FF: Rishtey(MP-NA)- new prt updtd 12/25 new thread - Page 156

Originally posted by: jdots

yay..me first...gr8 part as usual...

Originally posted by: sailat@PA

Fantastic update!! really good!

Originally posted by: KillSandy

Me Comments later.

I am sure Milind was not the one who finds out the secret of prachi.

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Hmm nice JC but seriously it lacked something. Now what was it is something I didn't get. Maybe I guess it was all dialogues and no background or there was background but I wanted more of it....
What it lacked was my heart behind the writing...and yes the dialogs were a bit much...i did try to make it so it would be less dialogs..but got tired of all the editing. I really wish my mood was better and i could write better. And to think i am at the point in the story that i really was the most excited to write about and now i am having the writer's block.

Hmm so Milsi misses Prachi , poor soul has so much to bear. yes he does so miss her...but he has a bit more to bear.
Suki had me surprised I didn't expect her to demand Rhitvick but I guess her motherly feelings over ran her promise to Prachi of keeping Rhitvick with her. Yes it did. Suki is a sweet girl but she is unlike Prachi. She feels guilty for the time she already missed with her son...and on the other hand seeing Saayah sick and thinking that she was responsible for her son having been through the same situation is monting her guilt. She feels the need to make up to him...by being his mother...and its part selfishness too..cuase she wants her son.
I guess Anjali has been living with Kavya, is she married to him or is she too faking to be Anjum? haha...no she is not married to anyone...yet haha...faking to be Anjum...hmm...if the need be...maybe i'll have her do that...but i don't know yet.
So i guess the someone who'll be knowing Prachi's secret will be Alaap.... Alaap already knows...most of it...this is someone else. anyways I hope I get a lot more insight into matters in the next updates. I missed Neesha by the way.....I know i did try to make their part lengthy...but like i said..the dialogs were getting too much and i couldn't incorporate them any other way. So i had to keep it short, just as an aknowlegement that they are there and Ayesha still hasn't told anyone anything. good work sweety and update soon no matter how cheesy the stuff I'll read it. Cheesy stuff you can read but what when i read it myself...i have to like it too.😆😆😆

Originally posted by: optimist

JC, I found this chapter very difficult to follow. There was far too much Hindi conversations and though I could follow in parts, I could not really get the more important bits. It required too much of concentration that I lost interest mid way. Can you post the translation so that I could follow it better?