FF-Till death do us apart.Last part pg63 - Page 11

Muneeza... 👏 I don't have words to describe the last part... perfect.. 👏
You kept the essense of each character intact through out the flow of story.. Mindblowing work dear... I loved the way you have portrayed Neev..

👏 👏 👏 Awesome, Fantastic... please continue soon..

I liked portrayal of Neev's character and the fact that Milind is man enuf to accept it atleast in front of Neev if not , as yet in front of his wife ...!

It was not the whining guilt , but something deeper , that was now becoming harder and heavier in his heart... like a brick wall, that jus jus got bigger and with each brick bound to it... jus as the guilt ridden moments and the shattered pieces of his unexpressed dream... added to the wall around his heart... binding it forever ... in the depths of his being... waiting to be freed...

Originally posted by: $weet Ema

Powerful stuff Blind horizon, Am dead cert sure that Neev would react this wayin the serial too if he were to know about the pretend ONS, cant wait for the next part :)

Well keeping in my mind Neev's personality he had to react like this...he's not conniving kind rather straight forward and honest....thx for appreciating it dear.😊

Originally posted by: red_chile

Di caught up with the last 2 parts, fantastic :D

Thanks chile darling hope you didn't find them a small version...😊 though in all honesty nothing can beat the adult version of the Michi meeting in your ff I still smile wen I remember that..😆

Originally posted by: shananubis

Muneeza... 👏 I don't have words to describe the last part... perfect.. 👏
You kept the essense of each character intact through out the flow of story.. Mindblowing work dear... I loved the way you have portrayed Neev..

👏 👏 👏 Awesome, Fantastic... please continue soon..

*Doffing cap* 😊that's sweet darling.....well Neev is an essential aspect of the story n I had to make him play his part too...thank you for liking it....😊will update soon.

Originally posted by: born-free

pls post part 7. i eagerly wait for ur posts. plzzzzzzzzzzzzz post fast

I'm overwhelmed by your appreciation of my written work read your post where you quoted my ff as an insider to the audience's desires stating that Balaji creatives shud read it. It was then that I realized what an impact it has on you...😊 it's really an honour on my part....just posted part 7 so enjoy the read.😊

Originally posted by: sareeta

I liked portrayal of Neev's character and the fact that Milind is man enuf to accept it atleast in front of Neev if not , as yet in front of his wife ...!

It was not the whining guilt , but something deeper , that was now becoming harder and heavier in his heart... like a brick wall, that jus jus got bigger and with each brick bound to it... jus as the guilt ridden moments and the shattered pieces of his unexpressed dream... added to the wall around his heart... binding it forever ... in the depths of his being... waiting to be freed...

Now I'm speechless...👏👏 what wonderful interpretation of his feelings ....yes that's exactly how Mills feels in my story in the serial too most likely......I'm just happy you enjoyed reading it.😊

its amazing continue soon .
takecare
Tanya

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

its amazing continue soon .
takecare
Tanya

Sure thing sweety 😊

Originally posted by: blind horizon

I'm overwhelmed by your appreciation of my written work read your post where you quoted my ff as an insider to the audience's desires stating that Balaji creatives shud read it. It was then that I realized what an impact it has on you...😊 it's really an honour on my part....just posted part 7 so enjoy the read.😊

thanks dear as always part 7 was toooo gud. the way u navigate thru a situation is really nice. awaiting ur next episode.