FF:Tujhe Mein Pyar Karun Updtd 22/12 Pt4,Pg 14

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fahimataq

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Shachi-Michi
thank god u update this FF darling😆 LOL

ya even i knw who dealer will be😉😳 Who????Milsi?? U reli think so?😆😉

but will wait till this part update👏

plz continue soon😃I will try to!

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fahimataq

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: shabzc1
gr8 update Fima, Thank you 😊 i have a feeling the dealer is milsi..lol why does everyone think its Milsi guess u guys will be shocked! 😆.looks like the next part will be very interesting lol I hope you like it😳Thanks shabz😳

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Mrs.Edward Cullen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

ok,if it's not Milind Mishra then my next horrible guess is Mallika Mishra and that will be really gross🤢so pls don't let it be sweetie.....pleaseeeeeeee.

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fahimataq

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: angel's life
ok,if it's not Milind Mishra then my next horrible guess is Mallika Mishra and that will be really gross🤢so pls don't let it be sweetie.....pleaseeeeeeee. You'll see angel lol 😆

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Rima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#65

Fima........bauahat dino ke baaaaaaaaad...kaisi hai meri jaaaaaaaan?

Firstly...you're not keeping a page index ? why why why??????????...trust me when I say this...I will need it often!! and the font size is still big😭...(hehe...I can do my nakre with you...dont kill me!)

🤣when I saw my name I actually jumped, like I was going to be called to her office...LOL!!!!!!!

and PHEEEEEEYEW! You're keeping Proteek a decent guy....he knows his boundries and will hopfully not try to cross them.

and thank you thank you thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuu for getting Prachi to call Shah house!!! That is what a normal human being would do!! cave under emotions...fair enough she didn't speak, but at least she called...at least she knows they're alive and well!!!

I LOVED the shift in Prachi's thoughts when she thought of her past and it melded in with the future and her saying the words liek Milind was right there with her.

I assume we will see more of the might Mishra when the deal comes through!! Looking very much forward to it!!! Thank you Fahima!! it was wonderful!!😃

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Posted: 16 years ago

#66

Hey Fahima you have started writing!!! Loved it so far u are really good! Cont soon B

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fahimataq

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Posted: 16 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: janu_2006
hey
gr8 part..thanks a lot😃

cont.sooon I will try to!

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fahimataq

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Posted: 16 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: zcbcc34
Fima........bauahat dino ke baaaaaaaaad...kaisi hai meri jaaaaaaaan? Haylo shelloooo 🤗 Mein achhi hoon what about u? 😉

Firstly...you're not keeping a page index ? why why why??????????...trust me when I say this...I will need it often!! oooppss thank you for reminding me...i will do that asap!! and the font size is still big😭...ok i can keep a track of which font size u prefer i will make it smaller next time have i said that before?😆(hehe...I can do my nakre with you...dont kill me! Awww no way! 😊)

🤣when I saw my name I actually jumped, like I was going to be called to her office...LOL!!!!!!! heheee😆 Omg see you are already preparing for you role in this! 😆 How did you like Arjun😉

and PHEEEEEEYEW! You're keeping Proteek a decent guy....he knows his boundries and will hopfully not try to cross them. No he wont cross his limits cos i quite liked Proteek and Panchi jodi..they were cute and all lovey dovey so he kind of knows what hes doing..Prachi is just a good friend...

and thank you thank you thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuu for getting Prachi to call Shah house!!! Aw you're welcome! That is what a normal human being would do!! cave under emotions...fair enough she didn't speak, but at least she called...at least she knows they're alive and well!!! Yeah I am glad you liked that! Cos Prachi is not inconsiderate she just ends up in dreadful situations which make her do stupid things but i really wanted atleast PL to know her daughter was ok.

I LOVED the shift in Prachi's thoughts when she thought of her past and it melded in with the future and her saying the words liek Milind was right there with her. Aw thank you! 😳

I assume we will see more of the might Mishra when the deal comes through!! Urm you will see if its Mishra or not😆 Looking very much forward to it!!! Thank you Fahima!! it was wonderful!!😃 Thank you hun for reading it!! Love your comments on it! 😳

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fahimataq

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Posted: 16 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: bbb999
Hey Fahima you have started writing!!!LOL yes😳 Loved it so far u are really good! Thanks! 😳Cont soon B Hey its been long thanks for reading b and hope collij is going gud😉

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fahimataq

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Posted: 16 years ago

#70

Part 2

'Thank you Mama' Rishi hugged Prachi as she gifted him his first ever playstation. Though Prachi was tired from today's work and taking Rishi and suprateek out, Rishi was still full of energy and did not want to go to bed. 'Mama, mujhe aur khel na hai pleassee' 'Rishi, dekho yeh games tumhari hain, kal bhi toh khel sakte ho na aur suprateek ne kal school jana hai, proteek uncle aate honge' At that moment, Prachi heard a knock on the door and opened it to see that proteek had arrived. Suprateek and Rishi had then waved goodbye much to Rishi's disappointment. 'mama ab mere saath kaun khele ga?, suprateek kehta hai ke uske dada aur papa uske saath khelte hain..mama mere papa kahan hai?' Prachi was astonished at this question; she never knew he would ask this and that too this soon...on his birthday....the thought never crossed her mind; it was too busy thinking about their life and how she was going to manage. She kneeled down and cupped his face 'Beta, aap ke papa ayenge aur jab ayenge aap ko buhut saara pyaar karenge aur har waqt aap ke saath khelen ge' She kissed his forehead and said 'Tab tak, mama hain na aap ke paas' Picking him up, she tickled him and then they played together for a while. Rishi felt content and happy as he had won over his mom in all the games. But soon after, sleep had overtaken him too and he dozed off. Prachi had then put him to bed and went into her own room.

Even though she had been tired earlier, thoughts of Milind and what Rishi had said today did not leave her. She felt guilty for the first time in her life; the way Rishi had asked her the question, it was obvious he felt his father's absence. She wasn't being fair to Milind or Rishi. But God had played with her destiny; what was she to do? Everytime she thought about it, she was not able to come to a conclusion. She needed a hint, a clue to find out how her family was, how her Milind is. Her only problem was Mallika, had she succeeded in her plans or not? Afterall, Prachi had left because of her. Confused about what to do next, Prachi went to sleep like everyday hoping that destiny would make her meet Milind again.

'Yes, Mr. Proteek I am coming tomorrow to see your hotel so it's final then, we have a deal' Neev Shergill said over the phone. 'Mr. Shergill my company and I would be delighted to see you, my assistant will be receiving you at the airport' Proteek finally said ending the phone call to Neev. Rima had found the lost file and done exactly what Prachi had said. The deal was so important to Proteek; he had met Neev last year in a business conference and they had personally decided to start a partnership with Shergill-Mishra hotels. Proteek has not confided about this to anyone because he wanted it to be a surprise, especially to Prachi, who had helped and supported him throughout the last 5 years. He had to make tomorrow very special and he decided to give Prachi the responsibility of handling what he had in mind.

'Sorry I'm late today Proteek, tum mujhse koi baat karna chahte the?' Saying this, Prachi walked into his office and sat down. She was really curious to know what he wanted to say; maybe it was about that deal, maybe he wanted to finally tell her what was going on. 'Prachi actually, meri baat abhi abhi uss company ke owner se hui hai aur woh kal humara hotel dekhne ke liye arahe hain. Waise unke saath koi aur bhi hoga; uss company mein internal partnership hai lekin yeh sab mein tumhe baad mey bataoonga, right now mein chahta hoon ke kal ki arrangements aur welcome tum karo' 'Proteek lekin itna kam waqt hai, yeh sab kuch karne ke liye'I don't know if I'll be able to do it' 'Prachi isliye mein ne tumhe yeh kaam diya hai kyun ke sirf tum jaanti ho ke yeh mere liye kitna important hai..mein chahta hoon ke yeh welcome simple na ho, isliye mein ne already ek play company se baat ki hai aur woh kal ek show karne wale hain hotel ke theatre room mein '.you just have to make sure everything goes well'' 'Ok proteek tum pareshan mat ho, mein sab kuch handle karloongi and congratulations!' Proteek handed her the arrangement details of the show tomorrow.

After that Prachi had been too busy and asked her neighbor Hina to pick Rishi up from school. 'Thanks Hina, phone Rishi ko dena please' 'Rishi, dekho im really sorry beta lekin aaj thoda late aoongi mein, toh tum thodi der ke liye Hina aunty ke ghar mein rehna and no shaitani' 'ok mama, bye' Rishi didn't mind because Hina always gave him chocolates and was really a sweet lady. She lived alone and that's why did not mind having Rishi over instead she was delighted to have some company. 'Don't worry Prachi, agar tum aur late hojayogi toh mein rishi ko khana khila doongi, bye'

Prachi arranged the times with the show's production to 2pm tomorrow as Proteek had said the flight would land early in the morning at 6am. That would give enough time for the 'owner' to freshen up and see the hotel. She was supposed to meet the production company in the morning again and also welcome them, which meant she would be late in the afternoon and wouldn't be able to pick Rishi up. On the way home, she thought about the deal again; working through all this felt as if something big was going to happen tomorrow. Prachi could not help but hope that whatever happened tomorrow go well.

Although there had been many times where she had been incharge before, this felt like an opportunity to move on in life and finally achieve her dreams, which she had left behind. Even though in the last 5 years, she had no family except Rishi, she had made a world of her own with her dreams. She wanted to have her own school for little children like Rishi and for this dream to come true, she needed money. Since Proteek had given her the job, she had started saving already but there was still more time to go and she needed more but with Rishi's delivery, her priorities changed. And now felt like the right time to move ahead. However, destiny had different plans for her.

Prachi waited outside the hotel for her staff to arrive and help her arrange everything. The decorations were complete but Prachi wanted to go through the plans again. She had become a bit like a perfectionist. On seeing Sonia's car arrive, she went over to the parking lot to ask about the rest of the people when she bumped into someone.

'Dekh ke nahi chal sakti kya?' The woman shouted trying to gain her balance again. ' Ayesha!'.' Prachi whispered as she looked up in shock.

😊 Do leave your comments and let me know what you think!

Edited by fahimataq - 16 years ago