FF-Till death do us apart.Last part pg63 - Page 9

Originally posted by: sareeta

Hi Muneeza, Didnt realize, part 6 was up! I didn't either just found some time n lo n behold I'm amazing myself now....Although was caught midway completing a urgent article, I couldnt resist reading your story with a fervent urgency! 😆 But I beg to be pardoned for I shall comment later! Pardoned!!!!! 😆 Now if my writing has such an effect on you then ofcourse I cud wait patiently for a detailed analysis on your part.😊

My mind is ticking away with thoughts on a urgent article on hand...!

Thanks for understanding!

Ofcourse darling I perfectly understand the urgency of the situation now complete it soon n come back fast.😊

Sareeta

Originally posted by: kubare

Aww.....Muneeza darling,

Just caught up with part 6 dear....and it was superb👏.So kind of you to consider it so.

So our Prachi did buy the saree he was fingering...I guessed as so....and am glad to be right.....😆 Yeah I figured she'd have that much sense 😆

Aww...our duffer is still a duffer...Millis reaction to the Kurta was just superbly described....staying original to his character in the drama😉😆...great work girl..👏👏 Once a duffer always a duffer😊

Now what a romantic scene indeed😆....hope something like that does happen in the drama too😉...hair getting entangled in his kurta😳...but like in your FF....don't want Ayesha😡 to be anywhere near by......😆 Just my thought hopefully someone writing the original script might chance to read it.😉

So get writing dear...as can't wait to read part 7 soon.😆

Sure darling.

Love

Krishna

Originally posted by: critically-sane

Aw.. loved this part..!

Our hero is always a duffer.. just reacts doesn't think...! as if Prachi would give him one of Aalaps hand me downs..!! idiot isn't he.. but a lovable one..! 😳 😳

Thank you for all the cute Michi moments..! i want to see that kurta scene on screen now.. without Ayesha madam of course..!!

Thank you so much for sharing..! 👏 👏

Wanted them to share some special moments together am glad you liked it..😊 considering his impulsive nature it was only fair that he jump to the wrong conclusion ....😆

Originally posted by: kajal_arjun

Great work but didn't understand the last part anyways I just love all the Michi parts.

MICHI ROCKS

Thank you darling the last part was dedicated to Ayesha who happened to be a witness hope you understand now.😊

Originally posted by: krangara

That was so beautiful............ 😳

But, did Ayesha have to make a comeback? 😡 😆

Hmm thank you darling for liking it Ayesha had to come back ........her witnessing this is pretty significant 😊

Originally posted by: sareeta

Ok, am finally back ... time to chip in my comments... I dont want to be begging for forgiveness again do I now? 😆 No sweets not at all.

In the latest part, updated, I like the aspect of her wondering abt his absence and her apparent concern for his health when he looked down and out...

Honestly , Prachi and her neeche aayiye bit and stuff... seemed suddenly too subversive...to him..., the dialogs especially, seemed like she was explaining herself ... which wasn't needed... or may be it is jus me... actually .. forget it... it was fine... Well sweety somehow I realized he's always the one talking.....I thought she needed her own space in their relationship ..........her explanation ......yes not needed but I think the underlying concept was of her trying to build a bridge between their silence. He's always questioning her n wen he does not she automatically assumes he needs to know thus supplying the explanation ,anyways am glad you pointed it out.😊

Chai and jus offering him was cool... and natural...

I liked the aspect of her giving him the credit card and the bill...and letting him know... small gesture , but cleared her stand...

Abt their sudden closeness and that scene... cant really say much... guess seen a lot of that .. before... so it wasnt striking to me.... I was too tempted to spice it up a bit more but censored it eventually.😊 given the fact that their closeness has just begun n keeping his impulsive nature in mind.....well I just thought this perfect.😊

All in all , a good read... yet again...

Ok, back to business.. when is the next update? 😆

Soon I hope.😊

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hi
read yr ff n its awesome 👏
cont.sooon

Thx for the appreciation sweety...😊