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Posted: 15 years ago
#21

You are mine Part 6










The college students go for excursion.
Zaib and Milind play badminton.Milind wins.
Zaib:Congrats Milind.
M:Thanks yaar.
They both hug each other.
Milind goes to a side and takes rest.Prachi goes near Zaib:You and Milind played together.Milind won.But you are not sad.
Z:Why should I?He is my friend.
P:Angad is your brother....twin brother.Then why are you not happy when Angad wins?
Zaib has no answer and he moves away.


It's raining.All are going inside the tent.Angad and Kripa have no space there.They run together to search for a place.They find a cottage and go inside.
Angad sits near the fire.Kripa dries her hair.Angad observes her.She smiles slightly.
He goes near her and touches her face.She is stunned:Angad!
Suddenly he comes back to his senses.
A:I'm sorry.I don't know how i....
He goes out.Her eyes get filled up with tears.She comes out.Angad is at the verandah.
K:Angad,let's go straight to the hostel.
They both go to the hostel.They don't talk to each other till they reach the place.They are not able to face each other.Angad goes to the men's section.Kripa goes to the ladies' section.

Kripa lies down.After some time,Prachi enters the room:Hi Kripa,you slept?
K:No,you guys are back?
P:Now there is no rain.So we are back.By the way...where were you?You and Angad were missing from our gang.
Kripa sweats:We went to a cottage.
P:Why are you so tensed?
K:Nothing like that.I'm tired.
P:Ok...then...take rest....
K:Ok...Goodnight.
P:Goodnight.
Prachi thinks:Something has happened.Otherwise a cool girl like Kripa can't be like this.

The next day....They all get inside the bus to go back.Angad and Kripa sit at different places.Prachi notices it and feels strange.

Kripa avoids Angad.Angad finds it unbearable.He goes to Kripa's house.She is alone there.
A:Why are you avoiding me like this Kripa?I can't bear it anymore.Yes,i admit...i did a mistake.But i apologized.Right?Please tell me that you forgave me.
K:No need of any apology.I did'nt avoid you purposefully.I thought...it's better to keep a distance...a boy and a girl being best friends...that's not practical always.
Angad becomes upset.He thinks:I crossed my border.I forgot for a moment that Kripa is my best friend.I have to be punished.
He leaves the house silently.Kripa sheds tears.

Milind rings up Prachi:Hi Prachi...do you know the speciality of tomorrow?
P:No.
M:Ah!You stupid girl!Tomorrow is Valentine's day.
P:Oh!I forgot.
M:What were you doing?
P:I was studying.
M:My Gosh!This is a night to dream about your lover.Instead of that you are studying?
She smiles:But i don't have a boyfriend.
M:You don't love anyone?
P:No.
M:Ok....if so tomorrow i will give you a surprise.
He puts the phone down.She smiles and closes her eyes.She sees Milind's face.She opens her eyes:Milind!I'm dreaming about him?What rubbish!I should dream only about studies.

Valentine's day.The college is decorated with flowers.Prachi enters the college.Milind is catching a boquet of red roses.Prachi smiles.
M:Do you like red roses?
P:Yes,i love it.
Kripa passes by.
M:Kripa!This is for you.
He gives it to her.She smiles.
M:I love you.
Prachi is shocked.
366791 thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#22
Good part
Was not expecting Milind to do that 😲
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23

You are mine Part 7









Kripa is shocked.
Milind laughs:I was just kidding.
Kripa and Prachi are relieved.Kripa goes away.Milind winks at Prachi.
P:You are too strange to understand.I have not seen a stupid guy like you in my life.
M:Prachi..i was trying to give you a Valentine's shock.
P:Valentine's shock?Disgusting.I don't care what you do...whom you love.Because i hate you.You go to Kripa.
M:Prachi...i don't love Kripa.I just wanted to know your feelings.I wanted to know if you get jealous if i propose to Kripa.That's all.
P:I'm not jealous.I hate you.
Milind is moody.
M:These roses?
She takes it and throws it.It falls on Zaib.
Milind goes near him:This Prachi is crazy.I just proposed to Kripa for fun.That made her angry.
Zaib is shocked:What?You proposed to whom?
M:Kripa.
He slaps Milind.Milind is shocked.
Z:How dare you do that?Kripa is only mine.
Milind is shocked:You love Kripa?
Z:Yes,i love Kripa.You tried to snatch her from me like Angad.So i hate you also.You are not my friend anymore.
Milind is shocked:Zaib!Listen to me.It was just a joke.
Zaib catches his collar:Stay away from us.
Zaib goes away.

Valentine's day party in the College...
Gauri accompanies Angad and Zaib to the party.She looks stylish in her modern attire.Zaib whispers to Gauri's ears:This is a prestigous college.Behave well.Don't be too traditional here.
She shakes her head.
Milind goes near Prachi with a smile.She looks stunning in her yellow outfit.
M:Hi Prachi...Happy Valentine's day...
Prachi is angry.She moves away from him.He feels sad.
Angad's eyes search for Kripa.Finally he sees her.They both look at each other.Kripa has worn a stylish violet costume.He goes near her:Kripa...since a few days i have been thinking of you and our relationship.You said...friendship between a boy and girl may not be practical.That's true.So let us give a new name to our relationship.I love you...
Everyone including Kripa is shocked.
A:What do you say?
Kripa's eyes are wet.
K:I too love you Angad.
He takes a ring and slips it on her finger.She smiles.
Zaib is burning with anger.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
Great update
plz cont soon
Thanks 4pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
thanks for great update.
plz cont.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
Great update
Wonder how Milind will pacify Prachi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
great to see one couple settle down👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
is it michi ff or angad krips ff...i see more of angad and kripa and zaib but not michi in this ff....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29

You are mine Part 8



Angad and Kripa hold hands together and dance to "Seene mein dil..." from "Koi aap sa".
Gauri tells Zaib:What a sweet pair!
Zaib becomes angry:Shut up.
Gauri feels sad.

Milind goes near Prachi:Now Kripa and Angad are together.I hope now you are not angry with me.
Prachi does'nt open her mouth.
Milind smiles:Why are you pretending to be serious?Smile...you look much better when you smile.
She smiles.
M:Ah!Your smile is priceless.
She smiles.

Milind changes his costume and grabs Prachi's hand.
P:What are you doing?
M:Come onto the stage.Let us surprise others.
Milind takes her to the stage.
P:Why have you taken me here?
M:Let us dance.
P:I don't know to dance.
M:You have danced with me.Right?You can dance...When you listen to music,you will dance automatically.
M:Music...
Somebody plays music.The song is "Zoobi doobi.." from '3 idiots'.Milind and Prachi dance together with full energy.

Milind goes near Zaib:Zaib!Still you are angry with me?Today is meant for love.Do not fight with me...
Z:Rubbish!Today is the worst day in my life.I lost Kripa.Angad snatched her from me.
M:No Zaib.Kripa and Angad love each other.Angad did'nt snatch her from you.
Z:Don't support him dammed.
M:Zaib!
Z:Get lost!
Zaib goes away.Milind is upset.Prachi goes near him:Good Milind.First time you did a right thing by trying to make Zaib understand that Angad has not done anything purposefully to hurt his feelings.
M:But it did'nt work out.Zaib is out of control.
P:Don't worry Milind.One day he will understand the value of relationships.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
Brilliant update jasmine.
plz cont soon.

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