FF:Freaky story!Last Part:Pg 33(20/08/09)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yo People!!

Starting a new FF which is a comedy and Kayamath Parivaar(Us) Will be in it

It hasn't been proof-read and I wrote it in a rush so please bear with my writing and Enjoy

Part 1

"Shabbir!!" screamed Sara. Hearing her shout so loudly Mayuri woke up immediately and Shravu who was rather frustrated made her way to the living room. On her way Shravu saw her brother's worried expression. Mayuri just came down the stairs and saw her Baadi maa staring at her Parents. She went near her Baadi ma and asked "what happened?". "I don't know" Replied a rather confused Shravu.Shabbir who saw both of them and suddenly got up and walked near them.He wished them both Good morning while Sara was staring at them angrily. "What's Hitler up to?" Asked Mayuri with a huge grin. "What did you call me!" Yelled Sara. "I didn't hear anything.Didi did you hear anything?"Asked Shabbir trying to save his daughter from his wife's claws. Shravu who felt dizzy nooded in a nagative in order to save her niece from her Sister-in-law. "Shabbir,tell me who is Sandy?"Sara mama asked as she got more anxious to know thet ruth.She knew it. She knew that Sandy was his first love. "Who is Sandy?" Asked Shravu getting even more confused. Shabbir remained silent. Unable to bear the silence Sara blurted out "Sandy is Shabbir's first love but they got separated.Then Shabbir married me.However he couldn't forget her and he still loves her." "Hell No!" Shouted Shabbir interrupting his wife. "Then who is it" Shouted Sara. "I will tell you who it is"Said Vasu as she entered the living room hearing her Daughter shout. "Sandy was Damaad's childhood dog which he loved very much but Shravu doesn't remember her as she was only 5. On an unfortunate day the dog died due to a disease and Damaad was very upset as he loved the dog so much. Dammad always kept little memories of the dog which he loved." As Vasu finished her sentence everyone looked at Shabbir in shock. "Is this why you wanted to name her Sandy" Asked Sara pointing at Mayuri.Shabbir nodded his head. "You wanted to name me after a dog"Asked Mayuri. He nodded his head again. He suddenly walked out with tears in his eyes.Mayuri felt rather upset to see her dad cry. "We have to cheer him up" Said Mayuri with a determined voice. " I've got a plan" Sharvu said.Few minutes later all of them came out of the living room with a huge grin on their faces.

Hope you Like it'Anyone who wants to write part Pls can PM me!!

Bye P.S:I called it freaky story coz it's freaky 😆and I changed the dog's name😳
Also press the like button if you like it.😳...copying siya's idea😆
Part 2:Pg 2😳
Part 3:Pg3😳
Part 4:Pg7😳
Part 5:Pg 15😳
Part 6:Pg 22😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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mayu it's really freaky🤣

NOTE for the writers

feel free to write the story

anyone wanted to write the story plz plz book your dates in this post to avoid clashes and plz plz try to pm either me or mayu two days before your booked day

this is just a freaky story.............................don't get hurt plz... instead enjoy this freaky story and plz plz try to write your part of the story

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shravu

mayu it's really freaky🤣

NOTE for the writers

feel free to write the story

anyone wanted to write the story plz plz book your dates in this post to avoid clashes and plz plz try to pm either me or mayu two days before your booked day

this is just a freaky story.............................don't get hurt plz... instead enjoy this freaky story and plz plz try to write your part of the story

Thanks😆
No one likes it you see😆
Only you replied😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great dear,
so the ff virus affected u too baby
really this is a crazy ff i had ever read
keep it up

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehanandita

great dear,
so the ff virus affected u too baby
really this is a crazy ff i had ever read
keep it up

Thanks😃
Yeah it affacted me too in a funny way😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I just realised the part is so short
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Posted: 16 years ago
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mayu bacchi great start. but i have exams , so no thinking. if this FF continues after june 28th (which i highly doubt) then i will write. feel free to write my parts too.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aritha mama suggested for a group FF and arith amama wil;l be missing. sorry. im sure SHravu will go a good job. but mayu my plan stays!!😡

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Posted: 16 years ago
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anyone wanted to write this FF can write from the part -3 onwards.

i 'm writng part-2 of this story

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shravu

anyone wanted to write this FF can write from the part -3 onwards.

i 'm writng part-2 of this story

you can write all parts dear. noone will come in yr way😆 copywrites are with u n mayu baby😆

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