Great Expectations-Part XXXI- Pg 202 (23/5) - Page 5

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.3k

Views

90.5k

Users

42

Likes

39

Frequent Posters

Opti thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 16 years ago
#41

Part II

Back to the present

She turned to look at her husband as he uttered his vows so passionately in a booming voice that used to initially scare her but had over the years assumed a reassuring quality for her. She was glad that they decided to dispense with the traditional sehera and the ghunghat in this new age marriage vows renewal ceremony. Her eyes ran over his handsome face, lingering over his well trimmed pepper and salt beard. She still remembered her serious reservations as a child to mingling with men who had facial hair. Her clean shaven father had at one point of time decided to sport a beard and a moustache. She refused to kiss or be kissed by him till he got rid of them. So when she first saw her prospective husband's photograph, that was the first thing her father teased her about. She had at the time assured him that she will get her husband to shave off the offensive facial coating if he wanted to get close to her. But in all these twenty five years, if there was one thing she never allowed her husband to do, it was to go clean shaven even for a single day.

Just then her husband turned towards her and flashed his most charming smile making her heart skip a beat and her face flame up in shyness. No matter how many years have gone by he still could throw her off balance with that one smile. It was not all smiles in the initial period of their marriage though. Her thoughts rewound to the day of their marriage.

Twenty five years ago (Prachi's flashback)

At the wedding mandap, clad in a heavily brocaded wine red lehenga choli and bedecked in ornate jewellery from head to foot, Prachi waited for the ceremony to be over with so that she could change into something more comfortable. She stole a look at the man to whom she would soon belong. She could not see his face through the sehera, although she knew what lay beneath it. His tall masculine frame practically dwarfed her small one, making her conscious of her height. If there was one thing she had wished for, it was that she was atleast three to four inches taller than her modest 5 feet 2 inches height. As that was not possible, she had hoped that the man she weds would be of comparable height so that she does not have to crane her neck up every time she had to interact with him. Alas that wish also remained unfulfilled as here she was, marrying a six footer. But she did not fret too much over it. After all she never did have any great expectations in life. Her father and sister always complained that she lacked drive as they themselves were highly driven and ambitious.

She was more like her mother, Premlatha - docile, home loving and generous. She took pleasure in small things like flying kites with the neighbours' kids; listening to music, especially old classics; spending time with the aged in the nearby old age home; giving music tuitions to children in the locality; trying out new recipes for her family and friends and listening to long conversations. She did her graduation in home science, a diploma in catering technology and a few courses in baking and cookery. She used to pay occasional visits to her father's hotels and give tips to the head chefs and housekeepers there. However, when her father suggested that she take up the reins of atleast one of the vast chain of hotels he owned, she politely declined. She made it clear that she was not cut out for a career and preferred to be a home maker instead. Although her father was not too happy with her limited ambition he did not force her to do something she was not inclined for and started hunting high and low for a man worthy of his precious daughter. None seemed to match up to his expectations till he finally met the dashing Milind Mishra in an hotelier's conference a couple of months back.

Prachi gathered from her father later that he took a strong liking to the self-assured and confident young man from the very first moment. He was suitably impressed by the man's success at a relatively young age. The fact that he had achieved all that on his own merit in a short span of less than 10 years only served to raise him in his eyes. His post-conference interactions with him strengthened his belief that he had finally found the right match for his daughter. He had done a background check on him and found out that he was the only son of an accountant, hailing from a well respected but lower-middle class family. His mother expired when he was barely three years old and his father had died of heart attack three years ago. Milind did not let his economic status constrain him. He was a brilliant student and after his masters in business management which he had finished at a relatively young age of 21, he had gone to Turkey to seek his fortunes. His intelligence and intuition impressed the Sheikh under whom he was working and he quickly rose to head his group of hotels all across the Middle East. He was paid quite handsomely too. Soon he started his own group of hotels, both in India and abroad and was quite a successful businessman in his own right.

As his parents had a love marriage against the wishes of their respective families, they were virtually ostracised by them. Hence, after the death of his parents, Milind was pretty much on his own. So Inder himself approached Milind soon after their first meeting and offered his daughter's hand in marriage. He also suggested the merger of the two groups of hotels after the marriage. Milind was a bit reticent of the merger proposal, citing the need to get the approval of his board as a reason for his hesitancy but he seemed more than keen about the marriage proposal. Inder decided to tackle one thing at a time and decided to first get him as his son-in-law before coaxing the business deal.

Prachi was in the U.S. when all of this was happening. She was sent the bridegroom's photograph by e-mail. Except for the facial hair, she did not have any other complaint against the groom. She trusted her father's judgement and gave her assent. The wedding was finalised within weeks and as soon as she returned to India, the ceremony itself was conducted. Her father had wanted to have all the pre-marital ceremonies such as the engagement, mehendi, haldi. Milind, however, was extremely busy with a new project and couldn't spare the time. He was also impatient to get on with the wedding. So all the ceremonies were dispensed with although Inder got him to agree for the reception after the wedding.

Sitting beside her would-be husband, Prachi wished they had these ceremonies before she took the final step to becoming Mrs. Milind Mishra.

Edited by Opti - 16 years ago
GoGreen thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#42
Hai Opti wonderfull update.
So is Milind attracted to Prachi sister....and married Prachi.
But the way u discribed past of milind and prachi is nice in falshbacks.
lovely lovely update.
mehanandita thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#43
superb update
loved the way ur delivering it both past and present something new and different
waiting for prachi reaction in rituals

continue soon
Opti thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 16 years ago
#44
Yes, you are the first, but where have you disappeared?
Delena-cious thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#45
hey opti...a very nice update...m really confused...was Prachi the one whom milind saw and vowed to get married? the way u'd described prachi as 'gharelu' ddn seem to go with that way! anways..haha...prachi not very fond of facial hair..aww but now she is possesssive abt it! aww so cute!
lovely update! love the way michi's flashblacks are brought in...really nice...do cont soon🤗
Opti thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 16 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: siya..

hey opti...a very nice update...m really confused...was Prachi the one whom milind saw and vowed to get married? the way u'd described prachi as 'gharelu' ddn seem to go with that way!

The next update will make things clear if they are not already.
anways..haha...prachi not very fond of facial hair..aww but now she is possesssive abt it! aww so cute!
Yeah, she did not like it then but she realised her man looks good in it. So she wants him to keep it.
lovely update! love the way michi's flashblacks are brought in...really nice...do cont soon🤗
Thanks Siya. There will be a lot of toggling back and forth. Hope you can keep pace with it.

..kashish.. thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#47
hey akka! wow the wedding...interestin to see both the flashbacks...mili's seems interestin! wonder what will happen! hope u continue soon! loved the parts!
Opti thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 16 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: ..kashish..

hey akka! wow the wedding...interestin to see both the flashbacks...mili's seems interestin! wonder what will happen! hope u continue soon! loved the parts!

Kashish, all I have been doing in the last two updates is covering the wedding, both past and present. I will be alternating between Milind's and Prachi's flashback. The next will be Milind's turn. So I guess that may interest you more. Thanks for reading and commenting.
391527 thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Opti

Yes, you are the first, but where have you disappeared?

im still here. 😳
i loved the update asusually. old milind still making prachi weak with just a flash of his smile. how romantic haha. i love this narration opti😃. aand ur fictions are quite different to one another. very interesting.
ok, here ppl are talking abt milind getting attracted to ayesha😕😕now where did that come from. how come i wasnt able to pick that up.
anyways so jaanu impressed inder no surprises there....poor guy achieved so much for one gal and gets another gal?
facial hair part was so kute. i cant connect to that part of the FF to a certain extent😆
eager to know more abt michi's life. eager to know more of milind's character. would he be like DC milind??😳
continue as time permits.
thank u😊
Opti thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 16 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: aritha

im still here. 😳
Good to know you are still around.
i loved the update asusually. old milind still making prachi weak with just a flash of his smile.
Well, the guy who plays Milind does that to me, so can relate it to Prachi!
how romantic haha. i love this narration opti😃.
Thanks, Aritha.
aand ur fictions are quite different to one another. very interesting.
Glad you find them different. The truth is I am not very imaginative. So every time an idea for a fic strikes me I guess it seems different from the one I had written earlier.
ok, here ppl are talking abt milind getting attracted to ayesha😕😕now where did that come from. how come i wasnt able to pick that up.
If you read between the lines it would be obvious. Just read both the parts together. It is too stark to miss.
anyways so jaanu impressed inder no surprises there....poor guy achieved so much for one gal and gets another gal?
Lets see.
facial hair part was so kute. i cant connect to that part of the FF to a certain extent😆
Why can you not connect to that part?
eager to know more abt michi's life. eager to know more of milind's character. would he be like DC milind??😳
I think the reason my fics appear different is because of Milind's characterisation as my Milinds are all different from each other. So let us see who this one will be.
continue as time permits.
Have taken a long vacation from tommorrow. Lets see how much I can write during this period.
thank u😊
Thank you Aritha for taking the time off to read and comment.

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".