FF: Rishtey- Final PART - ENDING pg 25 - Page 18

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Posted: 16 years ago
interesting preview JC, looking forward to the update. how is ur hand?
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@Siya: i know u are joking.. but got little tolerance for sarcasm these days.. blame it on stress.

@Shabz: my hand could be better but its better than before.

@AKAnargis and azam12neelab: :) I had to post something so you guys don' t forget the story. hehe.
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Posted: 16 years ago
I will fall for this trap..................show me the update...........
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I will post something in a few hours.
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i will be reading it in the morning as i am feeling very sleepy!🥱

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looking out for the update JC :D
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JC I am glad you will continue your FF, looking forward to read it .
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Posted: 16 years ago
ive been waiting for this for sooooooo long. im so happy!! thank you. i hope your hand is all good!
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Chapter 52: intuition vs. intelligence.

This is only part 1. The rest of the parts will be updated today (i think)


There was a strange restlessness she felt. She couldn't be sure why. The pregnancy was taking its toll. She didn't quiet feel like herself, being sick both physically and emotionally. Her mood swings were something even she couldn't get used to. She wondered if Neev noticed the changes in her too. If he did he never acknowledged it, which made her feel guilty for the tantrums she often threw. He was the ever attentive husband and she was putting him through so much. But today was not like usual. There was something that bothered her. She desperately wanted to believe that it was her maternal instincts being protective of her unborn child from a woman who could be a potential danger. But that wasn't it.. she knew this feeling.. it was a sort of sixth sense..or a warning..that usually made her aware of something about to go terribly wrong'or was it something that had already happened. What could be more wrong than Suyesha trying to kill Saayah. Wasn't that enough bad stuff for one day.

She wanted to get back to Mumbai as soon as possible, where she'd feel safer'with her mother'where the world would seem alright again. "Can you drive any slower" she complained to Neev. "Sure darling" he answered and slowed down as his usual response was to her complain, flashing his smile especially meant to annoy her. He loved it when her cheeks flamed with irritation. He'd always feel like kissing them. But he noticed the tension on her face today. Instead of expressing her irritation she was mumbling something inaudibly which was obviously not meant for him. She was praying.
Neev: "tumhe kya hua hai?"
Ayesha: "Mujhe ghar pohunchna hai."
Neev: "Ghar hi toh jaa rahe hain"
Ayesha: "sometime today! I should have gone with PL instead"
Anjali: "No..i should have gone with PL instead'Can the two of you give me some peace. I knew this was a bad idea." She had purposely avoided going with PL. PL would notice the slightest change in her mood. Though, she wondered now whether after the events of the day PL would be in the mental state to notice anything else wrong.

"Vaise hi problems kam hai jo tum dono bebaat ladte rehte ho." Anjali sounded tired from the back seat.
Neev: "Hum lad thodi rahe hai..hum toh aise hi pyaar karte hain. Lekin tumhe kya problems aa gayi. Tum toh har problem ka solution ho na.." he said jovially trying to make the mood lighter.
Anjali didn't reply. How she wished she could find a solution..something that would help Prachi. She refused to believe that there was no hope. There must be something Prachi had overlooked. After all she had been hiding this truth from everyone. There must be limitations to what she had tried and the doctors she had seen. She'd have to find out more details from Prachi. And now she too wanted to get back home asap.

Anjali: "Neev sach yaar tu kitni dheere chalayega. There is no one on the road either..you can go a little faster na?"
Neev: "There might be no one on the road outside but there is someone very precious inside. So we'r going to go slow.. understand."
Ayesha had to smile despite herself at that moment. How could she be fearful of anything when Neev was there. She reached over and held his hand. Though he didn't take his eyes off the road, she felt the firmness of his hold and suddenly felt foolish for focusing on the negative and overlooking the goodness that was right next to her. After a little while when Neev stole a quick glance at her she was sleeping peacefully without any sign of the tension that he had seen in her earlier. He raised her hands up to his lips and planted a gentle kiss. Ayesha didn't stir but Anjali watched from the back seat. Suddenly she missed Kavya. She needed a friend today and she couldn't think of anyone better than Kavya. She decided to call him as soon as they got home.

As Neev pulled up to Shah Mansion Anjali was the first to get out. Neev wondered what her hurry was. As he was about to wake up Ayesha his cell phone rang which promptly disturbed Ayesha's sleep too. She looked around a bit dazed first and then slowly got off. Neev however didn't and she waited. Finishing his conversation on the phone he looked up, worried at Ayesha. "I have to go.. its kind of urgent" he didn't explain further and took off without giving Ayesha a chance to ask anything.
Edited by -JC- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Second!! Thanks JC for this teaser trailer...looking forward to the next update. Is Kavya in Mumbai to surpise Anjalie???

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