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Have posted my next update. Have not proof read this.

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Opti dear! again i m getting the same error pl. remove pics and upload.
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For those of you who cannot open page 3, here is the update:
Part XXXII.2
Past (Milind's Flashback) (Have not proof read)
Note: Although the update has some historical events, the entire scene at the riot site in Gandhi Nagar is a figment of my imagination.
Before going for his meeting, Milind met the manager of his hotel and asked him to adorn the presidential suite he was staying in with flowers and scented candles. He had planned to surprise Prachi with the arrangements for the much awaited night which will make them one in mind, body and soul. He smiled happily at the thought of taking the first step into married life in its fullest sense. 'Better late than never', he thought to himself as he hurried to the board room to meet his client.

Milind was still in the meeting when the manager of his Delhi hotel came in and informed him the shocking news that Mrs. Indira Gandhi, the Prime Minister of the country has been assassinated by her own security guards. Milind stared at him in disbelief and asked him to verify whether it was not a rumour being floated by some prankster. The Prime Minister's life has been in threat ever since she had ordered the Operation Blue Star, wherein the Indian army stormed the Golden Temple, the most holy temple of the Sikhs, in order to flush out the Sikh militants holed up there. While the operation itself was considered a military success, it had created widespread controversy over the timing and the style of attack, as many civilians were also killed in the process of eliminating the terrorists. The manager informed him that the news should be accurate since it was broadcasted in the All India Radio, which is a Government owned radio channel. Milind hurriedly wound up the meeting and went back to his room. He turned on the radio to learn more about this shocking news.

He learnt that the Prime Mister was shot by two Sikh security guards at her residence, No. 1, Safdarjung Road at around 9.20 a.m. She was immediately rushed to the All India Institute of Medical Sciences (AIIMS), a leading medical institution in the country, but all efforts to revive her had failed and she was declared dead at 10.50 a.m. The death of one his iconic figures immersed Milind in a pall of grief. He just froze into inaction for over an hour. Much later he slowly recovered from the shock and tried to ascertain what the fallout of this news was. He heard that the situation in the nation's capital was very tense as the people were trying to come to grips with a tragedy of this magnitude. All transportation came to a grinding halt. He wondered what Prachi was doing. He did not have any contact number or address of the friend she was visiting. So there was nothing much he could do but wait for her to contact him.

He skipped lunch, as grief over the PM's death and worry over Prachi's safety had killed his appetite. He also cancelled his meeting with the auditors and waited for Prachi to call the hotel but he did not hear from her till evening. When it was past 5 o'clock and Prachi had still not returned nor called him, he got increasingly worried. Just then he heard a loud noise and looked out of his hotel window to check what the problem was. He was shocked to see a mob burning a taxi belonging to a Sikh. Standing across the road, at a distance of 10 yards were around 30 policemen, an inspector, who was armed and a sub-inspector. None of them did anything to prevent the mob. The mob went on a rampage and burnt shops in the adjacent Khan Market and had attacked a gurudwara nearby. They attacked a garage run by a Sikh and burnt the cars there shouting Khoon ka badhla koon se lenghe (we will avenge blood with blood). It took him some time to register why all this was happening all of a sudden.

He was disturbed from his thoughts by the ringing of the phone. He quickly ran to it. As expected, it was Prachi on the other side. He could not hear her voice clearly as she was speaking from a public phone booth. Amidst the din of anti-Sikh slogans in the background, he managed to hear that although she wanted to return back to the hotel, Gurdeep's husband had not yet returned and her friend was terrified. She could not leave her alone especially since she was eight months pregnant, so she was waiting for him. Before Milind could ask her where she was the line got cut. He waited for her to call but did not get any further calls for the day.

Desperate to know where she was, he called up Shah Mansion to find out whether they knew where Prachi's friend, Gurdeep lived. Although Prem Latha remembered the girl from Prachi's school days, she did not know where she lived. In fact she was not even aware that she lived in Delhi now. She promised to try to find out about Gurdeep's whereabouts from Prachi's other friends. Several minutes later she called back to inform him that none of Prachi's other friends knew about Gurdeep. There was only one other friend left to check but she was out of station and would return only the next morning.

Milind was extremely restless by now. He heard the news that the motorcade of President Zail Singh, who was returning from a foreign visit, was stoned as it approached AIIMS. Mob violence was reported in different parts of the city even as Rajiv Gandhi, the son of the slain leader, was sworn in as the Prime Minister. Just then there was a knock on the door. He opened the door eagerly hoping it would be Prachi, but it turned out to be a couple of hotel staff who had come to decorate his room with flowers and candles under instructions from the manager. In his frustration, Milind yelled at them to leave him alone and the two men scurried away to safety. He couldn't sleep a wink throughout the night, wondering about Prachi's plight and he kept pacing up and down his room. The vision of the mob attack was still fresh in his mind and he feared for the safety of his wife.

The next morning brought with it more news of violence and attacks on Sikhs. Armed mobs took to the streets of Delhi and launched a massacre in several parts of the city. Gurudwaras were the first to be attacked, possibly to prevent Sikhs from collecting there and putting up a combined defence. Shops, garages and houses of Sikhs were vandalised and looted and Sikh men were killed. Amongst the worst affected were some places in East Delhi. He suddenly recollected that Prachi had mentioned that she was going to East Delhi the previous day. A cold fear ran down his spine. He hurriedly called for a telephone directory and started to search in it but then he realised it was of no use since he did not know Gurdeep's husband's name. He also remembered that Prachi had called him up the previous day from a public booth which meant that there was no phone in their house. He hit his fist against the wall in frustration. He tried calling all the hospitals in East Delhi area enquiring if they had any patient by the name Gurdeep or Prachi there. While he was hoping that their names were not in the rolls of any hospitals, he also hoped to glean some information about their whereabouts. At around 11 o'clock he received a call from Inder Shah. They managed to speak to Prachi's friend who had returned that morning and had got Gurdeep's address from her. He quickly took down the address and asked the front desk to provide him with a car. He was informed that none of the chauffeurs engaged by the hotel had reported for duty. He barked that he can drive himself and picking up the car keys, he quickly got into the car and drove to Gandhi Nagar in East Delhi where Gurdeep lived.

On the way, he witnessed several incidents of looting and arson. Some people pelted stones on his car but he did not stop. He drove like a man possessed, eager to reach his wife to make sure she was alright. His heart was in his hands as he parked his car and ran up the narrow deserted streets desperately searching for Gurdeep's house. He finally managed to locate it and barged into the empty house. He searched in the three small rooms of the tenement but there was no one. He rushed out and screamed his wife's name as he ran back and forth the alleys but there was no response. A few heads peeped curiously at him from the adjacent houses but nobody came out. He started perspiring profusely by now and his hands went cold in fear. He ran his trembling fingers through his hair and looked around him. A few shops were gutted in the locality.

He went to the nearby police station to lodge a complaint. There were several constables but the inspector was missing. He went up to the head constable and asked him to register a complaint that his wife and her friend were missing. When the head constable refused to write down the complaint, he went berserk and catching him by the collar of his uniform, he dragged him up from his chair. Seeing this, the other constables immediately rounded him up, but Milind was not intimidated by them. He started shouting that it is high time the police did its duty. This angered the head constable and he asked the rest to arrest him for misbehaving with the cop. He was soon pinioned and pushed into one of the lock ups. Milind's shouts fell on deaf ears and after screaming his lungs out for nearly 20 minutes he collapsed on the floor of his cell.

Based on the violence he had seen and heard, he kept imagining the worst possible scenarios. Burying his head between his knees, he finally broke down and wept bitterly. For a man who prided himself in keeping his grief under cntrol, this was very unusual. Even in his father's funeral he had not wept so much. More than the grief, it was the fear of the unknown which was dominating his mind. He did not know how long he sat there in this state. His tears had dried up but his heart ached badly. He forgot that he had not had anything to eat since the previous morning. Hunger was the last thing on his mind. He wanted to find his beloved wife, nothing more. Realising that he will not gain any thing by taking an antagonistic stance against the cops, he got up again and this time he apologised for his misbehaviour and started pleading with the constable to let him go so that he can search for his wife on his own. The constable pretended he did not hear him. It took all his efforts to bite back his anger and maintain his cool in the face of such apathy.

At around 6 o' clock, the inspector of the station walked in. Seeing him the constables saluted him. He nodded and took his seat. Milind called out to him. The man turned around and was shocked to see a well dressed decent looking man locked up in the cell like a common criminal. He asked the constable who he was and why was he locked up. The constable tried to justify his act, saying that he had manhandled the cops. The inspector reprimanded him and walked up to Milind, who then explained his problem.

The inspector opened the cell door and asked Milind to take a seat.

"Who did you say you are looking for?" asked the inspector.

"I'm looking for my wife, Prachi Mishra and her friend Gurdeep Kaur," said Milind.

"What???? So you must be Milind Mishra," he exclaimed.

"Yes, I am but how do you know me?"

"I am Inspector Roshan Kapoor. I was with both the women you are looking for till a few minutes back," he explained.

"You know where they are?! Where are they?" Milind asked excitedly.

"I'll take you to your wife. I had just dropped her at my place before coming to the station," he said and informing the constables he will soon be back, he left with Milind.

During the drive to his residence Mr.Kapoor explained to him what had happened.

"This place has been witnessing riots since yesterday. Although there are no killings yet, the situation is very tense. I went on my rounds this morning to check if everything was alright and found Mrs. Kaur in labour pain. Your wife was attending to her. There seemed to be no male help around. So I took them to the maternity hospital in my jeep. Mrs.Kaur developed some complications in the delivery and she was facing a life threatening situation. Blood had to be arranged and the hospital did not have any stock. I was frantically trying to arrange for the blood and finally managed to do so. Your wife was tensed about the whole situation that she forgot to get in touch with you to inform you that she was safe. It is only after the patient was wheeled into the operation theatre did she realise she had not spoken to you since last evening. She told me that she had to cut the call made to you due to the rioting. She called up your hotel but they said that you had already left but they did not know where. She tried calling her parents but was not getting through to them. The poor woman was going crazy worrying over you. She did not seem to think that you would be here since she had not given you the address. I had to trace Mrs.Kaur's husband, Mr.Balwant Singh too. Finally I managed to trace him and informed him about his wife. The poor man had cut his hair to escape being identified as a Sikh before venturing out of his employer's house where he had taken shelter last night. Since your wife looked haggard from the gruelling experiences she has had since yesterday, I took her to my house so that she can freshen up and promised her that I will hunt you down wherever you may be. How did you know that she had come here?"

"I had got the address from her parents only this morning. I think we may have just crossed each other. Thank you for taking care of my wife."

"It is my duty. Well, we have reached my house," Mr.Kapoor said and got off the police jeep.

He took him into his house and called out to his wife, Preeti, to bring Prachi in. Prachi had just showered and changed into one of the salwar kameez given by Preeti. Seeing his wife, Milind just went still for a moment before he broke into a broad grin and ran to hug her tightly. Her face reflected her relief and jubilation too. They clung to each other weeping happy tears on each other's shoulders while the Kapoors looked on happily. When they heard Mr.Kapoor excuse himself to return to the station, they broke free and blushed. Mr.Kapoor asked them to stay at their place for the night and return next morning as it was not safe to venture out amidst all the commotion. Milind and Prachi reluctantly agreed.

At dinner, Milind finally got to eat after nearly 36 hours. Seeing him ravenously gorge himself, Prachi had tears in her eyes.

"You have not eaten since yesterday morning, have you?" she whispered to him.

He shook his head in the negative.

"I am sorry," she said, her voice cracking up.

"For what?" he asked.

"For putting you through this harrowing experience," she replied.

"It is not your fault, Prachi," he said and continued his meal. Seeing that she had still not touched her food, he ordered, "Now eat your food."

After dinner, Prachi told him that she will join him after helping Mrs.Kapoor clear up.

After he had showered and changed into Mr.Kapoor's pyjama kurta, he waited for her impatiently in the room he was shown. As soon as she stepped in and shut the door, he rushed up to her and holding her head between his palms he scorched her lips in a searing kiss. He encircled her tongue in his and sucked on it thirstily like a dying man. Although she was initially taken aback by the ferocity of his kiss, she soon participated with equal enthusiasm. When they were both starved of air, they broke free. He then moved his lips all over her face, kissing her feverishly. Once her entire face was bathed in his kisses, he pulled her towards him and embraced her tightly, not wanted to let go of her. His hands fervently caressed her back in circular motion. He squeezed his eyes tightly, trying to shut out the images of the burning city. He had still not completely recovered from the shock of losing her for a day and the fear that he had lost her forever. He shuddered at the very thought of any harm befalling her. She was way too precious and important to him. The close brush with death willed him to celebrate life and she was his life. In his emotionally high strung state, he craved for her like never before.

He swung her in his arms and carried her to the bed. Laying her on it, he buried his face in her neck and nipped at the soft flesh, making her moan. Not wanting any hindrance between them, his hands moved down to her kurta neck and he vigorously pulled at the buttons till they all snapped open, some breaking in the process. He impatiently tore at their remaining garments as well and soon both their clothing lay abandoned on the floor. The chillness of the November air hit her exposed body, covering it with goose bumps. He immediately covered her body with his, insulating it from the cold by lending it his body's warmth. While he recaptured her mouth, his hands roved all over her body, heating it up to a fevered pitch.

Images of the riot torn streets and his own fear that he may have lost her to the senseless violence that erupted, kept flashing in his mind, intensifying his need to become one with her in body and soul. The flames of his desire were stoked up rapidly and when he could not contain them any longer, he lowered himself and thrust deep to complete his union with her. Hearing her gasp sharply, he paused briefly but she dug her fingers into the muscles of his back, urging him on. Her legs wrapped around his waist, holding him tight as he filled her with his love and propelled her on a brisk but invigorating journey of love. The tingling sound of her anklets was as erratic as the rhythm he set, in keeping with the wild swings in his emotional state - from anguish to exhilaration; from anxiety to relief; and from passion to tranquillity. Thrown in this whirlpool of emotions, he felt himself sinking deeper and deeper. The resultant frenzied pace of their union pushed both of them tantalisingly close to the brink several times before finally toppling them over. The sensations that coursed his entire body at the moment he peaked were indescribable, as he held her tightly in his strong arms, pressing every fibre of her being against him. He then slowly released her from his vice-like grip and collapsed by her side, panting to regain his breath. Hearing her heavy breathing, he raised himself on his elbow and looked down at her with eyes filled with love. Her eyes were tightly shut and streams of tears had escaped on either sides of her face. Her face looked flushed and drained. Her soft and supple body bore the tell-tale marks of his recent assault. Seeing her in this state he immediately relented for having taken her forcefully, without a thought to what she wanted.

"I'm sorry," he said contritely.

Her eyes flew wide open hearing the familiar word that was the source of her humiliation before. Seeing the alarm and dismay in her eyes he realised what those words would seem to her.

He hastened to add, "No, no. Don't get me wrong. I don't regret making love to you. There is nothing I want more than to make you mine and become yours, honey. But I am sorry for the manner in which I went about it. I was hasty and rough in expressing my love and need for you, my darling. This is not what I had dreamt of. I had asked them to make elaborate arrangements at our hotel last night as I wanted the night, that was to make the two of us one, to be extra special. I wanted to give you as much pleasure as you would be giving me. I wanted to slowly awaken your senses and cherish you at length. I wanted to make love to you tenderly, savouring every moment of it. Not in this hurried and harsh manner. However, the PM's assassination and the riots that followed had thrown all my plans in awry. I was going insane not knowing where or how you were till this morning. After I got your address from your mother I eagerly went looking you. I desperately searched for you in the streets of that locality. Not finding you anywhere, I nearly went crazy. I started imagining all sorts of horrible things. You are my life, darling and the thought of losing you terrified me. Finally when I found you, I couldn't contain all my bottled up emotions. In my eagerness to become one with you, I lost track of all other thoughts. Sorry for manhandling you darling.Sorry for hurting you and causing you pain. How I wish I could erase this act and redo it more slowly and tenderly all over again."

"Sh....," she said placing a finger on his lips. "I am not made of porcelain that I would break if my husband handles me with a little roughness. In case you have not noticed, you were not the only impatient and rough one here. Look at these marks I left on you." She pointed at the nail marks on his back and the teeth marks on his neck.

"These tears, then?" he asked in confusion, collecting the tears from the sides of her face on his index finger and showing them to her.

"They were the automatic outlet for my emotions. I was as emotionally high strung as you were, Milind. When I tried tracing you since this afternoon and could not locate you, I was equally terrified. You cannot imagine how relieved I was when I finally saw you. As to erasing such a beautiful act between us, I'll never dream of it. I loved every moment of it for it showed me just how much you needed and desired me. I could feel that you were not merely satisfying your physical urge but were trying to quench your emotional thirst too. Nothing can be more fulfilling for me than to satiate both your emotional and physical needs."

She snuggled up to him, kissed his chest and laid her head on it, closing her eyes in contentment. He smiled and kissed the top of her head and held her close against his side.

Soon he felt his desire for her rekindled.

"Darling!" he called out to her.

"Mmmm..." she replied huskily, opening her eyes and lifting her head up from under his arm, where it was tucked, to see him.

"Would you be too exhausted for a replay, Mrs.Milind Mishra, this time in the way I imagined it to be?" he asked her.

Edited by Opti - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i m speechless! no words dear!
i loved your wild michi union. i think no one else has describe michis union like this!
great work dear !
We want replay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Opti that was simply superb 👏
The whole description you gave regarding the riots alongside Milind's own anguish and shock at witnessing these scenes and the failure to locate his love were fantastic. Milind's pain, distress and raw fear was outlined so well that I could feel his pain and also felt like crying thinking what may have happened to Prachi - The suspense was quite intense. I think the way you limited the story to Gurdeep's and Prachi's plight was sensible because it would have been impossible to describe in detail the bloodshed and deaths that occured and then continue on with Milind and Prachi's story too. Although the scenes of violence that you did convey were accurate, shocking and overwhelming to read about - It's true what you said about Gurdeep's husband having to cut his hair - I heard that alot of sikhs had to do his in order to save their lives. The scene at the police station was also described brilliantly - Milind's frustration, anger and disbelief could really be felt - terrible the way they locked him up and he fainted with not having had anything to eat with only grief and fear filling him up for nearly 3 days. The police just stood there and looked on while illegal violence was happening infront of their own eyes.
Wow Opti their union - awesome. The pent up emotions of joy releif and bottled up love were released so passionately, you wrote this part extremely well - I think it was perfect actually. Some of the words you used here really proved how much Milind loves his wife and how it was imperative for him to have her in every sense - ''dying man', 'feverishly' and 'flames of his desire' were apt and conveyed how he was feeling with so many pent up emotions of the past days of violence and the past months of finally realising how much he loved his wife. Loved how he apologized for making love the way he did, how he explained the way that he actually wanted to do it, and then how Prachi reassured him that this is what she wanted too, what they both needed and desired - a replay is probably what they really can do with to regain normality and confirmation of their undying love for each other.
Beautifully written Opti - really enjoyed reading this.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome
Beautifully written opti very nice

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: asmimani

i m speechless! no words dear!

i loved your wild michi union. i think no one else has describe michis union like this!
great work dear !
We want replay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks Asmi. There will be a replay is a much slower motion.
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Originally posted by: Insomniac

Opti that was simply superb 👏 Thanks Niki

The whole description you gave regarding the riots alongside Milind's own anguish and shock at witnessing these scenes and the failure to locate his love were fantastic. Milind's pain, distress and raw fear was outlined so well that I could feel his pain and also felt like crying thinking what may have happened to Prachi - The suspense was quite intense.Glad that the emotions I wanted to portray came out.
I think the way you limited the story to Gurdeep's and Prachi's plight was sensible because it would have been impossible to describe in detail the bloodshed and deaths that occured and then continue on with Milind and Prachi's story too. That is what I thought. In fact I rewrote sections of it to mellow down the graphic nature of the riots because I did not want to compromise on the Michi scene.
Although the scenes of violence that you did convey were accurate, shocking and overwhelming to read about - It's true what you said about Gurdeep's husband having to cut his hair - I heard that alot of sikhs had to do his in order to save their lives. The scene at the police station was also described brilliantly - Milind's frustration, anger and disbelief could really be felt - terrible the way they locked him up and he fainted with not having had anything to eat with only grief and fear filling him up for nearly 3 days. It was one and a half days! Although it must have seemed like 3 days to him I think.
he police just stood there and looked on while illegal violence was happening infront of their own eyes. Yes, the riots were condemnable and the fact that people who had to protect failed to do so was the sad part although I brought in a good cop here. Dont know if there were any.
Wow Opti their union - awesome. The pent up emotions of joy releif and bottled up love were released so passionately, you wrote this part extremely well - I think it was perfect actually. Thank you. I was nervous about this part. Wrote it quite a few days ago. I wanted to show the wild passion but also did not want to sound vulgar.Write as explicitly but discretely that was the tough part.
Some of the words you used here really proved how much Milind loves his wife and how it was imperative for him to have her in every sense - ''dying man', 'feverishly' and 'flames of his desire' were apt and conveyed how he was feeling with so many pent up emotions of the past days of violence and the past months of finally realising how much he loved his wife. Loved how he apologized for making love the way he did, how he explained the way that he actually wanted to do it, and then how Prachi reassured him that this is what she wanted too, what they both needed and desired - a replay is probably what they really can do with to regain normality and confirmation of their undying love for each other. He first did not realise what his apology would sound to her. It is only after seeing her dismay did he realise what he had said and how she could have taken it given their past. Anyway he sorted out soon enough and she assured him of her own need. There will be a replay, a more tender one this time.
Beautifully written Opti - really enjoyed reading this. Thanks Niki.

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Originally posted by: kirandeeprana

Awesome
Beautifully written opti very nice

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Thank you Kiran.
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wow opti gr8 part loved it cant wait to read her reply cont soon

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