You are mine:Part 17 Climax - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
Good to see michi dancing ,hope zaib try to understand gauri's love for him.👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

You are mine Part 9






The lecturer Maya goes near Angad and Kripa:Hey...Angad...kripa...you guys are still here?Not coming for the party?
K:Party?
She:Yes,you guys did'nt know that there is a holi party in the college?
A:Wow!Cool.Can't wait....We are coming now Ma'am.

Milind goes near Zaib:Hey...Are you not coming for the Holi party?
Z:Get lost.I'm not interested in any party.
Zaib goes home.Milind feels sad.

Zaib stands at the verandah.Gauri throws colour on him with a smile:Happy Holi.
He shouts:How dare you?
Gauri runs away with tears.

College Holi party...
Angad and Kripa throw colour on each other.
Milind sees Prachi.They smile at each other.
Milind goes near Prachi slowly.He puts colour on her face softly.She smiles.
P:You have changed a lot Milind.
M:That's because of a good friend like you.
She smiles.

They all dance to Holi songs.Maya who is covered with colours smiles at the students.
Suddenly they see a beautiful girl entering the area.She has worn a modern white dress.They are surprised to see her.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
Great part jasmine
plz cotinue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
Nice part
Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35

You are mine Part 10


Angad and Kripa:Ayesha!
Ay:Hello guys...
Milind goes near her:Hi hottie...
Ayesha laughs:Milind,you have not changed a bit.
Prachi goes near them and whispers to Milind's ears:Who is this?
M:Well!This is our schoolmate Ayesha.She was the princess of our school.Ayesha...this is Prachi..
Ay:Nice to meet you Prachi.
P:Hi Ayesha...
Ayesha looks at Angad and Kripa:So you guys are still friends?
Angad and Kripa are silent.
M:Friends?Not just friends.They are lovers.
Ayesha is surprised:O really?
They are shy.
A:How come you are here.After schooling,you went to US.Right?
Ay:Ya...but i did'nt like the place.I missed all of you.So i'm back.There is another surprise for all of you.I have joined this college.
They are surprised.
K:That's cool Ayesha.Welcome to our college.
Ay:Thanks.Where is Zaib?
A:He is at home.He is not a party guy.You know...I will ring him up.
M:No..he may not pick up the phone.Kripa...you call him.
K:Me?Why?Angad can call.Right?Why do you think that he won't pick up the phone if Angad rings him up?
M:Because....
P:You all know Zaib..right?He is a tough guy.He gets angry with everyone.Only a cool girl like Kripa can manage him.
Everyone smiles.Kripa rings him up:Hi Zaib!Why are you not joining us for the party?
Z:Kripa....because....
K:Our schoolmate Ayesha has landed up.She joined our college.Come and see her.
He is surprised:Ayesha?
K:Ya...
Z:Ok,i will come.
K:Bring Gauri also.
Zaib is irritated.

Zaib enters Gauri's room.She wipes her tears seeing him.
Z:Stop crying and come with me to college.There is a holi party there.
She is surprised.She smiles.
Zaib reaches the college with Gauri.Ayesha goes to him:Hi Zaib!
Z:Hi Ayesha!What a pleasant surprise!

Somebody gives orange juice to Angad:What is this?Today is the day for bang.
K:Don't you know that such drinks are not allowed in our college?
A:But i don't feel like drinking orange juice.You know that i have always hated orange juice.
K:Give it to me.I will drink it.I love orange juice.
A:Ok...you drink it.Let me go and dance.
Angad goes near the dancers.
He sees Ayesha:Ayesha...you are a dancer...why don't you join us for a dance.
A:Sure.
Ayesha also joins them in dancing.
While dancing Milind holds Prachi's fingers as if he does'nt know anything.Prachi blushes.Milind winks at her.
P:Naughty guy.
They both laugh.
Suddenly Prachi sees Kripa who feels very uncomfortable.
P:Milind!Kripa looks sick.
He looks at her:Yes.But what happened to her suddenly?
They both go near her.
M:Kripa,are you ok?
Kripa vomits blood.She faints.Milind catches her:Angad!
Angad and others are shocked to see Kripa in that stage.Angad and Zaib run to her.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
Great update jasmine.
plz cont soon.
Story getting interesting..
366791 thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#37
Interesting part
Wonder what is wrong with Kripa
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
wow what a twist in the story.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
It was really nice part
plz cotinue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40

You are mine Part 11




Angad takes Kripa in his arms.Zaib is helpless.
Kripa is taken to the hospital.
The doctor comes out.
Zaib:How is Kripa?
A:Tell me doctor.
Dr:I'm sorry...she is ....we could save her life.
All are happy.
Dr:But she is in coma.
All are shocked.
Dr:It was a strong poison.
A:Poison?That means.. that orange juice was poisonous.Who poisoned her?
The police officers have come to the hospital.Inspector Pran:Mr.Angad Khanna,you are Kripa's boyfriend.Right?We want to talk to you.

Angad is in the station.
Pran:Do you suspect anyone?
A:No.Because she had no enemy.She was a sweet girl who was friendly with everyone.
P:We are trying to find out the guy who served juice.

Milind goes to Ayesha's house.The maid opens the door.He does'nt see in the frint room.So he goes to her bedroom.There he is shocked to see Angad wallpaper stuck to the wall.
Ayesha enters the room.She is shocked to see Milind there:Milind?
M:Why is Angad's wallpaper here?So you missed Angad very much.So you came back.
Ayesha has no answer.
M:You wanted Angad.You considered Kripa as an obstacle.So you tried to kill Kripa?
Ayesha is shocked.

Milind rings up Ispector Pran:Sir,i suspect someone.
P:Whom?
M:Ayesha!

The lady Police Vasundara slaps Ayesha many times:You tried killing a poor girl to get your lover?
A:No!
She slaps her again.

Vasundara comes out of the room with Ayesha.
V:Inspector Pran...Ayesha is not uttering a word.
Milind and Prachi are present there.
A:Sir...believe me...i'm not the culprit.
Pr:O really?Then whom do you suspect?
A:It's not a doubt.It's true.I'm 100% sure.He is the culprit.

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