Great Expectations-Epilogue Pg 69 (14/6) - Page 10

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Posted: 16 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: azam12neelab

hey opti, finally got around to commenting!!!😆 opti cuz i haven't commented for long now i will just write watever comes to mind! Thanks for finally commenting. Better late than never sd Milind would think!

well, i love both milind and prachi in this ff, but early on i did feel a bit angry upon milind for wat he kept doing to prachi but after when he wanted to make his marriage a success, i started to like him not that i didn't like him but he proved to be a good human being, and a caring husband. Well, he had his reasons for behaving as he did in the begining. It iook him quite awhile to get over his disappointment and Prachi's behaviour was not making it easier for him.
awww prachi is so innocent, i love her she thought milind married her cuz he had a dream girl called prachi.😳😆Yes, my Prachi can be quite dumb.
the night when milind left her was so sad , i cried for prachi a bit😭 but then i could also understand milind's side of the story, the emotions on that update was bought out so well opti, really enjoyed reading it👏Thanks Asam
opti, i have to tell u tat earlier on when milind just cared for prachi but didn't really love her, i would have been more excited to read his thought process than prachi's cuz i guess we all knew how much prachi loved him but wanted to see his changing attitude towards her.😊While I tried to cover every incident from both their points of view, the emphasis would be more on one of them depending on how much they would have been affected by the situation.
i loved reading about all the activities that they did together especially the swimming one where shows her how to swim, he was trying to keep himself from bursting out at her, that was very cute and iam gald he got her out of her phobia of water. and the movie part was so funny with the comments that prachi kept on passing, i haven't seen the movie but i have to see it now as that part has inspired me to do so. Glad to learn that you enjoyed these parts.
opti i must say that this is not just an ff but an ff with knowledge, seriously i am so surprised on how y put everything together, one of the best writing skills!👍🏼Thank you again.
the last update was so excellently written, i could just imagine everything happening and all the emotions that kept going through milind, when i was reading i kept getting worried myself for prachi..😭 but was soo happy that nothing really happened to her😃Yes, nothing really happened to her although emotionally she was affected.
and their union was so beautifully written, loved every part of it. Thanks.
and one more thing opti, is prachi ever going to find out that milind loved ayesha or even was attracted to her, i think she should as now everything is good btw them so milind should tell her about ayesha now.. Lets see what happens.
plz update soon, very eargerly waiting to read more of the ff...😊Will try to but not sure. I have again got another of my migraine attacks today and I will also be pretty busy at work.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Isa_de

OMG!!! in a stranger's house...............

Yes, they could not wait! Too highly strung to do so, I guess.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Shabz.

what an emotional roller coaster that was, beautifully written opti...the riots, milsi's pain, anguish and desperation was well depicted...im so glad michi finally found one another.

Thanks Shabz. Yes, Michi finally found each other although the path was pretty bumpy.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Opti me back from vacation.
read thet hree parts...
Some one had fallen hardly to his sisters friend....so much that he cant hide it ....even spilled the beans to his father.....one thing is sure ishaan is not like his father in this matter....
Good ...atlast Milind had realised he loves prachi....why cant his hotelin instambul trouble him pretty fast so he might have realised he is in love.one wise decision he took not to take his wife...if he took....i am sure they might have gone to swimming classes...then discussion on istambul plitics how ladies wont have right to vote their....and what not....
so atlast hero graced his wife with a kiss....which made nanu kaka go beetroot red....
god they just slept the whole night...even he realised he loves her....and poor girl cooked his brain with so much confusion.
Atlast the historic event which i never forget.....we live in andhra but in our town we have one and only one sikh family handloom showroom which was burnt so badly literaaly to ashes....but the family was given hostage and taken care off as they r very very friendly people.
Milind .....Prachi did went into emotional rollarcoaster.....Milind for the first time cried liek a baby thinking about HIS Prachi and what had happened to her.
Mr.Kapoor....Opti is this charatcer popping out again in present story.....
Any how Milind and Prachi did tore his pyjama and kurta and preeti salwar into pieces...how r they goingt to answer to them when they see their cloths torned.....
Hope Mr and Mrs Kapoor had became good friends to Mr.Mrs.Mishra.
On the whole Milind broke Prachi cherry in Kapoors house....never ever expected this....but loved it and the scienero and the way u wrote about their possesive lovemaking is excellent.
Opti ....Milind ki staff ko daagdene padege....even when the news broke PM is assainated these guys game to decorate their propriter room...where did they get those flowers in those choas,,,,,
Lol Opti waiting for update...but migraine attacks for you...i think coupel of days nice sleep will stop the attacks.....or eat a banana and have a nice vomiting it will go away.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wonderful, passionate c-night. loved the fact that our hero was so desperate for a physical union finally :) prachi may act a little dumb at times, but she is one wise woman alright.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Poor Milind. He want to make the night that their mind, body and soul will become one as a memorable night in his decorated presidential suite alas the riot had ruined all his plan.
Thank God Prachi is safe in inspector's house and I am glad Milind still locked in the cell when inspector came to the police station.
So Milind wanted a replay, in the way he imagined it, love to know that.
Beautiful update Opti as always, please continue ...
I just knew the cause of Indira Gandhi's murder, thanks Opti for enlighten me.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: gawker

wonderful, passionate c-night. loved the fact that our hero was so desperate for a physical union finally :) prachi may act a little dumb at times, but she is one wise woman alright.

It was more than just a physical union for Milind. If he had wanted just that he could have had it a long time ago when Prachi willingly gave herself to him. While it was tempting to accept it then he realised he could not give her more than just his body (which he felt was unfair to her) so he stopped himself. Now he knows he can not only give his body but also his soul. Hence the union is uninhibited and wildly passionate, especially coming as it did right after the scare of his life time of losing her forever. Yes, Prachi knows how to handle her man now. Thanks Manu.
Edited by Opti - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#98
hey opti...gr8 update.........i was a silent reader all this while but couldn't stop commenting on your ff.........just love your ff..........continue soon.........when r u updating next.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: crlds

hey opti...gr8 update.........i was a silent reader all this while but couldn't stop commenting on your ff.........just love your ff..........continue soon.........when r u updating next.....

Thanks. Will try to update by tonight, if not tomorrow morning.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Actually Opti like Sumu I myself have been wondering what will the Kapoors make of their ripped clothes and dirty sheets - I'm sure Milind will have to reimburse them and get their laundry done. Mind you I'm sure when the Kapoors find out that they have reunited soulmates then that good deed for which they will be truly blessed will make up for all the damage caused - quite innocently of coarse😳

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