FF:Tujhe Mein Pyar Karun Updtd 22/12 Pt4,Pg 14 - Page 10

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Posted: 16 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: angel's life

oh my sweet sweet fahima,thank so much hun I promise u that befor monday I will read each and every part I haven't read yet and post my comment soon as well......... thanks a lot dear🤗🤗🤗

thanks angel hun 😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: bidnai

Ok fahi just read ur ff this was really very very nice........The Ayesha part was really very funny😆..........So Prachi independent mom and workin women i really like this smart and outgoin Prachi..........So she saw Neev ooo god me sure she is going to run away now.........When will michi meet dea😔........But for u 👏

Thanks bid for liking this FF 😊😊 Was the ayesha part funny now? Ok glad i could make you laugh😆😃 Well this one is kind if smart and yes she is independent i dont know about the outgoing part but yeh she has changed since 5 yrs. Michi will meet soon! Thanks for reading and commenting bid! 😊😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel's life

excellent and amazing updates Fahima wowwwwwwwwwwwwww👏but wait for more comment hun :))

Hey angel thanks for liking the updates! Im waiting 😉😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shabzc1

Just read parts 2 and 3...good going Fima. im so glad u brought in an ayesha look alike, maybe neev will get his "happy ever after" afler all lol.

prachi's caught sight of neev and is hiding, i wonder how long this game of cat and mouse will last. hope milsi is introduced soon and that michi meet one another.

eagerly waiting for part 4 Fima:D


lol yeh but thats not the only reason i introduced an Ayesha look alike just missing sanju in general so guess this is my fantasy 😉😆 The game of cat and mouse wont last long and michi will meet soon. Thanks for reading and commenting shabz. 😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 4
Bored and hungry, Milind decided to get up and shower; there was really nothing that could entertain him. Even though he was tired, sleep was not what he needed. As beads of water trickled down his well-built, toned body, he closed his eyes for a second drowning in his past yet again.
'Milind beta, Prachi zinda hai,,dekho uska uska abhi abhi phone aaya tha, mujhe pata hai ko woh prachi hi thi' Premlatha held onto Milind as she cried pleading him to go look for her again. 'Milind mein jaanti hoon sirf tum hi ho jo usko dhoodh sakte ho, please meri beti mere paas wapis layo milind' Milind just felt miserable, his face was tear stained, his eyes portrayed distress; they had just come back from identifying corpses and he had just found the necklace he had once gifted Prachi. His heart would not believe she was dead ofcourse, until he stopped breathing how could his Prachi stop? He would find her even if that meant going to every nook and corner of the world. She was alive somewhere and his life depended on it. Milind understood Premlatha and he simply nodded. 'Maa, apne mujhe apna beta maana hai, mein apni Prachi ko wapis laoonga lekin uske liye mein chahta hoon ke pehle aap apne aap ko sambhalein' He nodded again, hugging her. Premlatha understood and had faith in him. Milind had to find her, not only for himself but for his family.
Neev had supported Milind and the family a lot, by first taking care of his father's business and they both had decided to merge their industries to make one. Although Milind was taking care of the business and the family, he had distanced himself and was more worried about his life, Prachi. He had hired a secret detective who would inform him if he found anything on Prachi and her whereabouts. But this became fruitless as the only information Milind had managed to get was that Prachi was not in Mumbai. For this reason, both of them decided to take on different projects in various cities believing that they might find her there.
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Prachi had managed to get into the theatre room from the back of the doors and now she sat at the back watching the play start. It was dark and Proteek and Neev were sat at the front and that way she would not be caught.
The play had now started and each character was getting introduced, now was the time for the lovers to be introduced. 'Ayesha mein kab se tumhara wait kar raha hoon, kab aayogi tum' 'Mein yahan hoon tumhare peechhe, kunal' Behind the guy names kunal, emerged Ayesha. Neev was gobsmacked, at first on hearing the similar voice, and then on seeing Ayesha. His eyes were nearly out of his sockets and brows raised in confusion! What is Ayesha doing on the stage? I think I am dreaming. He rubbed his eyes but there stood Ayesha again. He dismissed it as an illusion, not believing his eyes. It couldn't be true, he thought to himself.
Meanwhile, Milind dressed in a black shirt and trousers and decided to go outside and check the hotel's garden and have something to eat. Locking his door, he turned around and saw a mobile phone on the floor and walked past it but it had started ringing. That he could not ignore and decided to pick it up. As soon as he picked it up, he was to say that it was not his when the woman on the other line said 'Hello, Prachi' Milind could not ay anything back after that. He was shocked and happy and thought 'Was it his Prachi this woman is talking about…that means this is Prachi's mobile, she is here somewhere!' 'Hello..Prachi tum sun rahi hona? Mein ne yeh kehne ke liye phone kiya tha ke mein ne Rishi ko school se pick kar liya hai ok tum apna khayal rakhna bye'
Without another thought, Milind ran to receptionist's desk and asked for Prachi Mishra 'Mr. Mishra she is in the theatre room probably, if not then her room is no. 403' 'Thankyou'.
Prachi looked at her watch, it was 3pm and by now Hina must have picked up Rishi. I need to call her, she thought. She looked through her purse but could not find her mobile. In hurry, she got up from there and went upstairs to her room, thinking that she must have dropped it on the way. However, when she reached there it was not in her room, or anywhere where she had been. There was still one hour left until the play finished. How could she get into contact with Hina now?
Milind could not find Prachi in the theatre and had decided to go to her room. He could not believe it; her room was right next to his! On reaching the room, he knocked on the door and waited with great anticipation; finally he was going to meet his Prachi.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#96
fahi...u wanna knw wat i think? u better give us some more...i mean how could u do this to our poor readers like hangin us in space with their meetin? not fair😒😆

hehe...comin t ur update..😲.milind in shower?! ok lemme gasp for breath first..omg!!!😆
the most hillarious part neev's reaction on seein ayesha.🤣..that was just too cute and too funny
aww...rishi..🤗.in a way he had unknowingly made their parents meet...am already missin kiddo😆

fab part🤗🤗🤗 continue soon..and i mean it...really soon😛😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#97
Fims hun thx a lot for the part so Milsi found the mobile and wonder of wonders it was Prachi's. Ok yeh Ayesha ki kiya kahaani hai why was Neev surprised to see her. Hmm can't wait for Prachi to meet Milind.... wat a moment that'll be.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#98
Great update...can't wait for Milind to meet Prachi...............a showdown to come!!!
Thanks.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#99
wow, neev saw ayesha and milsi is on the verge of meeting his long lost wife...please update soon fima, the story is getting interesting:D
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow Milind in shower! 😳
nice update hun!! Neev sees Ayesha and Milind gets Prachi's phone.. both the pairs have somehow meeting!
now wonderin abt who opens the door.. will it be Prachi or has she already gone out of the room looking for her phone?😕
best part of the update is obviously Milsi in shower😳
continue soon hun😃

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