FF LCMD Part-2a page9 Oct 31 - Page 2

Great work I like this total new story line.....

awesome preview! i love the concept, update soon!

Originally posted by: Pori

wow.. this is totalli diff.. looking forward to it 😃

thanks pori ji glad you liked it

Originally posted by: JatinzWife

CONT NOW!!!!!!!!! 😆 love it

Luvz ya

Luv Noori Hussain

thanks honey buns

Originally posted by: kayamath rocks

shall we expect the 1 part by the end of this month 😉 😆

😭 that was mean thing to say

Originally posted by: kayamath rocks

i am not mean the way u wrote the preview it was so passionatie and intense for michi lovers as now the serial is very drywithout michi scenes and u r not updating the updates dying to read uuuffff mirchi updates as the concept of this ff is very different and dont make us wait so long.

i know i didnot feel bad, dont worry, i am not very creative it takes a while, but promise you to post some of it today 🤗

Now before going to the story for now, some flash back is needed

Part 1(a): Meena kumari meets Pran 😆

Few years ago, young prachi had gone to visit her nana for the first time in so many years. Inder had been very reluctant but let her go at the end. She still cursed herself was deciding to come here, as it was here she had met him the first time.

Clad in an yellow salwar kameez, prachi had got out of the train, waiting for somebody to pick her up. All of a sudden, there are 5-6 men chasing another men, who was running. Prachi being so young was instantly scared😭 (ok she is 17 she is a chicken ) and decided to go into the only room ( storage room i think ) in the small station and wait for somebody to show up before she went into the village

The room was pretty dusty, with a shutter door, there were lots of bags of grains hay etc etc... there ws no sign of anybody or phone. Just then the all the chasing guys come in looking for the dude,

Random guy : odhar daayk, haath say nahi nikalnaa chaiye( look everywhere i dont want to lose him)

So they look around, just then the shutter closes.

Random guy: oh kyon hai bay, who clsed the door(Oye who is it?)

Randon guy : oye munna, its him, dekh kudh aakay pas gayaa( haah he has come here )

Prachi who was hidng behind one of the hay back slowly peeks to look at the man, he was wearing a dark shirt ( black one), he had hair all over his face 😳, she couldnot really see his face, but he had a green stick on his mouth. Now prachi was more terrified of him than of the other 5 as he was hitting other ppl without mercy that too with a cycle chain . Unable to see the voilence prachi hugs herself and ducks down behind a big sack of grain.( well there was lot of dishoom dishoom)

After 5 minutes, there is a silence then the shutter opens letting lot of light in, prachi who had closed her eye shut had difficulty with the light, assuming that everybody left, prachi comes out only to find him near the door, his head was bleeding badly, but looks like all the others just ran escaped and he survived. Prachi was not used to see all that in her everyday life was terrified to see the man, now she could see him, he had long hair, all curly, dark complexion, the hair was falling on his face, and was dripping with blood. Unshaven face, He looked like a road side loafer aka gunda, prachi was immobile with fear as she was going to be the next target. Horrible stories told by ayesha and her other friends ran into her mind. She stood there and could only do one thing, like ayesha said, her favorite pass time, she started crying😭.

Then immediately biting her lips😳, as if he had not noticed her earlier, he would surely notice now.

He called out : Oye kyon hai tu!! then he located her😡( how is it ?)

Prachi looks at him terrified unable to open her mouth

He: yeh shaani, train kay liye wait karrahi hai kya😕( oh mandam, are u waiting for the train)

Prachi without thinking noded, she ws not going to tell him she was here to stay, she was not sure if she even wanted to stay😕

He: well acha hai, warna to problem ho gaathi, you know witness police and all that( good if not you will be in big trouble with police and all)

prachi at the mention of police😲 was even more scared decided that he was criminal

He looked amused😉 : You know mujhe koi problem nahi, mein to andhar baahar aatha rahathaa hoon, par tu takleef mein aajaathi, chal edhar aa( i have no problem, i am often inside out of the station ( police), but you will be in big trouble, come here )

Prachi was immobile

He: dekh tu edhar aajaa, yaa mein aavoon😉( well either u come here or i will come there)

Prachi walks very slowly hugging her bag the only possession she has in a slow whisper : dekhiye aagar(swallows) aapko* mera inaudible, then doing the ahem ahem and swallowing* baag chahiye to lelijiye gaa ( bravest line but was mere whisper) [ if you wanted the bag pelase take it]

then stops by the pillar about 10 foot away from Him. He then slowly walked towards her

Prachi: dekhiye, humay chodijiye, hum apne papa ek luvthi badi beti hai [ please leave me, i am my fathers only elder daugther]

He has a "What" kind of expression : acha thats nice, kal say to sirf ek hi rahay gi phir😉😆[ well then he just have to do without you]

Prachi: Dekhiye, please mujhe kuch maath kijiye, yeah bag lelijiye, letting her bag out😭[please leave me, take the bag]

He still continues having this really horrible look on his face still continues to come close to her, terrified prachi tries one last attempt😭

Prachi: dekhiye mein challivungi😭[i am going to scream]

He grabbing her with his arm : chilla chilla!![please scream] it will do good to your lungs😉😛

Prachi now crying loudly😭: Please mujhe chodijiye, please and starts crying loudly😭[leave me please]

Then abruptly she realizes he laughing so loudly😆, looking at her, his eyes were in tears, that look he gave was not horrible rapist look but a person who was in verge of going to burst into laughter

He controlling his laugh😆😆: yeah chahiyetha, taking her dupatta tyeing it on his forehead to stop the blood😳😳😳, mimicking her " please mujhe chodeejiyee, please yeah baag laylijiyee " [oh please let go, please]again laugh holding his tummy😆, " oye meena kumari[meena kumari is old times hind film heroine], you missed ( he says it animatedly) Nahi!!!! chod mujhe kameena "[ no!! please let me go ] then 😆 laughs again, " array bilkul bollywood style dialogues tha, ethni saari pictureay maath dekha kar"[oh god so filmi, do u watch a lot of movies or what ] laughing out leaves a shocked and angry prachi , realized for the first time she was oout without a dupatta

He walks away chuckling to himself : ekdam edi hai 😆, kyunsay museum say aayeehai [ total mental case, from which museum did she land]

***

At the same time here ayesha meets her mate

Ayesha here finally talked inder to send her to pune, it was the first time she was away from home too, freedom sweet freedom. Changing from benji type attire to ultra mordern look, ayesha came out shocking her friends as they go out to have some good time

They all had rented a car, so that they could go around, all evening they have been looking at different guys and judging them, sometimes drooling sometimes giving them marks etc etc ( usual gal stuff). Anyways they do this sitting inside the care, All of a sudden ayesha friend kitty had started drooling over a dude who was sitting on a bike and talking to his friends

Kitty: Oye hoye kya ladkha hai ray, ethana cute naa[ the dude is so cute]

Ayesha turns around and looks at him he looked really hot and cute such a chocolate boy so typical : he is alright, ayesha really looked bored

Ayesha: chal naa kitty, so boring, i dont want to just sit here all day lets go back to the station i dont want to miss the train.

Kitty: par i dont want to leave, he is so cute

Ayesha rolls her eyes shrugs: oh please what cute, 100 boys cuter than him are behind me

Kitty : acha chal, I will have a wager (bet ) with you, if you could make him run behind you phir we can leave from here and 500 bucks are all yours

Ayesha thinking for a while getting out of the care: Oh btw i need your red jacket along with the 500 bucks walks out

Ayesha along with couple of gals come closer to the guy on the bike and looks at the street side flower shop.

Ayesha keeps looking at the dude until she gets his attention, and winks at him 😉😆

The guy is pretty shocked 😲 and keeps staring at her, whereas ayesha here pretends as if nothing happened and keeps talking to the gal,

talking his coke to his nose smelling it, then drinking itJust when he assumes that he assumed that wink, she winks again 😉😆, he puke everything out...now he is sure something was wrong, his friends were trying to get his attention, but in vain as he was busy eyeing ayesha 😆were all drenched with coke puke 😆, ayehsa wanted to laugh, but she controlled. Then busies herself asking price to the shop keeper, then lingering for one more minute

she walks right past him, just as she reaches the car door, she turns back and gives him a flying kiss shocking him while all the ohter gals with her start laughing😆

Neev over was enraged at the audacity of the gal, nobody messes with Neev Shergill, he is the one who plays trick and today some chit tricked him and made him laughing stock, he takes his bike and starts following her

Speeding to the car, where as in the ayesha nad other gals shout at the driver

:bhaiyya ji jaldi chaliyee please train chutjaayegee, they lose track of him[ please drive fast we are gonna miss our train]

They reach the station were all theo ther gals thought ayesha was some kind of hero 😆, kitty was still pouting on her loss.

Settling in her compartment, ayesha decides to get water.

Walking to the stall she gets herself a water bottle and drinks it as she finishes and looks straight ahead, there was the guy ( neev) standing right in front of her and giving her * now you cannot escape look*,

Ayesha's mind was running million cpu units persecond, she threw the water on him and ran, he was running right behind her, as she made it to her coach the train starts moving, faster

Ayesha letting out heavy breathing ( due to the running ) yells : array aur teesi say bbagoo, nahi pakadh paavogay[ oh please run a bit faster, oh well you cannot catch me]

Poor neev is running so fast but couldnot keep up with the train

Finally giving up looks up there,

Ayesha laughing out at him : Koi baath nahi, dont feel sorry, next time olympics mein try kaaroo....zarror medal jeethogay......... bye ummmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaa😆[ oh dont worry, try next time, maybe in olyumpic, you never know you might get the gold medal)

Let me know what you ladies thought of it 😉

Ram Ram

Basanti😉😛

Originally posted by: Yuvraz-Krishna

Great work I like this total new story line.....

The refreshing hatke storyline is def the USP of this ff😊 Hope u continue Basanti😳

Especiallly enjoyed reading Part1a) with Ayesha and Neev, Ayesha is such a lil rockstar, nautanki😉, lol...its so hilarious how she made Neev run after her😆..pls continue😳

Michi part is damn funny too, 😆😆 Miland telling her to scream as its good for the lungs😆 too good :)

oiiiiiiiiiiii basanti wah cont soon

Luvz ya

Luv Noori Hussain

Omg.. this was soo cutee.. Im realli enjoyin this totalli diff track.. it was fab!