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Posted: 16 years ago
I can understand how you feel I don't have a writer's block but have not written one damn word for the next update so depressed am I that it has stopped me from writing anything at all my mind is one big jumble..... don't worry give yourself sometime off I always do that and it helps.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ismita

Jc Though Iam a silent reader to youFC ,I always read all the parts.But iam feeling since two chapters,except the one where you have written soumays death,You are streching things.I think you should try lose the knots one by one.Atleast give some justification and happiness to Prachi in you Fc.You have always maintained some grip in the story,but don't stretch it beyond,This is my opinion.

One more thing please update regularly.



Thanx Ismi. I know you feel that way but its not a stretch in the story. The story is progressing as i had planned but its just that i am talking too long to update...And the fact that the mystery with Prachi will probably be the end of the drama in this FF...thats why its the last thing i am dealing with. I'll try to finish the next two chapters asap. I wish to end this asap too...but i just can't seem to write.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Jc hope Milind finds out soon please dont make him to be the last person to know prachi truth and what she is hiding......as i had became a ritual in KYM.Hope it wont happen in ur FF.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Translation to CH 49: Part I

< ="-" ="text/; =utf-8">< name="ProgId" ="Word.">< name="Generator" ="Microsoft Word 11">< name="Originator" ="Microsoft Word 11"> Sukriti: Kya mera koi hakk nahi hai apne bete ke baare mein jaanne ka.Don't I have any right to know about my son? Mujhe pata hai..voh mujhse Ritwik ke baare mein kuch chupa rahi hai…par mein bhi pata karke hi rahoongi.I know she is hiding something about Ritwik from me…but I will find out Bas bohot ho gaya Its enough now…mujhe mera Ritwik wapis chahiye. I want my Ritwik back Mein nahi reh sakti uske bina. I can't live without him".
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PL: "Ek toh tumse theek se chala nahi jaata, aur tum phudakti aise ho jaise pairon mein spring lage hon." First of all you can't walk straight and on top of that you hop around like you have springs attached to your legs.
Anjali: "Badi maa!!! I don't phudak around." I don't hop around. Anjali protested.
PL: "Nahi nahi table ko tumse koi puraani dushmani hai na joh tumhaare pairon se aakar lag gayi." No ofcourse not, the table has some vengeance against you so it came and hit you on the leg..
PL: "Jab aankh aur kaan band karke chalogi toh aisa dard bhi uthana padega."When you walk around with your eyes and ears closed then such things will happen.
Anjali: "Badi maa…mujhe kuch dino ke liye vaapis jaana padega." I have to go back for a few days.
PL looked at her shocked "Par tumne vaada kiya tha mujhse, ke abke baar vaapis aakar phir tum kahin nahi jaaogi" But you had promised you were going to stay home when you returned..
Anjali: "haan badi maa, lekin mujhe toh achaanak aana pada. Yes but I had to come back suddenly Bas thoda sa vakt aur chahiye. Just need a little bit more time. Kuch adhoora reh gaya tha jo poora karna hai." There is something I left unfinished that I have to finish.
PL: "Theek hai toh mein bhi chaloongi tumhaare saath."Then I am going with you.
Anjali: "Par badi maa..aap…aap nahi aa sakti…mujhe akele jaana hoga."But you can't come with me. I have to go alone.
PL: "Gudiya ek toh tum seedhe chal phir nahi sakti. Upar se akele jaana chahti ho? Jaane kaunsa kaam aisa hai jo tum iss halat mein bhi poora karna chahti ho. Bas meine keh diya…tum akele nahi jaogi." First of all you can't walk and you want to go alone. What kind of work is it that you want to finish in this condition. You are not going anywhere alone…that's all I want to say.
Anjali: "Prachi I told you why I went to Shimla in the first place. And I am almost successful. But Soumya ke baare mein sunke mujhe jaldi aana pada. I had to come back immediately after hearing about Soumya.I didn't even inform anyone in Shimla. They were worried for me. I called them yesterday and found out that Kavya's Dadi is really ill. She wants to see me asap. Aur Kavya ki Dadi kaafi ziddi hai Prachi.Kavya's grandma is very stubborn Voh apni davayian lene se inkaar kar rahi hai jab tak voh mujhe dekh nahi leti. She is refusing to take her medicines without me. Ab bata main kya karoon?"Now you tell me what I am supposed to do.

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Dinner time @ Shah residence.

"Main hoon na yaahaan mom"I am here mom. Prachi volunteered. "Prachi tujhe apne ghar vaapis nahi jaana? Prachi don't you have your home to go back to? Milind ko bhool gayi tu? Did you forget about Milind?"
"Toh kya hua…mein bhi toh hoon." So what, I am here too.Ayesha had suggested. "Yes Badi ma..and I promise, mein apna ache se khayal rakhoongi" And I promise, I'll take good care of myself. Anjali added her assurance.
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her mind. "Main baat karta hoon" I'll have a talk Milind said assuringly. "Kisse?"With whom? Asha tai asked and Milind looked confused. "Sukriti se, aur kisse?"With Sukriti who else? he replied.
Asha tai: "Kya kahega tu? Ke apne bete ko tu bhool ja?"What are you going to say? To forget her son?
Milind: "Toh phir…main kya karoon? So what am I supposed to do? Sukriti ko kya zaroorat thi Prachi se kehne ki, ke voh Ritwik ko le jaa sakti hai. Why did Sukriti tell Prachi she would take Ritwik away with her. Uss vakt kyun nahi socha…Why didn't she think then. tab usse Prachi ke ehsaan nazar aa rahe the. at that time she was thinking about the debt she owes to Prachi. Ab voh ehsaan nahi rahe kya? Does she no longer owe that debt?"
Asha tai: "Milind maine pehle bhi tujhe kaha tha ki Prachi aur Ritwik ka lagaav achcha nahi hai.I had warned you earlier about Prachi and Ritwik's attachment. Jab vakt tha tab uss rishte mein dheel lani chahiye thi tujhe. You should have intervened when you had the chance. Uss bhache ko yeh baat samjhani chahiye thi ki Sukriti uski maa hai. That child should have been taught that Sukriti is his mother. Ya phir tujhe Sukriti ki shaadi ke baare mein nahi sochna chahiye tha."Otherwise you should not have thought of getting Sukriti married.
Milind: "Aap yeh sab baatein ab kyun kar rahi hain?"Why are you telling me this now?
Asha tai: "Kyunki ghade, iss baat ko hal bhi sirf tu kar sakta hai."Because [you fool] only you can solve this issue.
Milind: "Kaise?"how?
Asha tai felt like knocking the back of his head but stopped herself from doing so.
Asha tai: "Jab pehle Ritwik ko lekar behas hui thi..tab tune kya kiya tha?? Prachi se shaadi kar li thi…haina? You got married to Prachi when Ritwik's custody was in question before. Ab phir se vohi mudda nikla hai. Now the same issue has resurfaced. Aur solution sirf yeh hai ke Prachi aur Sukriti ek ghar mein ek saath rahe. And the solution is simply that Prachi and Sukriti live under one roof. Ab Sukriti toh Shah parivaar ke saath reh nahi sakti…kyunki tu kabhi Alaap se uski shaadi hone nahi dega. Now Sukriti can't stay with the Shahs because you'll never get her married to Alaap. Toh bachcha kya…Prachi yahaan aakar rahe…aur socha jaaye toh…voh teri biwi bhi hai…usse toh yahi rehna chahiye." So then the alternative is that Prachi comes here…and since she IS your wife…she should live here.
Milind: "Asha tai…aap kya bol rahi ho. What are you saying. Usne jo kiya uske baad bhi aap chahti hain ki mein usse vaapis le aaun. After knowing what she tried to do, you want me to bring her back? Aur voh biwi nahi hai meri. Yeh shaadi ek natak tha kaha na maine. And she is not my wife…this marriage was fake.
Asha tai was furious now. "Kya natak tha Milind? What was fake Milind? Tumne saari duniya ke saamne joh rasme nibhaayi voh naatak tha? The rites that you performed in front of the whole world..was fake? Tumhaari kanoonan shaadi huyi hai Milind. You are legally married Milind. Tum dono ke mann mein chahe jo bhi ho…It doesn't matter what you two had in your hearts duniya ke saamne, bhagvaan ko sakshi maan kar tumne shaadi ki hai Prachi se. You wedded her in front of the whole world with God as your witness. Shaadi koi khel nahi hai jo tum...marriage is not a game…"
She stayed quite after that trying to calm herself.

She continued when she was calmer. "Milind tumhe kya lagta hai..main jaanti nahi hoon.What do you think Milind..that I don't know? Tu jo raat raat bhar ghar mein chaukidaari kar raha hai pichle 2 hafton se The way you've been a watchman in this house at night for the past 2 weeks…iska kya matlab hai Milind.what does this mean Milind Teri pareshaani ki vajah sirf Prachi hai…The reason for your worry is Prachi. kyunki tu uska kayaal apne dil se nahi nikaal pa raha hai. Because you can't stop thinking about her."
Asha tai grabbed his face and turned him to face her. "Mujhse jhoot bolne ki koshish bhi mat karna Milind."Don't even try to lie to me Milind. she warned him and Milind felt defeated.
Milind: "Shayad…shayad mujhe aadat ho gayi thi uski. Maybe…Maybe I had gotten used to her. Itne vakt mein usse ek achcha dost…saathi samajhne laga tha. I had started to think of her as a good friend…a companion. Lekin kya faida tai. But whats the use. Prachi toh sirf Ritwik ke liye ruki thi yahaan. Prachi was here only for Ritwik. Aur mein kabhi nahi bhool sakta ki Prachi aur uss Alaap ne milkar ek baar phir meri behen ki zindagi se khelna chaha."And I can never forget that she tried to play with my sister's life once again.

Asha tai: "Milind…ho sakta hai ki Prachi sach mein Sukriti ka bhala chahti ho. Milind its possible that Prachi really wanted the best for Sukriti. Sukriti ki tarah usne bhi samjha ho ke Alaap badal gaya hai..aur isliye usne un dono ko milvaana chaha ho."Maybe she too thought that Alaap had changed like Sukriti.
Milind: "Alaap kabhi nahi badlega tai. Alaap will never change. Aur aap uski baat toh bilkul mat keejiye. I don't want to talk about him. Aur agar Prachi khudgarz nahi hai toh Ritwik ko lekar kyun chali gayi. And if Prachi wasn't selfish then why did she take Ritwik with her? Ritwik ko yahaan kyun nahi rehne diya. Why didn't she let Ritwik stay here. Uss din jab Sukriti Ritwik ko le aana chahti thi..tab Prachi ne usse roka kyun?"Why did she stop Sukriti when she wanted to bring Ritwik home that day.
Asha tai: "Milind mujhe aaj tak insaan ko parakhne mein galti nahi hui hai. I've never been wrong in my judgement of character. Tumse zyaada zindagi dekhi hai maine. I've seen more life than you. Aur mein dava kar sakti hoon ke Prachi jaan boojh kar kisi ka bura nahi kar sakti. And I can bet that Prachi will never harm anyone on purpose. Prachi un logon mein se hai Milind jo doosron ke liye apni khushiyan kurbaan kar dete hain. Prachi is the kind of person who will sacrifice her own happiness for others. Aur yehi log aksar dusron ke nazron mein gunehgaar ban jaate hain."And such are the people who often are mistaken.
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Edited by jinc118 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: blind horizon

I can understand how you feel I don't have a writer's block but have not written one damn word for the next update so depressed am I that it has stopped me from writing anything at all my mind is one big jumble..... don't worry give yourself sometime off I always do that and it helps.



exactly Munee. I just don't feel like writing...don't even want to think about it. I sure will take my time. As is, my attention is needed in studies right now.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: KillSandy

Jc hope Milind finds out soon please dont make him to be the last person to know prachi truth and what she is hiding......as i had became a ritual in KYM.Hope it wont happen in ur FF.



No No...Milind won't be the last to know...but i think he'll be 3rd or 4rth person to know.
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Posted: 16 years ago
JC! 😉 Was Asha Tai asking for understanding about the Prachi in your FF or the one on the show? 😆 I liked that Milind can admit he misses her inspite of being angry with her. I hope things don't turn nasty in a battle for Ritwik. I read Rima's comments about Anjali and I got to admit I relate far more to Prachi and Ayesha than her. But I adore Ayesha. Can't wait for her to give Neev the good news. Thank you for the update.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jinc118



No No...Milind won't be the last to know...but i think he'll be 3rd or 4rth person to know.

Jc get him silver place please...gold medal is is missing in the category of prachis secret...hope he will finishes in second place....at least silver medal in this category.
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Posted: 16 years ago
JC,can u please tell me who is going to find out about Prachi's secret?😳
tho I don't really like this part because I can only read in english😳I will still like to say well done to u it was lovely👏👏😊
Edited by angel's life - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
JC, the Prachi in your ff and the one in the serial is currently in the same enigmatic situation 😆.
Milind is missing Prachi...thats good. It looks like Asha tai understands Prachi very well. I hope she talks to Prachi too and asks her to solve the puzzles instead of handling everything on her own.

Ayesha should tell Neev that she is pregnant without delaying. Would love to read Neev's reaction.

So in the next part atleast one secret will be out..i guess it is about Ritwick's illness, right?

Loved reading this part. Waiting for the next update.😊

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