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Posted: 17 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: nrasheed

ohh Jaanu in just 10 hrs you posted 2 parts. amazing... Dii u know nah who is my inspiration😉okay first off iluv the title, Kismath Konnections.. THANX DIII..... Its a name i got hooked on lately😳totally very snaazy...!!👏 Oh God this is really my day 😳

and i luved how robbie was joking with ronauk, he's got a gr8 sense of humour..😃 Ahem ahem dii its Jaanu's Robbie.So expect more😉

What robbie's house has become a girls hostel🤣EXACTLY!!!! AW realy Girls hostel is the PERFECT WORD😆robbie is having to leave his own house. Poor ro😛okay and i died laughing nandu kaka is got locked up!!! that was superb, and robbie making parathas, just like in the serial when he had atta on his face (brought back good memories.) Diii that was so so so sweet of u. thanx a ton😳luved it keep it up your humour and your talent for beautiful poetry is very obvious, you are a bomb of talent Jannu. My Good god i'm flat on the floot..*THUD*😆luved it.. tussi great hoi jiiiii😳👏 not as much as U jii😳 Thanchoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo😳Really U are a prior inspiration to me... And Whispers replaced Nacy drew from my shelf😳

Keep reading dii

Luv u

jaanu

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Posted: 17 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: sahib29

@ Jannu next part baad meh read karti hoon 😳

Okkie... but MUST read it okkie😎

jaanu

Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Yuvraz-Krishna

Mind-blowing Thanx a loooooooooot Krishna.😳

I love this Robbie - He so cute and understandable It is me nah who write it..Isiliye😉 and is kasturi Raunak's cousin Jii Kas is Ra's cousin😳

Keep reading Jaani

luvs

Jaanu

Yuvi Ki Krishna

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Posted: 17 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

Ok jaanu yh hatchoooooooooooooooooooooooooo has goton 2 me HATCHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO😆
wowwwwwwwwwwwwww ok uve amde ma day 2 day a new FF wd 2 parts hit the jackpot jaanu 😆 Thanxchooo Hummy lolz....😳
ok bwt the part first:
ok wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww his making parathas robbie mujhe bhi chakaana 😆 hmmm i'll send a parcel to u.Is that Ok..😳
ok raunak ure introduccing 9 gals to robbie He might be mad..right😆
w8 w8 w8 w8
b4 u introduced dm u shuld hav let dm tyk a look at robbie dy would be dre for years 😆 These girls are just fulll of airs and attitude ok..... Rude nasty gurlz😡
Ok poojas heer yay
Sapna KT very gud
Kanya kanya 😆 😆
Gauri kul
tanu yay shararati 😆 😆
adhiti
baby
ok teenagers stil jus lyk us init jaanu 😆 😆 😆 Jiiiiiii😆
ok kanya 😆 😆 😆 im sure u dnt mynd Yeah..WE dont mind😆
uhum uhum wheres our kasturi or is she stil plann on havn a smashing entry later on 😆 😆 😆 u know me too good babes😆
ok robbie in outhouse ok i thought hed stay with d gals hav a bit of fun 😆 OUCH.... He IS gonna have fun😉

Ok i cnt critizsize ure part although being short nutin else i just never expected to do it on that day.I got a surprise day off.So i just did it😃
ok sunday u promise naa u beter update it wd a long part n Kasturis gna be cumn so yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!! Hip Hip HURRAY😳
robbie get ready 😆 😆 😆 YAHOOOOOOOOOOO RO is ready with everready batteries😳

Ok Jaanu thnx 4 such a briiliant marvellous superb awesome FF so far
It rocks n so do u !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
👏 Thanchooooooooooooooooooo*BLUSH* BLUSH* *BLUSH*😳

Luv u laodz jaanu Me toooooooooo
xxxx
hummy
xxxx

Jaanu

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Posted: 17 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: mimi0295

Jaaaaaanuuuuu 🤗 I missed you like hell!! I just got your PM, and your welcome babes! Anytime for you, I'm glad you liked the siggy! Not only me Mimiii but my sis and friends too liked it😳U r one of a kind artist babes🤗🤗🤗

And WOWIE you've started an FF..and not to mention an AWESOME one!! *BLUSH* *BLUSH* Thanx a ton mimiii😳 I cant believe you've written 2 parts already- in ONE day.. I only have 2 parts LOL but I'm updating today! Will soon read it baba..😳

And gosh Im out of words! The way you began your FF- it was 👏 the describing words you used made everything so clear, and I could imagine everything that was going on!Thanchooooooooo actually its a kind of lucky start for me😳.I LOVE how you've explained the characters so far...Raunak seems like a sweetheart, Yeah Ra is a sweetheart..😳Robbie is always you know... the BEST! BESTEST when the story reaches RoKa fans table😉 and haha I even like Nandu kaka- whose becoming quite popular doncha think?Sure i always liked him....NANDOO KAKKA😳 They'll be like the 3 mukateeres! That's so awesome! Wait and read.u'll feel like hugging nandoo kakka.... he'll be the KEY😳

I loveeee how u used different actresses (who are all my favourite) for Raunak's cousin! Can't wait until Kassy shows up! Kassy.wow..its really sweet...

Im so glad your back! MUAH! Loved your FF so far, continue soon! MWAAAAAAAAH Will soon continue.

Lots of love,

-- MImi*

luv u toooo

Jaanu

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Posted: 17 years ago
#46

@Rosy.... gona miss ju like hell.... but read it when u are back and thancchoooo

Originally posted by: *princess*15

Welcome back Jannu🥳 Gash...the lil princess is here...😳

You started a ff 😲and aint tell me😡😆 but mei to besharmo ki tarah agayi lolz😆 lolz..im so so so so sorry babes.i thought i pmed u too..Whwn i came back i had tonnes of PM in the dhabha and i used to reply for 4-5 together and i might have missed u...REALLY REALLY SORRY..😊

Just caught up with your ff Jannu 😳both parts were mindblowing👏 Thanx lolz...Really really really THNCHOOOOOOOOOOOO😳

First of all lemme tell you one thing😉 Kismath Konnection is the best title👍🏼 i am crazy of this title since i saw it on TV😳

Part1

Ra have 5 girl cznz😆 so Robbie shuru ho jao😉😆 jiii as u wish😆

i wonder who is Raunak's secret lover 😉lolz ohphow..u know me nah...... who else is it????😛

Robbie is so cute as usual 😳lolz😆 LOLZZZZZZZZZZZZ😆

hatchooooooooo lolz😆 GOD another hatchooooooooo...hummy, Priya..u are spreading it😆

Part2

Robbie is making parathaz😆 i wanna taste that too😉😆 will send u a sample next time😉

5 galz are Devilz 😈for sure😆 nice intro👏 thanchoooooooooo😳BLUSH*

I know you have planned something for Kasturi 😉thats why you aint introduced her yet😆 Caught me RED HANDED😆

ok now you better continue soon im dying to read the next part😆 here it goes.....

HATCHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO😆

hatchoooooooo😆

LUV U
JAANU

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Posted: 17 years ago
#47

PART 3

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Raunak is busy getting ready to go and pick up Kasturi from the station.(She comes by train😃).

Ro is still sleeping on the mat😆 (Yeah on the floor.Poor Robbie😛)

Ra is too busy ironing his coat, brushing, mixing rava 😆.He sees Ro sleeping peacefully, hugging his pillow.😳 u know what Ra did? He went and just give a nice good penalty kick to the Rockstar.😆😆😆

Ro: OUCH...!!!

Ra:Goodmorning Robbie.😃

Ro:(Still sleeping)Hm..Goodmorning Raunak .

ANd with his eyes closed Ro gets up and as usual gets down from the 'bed'. Wait..where is the bed. Ro opened his eyes."Ow Shit... i slept on the floor😡...Gash... My back aches Raunak😡.U and UR nasty attitude cousins😆😆"

Ra:still the brush is in his mouth 😉:it wasnt me, u who said that we'll move out.🤢

Ro:Enuf..god kahaan phas gayi mein?😡🤢

and he comes out wearing a pink Tshirt and black cargoes.😳

Ra is shouting at someone over the phone.

Ra:BUT WERE U ALL DEAD?😡 ... No I need no explanations.i am coming right away.

Ro: what happened Ra? Why are u so tensed?

RA:Oh Ro...that new crap assistant bhi nah.. he just did a wrong transaction and the whole accounts is in a loop.I think i must go.Can u go and pick up Kasturi? &nbs p; {😳}

Ro:yeah its ok. But how'll i know her.😕

Ra;Hmmm.. Yeah she'll be wearing an orange suit. And she will carry a red hand bag.😊

Ro:Ok i'll go then👍🏼 and whats the time.

Ra:9.45 at Platform 3.

Ro:Ok Ra u dont worry and anything else.

Ra: nah buddy..bye..dont forget 9.45..😊

Ro sits down and take a sandwich. he cleans the mess Ra has made and takes a bath and sets off to the station.

on the way Ro gets held up in a traffic jam.

Ro:OH GOD...this Delhi traffic is so nasty..🤢

And as he waits for the green light he sees two kids(a boy and a gurl) sitting by the icecream centre and chatting so happily hanging on their parents fingers.😳

For one second Ro had his eyes filled😔. Ro had everything he wanted. Money, fame, glamour everything that a young blood wish for.But he had nothing a human really wants. He had none to share his happiness.his life was always a closed book. his story always dropped without an end.his smile was always incomplete😭.his tears were always lost in a sea😭. Being loved is what everyone wants.but Having someone to love is different. Ro had Raunak but what he and Raunak shared was not such a bond that filled all the void in Ro's life. nandoo kakka was a factor of Ro's life. but nandoo kakka was after all Nadoo kakka.

Ro's life never had a 'but' when his Mom Devika Sabharwal was the whisper of his life😭. His smile never had broken ends when his dad Purushotham Sabharwal led his way😭.Ro's soul never had a curtain when Allana, his dii was by his side teasing him and playing pranks on him😭.Ro never had to check his foot prints being washed away becos his family was the wall around him with no cracks. 😭

Suddenly Ro came out of his own world as the drivers pressed hard on their horns.Ro drove off to the station. All through the way Ro was mood off.😔

he reached the station and checked his watch It was only 9.10".Another half hour" he thought.

He went and sat on one of the benches near platform 3.

Life was a musical note for Robbie Sabharwal. he lived his life plunging in and out of music.music was not his passion.it was something much more. He seduced his pain into music and his guitar strings were the eyelashes that covered up for his pain.

The whistle of the train grew nearer. The 'jhuk jhuk' sound rang in his ear as if it is the triumphet of a saga. 'Who knows what the next second hold for me?'😊 Ro thought and moved nearer to the train that just arrived, searching the crowd for Kasturi. &nbs p; &nbs p; {😳}

he moved past the compartments calling Kasturi and then from one door he heard "ji".😃

he looked around. He didnt knew whether it was a shock that went past his soul. it was a shiver...an excitement..a fear...a thrill....

After 5 long years he met her again in the most unexpected way.😳

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it was kind of an sleepy part.i am sorry if i put too much stuff of sleeping pills. Next part which will come off in a few hrs

LUV U

Jaanu

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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏reserved am first yay 😆

ok first of all jaanu u uupdated n ure on 🤗

ok nw wd d part:

awwwwwww robbie sleeping on d floor.

ok raunak u dont need 2 keep on getin ready n ouch u gave robbie such a penalty kick awwwwwwwwwwwww

hahahhahaha raunak n his nasty attitude cuzion 😆 dnt worry robbie not all of us r lyk dt 😆😆😆 init jaanu

wowwwwwwwwww pink tshirt n balck cargoes 😍 robbie hw mny ppl r gna be fainting????????

ok robbie gna be piking kasturi up hmmmm orange suit n red bag.

ok raunaks their n nandu kakas nandu kaka dnt worry robbie soon enuf they'll be sum 1 soon enuf 2 fil in ure emptyness

ok wowwwwwwwwwww what dd kasturi n hm share in between dm?

n his so happy n shoked 2 meet her calling out kasturi through train apartments i wonder?????????

jaanu dnt keep me in suspense no more.Update nxt part asap

n keep up d gr8 work 👏

luv u loadz

hummy

Edited by PrInCeZz07 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

reserved am first yay 😆

i was abt to PM and now u came so early😆...U R too much babes😆

HATCHOOOOOOOOOO

so read fastttttttttt

jaanu

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Posted: 17 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: GAPS

i was abt to PM and now u came so early😆...U R too much babes😆

HATCHOOOOOOOOOO

so read fastttttttttt

jaanu

lolz jaanu i knw i was thnkn wen u gna udpate n dn i saw udd mmade a smile on my face ive read it n ave posted a comment.

tel me first wen u update nxt part b4 postn it lolz

xxxx

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