FF:Freaky story!Last Part:Pg 33(20/08/09) - Page 11

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: _ishaara_

oh stop it Sara, what are u saying!
🤗
im only pulling Sara's leg. the SAra that Mayu created. i used to not like her earlier but now im just pulling her leg thats all.
Shabbir is all yours dear!😃




thnx a lot for the reply sweetie
i was really feeling tensed for last two days
i thought you really hate me
i am really sentimental which my dad complains every time
thnx for liking me

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: _ishaara_

and dont say sorry, have fun pulling my leg too. infact id enjoy that!😊



well me too will try to pull your leg
but mind you i am not at all good in that
will try to pull at right time

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: may268

No...I will make you nice😳 now you just seem evil to ONLY Aritha😆



mayu bacha thnx for reply
angel i have hit the "like" button in every update part
love the last part a lot coz there is your dad kissing your mama😳
when will you update next ?

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Posted: 16 years ago
guys I won't be able to update until tuesday
I am feeling very sick
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: may268

guys I won't be able to update until tuesday

I am feeling very sick

oh cho sad..................................................................

hope you you feel well😊 very soon

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: may268

guys I won't be able to update until tuesday

I am feeling very sick



get well soon baby



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Posted: 16 years ago
People I might update today but it depends
So pls bear with me!!
Thank you!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey people

I added few more characters in but they are just temporary!

And Prachi is SaxenaPrachi and Not Prachi from KYM..lol

And anandita is Mehanandita

I also put Kuku and Bharat's cameo in this part!

I am trying to end this FF soon and I will be updating the next parts!

Hope you like it!!

Part 5

"Shabir!!!" Aritha yelled. Mayuri came up to Aritha and said "Papa is not at home but he will be back anyways how are you?" "I'm fine by the way where is Sara?" Aritha asked. "Mama is in the kitchen" Mayuri replied. Aritha made her way towards the kitchen while Mayuri went up to her room. Aritha entered the kitchen. Sara who was surprised to see Aritha got really excited hugged her. "How are you?" She asked. "I'm fine and what's that lovely smell?" Aritha asked. "Oh, I'm cooking" Sara replied.

Both women got into a conversation while cooking. Later on Shabir arrived after a long walk. Shree and Prachi entered the house and saw Shabir exhausted. Shree went up to Shabir and asked, "What's wrong my dear cousin?" "Hi Shree, I just went for a long walk" He replied. "Uncle, where is Mayuri?" Prachi asked. "Probably in her room" Shabir replied. Prachi ran to Mayuri's room. Mayuri who saw Prachi went up her and hugged her cousin. "Prachi How is school?" Mayuri asked. "It's fine" Prachi replied with a huge smile.

Later on everyone sat on the Dining table to eat lunch. Prachi tried to reach the chapattis. "Papa, Can you pass me that?" She asked Shabir pointing at the plate.

Shabir looked confused while Mayuri angrily walked away from the Dining table without eating. "Sorry Uncle, I accidentally called you Papa" Prachi said in a sad tone. She knew her cousin is really possessive about everyone around her and that she's short tempered. Shabir excused himself and took his plate with him.

Mayuri was furious but she didn't know why she felt so angry. Then she saw Shabir coming with a plate on his hand. Mayuri just ran away. Shabir started running after Mayuri and in the process the plate fell out of his hand. Mayuri ran up her room and locked herself before Shabir can stop her. "Open the door!" Shabir yelled. "No, Don't talk to me, just get out of here!" Mayuri Yelled back. "Fine, we are going out and we will be back home really late," Shabir said. Mayuri didn't reply.

He went downstairs and told everyone that they were going out. Aritha asked "Is Mayuri coming?" "She's not coming" He replied. Aritha didn't feel good about this

All of them went to the shopping mall and they bumped into Anandita and Sam.

"Hey, How are you?" "We're fine" Anandita replied. "Shabir, where is Mayuri?" Sam asked curiously. "She's at home" Shabir replied feeling worried realising he left her at home all alone. "We have to go now" Sam said. "See you later" Shabir said. He quickly took his phone out and called Ram kaka and asked him to keep an eye on Mayuri.

He was relieved that there would be someone taking care of her.

After shopping they went to the restaurant to have dinner, Shabir spotted a couple kissing and cuddling. It reminded him of the time he spent with Sara before marriage. He thought that the couple looked familiar. Then the girl suddenly got up and sat down again seeing then he realised that it was Kuku and Bharat. He went up to the couple who were still cuddling.

"I love you Kuku" Bharat said. "I love you too my monkey Donkey" Kuku replied. Shabir bursted out laughing. Kuku looked at Shabir angrily.

"What are you laughing at?" Kuku asked angrily. "Monkey Donkey" Shabir replied still laughing. Kuku went red and tried to change the topic. "Where is Baby Doll?" Kuku asked. Shabir stopped laughing. "She's at home" He replied. "Shabir, we haven't seen Baby Doll in ages, we will come to your house someday" Bharat said. "Anytime, it's like your house" Shabir said.

After having a short conversation with them,Shabir headed towards his own table. "Shabir, what do you want to eat?" Sara asked. "I am not hungry" Shabir replied. Sara and Aritha knew the reason he was refusing to eat. Shabir didn't feel like eating, as he knew Mayuri probably didn't eat anything. He called home and no one picked. He kept giving several miss calls. Shabir got really worried. Shree, Prachi and Aritha left after finishing dinner.

Shabir, Sara, Shravu and Vasu were on their way to go back. Everyone was silent as Shabir drove the car. "Shabir we have to reach home quickly it is already 11pm and Mayuri is alone at home as well" Shravu said. This made Shabir even more worried and he drove the car really fast. Everyone went to sleep as soon as they entered the house. Meanwhile Shabir ran up to Mayuri's room. He tried to open the door but it was still locked. Shabir was getting impatient and pushed the door but it didn't open. He got really angry and pushed the door harder and it opened.

He entered the room and was shocked to see Mayuri playing with her Nintendo DS. Her eyes were red, he knew that she must have been crying. She looked him at then turned away. He quickly ran downstairs and got heated up the chapattis. He came back and sat next to Mayuri. "I am sorry" Shabir said. "Why?" She asked rather surprised. "Because I left you and went shopping" Shabir replied. "I am sorry" Mayuri replied. "Why?" Shabir asked with a huge grin on his face. "As if you don't know" Mayuri said. "Anyways let's eat dinner, I am starving" Shabir said dramatically. Mayuri laughed. Sara entered the room and sat down next to Mayuri.

"I am starving too" Sara said. Shabir was surprised. "Didn't you eat dinner in the restaurant?" Shabir asked. "I didn't and if you were paying attention to what I was doing then you would have known" Sara replied. "Alright, let's eat" Shabir said. Both Sara and Shabir started feeding Mayuri. Mayuri fed both Shabir and Sara. Then Shabir started feeding Sara while she did the same thing. After finishing their meal, Shabir and Sara were about to go to their room but they suddenly turned around.

Mayuri looked at them curiously. They both looked at each other and went and slept next to Mayuri who was sleeping right in the middle of the bed. "Why are you sleeping with me?" Mayuri asked her parents. "Mayuri, go to sleep, you're going to be late for school" Sara said making Mayuri go quiet. Sara and Shabir kissed Mayuri's cheeks and all three of them fell asleep.

I am not really happy about this update.If you like the update then press the like button!

Thank you
Edited by may268 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
me first !
nice part
thnks for introing me in ur ff
why mayuri behaved too silly😕
like the interaction between mayuri and shabbir
kuku scene in superb

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Posted: 16 years ago
it was great.
mayuri left alone at home.
thanks.

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