybe not ugly...no. I read Rima's comments about Anjali and I got to admit I relate far more to Prachi and Ayesha than her. why😕 if you tell me i can maybe do something to rectify that. But I adore Ayesha. Can't wait for her to give Neev the good news. The grey matter is not working right now for me...so can't come up with a good scenerio for htem....thats one reson why i am stalling that situation. Thank you for the update. thanx for the comments.

Originally posted by: KillSandy

Jc get him silver place please...gold medal is is missing in the category of prachis secret...hope he will finishes in second place....at least silver medal in this category.

Originally posted by: angel's life

JC,can u please tell me who is going to find out about Prachi's secret?😳 lolz...Bhaha..it'll be in the next update...but don't worry, that person finding out will only bring Michi one step closer.😳 But its someone else who will actually do the bhanda fodoying in front of Milind.

tho I don't really like this part because I can only read in english😳I will still like to say well done to u it was lovely👏👏😊Thanx hun.

Originally posted by: jinc118

Originally posted by: dipsyworld

JC, the Prachi in your ff and the one in the serial is currently in the same enigmatic situation 😆. Haha...i don't think its a coincidence since the Prachi in the show was the inspiration for this Prachi.
Milind is missing Prachi...thats good. It looks like Asha tai understands Prachi very well. I hope she talks to Prachi too and asks her to solve the puzzles instead of handling everything on her own. Asha tai can't talk to Prachi...because Prachi won't talk to her...or anyone else. No one can drive sense into Prachi ..other than our hot headed hero. He'll be the only one who has any power over her stupid reasonings.

Ayesha should tell Neev that she is pregnant without delaying. Would love to read Neev's reaction. isssh...i am still thinking how best to deal with this situation..i don't want it to be pheeka because haven't had a Neesha scn in a while.

So in the next part atleast one secret will be out..i guess it is about Ritwick's illness, right? Yup kind of. and we'll know what Alaap is upto.

Loved reading this part. Waiting for the next update.😊 No promises...as i have no idea when i'll be in a mood to write properly.

Originally posted by: KillSandy

JC r u updating the next part ......Honestly i am only interested in MICHI part now. Drought of MICHI everywhere.

Originally posted by: optimist

JC, read the translations. This may not be your best update but under the circumstances it was good. Thankyou akka. So sweet of you.🤗I'll surely try to get my head in the right place. Could have dealt with Milsi's feelings a little more. Here is a guy who is angry with his wife for duping him and wants her out of his life but he is also hopelessly in love with her that he finds it hard to deal with life without her. That paradox though briefly touched could have been elaborated further. Thankyou for gathering that much from that part. I really tried many different ways of having that come out...but in the end i just got tired of all the writing, rewriting and editing. I didn't want that scn to be so full of dialogs but couldn't help it and got frustrated. Maybe in the next parts, i'll have Milind's internal world come out a bit more.

I have not understood the Anjali story at all, how she met with the accident and what was the need for her to hide in Shimla. She met with an accident on her way to the airport, when she was planning to head home after two days in turkey (remember her emotional phone call to Prachi). She wasn't hiding in Shimla. She was hiding that she was in Shimla...and only from PL for a particular reason..which will come out i guess when eventually PL finds out that she was in Shimla. What was she trying to set right? I thought i had mentioned it but i guess its hard to remember all the details. She was trying to get Kavya to come back to his family...because she knows how much he misses them and that he is really incomplete without them. It is just going over my head.well i just explained it...hope it makes sense now. Frankly, with so many puzzles in your story, it is becoming cumbersome to keep track of the main story. I wish you would not keep adding puzzles for each and every character, Alaap hiding something, Anjali hiding something, Prachi hiding several things. Some plain story telling is also required. It is good you are giving importance to the supporting cast but they need not have riddled filled lives too! everyone's life is complicated to some extent...there is no such thing as simple life. 😃 But the supporting cast will soon solve themselves...and so will the main cast. Just another chapter akka.

I think I can guess who the next person privy to part of Prachi's secrets will be. It is going to be the third wheel in the MAP puzzle, isn't it? Hahaha..no..not just yet. I don't think you are going to introduce that bit till the end of the chapter so that it serves as the opening for the next chapter in which I hope a large chunk of the puzzle will fall in place, although the only reaction I can visualise for Milsi is anger at Prachi. Anger woudl be an understatement for what he will feel.😆 I guess in the next chapter i can only build it up to Milind finding out...his reaction will have to be in the chapter after that.

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Accha accha...thank god! I thought something else was going to happen...😕😆...umm...there is two little things that might happen...but then our Neesh are only suljhe hue ppl in this FF..so no worries...they'll resolve their problems.

JC, is Prachi ill? Is Ritwik ill? Yeh Hospital ki (I wanna use a really good Hindi word right about now but dunno if it's correct) What word is that.😆 kab suljegi...or rather still Prachi ki mystery...😉😆...Very much looking forward to the next update! As always Great stuff😊 Sulaj jaayegi...very soon. Within this chapter and the next. Thanx Rimz and now tell me when are you updating.😡 Kitna arsa ho gaya.😭