You are mine:Part 17 Climax - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 3




Angad and Kripa are talking to each other.
Suddenly a lot of girls come around him:Hi Angad!Kripa moves away from them.She sees Angad laughing with them.She feels left out.
She thinks:Angad,you are going away from me.
The girls:Let us dance together Angad.
He laughs:Oh!
Suddenly he sees Kripa standing alone.
A:I'm sorry...
He runs away from them.He goes near her:Kripa!
K:Angad,you are back?
A:Those girls are so boring.No one is as interesting as you.They can't be a good friend like you.
She is very happy.
A:If i stand alone,they will catch me again.So let us dance together.
She smiles.She thinks:Still i'm scared whether i will lose you.I feel..there is a distance between us.I'm not able to be happy.
They dance together to the song 'Dooriyan...' from the movie 'Love Aaj Kal'.
Kripa is really involved in the dance.Angad thinks:First time i'm finding Kripa strange.I see something different in her eyes.But what is it?
He stares at her eyes.
Kripa thinks:No...i can't dance with Angad like this.When he looks at my face like this...i don't know...i feel strange.
She moves away from him.
A:Kripa!
K:I have a small head ache.I'm going.
A:I will drop you home.
K:No need.
She leaves the house.
He thinks:Something is desturbing Kripa?

Gauri goes near Zaib:Zaib...will you dance with me?
He gets angry:Are you not ashamed to ask me to dance with you?I hate country girls like you.
She is shocked.She runs to her room and cries.Angad sees it.

Prachi is sitting in her class room and studying.Milind goes near her:Always studying...you don't have anything else to do?
P:You don't have to know that.Don't desturb me.Let me study.
M:I have not seen a boring girl like you.Yesterday when you dressed well for the party,i thought you have changed.But no...you are the same boring person.Look at Kripa.She is so smart and cool.
Prachi is irritated:Then why don't you date her?
M:Earlier i used to have a huge crush on her.But she made friends with Angad.Angad snatched her from me.After that i hate Angad.I don't have any interest in Kripa also.
Prachi is shocked.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
Thanks Jasmine for another fab update.
Plz cont.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
poor milind....dont know this charac ter of milind suits shabir perfectly.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
Thanks jasmine
Great update
pls cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
hey jasmine another awesome update
keep rocking
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16

You are mine Part 4



Prachi:You used to love Kripa?
Milind:Not love anyway.It was just a crush in the school.
P:Do you love her now?
M:No way.
P:Then why are you still angry with Angad?
M:I don't know why.
P:Milind...this is not good.
M:Prachi...i don't have time to listen to your lecture.So bye...
He leaves the room.He comes back again.
P:Milind!
M:I came to tell you something.
P:What?
M:Yesterday you were looking gorgeous in the saree.Saree suits you well.
She smiles:Thanks.
He leaves the room with a smile.


Angad enters Gauri's room.
A:Gauri,i know that you are upset.
G:No Angad.
A:I know that.I think Zaib wants you to be modern.So you better start wearing modern clothes also.
She is shocked:What are you saying Angad?
A:Now a days wearing western clothes is not a big deal.
G:But i'm not used to wearing it.
A:But for Zaib you can wear.Right?
She is silent.

Angad rings up Kripa:I need your help.Gauri wants to wear modern costumes.Can you purchase some good clothes for her?
K:O sure.
Kripa buys modern clothes and gives it to Gauri.Angad and Kripa are waiting outside the dressing room which is attached to the bedroom for Gauri.Gauri comes out wearing a modern dress.They are surprised to see her in a modern dress.
K:Wow!You look so nice.
A:Ya...you look hot.
Gauri is relieved.
A:If Zaib sees you now,he will fall for you.
She blushes.They hear a car's voice.
A:I think Zaib has come.Kripa goes downstairs to receive Zaib.He is surprised to see her:Kripa!You are here?
K:Ya...come with me to a room.There is a surprise for you.
He is thrilled:Surprise for me?
K:Ya..
He is very happy.
Kripa takes him to Gauri's room.Only Angad is seen there.Zaib becomes dull seeing him there.
K:Gauri!
Gauri comes out of the dressing room.She is shy.
Zaib laughs:You are looking so funny.
He becomes serious:Horrible.Is this the surprise Kripa?
All are shocked to see Zaib's reaction.
A:Whatever dress Gauri wears....you find only fault.What is this Zaib?
Zaib shouts:Yes...i find fault.Because no good dress suits her.
Gauri cries.Zaib leaves the room.Angad and Kripa try to console her.

Angad and Kripa are walking out.
A:I feel sad for Gauri.He loves Zaib very much.
K:I also feel sad.When someone loses someone they love very much they get depressed.I can understand that.
Angad stares at her:You have any experience?
Kripa looks at Angad.She looks upset.
A:Tell me Kripa.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17

Nice update

pls cont soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow all the characters r written so well lets see what u got us in the next part great effort👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19

You are mine Part 5




Angad:Now a days there is some change in you.Tell me...what scares you?You lost anyone you love?
Kripa keeps silent.
A:You love anyone who does'nt love you?
K:Angad...you are my best friend.Do you think i will hide my boyfriend from you?
A:I'm sorry Kripa.
K:It's ok...bye...
She goes.

Friendship day....

Angad and Kripa tie the friendship band around each other's's wrist.Zaib is irritated to see that.
M:Kripa did'nt give you friendship band.Angad must have poisoned her mind.That's why she is not making friends with you.Angad is the only friend she has.
Zaib becomes upset:I don't know what Angad's secret is.
Milind and Zaib tie friendship band around each other's wrist.Prachi watches it.After Zaib goes away,she goes near Milind:Friendship band sjould be tied with sincerity.Only a true friend should do that.Why did you tie friendship band around Zaib's wrist?
Milind is irritated:You mean..i'm not Zaib's friend?
P:Yes.You are not Zaib's sincere friend.
M:How dare you say that?He is my best friend...you stupid girl!
P:If you are his sincere friend why are you poisoning his mind?You are making him turn against his own brother.Why are you angry with Kripa?
Milind is angry:I will do whatever i want.You know...i brought a friendship band for you.But now i lost my mood to gift it to you.
He goes away.She is shocked:Friendship band for me?
After some time she goes to the classroom which is empty.She sees Milind sitting there simply.
P:Milind!
M:What do you want?
P:I want your friendship band.Waiting eagerly for that.Won't you?
She extends her arm.
Slowly he gets up and ties the friendship band around her wrist.She smiles.
P:I'm sorry...i did'nt know that you consider me as your friend.So i did'nt bring any gift for you.
M:It's ok.I will tolerate it.
She smiles.
P:Did you notice one thing?Accidently we both wore black outfit.
Milind notices it only at that time.He passes a smile.
She smiles and goes out.She thinks:I think Milind is not a bad boy like i thought before.He is good at heart.


Kripa is watching 'Kuch kuch hota hai' at home.She sheds tears when Anjali finds out that her best friend Rahul loves Tina,because she loves him madly.
She thinks:Is my friendship story becoming another love tragedy?
Somebody is knocking at the door."Kripa!"
K:Angad?
She wipes her tears and opens the door:Angad..you.. here?What a surprise?
A:Today is friendship day.Right?So i thought i will surprise you by making a surprise visit.
She smiles.
Angad looks at the tv screen:Wow!Watching a friendship movie today?That's good.Let's watch the movie together.
They both are watching it together.Angad is touched by the scene where Rahul weeps when he realises that he is going to lose Anjali.
After the movie,they both wipe their wet eyes.
Kripa takes a casset:I will play music.
A:Why did you cry?
K:Because....when girls are around you..i'm scared whether i'm going to lose my only friend.
A:Do you think i will sacrifice my friendship at any cost?Never.
She is relived.She smiles.
K:Why did you cry?
A:I don't know...seeing true friendship i became emotional.
She smiles.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great update jasmine
Plz cont

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