Strangers- Complete FF - Pages 136 to 139 - Page 92

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Posted: 16 years ago
i cant help expressing my feelings since i cant hold back my emotions 4 long.its in my nature.
after reading several chapters again since u told me i dont understand this FF;I realized the epilogue is very fairy tale story type n unrealistic; also very insensitive.
this whole neev-prachi sex, milind's coolness n relationship is promoting its ok to hv sex b4 marriage or its ok to hv illegitimate children.
I never bothered abt sahana when she was a baby but now i feel sahana is very happy to be milind mishra's daughter.
this is very irrational,insensitive,unemotional to let know sahana is neev's child n accepting neev.It's also very unrealistic that neev-milind r family friends and milind doesn't feel awkward n insecure n also prachi is shameless hugging,kissing neev n still friends with him.
this whole scenario is very unrealistic.
i know in the end sahana will accept neev as his father or she might hv already overheard. Or she might accept n understand prachi's problem since one of her friends or mother went through same pathetic circumstances.
let me share my view that children hv very clear image of their parents n rely on them in every step.no child can accept their parents slept with someone else or hving an affair.
My mom is a counselor n she handles many cases regarding illegitimate children n how they suffer from parents love affair. It hurts them very much.
No child can accept what is stated in the FF.It kills them inside.
Sahana knowing abt prachi-neev relationship n accepting them is very unrealistic n impossible.it also shows she's fine with hving sex b4 marriage.
this whole story in a way is encouraging its ok 2 hv sex n 4 an excuse u can blame ur situation.
the modern society teaches us to be strong n hv self confidence n commonsense.
here prachi,neev cant believe i'm saying even MILIND lacked those qualities.
the whole ending is like lets 4get all our past n really dont bother who's child is who's.
i dont mean to hurt anyone's feelings but this whole sahana knowing neev, n neev-prachi so lovey-dovey seems too vulgar.Sorry cant help saying it.
i wudnt hv said vulgar if neev wasn't introduced.
no man in his right sense will accept his wife's lover whom she has slept n hv child.he'll drag her straight to court.
In one aspect i'll say ok being broad minded to accept unweded woman though i dont support it.and after 15 yrs u let that child know ur someone's child n who happens to be ur uncle its very cheap in my self-conscious.ur uncle n ur family friend slept with ur mom!!! this fiction sahana will accept it but not real sahana.
Opti u were right this is ur milind and i'm happy its only ur milind and not mine. I can never imagine my Milind to be like that.My milind is very high standard n quality guy who is perfect in every sense.
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Posted: 16 years ago
You are entitled to your views and I am entitled to mine Angel. If you have serious problems with the story why read it? Nobody is forcing you to.
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Posted: 16 years ago
But i think opti .....Prachi should tell her daughter the turth....than WAIT for time to do the same..................
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hmm, no update yet! 😭 Please, you have kept me hanging for a while now. You know what I am waiting for!!
Edited by ShubS - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ShubS

Hmm, no update yet! 😭 Please, you have kept me hanging for a while now. You know what I am waiting for!!

Sorry Shubs. Was very busy at work and my energy is completely sapped. This update requires a lot of heart and head work. Wouldn't be able to do justice to it. I have a holiday on Friday. Maybe I will update then.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Isa_de

But i think opti .....Prachi should tell her daughter the turth....than WAIT for time to do the same..................

That is the idea, lets see what happens.
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part opti, i liked the interaction between both families. i cant imagine neev being plump lol ... neev has finally seen his daughter, i felt bad for him when he went to check on the girls when they were asleep.
looking forward to the revelation. :D
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shabz.

nice part opti, i liked the interaction between both families. i cant imagine neev being plump lol ... neev has finally seen his daughter, i felt bad for him when he went to check on the girls when they were asleep.

looking forward to the revelation. :D

Thanks Shabz. Will update this Friday.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Firstly sorry ,very sorry 4 the late reply...............

Opti, ur work is awesome......👏U complete it so early...........nice updates........

11(i)--I don't expect that neev will come .He is innocent and alap create the misunderstanding between neev n prachi. Feel bad 4 milind.

11(ii)--Prachi should not tell that sahana is illegitimate.Because this is the reason why milind got marry to prachi, He want a name 4 the child.
11(iii)—great part….. Omg, milind told everything to neev.Why should not he first talk to prachi then neev.
But milind's situation was miserable here.
12(i)—I m really looking 4 this part. How neev n prachi going to meet .Ok they met n every misunderstanding solved.And that milinds punch, awesome…first I was in shock means milind solve their problem n give them a chance……….then what is the reason of his sudden behaviourial change… and now prachi going to hate him…..…but after reading the next part cant stop my laugh…….means he is just imagining……huh……
12(ii)—great ,great great part 👏👏👏……neev n prachi's conversation n milind curiosity was awesome. Then prachi's confession of love 4 milind is a delight to read. But really feel bad 4 neev. Just before few hours he knew abt his love n daughter's existance. And after sudden he lost everything n now prachi loves his husband. Prachi also right in her point. Because milind is so caring n loving .As a stranger he gives so much to her n loves her child more than a real father. Anyone can fall in love with him.
12(iii)—lovely part…..finally michi accept their feelings n love n confess it…..wow….

they r romancing in broad day light as rehana said…..neev also accept the truth.

12(iv)—this part is awesome specially their first date with their daughter.and milind knows very well about child psychology……..he is just perfect in every sense…
Epilouge-1—After 15 years also michi loves each other like they do in first day…..

Milind cares 4 her even more….i like their bonding…And in which way he handle his daughters dress matter ….i cant stop myself to admire him……....

Epi-2—nice part. I m now happy that neev also setteled down in life. And milind is so kind n send regular information of his daughter to neev…….
Epi-3— But Is it correct that prachi want to tell everything to sahana. It may ruin milind sahana's relationship…..Everything is going smoothly in milind n prachi's life……so y prachi thinking abt all that…… ……….And what happened to Alap n prachi's step mother…….
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Posted: 16 years ago
Opti !!! you mean this friday .....right???

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