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Posted: 17 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: mimi0295

Jaaanuu! What can I say! You're telling me that I'm the best teen writer, and look at yourself! i still stick to what i said😃 U R the best... i really like UR FF😳Gosh,your FF is officially one of the best FF's I've read so far! AWESOME! I LOVED IT! mimii thanchoo so much... Really really thanx for such a cute one😳

How Can Raunak kick Robbie... and that too when he's made such a sacrifice by sleeping on the floor! The cold, damp floor! My poor baby .OUR poor baby.But all this sacrifices will pay him one day. And it also says Ro is a real frnd who cares for others etc etc etc😳 and above all NOT A FILTHY AIRY Rockstar.But kind yet attitude waala RS.😃

And you've really got me crying on the part where he sees the 2 children holding on to their parents, and he's recalling his family! Gosh, family moments really do mean a lot for a person! And poor Robbie never got that!Yeah right..Family is the best thing that can happen to a person.It means a lot to us. Having someone to guard our heart is not a simple thing😊 I really loved writing that part😳 thachoo so much u loved that part😳

And O M G! Update fast! I wonder how Kas-Ro's reactions gonna be! MAN! Too much suspense! He knew Kas from before? OH MY LORD! LOL! lolz will soon update it 😳

Please update soon Jaanu! And you're only 14! *shocked* 1 year older then I am! You rock girlfriend! Keep it up! thanx baes and with ur support i'll try to rock😳 keep reading

-- Mimi*

luv u

jaanu

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Posted: 17 years ago
#62

@Robii..Thanx a ton dear🤗🤗🤗.And do keep reading.i'll surely try improving....😃

@Kaajal..Thanx dii for that beautiful coment..will surely try keeping up a good work.😳

Luv u

Jaanu

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Posted: 17 years ago
#63

Ooh jaanu ! sorry yaar im soooooooooooooooo late 😕!

but iread all of the parts 😉 ... u rocked jaan😃! every part make me read more ... and u really hard-worker girl update really fastest !

just update more😳!

love u

aisho😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Karan Lover

Ooh jaanu ! sorry yaar im soooooooooooooooo late 😕!its really ok baby... no need for a sorry at all...

but iread all of the parts 😉 ... u rocked jaan😃! thanchooo🤗🤗🤗every part make me read more ... and u really hard-worker girl update really fastest ! thanx baba..i'll soon update it.probably in 1 hr.....

just update more😳! SURE and dont forget to read and comment okkie

love u

aisho😳

luv u too

jaanu

@Mimiiii...Thanchoo so much yaar..that was so sweet of u..Really really loved it a lot!!!!

Jaanu

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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART4

Robbie couldn't believe it. After 5 long years he met her..and that too in the most unexpected way. Ro stood rooted to the floor. 'she is the same.' he thought. Even her smile is the same.

Kas: *AHEM* Excuse me did i heard u calling my name?

Ro :( Slightly embarrassed) Uh..Yeah...I'm Robbie Sabharwal.Raunak and me are friends. He got some urgent work to do and he send me to get you.

He put forward her hands and she shook it.

Kas: aw..Anyways nice to meet u.Iam Kasturi Chawla.

For one second the whole scene went in pucca slow motion. The air blew with trance of love in it.

"kyon hawaa aaj yuun gaa rahii hai

kyon fiza rang chhalka rahii hai

mere dil bataa aaj hona hai kya

chaandanii din me.n kyun chhaa rahii hai

zindagii kis taraf jaa rahii hai

mere dil bataa kya hai yeh silsila"

Yes Robbies heart felt a very unusal feeling that he never had before. Is she the one he waited for all this days.

All the way to the Sabharwal Mansion Ro kept so quiet. He couldnt manage to thank his luck and he couldnt accept his luck too.5years was not such a short time.Whatever could have happened in her life? but she looked as pretty as he saw her 5 years before.

Kas in the mean time was thinking:"Oh my God what an airy guy is this.What'll happen if he speak two words.Its been almost an hour we met and i am getting so bored. Guess how Ra is having good time with him"

Finally they reached the Sabharwal Mansion.

Dush and Nan were waiting for Kasturi and so were all the others. As soon as the car came to the porch all the gurlz ran out and hugged Kasturi from left and right.

"Kas we missed u a lot baby" "Dii do u have any new games this time?" "Kas did u met Shah Rukh." *Blah Blah Blah*

Dush and Nan came out.

Kas got out from the gurlz hands and went to take blessings from NAN-DU.

Nan:Kasturi..how was Ur journey? How are JP and Kaushalya?

Kas:Dadii they are all fine and mom miss u a lot.

Dush:Robbie puttar can u pls put that luggae in?

Ro: OK Dadaji.

And as he was abt to take the HUGE trolley bag, Nadoo kakka came and took it in.

Ro went back to his outhouse and sat by the balcony. It was a real shock for him to meet her after 5 years. And even now he remember her face as fresh as ever.

He went to his wardrobe and took out a box neatly wrapped in satin cloth. He took it out and opened it. It was a beutifull crystal frame which he bought 5 years before as a present for Valentine's day.For some reason he never presented it nor did he threw it away.

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{tons of thanx to Mimii for this👏}

'Be mine Forever'.

He wanted to make her his forever.But he couldn't. He didn't knew why. But he couldn't.

'but why does the History repeat again?' his thoughts continue as the song proceeds…

jahaan tak bhii jaa'en nigaahe.n baraste hai.n jaise ujaale...

sajii aaj kyon hain ye raahen

khile phuul kyo.n hai niraale

khushbu'e.n kaisii ye bah rahii hai.n

dhaRkane.n jaane kya kah rahii hai.n

mere dil bataa yeh kahaanii hai kya

kyon hawaa aaj yuu.n gaa rahii hai

gaa rahii hai...

In the mean time inside Kas's room.

Kanya:Kastoo did u manage to meet Amar?

Kas:Nah..i hate that guy. YUCK

Kanya: He is not that bad.

Kas:Watever

Gauri:Acha Kassy ek baadh bathao, how was ur journey back home?

Kas:BORING ..If I had to spend another second with him I wud have killed myself. All the way he kept quiet as if he is Duke of England.

Pooja: yeah he is kind of over smart.

Sapna:not at all up to our standards.

Kanya:but he is a rockstar.

Kas:u ought to be joking Kannu.

Kanya:No.. I'm serious. Come, I'll show u.

Kanya took them to Robbies room. The moment Kasturi enterd the room she felt as if she was in some kind of magic land.

The red and white drapes… the huge round bed with red cover and white pillows, matching furnitures and to one corner was door that led to a pucca music studio. Casettes and CDs and DVDs are stacked neatly on rows and guitars and drums and a beautiful black polished piano was at the centre of the room. The walls were filled with photos of Robbie as a pure rockstar in his full swing.

Gauri: Oh my God… I need an eye specialist. I never saw that he was that hot.

Sapna: neither me.He looked like a dump old mum's boy and 'Appearences are real deceptives'.

Then Nadoo kakka enters the room with some flowers to keep on the table and was surprised to see the girls there.

Nandoo kakka:aap yahaan kya kar rahe ho?

The girls looked back.

Kannu:Why?

Nandoo kakka: What are u doing here?

Kas:We…er… we were just….

Nandoo kakka:its ok for now but pls next time don't mess with this room. Robbie don't like it and I hope u understand.

Gauri: Yeah its ok..

And the girls went out of the room making different faces.

The moment they reached the room, Sapna closed the door and kannu took out a whole lot of DVDs from her pockets.

Kas:Whats that.

Kannu: I just took it from there.

Kas: but…

Gauri: Kassy enuf of ur 'but' and come and watch this if u want.

Kannu puts the DVD and switches on the TV.

Mitwa….Mitwa
Love Will Find A Way
Jaaniye Heeriye ( Ro is walking in his room)

Mere Man Yeh Bata De Tu
(Ro remembers the first time he bumped nto her in the collge)
Kis Or Chala Hai Tu
(The breeze of love that swept him when he looked into her eyes)
Kya Paaya Nahin Tune
(The moments he spent wanting to meet her again)
Kya Dhoond Raha Hai Tu

(How he went searching for her in all the crowds)
Jo Hai Ankahee, Jo Hai Ansunee Woh Baat Kya Hai Bata

Mitwa …kahe Dhadkanen Tujhse Kya

Mitwa….yeh Khud Se To Naa Tu Chupa

Mere Man Yeh Bata De Tu Kis Or Chala Hai Tu

Kya Paaya Nahin Tune Kya Dhoond Raha Hai Tu

Jo Hai Ankahee, Jo Hai Ansunee Woh Baat Kya Hai Bata

Mitwa …kahe Dhadkanen Tujhse Kya

Mitwa….yeh Khud Se To Naa Tu Chupa
Jeevan Dagar Mein, Prem Nagar Mein (2)
(Kasturi just looks at the video of Robbie performing)

Aaya Nazar Mein Jab Se Koi Hai
(Kanya and Gauri are totally flat)
Tu Sochta Hai, Tu Poochta Hai
('Whats this Kassy? Its just another guy..'Kas thought)
Jiski Kami Thi, Kya Yeh Wohi Hai
(Or is it just another guy? She thought)
Haan Yeh Wohi Hai, Haan Yeh Wohi Hai
(sapna is blowing a HUGE flying kiss at Ro)
Tu Ek Pyaasa Aur Yeh Nadi Hai
(back to Ro who is looking at the frame)
Kaahe Nahin Isko Tu Khulke Bataaye

(He read "Be mine Forever)
Jo Hai Ankahee, Jo Hai Ansunee Woh Baat Kya Hai Bata

Mitwa …kahe Dhadkanen Tujhse Kya

Mitwa….yeh Khud Se To Naa Tu Chupa

PROMO: Jack and Jill went up the hill and...

Jaanu

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Jaanu 😃

Just read parts 3 and 4....your doing a fantastic job 👏 👏 👏

This FF is coming along really well 👍🏼 😳

So Ro knows Kas from collage days....but i take it they never spoke to each other....he noticed her and thats it?

Cant wait to keep reading......this was a surprise Ro found Kas after 5 years 😳

Like the songs you chose aswell....Mitwaaaaaaaa being the best song on RoKa and the first one from Veer Zara is a romantic number 😳

Keep writing sweetie your doing a great job! 🤗

Kay
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Originally posted by: Kay

Hey Jaanu 😃 Hi dii 😃

Just read parts 3 and 4....your doing a fantastic job 👏 👏 👏 Thank u so much dii.....

This FF is coming along really well 👍🏼 😳 God that made my day😳

So Ro knows Kas from collage days....but i take it they never spoke to each other....he noticed her and thats it? Exactly... love at first sight😳

Cant wait to keep reading......this was a surprise Ro found Kas after 5 years 😳
yeah....😃
Like the songs you chose aswell....Mitwaaaaaaaa being the best song on RoKa and the first one from Veer Zara is a romantic number 😳 I love both the songs dii😳 thanx u liked it😳

Keep writing sweetie your doing a great job! 🤗 Thanchoo di and keep reading too..its my dis suggestions and criticism that can make me better...😳

Kay

LUV U
JAANU

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Part 5

Three days passed since Ro and Ra are living in the outhouse.Ra don't mind it too much as he is in the office 24*7. But Robbie who used to eat and sleep near his guitar really wants to get back to it😭. He thought of many ideas and none looked so good.😭

Nandoo kaka noticed Ro is so tensed and something is the matter.

Nandoo kaka came into Ro's room after preparing some warm milk for him.😳

Nandoo kakka: Robbie Saab…Aap itni tense kyuin hai?😕

Ro: Me.. No Nandoo kakka..i'm alright.😊

NaK:no Robbie baba..something is the matter. I know you are not at all comfortable in this small house right.👎🏼

Ro: Arre Nandoo kakka aisi koi baath nahi. U R just imagining things.I am just really perfect here.😊

NaK:Robbie saab.i am not seeing u for the first time in my life.😃

Ro: Actually Nandoo kakka, this house is not the problem. I just wanna be in my room. That room is so spcl.u know that nah.😳

Nak:So why not go in UR Room Robbie baba. Its Ur house.😊

Ro:But kakka…😕

Nak: kyuin… Kya aap kisi sei darthei hai?

Ro: Nahi… no no its not the problem.🤢

Nak: Do u think u r gonna be thrown out of UR home?😕

Ro:No..

Nak: Do u think u'll not be able to hold ur heart if u see her again?😉

Ro:Nahi….WHAT?????😲😲😲

NaK: I said nah Robbie baba I'm not seeing u for the first time in my life. I know evything.😉😉

Ro:What? Apko kya patha hai?😲

Nak: Muje yeh patha hai ki, U don't wanna be in UR room but u wanna see Kasturiji😛. Kyuin maina kuch galath kaha?😆

Ro: but Nandoo kakka.. aisa kuch nahi hai…😃

Nak: kaisa..😛

Ro:Nadoo kaka… aap muje aisa kuin dekh rahi ho.😕

Nak: Hmmm kuch nahi.. I was just looking how can a girl change my Robbie baba in two days.😆

Ro: (Laughing😆) Nandoo kakka I changed.😆

Nak: Yeah..a lot. And if u want any ideas ofcourse u can consult me. I was a romeo in my good ages.😆

Ro: Aap aur Romeo and that too with this Charlie Chaplin face….🤣🤣🤣

Nak: Alright..if u don't want ideas..its all ok.. 🤔🤔🤔drink this milk before it gets cold.(Nak turns with a mock anger😉)

Ro: aree Nak..i was just joking. U said nah u know me for years.😃

Nak: Okkie… enuf..ab batha what 'KIND OF' help u want?😃

Ro: hmmmmmmm I wanna see her again.😳

Nak: Is that all?🤢

Ro: Matlab?😕

Nak: Arre do u just wanna see her? Or anything else?😛😉😆

Ro: Nadoo kakka😳… U know na iam not that type.😳.

Nak: Oh hoi was asking whether u wanna talk to her.😛😆

Ro: Awwww .. I just thought…😕

Nak: what?😆

Ro: Nothing..and yeah I wanna talk to her.

Nadoo kakka: Gimme Ur ear…..

*ashpush ashpush kashpush😆* (He murmurs something in Ro's ears)

Ro face brighten up like a Philips CFL bulb.

Ro: NADOO KAKKA Aap ek dum ek item bomb ho..👍🏼👍🏼 My God I was thinking and thinking..but It never dropped on me.😆

Nak: that's me young man…The great Nandoo.😎😎

In the evening..

Everyone was busy getting ready to visit the Shiv temple. Except Kasturi and Simmy. Simmy is having a fever so Kasturi decieded to saty back. After everyone left for the temple Kasturi asks Nandoo kakka whether he can make some porridge for Simmy.

Nandoo kakka gives the porridge and gets busy in preparing the dinner.Kas was feeding Simmy when they heard someone singing from the room next to theirs. Simmy and Kasturi got up and went cautiously to look who it was.

As they reached near the door of the studio they could hear that it was Ro who was singing.😉

naa hai yah paanaa naa khonaa hii hai

teraa naa honaa jaane kyun honaa hii hai
tum se hii din hotaa hai
surmaii shaam aatii hai tum se hii tum se hii
har ghaRii saa.ns aatii hai
zindagii kah laatii hai tum se hii tum se hii
naa hai yah paanaa naa khonaa hii hai
teraa naa honaa jaane kyun honaa hii hai
aa.nkho.n me.n aa.nkhe.n terii
baaho.n me.n baahe.n terii
meraa naa mujh me.n kuchh rahaa huaa kyaa
baato.n me.n baate.n terii
raate.n saugaate.n terii
kyun teraa sab yah ho gayaa huaa kyaa
mai.n kahii.n bhii jaataa huu.n
tum se hii mil jaataa huu.n tum se hii tum se hii
shor me.n khaamoshii hai
thoRii sii behoshii hai tum se hii tum se hii

aadhaa saa waadaa kabhii
aadhe se zayadaa kabhii
jii chaahe kar luu.n is tarah wafaa kaa
choRe naa chhuuTe kabhii
toRe naa TuuTe kabhii
jo dhaagaa tum se juR gayaa wafaa kaa
mai.n teraa sharmayaa huu.n
jo mai.n ban payaa huu.n tum se hii tum se hii
raaste mil jaate hai.n
ma.nzile.n mil jaatii hai.n tum se hii tum se hii
naa hai yah paanaa naa khonaa hii hai
teraa naa honaa jaane kyun honaa hii hai

Kasturi held her breath and listened to the song plunging into her heart like a drop of rain😳. Each and every word felt like some unknown magic charm to her.😳

'Why Kassy? Why? U know he is just someone?'

Simmy: Kassy lets go in pls.

Kas : (reluctantly) OK

Ro was expecting Kasturi to come in and he knew she was standing out. But as soon as she enter he draw a perfect shock on his face.😉😛

Ro: tum.. I thought none was home.{😆}

Simmy: Woh actually meri tabiyath teek nahi hai. Isisliyei Kassy wanted to stay with me.😃

Ro: Er.. iam extremely sorry Kasturi I thought none was home. That's why I came in without permission. I'll go now..

Kas who was looking down looked up and Ro was rooted to the ground as he didn't wanted to leave. But as soon as he see NaK waving at him to move out through the window he took a step back.😉

Kas: no no Robbie U can stay here. Its UR home right. We are sorry for disturbing u.😊

Ro: No Kasturi.. I'll go.😊

Simmy: U both say u wanna go out and u both are not the less going to go😳. So Kasturi I'll go and finish my dinner😳. Meri pichei pichei karke aanei ki koi zuroorath nahi hai.😳

And Simmy shuts the door behind her.

Kas was abt to go but Robbie called her.

Ro: Kasturi, if u don't mind u can have a chat with me. I am not that boring.😃

Kas: er.. ok.. and she sits down ob the black sofa.

Silence.. silence and silence…

Neither Ro nor Kas said something.

So after 5 seconds (in love 5 seconds have the value of 5 light years😉)

Ro: Kasturi which is Ur favourite song.

Kas: hmm bohut kuch hai. I don't have an all time favourite but right now its Mitwa.😳

Ro: Oh that's fine I love it..😳

Kas: Yeah I saw Ur performance. It was really superb.👍🏼👍🏼

Ro: Thanx.😳

Kas: Robbie Why are u so in love with red?😳

Ro: hm.. that's a good question. Well I just admire that color. Wherever we look we see red. Red is with what we are made of, red is with what our culture is built of, red is with what all love stories are made of and love is with what my likes are made of.😳

Kas: aw that's so cool. And me too like red a lot.😃

Ro: Kas but how did u know that I love red.

Kas: oh.. just step into UR room anyone can guess it.😃😛

Ro: Yeah sure… but none never asked me. Not even Raunak.

Kas just smiled 😊and looked away. Each moment she is talking with him, she is feeling more free with him. 😳As if she had known him for years.

'Kassy warn UR heart baby..' she scolded her heart.😆

Ro: Kasturi… what are u thinking?

Kas: Robbie answer me with ur heart..Dont u miss Ur family.?

Kasturi don't know why she asked tha dumb question 😕and Ro didn't know whether to answer that question😕. It was his really personal matter.

Ro: Kasturi U never know that. U know when I had a family – my mom, dad, and dii I used to live like I was a prince💔💔. Everyday seemed to be a new chapter in life. Dad used to tell me that when I grow up I must look after his companies💔💔. Mom loved me a lot. She really wanted to give me all the happiness she could. I still remember those days when she used to spend sleepless when I had a fever💔💔. She used to cook my favourite food, 💔💔she used to tease me when I do some stupid thing, 💔💔she used to play Chess with me,💔💔 she used to take me to mandir every evening,💔💔 and Allana dii was my best friend. She was such a cute person.😭 She fought with me for story books.😭😭 She played tricks on me when I was not expecting it at the least.😭 She used to cycle with me in all the woods😭. And we used to have a perfect family.😭. BUT… Kasturi do u know when Mom and Dad called me before getting in the flight they said that they'll never leave me alone😭😭..never.. but…..😭

Ro could not find his words.. he got up and took out the family photo from the table. " All these 15 years I was left with nothing but this photograph. I... I…😭

Kas become really shocked to see such a Robbie. She never expected that part of Robbie..not the least..

She slowly approached him and put her hands on his shoulder:

"Robbie I'm really sorry. I am so sorry.. but I just know one thing. Life doesn't end here Robbie. Ur parents promised that they'll be with u forever and they are."

Ro looked up surprised. Kasturi continued.

"Robbie death is something inevitable. None can throw away the shadow of death. It will get u one day. It is a guest who comes in without knocking. And when it leaves there remains chunks of sorrow. But those are just some pieces. Life can never be a book of joy. What u have to do is to complete what UR parents wished u to do. UR dad wanted U to handle all his business. But U never did that. I know its not UR mistake Robbie. U were so shattered. I can understand that. But Robbie it is the time U set to complete what UR parents wanted U to do. U love red nah Robbie. Do u know red shows courage and bravery. Ro its UR turn to show courage and fight with the faith that betrayed u. U must not set down UR responsibilities. U might be destined with something. It never comes to u until u go for it. So just keep urself steady and be the real hero.😊"

Kasturi left the room leaving a shocked Robbie.

LUV U

Jaanu

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Jannu .. update kar diya main kal read karungi ..cos am not feeling well 😕..and tumhare PM ka reply bhi kal karungi

Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ok Jaanu u updated n dt 2 parts yayyy!!!!!!! 😆 😆

Il read it along as i post d comment
Ok wd part 4:
Dy met robbie remembers kasturi but kasturi dnt i wonder what happend between dm
Yh robbie she is d 1 who your heart has been waiting for.
although it wil break so mny more hearts 😭 right jaanu
😆 😆 😆 kasturi you fynd robbie broing he aynt 😆 😆
ok hav dy made robbie a servant or sumthng???????
ok wowwwww a gift robbie n u neva gave it 2 ny 1?????
😆 😆 😆 majic land kasturi your gna fall in love with his room
ok awwwww robbie you remembering the tyms wd kasturi through Mitwa ok jaanu im seriously jealous 😆 😆 😆
Jack n Jill went up d hill kaisa promo jaanu 😆 hatchooooooooooooooooo

Ok nw part 5:
Nandu Kaka u understand robbie perfectly ok now how is he gna be perfect in a lil house n dt 2 on his own 😆
Ok hw dd nandu kaka knw dt he wanted 2 c kasturi 😕
😆 nandu kaka a romeo in his good ages 😆
Charlie chaplin face robbie u jus kil it (or shal i say jaanu u kill it) 😆
Robbies face lightining wd a philips cfl bulb ok what dd nandu kaka say 😆 😆 😆
Ok robbie singing i wish i was in dt house 😡 😡 😡
kasturi carry on lsitenin 😆 😆 😆
ok silence silence silence
Ok they both love red wowwww 😆 😆 😆
awwwwww robbie n his dad
robbie n his mum
n robbie n his sis
awwwwwwwwwwwww
ok go kasturi go kasturi 👏
red is a colour of courage and bravery well said kasturi
be the real hero
Ok kasturi u left leaving robbie shocked
nw his gna be dreamin of what u syd n dreamin of u
Keep up the gr8 work
👏
Jaanu what gr8 2 parts
But nw u have 2 update soon wen u cn
luv u loadz
Hummy
xxxxxx

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