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Crazy_girl_15

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Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#81

I had this feeling they would have thing in this update and they did

anyways loved the way u described how they felt

Papa was locked up in jail and him crying..I would never imegine my papa to cry

In total it was really emotional but I loved it!😳

Edited by may268 - 16 years ago

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: may268
I had this feeling they would have thing in this update and they did
anyways loved the way u described how they felt

Papa was locked up in jail and him crying..I would never imegine my papa to cry

In total it was really emotional but I loved it!😳

Sorry Mayuri to have shocked you. As to crying he thought he may have lost her forever to this world. Don't you think in that situation the guy is bound to cry, especially when he loves her so deeply?

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divvya

@divvya

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#83

Wow, that was just mindblowing. Opti, you brought out the emotions and their union beautifully. Kudos to you and your writing. Awesome.

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Crazy_girl_15

@Crazy_girl_15

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Opti
Sorry Mayuri to have shocked you. As to crying he thought he may have lost her forever to this world. Don't you think in that situation the guy is bound to cry, especially when he loves her so deeply?

I atually loved the bit where he cries...it shows how much he loves mama😳

Then when he cried again when he saw her "happy tears"😳

So sweet but How would it be in mama's point of view😳

I guess thr replay is her point of view😆

By the way what is thr replay? Sounds funny😆

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: may268

I atually loved the bit where he cries...it shows how much he loves mama😳

Then when he cried again when he saw her "happy tears"😳

So sweet but How would it be in mama's point of view😳

I guess thr replay is her point of view😆

By the way what is thr replay? Sounds funny😆

Yes, replay will be her point of view. Replay of whatever they did.

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Opti

@Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: shreenithiks
FANTASTIC AS ALWAYS👏

thanks shree.

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NosVemos

@NosVemos

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#87

Oh Opti Akka, the taxi burning scene happens to be a real life experience for one of the people I know and the hair cutting thing too for many. This crowd psychology has been the reason for so many riots in out country. Hmm, a very sad/unfortunate historical event..

In the background of this, Milind's overwhelming emotions got poured on his Prachi. Finally he could give himself to her. I am happy for her who waited this long, am sure his fervour was a proof of his love for her.

Waiting to see Prachi's take on this, which would be the next update?

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mi-neepearl

@mi-neepearl

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#88

hey opti, finally got around to commenting!!!😆 opti cuz i haven't commented for long now i will just write watever comes to mind!

well, i love both milind and prachi in this ff, but early on i did feel a bit angry upon milind for wat he kept doing to prachi but after when he wanted to make his marriage a success, i started to like him not that i didn't like him but he proved to be a good human being, and a caring husband.

awww prachi is so innocent, i love her she thought milind married her cuz he had a dream girl called prachi.😳😆

the night when milind left her was so sad , i cried for prachi a bit😭 but then i could also understand milind's side of the story, the emotions on that update was bought out so well opti, really enjoyed reading it👏

opti, i have to tell u tat earlier on when milind just cared for prachi but didn't really love her, i would have been more excited to read his thought process than prachi's cuz i guess we all knew how much prachi loved him but wanted to see his changing attitude towards her.😊

i loved reading about all the activities that they did together especially the swimming one where shows her how to swim, he was trying to keep himself from bursting out at her, that was very cute and iam gald he got her out of her phobia of water. and the movie part was so funny with the comments that prachi kept on passing, i haven't seen the movie but i have to see it now as that part has inspired me to do so.

opti i must say that this is not just an ff but an ff with knowledge, seriously i am so surprised on how y put everything together, one of the best writing skills!👍🏼

the last update was so excellently written, i could just imagine everything happening and all the emotions that kept going through milind, when i was reading i kept getting worried myself for prachi..😭 but was soo happy that nothing really happened to her😃

and their union was so beautifully written, loved every part of it.

and one more thing opti, is prachi ever going to find out that milind loved ayesha or even was attracted to her, i think she should as now everything is good btw them so milind should tell her about ayesha now..

plz update soon, very eargerly waiting to read more of the ff...😊

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Isa_de

@Isa_de

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#89

OMG!!! in a stranger's house...............

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Shabz.

@Shabz.

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#90

what an emotional roller coaster that was, beautifully written opti...the riots, milsi's pain, anguish and desperation was well depicted...im so glad michi finally found one another.

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