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Posted: 18 years ago
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Continuation

Milind comes out to see prachi fainted, all worried and concerned gets her to life

Prachi : is that you ?*indicating the picture*

Milind thinks that she remembers everything now: Yes that is me

making her self comfortable by sitting in his lap, putting her hands around his neck making M really uncomfortable

Prachi : You are that really, how in the world did i marry you 😃

M immediately jumping into conclusion about servant son : yeah ppl wonder all the time, after all i am your servant's son

Prachi frowns at his acidic tone then smiles : what 😕, so how does it matter, I finally got what i deserved 😃

M: please there is no need to taunt.😡

P : Are you mad!! I stillc annot believe you married me

M is confused😕 as hell she sounded almost happy: Why are you so happy

P full of happiness gives him the you-are-duffer look : Who in the right mind wont be happy marrying you😉 I am sure i must h ave told you million times and even showed you the poster had.

M is so confused

P :what Aap sab boolgayaa kya, remember the time you kissed me 😃 on this cheek and then i got to touch your beard

M looks shocked 😲 he kissed her when was that , how come he didnot know, even when he tried to scare her he had not kissed her, not on the cheek , is she confusing him for neev 😡, or maybe she is talking about her previous janam 😆

P: dont you remember😳, you had come over to our house to see your baba, then we were all playing and you came and threatened all my friends and mad them cry, i was very terrified of you, but then when your dad said that it is my bday, you gave me pink ribbon. I still have it

M 😲 and looks like she has lost it, he did no such thing, who in the world would give a woman a ribbon, wait a minute Ribbon ?

M slowly : when was this why dont i remember

P: oh god milind aap bhi naa, I was in third grade, Remember i was wearing the blue dress and you said it looked pretty

M was now 😲 this was definitely a shock i mean how would a man remember anything he had done as a kid he doesnot even remember her 😆

M then stuc on the poster stuff: What poster

Prachi : oh that well didnot I show you, I had your picture in room

M another shock 😲 : you had my picture

PRachi sigh : why are u behaving as if you havnt see it

M * thinks becoz you never told me * : Really of that picture when i was breaking the matka

Prachi : oh god you looked so hot, I was just 15, I had come along with your dad to watch the janmastami that y ear, you were wearing a black shirt ( fine i have black fixation so bear with me ) and you hair was all flowing, I thought I was going to lose my mind drooling over you, so 😳 when you just looked at me, all I could do was stare when you asked me a question

M was a bit uncomfortable, not sure if she was talking about him 😕

P : oh you then you had come asking me something, asking me to remove the sticky stuff from your face, well your eyes were burning i think so you just held my shoulders running it along both hands , it was all like a dream, you took my hands and started rubbing your face, your beard bruising my skin, now rubbing her cheek against his beard

M was really hot now 😆😉

P then frowned and got sad : then you opened ur eyes and were really nasty to me. But the sensation of touching you had kept me awake for days. I had saved up my pocket money for 3 weeks and got your picture blown up to a poster and had it right behind my picture 😃.

M frowning now : why was a nasty to you

P: becoz you thought i was somebody else

M thinking in his mind, he had thought she was ayehsa, he rememberd the pigtail, braced teeth gal who had looked tearful when he had yelled at her

P: But then you broke my heart when i was 16, i saw you getting cosy with another gal and that did it *prachi genuinely sounded sad confusing milind more * I just wanted to scratch the eye out of her, but then i had to respect your choice and leave you alone, you just hated me. But after that *worried look on her face * I dont remember anything on how we met again and when did u first see me and when did you fall in love with me?

Edited by basanthi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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basanti ji very nice and humerous one ,hope prachi scares milind like this in serial also.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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basanthi, excellent one yaar.. I loved the childhood love of Prachi... 👏 👏 Who said about crude??

Magno dear.. I will come back with the scenario soon.. don't knock on my head pweeeaseee... my mind not working now...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: shananubis


Prachi is really heart broken by Milind's accusations. She goes and gives the medicine to baba.. While coming back from the room he sees Neev leaving the house speaking on the phone with Saket. She decides to follow Neev. They reach the place where Saket and Sukriti is waiting. As Neev goes to talk to them, Prachi reaches there and *smack* gives a slap on Sukriti's face.

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Prachi turns around to leave. Milind catches hold of her hand and says "you spoke so much today. Don't you want to hear what I have to say?" He makes Prachi face him and says with tears in his eyes. "I don't know when I fell in love with you. I never beleived myself to be worthy of your love. I thought you can never love me. This made me angry. That is why I always came to the onclusion you loved Neev. I was scared of loosing you Prachi. Please don't leave me Prachi. I don't think I can live without you."

They look into eachother's eyes and hug...


👏😆😆 This is a killer scenario... With killer slaps! Slaps! and so romantic ending, brought stars in my eyes😳 Love it, Shan! Okay will wait for your next one😆😆

Originally posted by: optimist

Wow Shan, that was indeed a splendid scenario and not very far fetched either since in ekta's shows people get slapped around. In fact I was expecting Milind to slp Prachs yesterday. But I guess the pain must have numbed his senses. Sorry Magno cant think of any scenarios right now.


Seriously? I wouldn't know what to think if Milind actually slap Prachi😆 Okay, will wait for your new scenario😊

Originally posted by: basanthi

So finally they decide to go to honeymoon on mishraji's insistence. Michi had no way to escape so reluctantly they go for the honeymoon. Where unfortuantely, prachi bumps her head by slipping on the stairs. Well Doctor informed M about P amnesia and not stress her anyway. The nurse had already informed prachi about M being her husband making prachi only know him and nobody else😆

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M thinking in his mind, he had thought she was ayehsa, he rememberd the pigtail, braced teeth gal who had looked tearful when he had yelled at her

P: But then you broke my heart when i was 16, i saw you getting cosy with another gal and that did it *prachi genuinely sounded sad confusing milind more * I just wanted to scratch the eye out of her, but then i had to respect your choice and leave you alone, you just hated me. But after that *worried look on her face * I dont remember anything on how we met again and when did u first see me and when did you fall in love with me?



😆😆😆 So creative! Mwahaha I wouldn't know Prachi was not so innocent as a young girl😆😆 It's not crude, Basanthi. Please continue and present us the confession!😆👏👏

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@ Magno - And as for my senario...will write one tomorrow...as its very late and am very sleepy...so spare me till tomorrow Magno darling...
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*checks fingernails* 😃 Never mind, Krishna, and everyone else...😆 Will wait for your scenarios😆


Well my ultimate scenario is on the making (which means it's currently stuck, bwahaha) so here I go as a side kick:

Things can't get worse for Michi (actually I think it definitely CAN get worse), and the divorce is on the way. Prachi finally made up her mind, she had to let everything out. She simply couldn't give up on the man she loved without any struggle. So she decided to express her feelings in her own subtle way, through a letter (she's a 1970 heroine after all). The letter went:

Dear Milind,

With a heavy heart I decided to let you know what's in my heart. I'm sorry if I make you feel uncomfortable and disturbed. I know your heart doesn't belong to me, and I'm sorry to be your burden in anyway. I don't know since when, but you're the only man in my heart. To cherish our marriage is what my will tells me to, but to be in your heart is what my soul asks me of.

If by any chance you want to give our marriage a chance, please meet me tonight at that park near our house at 12. I will be waiting, and don't feel bad if you come there only to tell me that we're truly finished. I respect your decision, whatever it may be, and pray for your happiness always. Tonight, 12 o'clock, the park.

With love,

Prachi M.

She then as usual carelessly put the letter someplace where Milind would definitely see (or so she thought). Ayesha found the letter and burned it to ashes. Prachi waited forever at the park, from 11 o'clock.

Edited by Magno - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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For those who know no Hindi like me, this is the translations for Krangara's amazing scenario in Page 5. Go find and read it if you haven't😊!


Brought to you kindly by Krangara.

(Btw, I am in a way posting a scenario here😃)

[quote]Prachi: "Sukruti, please chup ho jao. Main tumhara dard samajhti hoon, lekin rone se koi fayda nahin hai. Meri baat mano, sab tik ho jaayega"

Prachi: "Sukruti, please stop. I can understand your pain, but crying is not going to help. Listen to me, everything will be fine"

"Nahiin..Bhabhi...Bhaiyaaa ka...bhiie naahin..maa...nenge. Un...hee.. .har ek ammeeer ladkee se it..ni nafrat ho ga..yi haa..i ki vo Saket kkeee saaath mera rishta kaab hiie nahin hoo ne denge

"No…sister-in-law…my brother will….nee…veeerrr acc..ept. He has be..g..unn haat..ingg all the ri..ch g.uy..s. He wi..ll neev..errrr al..lloww mmee too ennntee..r inntt..oo a rel…aa…tion..sh…ip with Saket"

"Milind kyun mujhe kabhie samajh nahin paate. Kyun mere aur Neev ke rishtey ko har baar galat samajhte hain. Meri aankhon me unke liye chaahat kabhie nazar hi nahin aati kya?"

"Why doesn't Milind ever understand me. Why does he always misunderstand my relationship with Neev. Can't he ever see the love in my eyes for him?"

"Dekh Sukruti. Mere Kehne Par Hi Tumne Saket Ko Haan Kaha. To Main Hi Kisi Tarah Se Tum Donon Ko Milvaoongi. Lekin Tumhein Ab Thodi Der Ke Liye Sona Hoga, Varna Tumhari Tabiyath Kharab Ho Jaayegi"

"Look Sukruti, you said YES to Saket only because of me. Hence, I will somehow unite you both. But you have to take a short nap now, else your health will deteriorate"

"Us Niharika Shergill ki himmat kaise hui ye sochne ke liye ki main apni behen ki shaadi ek aise ghar me karvaoonga jahaan rishton ki koi ahmeeyat hi nahin hai. Paison ke bhooke jaanwaron ke beech me meri Sukruti kabhie nahin jaayegi.

"How did that Niharika Shergill DARE to even consider that I will get my sister married into a family where relationships are not respected. My Sukruti will never stay amidst money-hungry animals"

Main jaanta hoon ki Sukruti abhi mujhse khafa hai, lekin dheere dheere sab kuch samajh jaayegi. Mujhe poora yakin hai ki Saket doosre ameer logon ki tarah hi ghatiya rahega. Jis tarah se Alaap ne meri behen ki zindagi tabah kar di aur mere Babuji ko sharminda kar diya, usi tarah Saket bhi use beech manjhdhaar me hi chod dega. Are, unki fitrat hi aisi hoti hai – ladkiyon ko isthemaal karne phenk dena, doosron ke gharon me aag lagana..

"I know that Sukruti is mad at me right now, but she will understand slowly. I am extremely sure that Saket will turn out to be as horrible as the other rich guys. Just like Alaap ruined my sister's life and shamed my father, Saket will also leave her midway. Their attitudes are always the same – to use girls and throw them away, to burn other people's houses by ruining relationships"

Are, mujhe kya pata tha ki us achayi ke aad me vo sirf mujhe dhoka de rahi thi"

"How could I have known that her innocence concealed her deceit?"

"Jaanta hoon, Sukruti ka bhi saath vo Prachi sirf is liye de rahi hai taaki apne AASHIQ (his voice dipping with scarcasm) ke saath aur waqt bita sake"

"I am sure, Prachi is only supporting Sukruti to spend more time with her LOVER Neev"

"CHUP"

"SHUT UP"

"Kya chaahiye tere ko"

"What do you want?"

"Kyun aap mere saath aisa vyavahar kar rahe hain? I love you Milind, mujhse mooh mat modo".

"Why are you behaving so badly with me? I love you Milind, don't turn away from me"

"Aapne shaadi ki bath itni jaldi kyun ched di. Bina kisi ko bataaye aapne ye rishta kyun tay kar diya…Sukruti ki haalat…"

"Why did you start talks of her wedding so soon? Why did you fix this alliance without telling anyone? Sukruti's condition is….. "

Meri behen ki shaadi tay karvaane ke liye mujhe KISI ki ijaazat nahin chaahiye (emphasizing on KISI KI – meaning, TUMHARI), aur khaaskar un logon ki nahin jo mere parivaar ka hissa nahin hai. Sukruti ko sambhalna mujhe aata hai, uski khushi ka khayal rakhna bhi mujhe aata hai…isiliye, apna samay barbaad mat karo, aur jaake APNE Neev ko khana khilao" Shouting now, "MUJHE AKELA CHOD DO"

"I don't have to take ANYONE's (implying, yours or Prachi's) permission to fix my sister's marriage, and especially not those who are NOT part of my family. I know how to support and protect Sukruti, I know how to take care of her happiness too….therefore, don't waste your time, and go feed some food for YOUR Neev" . Shouting now, "JUST LEAVE ME ALONE"

"Milind..aap samajhne ki koshish kyun nahin kar rahen hai? Agar aap sirf ek baar tande dimag se sochenge, to aapko khudbakhud Saket ki aankhon me aapki behen ke liye sachcha pyaar dikhayi dekha. Kyun aap do pyar karne walon ko juda karne ke liye itne utavale hain? Sachcha pyar zindagi me sirf ek baar milta hai...Sukruti ko us pyar ko mehsoos karne deejiye. Main aapke saamne haath jodti hoon"

"Milind…why aren't you trying to understand? If you just think once with a cool mind, you will easily notice Saket's true love for your sister in his eyes. Why are you so hell-bent on separating two lovers? True love happens only once in a lifetime….please let Sukruti experience that love. I fold my hands in front of you"

"Us Dhokebaaz Ki Wajah Se Main Aur Sharminda Nahin Hoonga".

"I am not going to be shamed any more by that cheater"

"Kya Soch Raha Hoon Main Bhi….Ye Dil Bhi Na Saala…Koi Dimag Nahin Hai…"

"What the hell am I thinking…..this stupid heart….has no brains (or is not rational)"

"CHUP KAR TU. Ek lafz aur nahin. Badi shaani hai tu re – meri behen ki aad me APNA love story suna rahi hai"

"Just SHUT UP YOU. Not one more word. You are quite a shrewd opportunist – you are just narrating your love story, under the pretence of my sister's relationship"


"Nahin…main to bas"

"No…I was just…."

"NIKAL JAA YAHAAN SE. Tumhari bakwaas bahut sun li"

"GET THE HELL OUT OF HERE. I have heard enough of your nonsense"

"Jaa….Apne Aashiq Ka Bistar Garam Kar Aur Mujhe…"

"Go…heat up your lover's bed and leave me……."

"BAS!!!!!!!!!!!!"

"ENOUGH!!!!!!"

"Bahut bardaasht kar liya maine. Pati hai aap mere, parmeshwar nahin ki jo jee me aaya bol diya." Angry tears gather in her eyes, her pent up fury pouring forth..."Main bhi jaanti hoon aur aap bhi jaante hain ki humne ek doosre se shaadi kyun ki. Lekin, us barsaat ki raat ke baad mujhe laga ki hum dono me pati patni ka na sahi, dosti ka rishta to bana tha. Par main galat thi – aap to kisi ke dost bhi banne layak nahin hai. Aapko to sirf ilzaam lagana aata hai.

"I have tolerated enough. You are my husband, and not GOD that you just blurt out any crap" Angry tears gather in her eyes, her pent up fury pouring forth…"We both know and understand why we had to get married to each other. But, after that rainy night, I thought we had formed a close bond of friendship, although we weren't living like a husband and wife. But I was wrong – you don't DESERVE to be anyone's friend. You only know how to accuse others"

'Mere aur Neev ke rishtey ke bare me aapka har ek jhoota ilzaam main aaj tak sahti aayi hoon. *shaking her head* Lekin ab aur nahin. Aap baar baar yahi kehte hain na ki main Sukruti ki aad me APNI prem kahaani suna rahi hoon. Lekin aap GALAT hai….main koi apni prem kahaani nahin suna rahi, balki AAP Ayesha ke saath APNI PREM KAHAANI ko aage badana chahte hain, aur apne guilt ko kam karne ke liye mujhpe ilzaam laga rahe hain.

"I have tolerated every mindless and wrong accusation regarding my relationship with Neev until now. "shaking her head"…But not anymore. You frequently accuse me of using your sister's plight to project my love story, right? But you are WRONG…..I am not narrating MY love story. Instead, you want to further YOUR LOVE STORY with Ayesha, and, in order to lessen your guilt, you continue to blame me!"

Itna yaad rakh leejeye, agar mujhe Neev ke paas jaana hi tha to main tab jaati jab hamari shaadi nahin hui thi, *raising her voice one more notch* tab jaati jab hum donon ek doosre se nafrat karte the, *one more*tab nahin jaati jab hamara rishta aage bad raha tha, *finally screaming into his face* tab nahin jaati jab mujhse AAPSE PYAR HO GAYA

"Just remember this much: If I had really wanted to get back to Neev, I would have done so when we weren't yet married, *raising her voice one more notch*, I would have done so when we hated each other, *one more*, but NOT WHEN our relationship was improving, *finally screaming into his face*, NOT WHEN I FELL IN LOVE WITH YOU"

"Are aap apni BEHEN ki aankhon me pyar kaise dekh sakte hain, jab ki AAPKO apni BIWI ke aankhon me aapke liye pyar dikhayi nahin…."

"Damn it, how can you ever see the love in your SISTER's eyes, when you cannot see the love in YOUR WIFE's eyes for you…."

"Main sirf aapse itna kahoongi ki agar aapne Sukruti ki shaadi zabartasti karva di to aap bhi Alaap ki hi tarah apne gurur ki wajah se uski zindagi barbad karenge"

"I just want to tell you that if you continue to be stubborn about forcefully getting Sukruti married to some stranger, you too would have ruined her life just like ALaap because of your fake pride"

"Kyun bola maine vo sab…kyun apne dil ko uske saamne rakh diya…kyun Milind mujhe itni giri hui nazar se dekhta hai…kitni badnaseeb hoon main"

"Why did I tell him all that….why did I rip open my heart in front of him…..why does Milind look at me so distastefully….I am so unlucky"

"PRACHI…rukooooooooo"…

"PRACHI….stop….."

kitna bhala bura kahaa use. Main kaise ye soch sakta tha he Prachi mujhe dhoka de sakti hai. Are, usne to meri jaan bachayi thi….mere har ek zulm ko chup chaap sunti and sehenti rahi",

"GOD….I spewed so much rubbish….how could I have ever thought that Prachi would have cheated me. Damn it man, she saved my life once….she silently heard and endured my taunts"

"Lekin ab main Prachi KO KABHIE bhi apne se alag nahin hone doonga. Vo meri zindagi hai, aur in dinon mujhe pata chal gaya ki uske bina main adhoora hoon….uske bina main jee nahin sakta…main uske pair padoonga, aur use zindagi bhar vo gehra pyar doonga jiske vo hakdar hai"…."meri prachi, meri prachi" (I know the last is 'my prachi, my prachi' )

"But, now, I will NEVER keep her away from me. She is my life, and these past days have confirmed that I am incomplete without her…I cannot live without her. I will fall at her feet to beg her forgiveness, and later provide her with the kind of passionate and heartfelt love that she deserves….my Prachi…my Prachi"

"Ab kyun mera peecha kar rahe hain?"

"Why is he following me now?"

"Prachi...kya kar rahi ho tum".

"Prachi…what are you doing?"

"Prachi Prachi…Bhagwan…Mere Prachi ko kuch nahin hona chahiye…kuch nahin hona chaahiye………."………….

"Prachi Prachi…oh GOD…nothing should happen to my Prachi…nothing should happen"

"Nahin, Nahin, Ye Nahin Ho Sakta

" NO NO…this can't be"

"Prachi Prachi…tum mujhe chodke nahin jaa sakti…PRACHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII

"Prachi Prachi….you cannot leave me alone…PRACHIIIIII"

"Bachaoo."

"Help"

"Main Prachi Ke Bina Nahin Jee Sakta…Nahin Jee Sakta"…

"I cannot live without Prachi…cannot live…"

"Prachi, Main Aa Raha Hoon,"

"Prachi..I am coming"

"PRachi…Prachi…Maine Uski Awaaz Suni HHai..Vo Yahin Hai…Prachi…TUM KAHAAN HO…TUMHARA Milind tumhare paas hai……Prachi"

"Prachi Prachi…I just heard her voice….she is right here….Prachi…WHERE ARE YOU…YOUR Milind is with you….Prachi"

"Prachi..Prachi…main yahaan hoon....kuch nahin hone doonga tujhe"

"Prachi Prachi…I am here…I will not let anything happen to you"

"Meri Prachi Zinda Hai"

"My Prachi is alive"

"Prachi..Uto Prachi"

"Prachi..wake up, Prachi"

"Mere Pyar Ko Aspathal Leke Jaana Hai"

"I have to take my love to the hospital"

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Edited by Magno - 18 years ago
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This is long, so bear with me.

All misunderstanding are cleared and all of Ayesha's lies are exposed (and immediately we know, this scenario will never ever happen). Milind finds out the truth behind everything and all the sacrifices Prachi made and even Neev gets cleared of whatever misconceptions Milind is harbouring about him but the duffer still doesn't believe Prachi loves him. Milind reveals the truth to everyone and asks Prachi for forgiveness. He tells Prachi that he loves her immensely but he knows that he is not worthy of her and she deserves to be with the man she loves - Neev. He tells her Neev has proved himself and will always keep her happy. He joins their hands and hands Prachi divorce papers that he has already signed. He turns to leave.Prachi is shocked out of her wits, as she can't believe that Milind actually loves her and is completely over Ayesha.

Before she can react or stop Milind from leaving, Premlata and Dadi come and confront her about all she has done for the family. They are both very teary eyed and aplogetic about everything she had to go through. Prachi breaks free from them and calls Milind but then Neev grabs hold of her telling her how happy he is that they are going to be together. He tells her he is sorry for ever doubting her, he should have known that she would never value money more than love but now they can put everything behind them and start their lives together. Milind had turned around when Prachi called him, only to see Neev hugging Prachi and declaring his love for her. Prachi manages to push aside Neev and run after Milind but by then he has already got into his car and driven off.

Prachi stands outside and is absolutely frantic. She has to find Milind, she has to tell him. She is broken out of her thoughts by Neev calling her. Neev is shocked to see that she is sobbing uncontrollably. She asks Neev for forgiveness. She explains to him while he will always be her friend, the only man she will ever regard as her husband is Milind. She further explains at one point in her life, she probably did love him. But that girl no longer exists. Too much has happened. He has changed, she has changed. She has grown up and as much as she cares for him there is only space for Milind in her heart. She begs Neev to let her go, so that she can find Milind. Neev is devasted but wishes her well and tells her to go.

Meanwhile Milind drives straight to the nearest bar. He stops the car but doesn't get out. Prachi taught him so much. She taught him to face his problems instead of running away from it. She taught him to be a better person. He decides to honour that and turns around and goes to the beach. He sits on the shore for a long time bracing himself for the pain to hit him but it doesn't come. When Ayesha left him he had felt pain and anger but now that he has lost Prachi a woman he loved a million times more he felt nothing. He was hollow and empty and beyond that there was nothing. It was as if he had died and he couldn't even mourn his own death.

Milind goes back to the house. He doesn't want to but he has to get his things.Who's knows maybe the sight of Prachi happy with Neev will make him feel something. Even if it's utter anguish, it would be better than the cold numbness that pervaded him. He decides he will return to Turkey, maybe after a while he will learn to live again. The house was in total darkness. Not wanting to disturb anyone, he fumbles his way through the darkness. Opening his room door, expecting more darkness he is stunned to confront a thousand glittering little lights. Candles were placed and burning in every corner of the room. And amongst all this candle lit glow, sat his wife on their bed, her beautiful face covered with a red veil.

He approached her tentatively. He didn't dare to think, dare to believe, dare to hope that just maybe she felt the same about him as he did about her. The numbness had vanished. All he could feel was his heart pounding. "Prachi, what's all this?", he whispered. His voice sounded hoarse even to him. She lifted her face and he could see all the love he felt for her, reflected back at him. "Our Suhag Raat.", smiled Prachi through tears. Milind felt as if he was robbed of his power of speech. "But first, I want you do something.", she continued. Milind could only nod. He was incapable of refusing her his own life. "I want you to tear this up.", said Prachi, handing him the divorce papers. Milind tears up the papers. Prachi flings herself into his arms. Sobbing into his shoulder, she confesses how much she loves him and never wants to live without him. Milind holds her face, they both look at each and smile
and then ......well I'll leave the rest to your imagination.

PS. To avoid any copyright issues I admit to shamelessly copying from the ffg sources 😆
1. Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam - Nandini asking Sameer to let her go, so that she can go back to Vanraj.
2.Aisa Des Hai Mera - The torn divorce papers and Suhag Raat scene between Samay and Rusty.
3.Friends - Chandler thinks Monica has left him only to return home, to find her waiting for him in a room filled with burning candles and they finally get engaged.

Edited by blackcurrant - 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: blackcurrant

This is long, so bear with me.

All misunderstanding are cleared and all of Ayesha's lies are exposed (and immediately we know, this scenario will never ever happen). Milind finds out the truth behind everything and all the sacrifices Prachi made and even Neev gets cleared of whatever misconceptions Milind is harbouring about him but the duffer still doesn't believe Prachi loves him. Milind reveals the truth to everyone and asks Prachi for forgiveness. He tells Prachi that he loves her immensely but he knows that he is not worthy of her and she deserves to be with the man she loves - Neev. He tells her Neev has proved himself and will always keep her happy. He joins their hands and hands Prachi divorce papers that he has already signed. He turns to leave.Prachi is shocked out of her wits, as she can't believe that Milind actually loves her and is completely over Ayesha.

Before she can react or stop Milind from leaving, Premlata and Dadi come and confront her about all she has done for the family. They are both very teary eyed and aplogetic about everything she had to go through. Prachi breaks free from them and calls Milind but then Neev grabs hold of her telling her how happy he is that they are going to be together. He tells her he is sorry for ever doubting her, he should have known that she would never value money more than love but now they can put everything behind them and start their lives together. Milind had turned around when Prachi called him, only to see Neev hugging Prachi and declaring his love for her. Prachi manages to push aside Neev and run after Milind but by then he has already got into his car and driven off.

Prachi stands outside and is absolutely frantic. She has to find Milind, she has to tell him. She is broken out of her thoughts by Neev calling her. Neev is shocked to see that she is sobbing uncontrollably. She asks Neev for forgiveness. She explains to him while he will always be her friend, the only man she will ever regard as her husband is Milind. She further explains at one point in her life, she probably did love him. But that girl no longer exists. Too much has happened. He has changed, she has changed. She has grown up and as much as she cares for him there is only space for Milind in her heart. She begs Neev to let her go, so that she can find Milind. Neev is devasted but wishes her well and tells her to go.

Meanwhile Milind drives straight to the nearest bar. He stops the car but doesn't get out. Prachi taught him so much. She taught him to face his problems instead of running away from it. She taught him to be a better person. He decides to honour that and turns around and goes to the beach. He sits on the shore for a long time bracing himself for the pain to hit him but it doesn't come. When Ayesha left him he had felt pain and anger but now that he has lost Prachi a woman he loved a million times more he felt nothing. He was hollow and empty and beyond that there was nothing. It was as if he had died and he couldn't even mourn his own death.

Milind goes back to the house. He doesn't want to but he has to get his things.Who's knows maybe the sight of Prachi happy with Neev will make him feel something. Even if it's utter anguish, it would be better than the cold numbness that pervaded him. He decides he will return to Turkey, maybe after a while he will learn to live again. The house was in total darkness. Not wanting to disturb anyone, he fumbles his way through the darkness. Opening his room door, expecting more darkness he is stunned to confront a thousand glittering little lights. Candles were placed and burning in every corner of the room. And amongst all this candle lit glow, sat his wife on their bed, her beautiful face covered with a red veil.

He approached her tentatively. He didn't dare to think, dare to believe, dare to hope that just maybe she felt the same about him as he did about her. The numbness had vanished. All he could feel was his heart pounding. "Prachi, what's all this?", he whispered. His voice sounded hoarse even to him. She lifted her face and he could see all the love he felt for her, reflected back at him. "Our Suhag Raat.", smiled Prachi through tears. Milind felt as if he was robbed of his power of speech. "But first, I want you do something.", she continued. Milind could only nod. He was incapable of refusing her his own life. "I want you to tear this up.", said Prachi, handing him the divorce papers. Milind tears up the papers. Prachi flings herself into his arms. Sobbing into his shoulder, she confesses how much she loves him and never wants to live without him. Milind holds her face, they both look at each and smile
and then ......well I'll leave the rest to your imagination.



😭 This is so lovely... I'm touched 😭. Thank you, blackcurrant. It's a real treat after such a nerve-wrecking episode on Thursday. Please do write more...❤️


On Monday:
Turns out Milind has a gun with him. He yells: 'I love you, Prachi! How could you do this to meee!' and shoots her twice. She dies instantly. With tears on his face Milind then shoots himself and dies, too. The end, and there the confession went. Eww I don't know why I'm writing such tasteless lines. Maybe because I'm really really anxious about Monday.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
Okay Magno.. I promised you a scenario and here is one.. It is long.. so please bear with me..

This in light of the new promo..

MOnday:

Milind cuts all relation between him and Prachi infront of holy fire. Prachi leaves heart broken. Milind is crying.Sukriti at last opens her mouth and tells her bhaiya that bhabhi made me doing the biggest mistake in life as she had faith in you..

Milind is shocked and looks at Sukriti. She says yes bhaiya we didn't get married as Bhabhi came at right time and stopped me. Even Ayesha is shocked. Milind just turns and runs out of the temple. Ayesha starts to go behind him. But Neev just catches her hand and says "you have done enough damage. today I will not allow you to go between them".. 😊 (I love Neev)

We see Prachi walking on the road in dazed manner. Tears are running down her face. Milind's words are ringing in her ears again and again. She stops by a tree sits down hugs her legs like a small child and cries.

Milind is frantically serching for Prachi. He is walking around. Suddenly he sees some one sitting cruched under a tree.. he recognises her sari and goes there to see Prachi sitting like a statue but her eyes were flowing continuously. He just bends in front of her calls "Prachi" with all his love and touch her shoulder..

She raises her eyes up to him.. For a moment both just look into each others eyes.. suddenly Prachi starts hitting him on his chests with her fists.. Milind just sits there shocked.. She keeps on crying badly and in between saying "aap mere saath aisa kyun karte hain?" (Why do you do this to me?). Then she hugs him tightly and cries. even milind hugs her back and cries badly..


Phew.. ho gaya... All the other confusions, Ayesha etc we will deal later 😉 ... I want Prachi to make Milind beg and grovel on his knees. thought abt writing in those lines but it didn't suit our demure Prachi's character. So being a hopeless romantic I am I wrote the above. 😊

@ Blackcurrent..That was one lovely scenario.. 😳 I just loved it..

@ Magno..you have also started to become violent.. kya yaar.. you killed both of them.. problem over... I kept my promise.. come up with yours now and go behind Krishna.. She still has not written hers.. 😃
Edited by shananubis - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: shananubis


MOnday:

Milind cuts all relation between him and Prachi infront of holy fire. Prachi leaves heart broken. Milind is crying.Sukriti at last opens her mouth and tells her bhaiya that bhabhi made me doing the biggest mistake in life as she had faith in you..

Milind is shocked and looks at Sukriti. She says yes bhaiya we didn't get married as Bhabhi came at right time and stopped me. Even Ayesha is shocked. Milind just turns and runs out of the temple. Ayesha starts to go behind him. But Neev just catches her hand and says "you have done enough damage. today I will not allow you to go between them".. 😊 (I love Neev)

We see Prachi walking on the road in dazed manner. Tears are running down her face. Milind's words are ringing in her ears again and again. She stops by a tree sits down hugs her legs like a small child and cries.

Milind is frantically serching for Prachi. He is walking around. Suddenly he sees some one sitting cruched under a tree.. he recognises her sari and goes there to see Prachi sitting like a statue but her eyes were flowing continuously. He just bends in front of her calls "Prachi" with all his love and touch her shoulder..

She raises her eyes up to him.. For a moment both just look into each others eyes.. suddenly Prachi starts hitting him on his chests with her fists.. Milind just sits there shocked.. She keeps on crying badly and in between saying "aap mere saath aisa kyun karte hain?" (Why do you do this to me?). Then she hugs him tightly and cries. even milind hugs her back and cries badly..



👏 Thank you Shan... Great job...😆😆 Thank you for the translation😳 I wish we can at least see 1/10th of this sweetness tonight😃 I'm sooo anxious! Oh btw that particular scene about Prachi hugging her legs, I have a similar scene on my scenario (down there). No I didn't copy that😆, I wrote it a few days ago, so we might share similar brainwave or something😆😆. And agree, where's Krishna? 😃


So here's my ultimate scenario part 2. Part 3 will be the last with all the action and everything (yeah right). If anybody missed part 1 it's back there on page 8.

Milind cursed the stars he just admired a moment before. He wished for a darker night to shade his crushed heart better. What was he thinking? He knew his wife was a trouble with a giant T but still he couldn't help warming up to her every single time. Of course she would remember her true love in this kind of place which some people called 'heaven on earth'. What did he expect? That she would feel complete being here, only with him by her side? Especially because he was by her side she would want to be as far as possible from here, preferably in the arms of her love. He felt rage boiling up inside of him but he struggled to control it.

They walked back to their room silently. Prachi stole some glances at her husband but he looked positively grim so she said nothing. Once they arrived at their room Milind went to the bathroom, cleaned himself and then got ready to go out again. His wife still stood near the door. He hesitated but then said, 'Have some rest. You must be tired from the flight and the walk.' Prachi set her large eyes on him. 'Are you going somewhere?' He didn't look directly at her but at some unclear spot above her shoulder. 'I'll just go to the bar or something for a while'. 'Oh'. And now why did he feel guilty about leaving her alone, he wondered. But he just nodded and left. She stared at his back while he walked away.

Prachi cleaned herself and changed into a nightgown. She felt definitely lonely in this foreign country, without anyone beside her. She walked towards the window, and then sat on a chair next to it, embracing her folded leg. She could see the waves of the dark ocean, glittering and reflecting some lights. Without knowing how to stop herself, she thought about those moments she just spent with Milind, walking on that same beach, and remembered the feelings his proximity gave her. Where is he right now? What is he doing? With such thought Prachi kept staring at the night sea.

The bar was quite exquisite, just like everything in this hotel. Already two women made a pass at him, which he lightly refused. There's nothing strange about that in this kind of place, where both the holiday and foreign feel made men and women outspoken and followed the rule of 'seize the day'. If only the same could be applied to him. If he's truly seizing the day then he would go back to his room right now and…His own thought startled him and he quickly brushed it off. After few hours and a few glasses of different kinds of light cocktails he finally got really bored and decided to return. His wife must have slept by now, and the thought made him more relax.

He silently opened and then closed the door, careful not to wake her. She was indeed asleep, not in the bed but on a chair next to the window, hugging her own legs, almost looked like a balled kitten. He sighed and walked closer. There's no way he could let her sleep there like that, but he didn't have the heart to wake her up either since she looked so peaceful and deep in some dreams. Sighing again, he took her balled body into his embrace, and brought her to the bed. It was a very large bed, so no issue about sleeping arrangement would be necessary. They could even swim freely from side to side. So he walked to one side of the bed, and sat on it with her still in his embrace. He should have just dropped her gently now, but for some reason she felt warm and lovely in his arms. Maybe he should just hold her for a little longer. For a while he enjoyed her warmth and nice scent. She slightly moved, and the thought of her waking up and finding him embracing her like this made him quickly put her on the bed and cover her with the blanket.

She definitely had a wonderful dream but she couldn't remember what. Still, the afterglow gave her a happy feeling when she opened her eyes, to see the bright sun light and smell the thick, delicious aroma of fresh coffee. She got up and walked to where the smell came from, which was the other part of the room. When she got there, at the dining spot, her husband saw her and stopped his hand from spreading pineapple jam on his bread. He obviously had taken a shower and looked fresh, and she suddenly felt shy at her own messy appearance. 'Good morning. Sorry, I started without you. Come, have your breakfast.' 'Yes, but let me wash up first.' She dashed to the bathroom and returned a few minutes later. She sat on one of the chairs across him.

'… Thank you for bringing me to the bed. And uhm, sorry for the trouble.' The fresh water had cleared her mind and made her remember how she fell asleep the previous night. He widened his eyes, and as usual that made him look boyish. She found it cute. 'Nah, you're not that heavy.' With that he dismissed the matter, and they had their breakfast in somewhat peaceful silence.

They spent that day traveling around Bali and simply being tourists. They watched traditional dances, visiting temples and many kinds of art exhibitions. During these visits they stopped at Kintamani Highland, enjoying their lunch while breathing a cool fresh air and seeing wonderful view of a green forest with a beautiful lake spread far below them. The next day was spent visiting many beaches, and then while Milind tried all extreme marine sports available, Prachi spent the remaining of the day in a luxurious spa by the beach, having complete massage and other beauty treatments. At the end of that day Prachi looked more delicate than ever, while Milind looked even rougher and darker.

On that last night of the honeymoon trip they moved to the most northern part of the island, and this time they stayed in a bungalow right on the sea shore. While Milind took his shower Prachi checked the house thoroughly. Everything was made of fine wood and she liked the traditional and natural feel of it. After enjoying the sea wind on the terrace for a few minutes, Prachi returned inside and this time she noticed some brochures on the dining table. One of the brochures was an ad about 'swimming with hundreds of dolphins in the middle of the ocean'. Prachi read it interestedly. Tomorrow they already had the plan to join 'undersea tour', they would be in some kind of submarine with glasses windows, where they could see the wonders of the ocean with many fishes including dolphins, while remain dry and clean. But she found this ad more interesting, because it promised her a livelier, direct, watery view of hundreds of dolphins.

'What's that?' she nearly jumped for he spoke so close to her ear. She must have been concentrating a bit too much, otherwise there's no way she wouldn't feel his presence earlier. She suppressed her nervousness and gave him the brochure. 'Milind, this seems really interesting.' His eyes were bright, his hair was still wet, and he smelled so nice and for some reasons Prachi blushed. But Milind was too busy reading to notice. 'Yeah right, swim with hundreds of dolphins. I'm pretty sure this is an ad going wild. We're going to see dolphins indeed, but not this way.' He believed the more exclusive, safe and refined way of watching the beauty of the ocean would fit Prachi more. A nice submarine tour is just like a moving Sea World, and it's better for Prachi.

'But Milind, we can visit Sea World anytime, but this kind of traditional journey crossing the ocean to see the very home of the dolphins… We won't see it so easily…' Now how did she know he was thinking of Sea World? 'This undersea tour will not show us a manmade ocean. We'll actually be in the depth of a real ocean and see so many wonderful things down there. I assure you, you will regret it if you don't take the tour.' She still looked at him with her large eyes, full of hope. She believed him but she really wanted to see the home of the dolphins. He finally gave up. 'Seeing a couple of dolphins will definitely be the best thing you can get tomorrow. Don't cry when that happens.' With that he walked towards the phone, called the manager of the bungalows and asked about the brochure. After sometime he put the phone down and turned back at her. 'You better sleep early then. We'll have to depart from here at five."


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Posted: 18 years ago
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Lets just assume that Ayesha can't stop Milind from liking Prachi so she decides to do the ultimate thing...

P and A are on a cliff. Ayesha starts yelling at Prachi - you took away my father, my love, my husband. You have everything you want, why don't you just leave Milind to me. (Prachi confused) You have left me no choice! (Pushes Prachi off the cliff)

M: Praaaachiiiiiiiiii!
N: Ayeshaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

Ayesha turns around to see M and N horrified because they saw her push Prachi down the cliff.
N runs towards Ayesha to ask her how she could do that.
A thinking N is going to call the police or do something to her. She starts to retreat. N: Rukh Jao Ayesha! A moving back,n back, n falls off the cliff.

N: Ayeshaaaa! Bends down to help Ayeshaa (hanging by a tree), when he sees Prachi hanging by the cliff there too. N: Prachi? Milind having heard Prachi's name comes rushing forward to see. Seeing Prachi fighting for her life, he too bends down to help her. N is helping A and M is helping P.

A is hurt to see that M is helping P instead of her. Prachi's foot slips, but she still manages to hold on to M. M: Prachi, tum mujhe chod kar nahi ja sakti, main tumse bahut pyar karta hoon! Prachi having heard this is staring up at Milind. A is so hurt by his confession that she lets go of Neev's hand, falling down deep below.

P: Ayeshaaa!
N: Ayeshaaaaaaaaa! Main polic ko phone karta hoon!
N walks away trying to contact the police on his cellphone.

Milind finally manages to pull P up to safety. P is relieved to be up on safe land, when she suddenly remembers Ayesha! She starts crying n blaming herself for Ayesha's death. Milind takes her into his arms, to comfort her.

M: Tumne kuch nahi kiya, jab maine tumse apne pyar ka izhar kiya, to usne kudh apni hath chod-dhi.
P: Par tum to Ayesha se pyar karte ho.
M: Nahi Prachi. Main tumse pyar karta hoon, lekin maine tumhe bataya nahin, kyun ki main chahta tha ki tum aur Neev hamesha kush rahe. Aur shayad ab rah bhi sakte ho.
(Milind walks away saying so)
P: Rukh Ja-iye!
(Milind stops but does not turn)
P: Main aap se bahut pyar karti hoon! Maine tho ...
(Milind runs to her and grabs her in his arms)
M: Sach?

P: Much!

Thus, Michi's declaration of love. Don't ask me what happened to Ayesha and Neev after. :P

*Sry din mean to make it that long

Edited by Veeki - 18 years ago

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