Great Expectations-Part XXXI- Pg 202 (23/5)

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Great Expectations

This story is nothing like the classic by Charles Dickens. It is yet another Michi offering. Don't know how many parts it would have.

Index
Part I - Page 1
Part II - Page 7
Part III-Page 11
Part IV - Page 15
Part V - Page 19
Part VI - Page 23
Part VII - Page 30
Part VIII - Page 33
Part IX - Page 39
Part X - Page 43
Part XI - Page 44
Part XII - Page 52
Part XIII - Page 58
Part XIV - Page 64
Part XV - Page 76
Part XVI - Page 86
Part XVII - Page 92
Part XVIII - Page 102
Part XIX - Page 108
Part XX- Page 111
Part XXI - Page 118
Part XXII - Page 123
Part XXIII- Page 139
Part XXIV - Page 151
Part XXV - Page 163
Part XXVI- Page 167
Part XXVII - Page 172
Part XXVIII - Page 184
Part XXIX- Page 189
Part XXX- Page 196
Part XXXI - Page 202
Part I

He sat in front of the holy pyre, attired in an intricately embroidered beige sherwani, renewing his wedding vows in Hindi, thereby making a departure from the practice of having it uttered in Sanskrit by the priest. His long dark hair, which was streaked in silver grey at the temples and the side burns, was swept back. His beard and moustache were well trimmed and gave him a distinguished appearance. He turned his small dark eyes to look at his lovely wife of twenty five years sitting beside him in a grand crimson red silk saree. To him she did not look a day older than when he had first seen her as a young bride. It was amazing that at fifty, her face remained unlined by wrinkles; her hair remained jet black with not a single grey; and her voice as she took the vows sounded as young, sweet and melodious as it did when he first heard her speak. But what drew him to her was her inner beauty rather than her external looks. And to think that for all that love brimming in his heart now she wasn't even his first choice. His thoughts flew to the day they had sat like this, side by side, a quarter century ago.

Twenty five years ago (Milind's flashback)

The wedding was grandiose affair given that it involved two of the biggest tycoons in the hotel industry. Renowned hotelier, Inder Shah's daughter, twenty-five year old Prachi Shah was being married to thirty-year old Milind Mishra, a first generation self made businessman. As Milind sat next to his bride, his heart fluttered in anticipation of realising one of his long cherished dreams.

She had captured his heart ten years ago when he had first laid eyes on her in an inter-collegiate event he almost did not attend. He was finally coaxed into taking part in the quiz competition by his best friend Ali. Having won that event the two young men loitered around the college campus, waiting for the prize distribution which was to take place in a couple of hours. With nothing better to do they decided to witness a few other events which were underway. They strolled into the nearby hall where a panel discussion was taking place. His eyes immediately settled on the lithesome beauty sitting on the dais, animatedly debating with people who were nearly twice her size. He had always been a man of few words, speaking only when spoken to, but he admired people who can articulate their thoughts well. On a scale of one to ten, he gave this wisp of a girl clad in a navy blue jeans and turquoise green t-shirt, a full ten for her strong persuasive skills. Her soft pink lips parted to let out her powerful voice which was in direct contrast to her small delicate frame. Her long hair, braided into a single long plait, swung from side to side every time she shook her head to make her point more forcefully. Her fair arms served to reinforce her arguments as she gesticulated a lot with them. As he leaned against the wall, his sharp eyes not missing a single detail of her face, he felt himself being magnetically drawn to her beauty and intelligence. "She will be mine some day," he whispered with an air of arrogance, more to himself than to his friend who stood close by.

"Are you crazy? The girl is the daughter of Inder Shah, the multi-millionaire hotelier," whispered back Ali.

"So?" he asked languidly, cocking his eyebrows.

"Do you think her father will give his daughter's hand in marriage to a man from a humble background like you?"

"Why not? Mark my words. A day will soon arrive when the mighty Inder Shah himself will approach me and ask me to marry his daughter."

Ali shook his head in resignation to his friend's fate, " You are an insufferable dreamer."

"Correction.... Not just a dreamer but a man who believes in achieving his dreams," he had said with confidence and turned his attention back to the object of his attraction.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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very interesting opti. a great start. different to the usual. im so happy im reading a brand new michi FF. will be looking forward to the next part.

long or short, u have started an FF. and thats wonderful!!!😊

thank u
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: aritha

very interesting opti. a great start. different to the usual. im so happy im reading a brand new michi FF. will be looking forward to the next part.

long or short, u have started an FF. and thats wonderful!!!😊

thank u

Thanks Aritha. I had not pasted the last lines when you first posted. Hope you read them too. As usual I have broken my own promise of not writing another FF. Lets see how this one goes.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank u so much opti for coming up with a diffnt michi ff the start is amazing,love to read more about this is ur upcoming updates. Thanks once again taking ur time to write wonderful ff for us👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: y_tanuja

Thank u so much opti for coming up with a diffnt michi ff the start is amazing,love to read more about this is ur upcoming updates. Thanks once again taking ur time to write wonderful ff for us👏

Thanks Tanu. Dont know whether this 'Great Expectations' will meet your great expectations.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Opti

Thanks Aritha. I had not pasted the last lines when you first posted. Hope you read them too. As usual I have broken my own promise of not writing another FF. Lets see how this one goes.

hope u break many more of such promises. 😆 greedy me😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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THanks Opti for another MICHI FF...this forum was slowly dying..so I am excited that there i anoter FF to come read....great start. Love Milind's audacity and of course his confident style!!! Looking forward to meeting Prachi soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I Love u Opti so much.
Love U Love U Love U.
Nice starting Opti.Loved Milind Confidence....Burt Opti u wrote she is not his first choice....but loved it...just bring it on but make it big like Destiny.....my all time favorite.i cant get over of Destiny.
Love U Love U LOVE U.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Opti..great start!! I love the confidence in which Milind said he will attain his dreams. :))
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Posted: 16 years ago
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opti akka ......... we always have the pleasure of your FFs

& each one of them are unique & undefined in just few words

but like always your work is still appreciated & expressed in words & even in emoticons

well, thnx for giving the honour to us again ....... this is really an awesome FF darling ....... michi retaking their vows on their 25th wedding anniversy ......... milsi still finding his wife beautiful in ecah way ......... milsi reaction & confermation after he see HIS prachi was superb

plz cotinue soon

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