Whispers in Wind (the game)Pt. 40PG 115 - Page 4

@krishi okies did the correction and thank you, i need someone to check that i'm not making any mistakes,and your comments help me to remember the pieces of the puzzle😃 cause if i forget i'm sure you will correct me...correct!!😛 and yes i will defintely try to post 2 a day, for my parts are short and therefore one during the day and one at midnite my time... okay...chaalegya...yeah i have to start telling you guys some of the secrets warnah tum log bhaag jaoi gayh right???

JP the butler i died laughing at that myself...😆

robina😆

^^^And u know wats the most hilarious thing??? I imagined JP dressed as Nandu the butler in SS house, with tat black suit and small charlie chaplie moustache🤣

Aaaawwwww tats sooooooooooo sweet of u Robina ki u ll update 2 parts.... And Iam just abt to complaint abt the length of the parts.....

Increase the length and post lambhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ones.... Becos of ur font and size, u r able to escape from us, warnaaa I wud have been haunting u to post some really biiiiggggggggg parts😆😆

Robina! 🤗 ....just caught up with the parts 3 and 4! I am loving the suspense !😳 So Robbie and kasturi will meet at paradise point 😆 and Robbie looks to have well-planned his moves. I am eager to know how he check-mates Devika...I really wish his revenge extracting is from Devika and not kasturi.

I have a bundle of question...what is kas secret past? how is Robbie connected? OK so the crystal statue is not kastu's but something connected to her right? Atleast solve some of the mysteries tom! 😆 Shivani is the secretary and Raunak has to still marofy entry! 😆 I loved the way u did the transformation like how Shivani was talking about sending the email and next step how Robbie receives the email! 👏

What JP is Robbie's butler..how sweet a revenge u have taken! 😆 Where is kaush? OMG even JP has a secret! You are turning this into a suspense thriller yaar! 😆

I cant wait for Robbie and kasturi to meet! 😳 Continue soon dear! [:$] with looong parts!😆

tadpake marne ki plan hai ...yaar jaldi continue kar warna 😡 😡 😡 😉 😉 😉

I am dying plz continue...meri akhri khwaish hai 😆 😆 ....yaar fantastic storyline beats the actual storyline...!!!Well, I wont ask u questions about the FF I kinda like suspense.....but I hate unfinished tales....
so plz just continue..hope you can smell my desperation!!!

Robinaaaaaaaaaaaa wow dear Greattttt parts 4,5 🤗

U are very brilliant Writter 👏👏...Mujhe nahi maloom tha ki main teri bhi Fan ban jayungi 😳....i have no words for u ...cos u ar just perfect 👏👏

aur tumne itne saare suspence bhi rakhe hai 😆..jaldi bata na ki kya hai 😆...kastu ka past ,JP ka past ?? jaldi bata kya hai ???😆😆....and Robbie aur kastu ko kab milwa rahi hai ?😳😆...

and JP butler? 🤣🤣..thank god usse teri FF meh kuch kaam toh milaaaaa😆😆

....chal ab jaldi se next part post kar 😛....aur RK ki meeting karwa 😳.....aur part ko toh longggg likhnaaaaa😆...arre bahut jaldi khatam ho jata hai 😆

This is forrrrrrrrrrr uuuuuuuuuuuu🤗🤗🤗

Manpreet

Originally posted by: sahib29

and JP butler? 🤣🤣..thank god usse teri FF meh kuch kaam toh milaaaaa😆😆

Manpreet

mannu that os a good point..I think Robina is on the way to reddem some of her fav. characters!😉😆

Originally posted by: RK_fan111

mannu that os a good point..I think Robina is on the way to reddem some of her fav. characters!😉😆

Haan yaar robina apne Fav. charcters ki image kharab nahi karti 😆...paddu i think ....JP ka past toh mujhe samaj aa raha hai 😉...kahi kastu JP aur Devika ki beti toh nahi 🤣...aur kastu ko bhi maloom ho ki wo devika aur puru ki beti nahi ...yahi hai suspense 😆😆...cos devika ne alana ko bhi toh kaha hai ki main kabhi apni betiyo meh farak nahi karti ...that means kuch garbard hai😉 🤣🤣

Haan yaar thats a good guess...chalo robina has made us scratch our heads..eh toh BT serial se bhi adhik suspense wali story hain! 😆

👏 👏 👏 iv just been through all four parts Robina!!!!! your FF is great 😃 😃

It should be called 'Suspense in the wind' 🤣 🤣 Theres so much going on.....Kasturis past, Robbies revenge, Devikas worries........ 😆 😆 cant wait to find out how it all comes together

Great start!! 👏

Kay

Originally posted by: Kay

It should be called 'Suspense in the wind' 🤣 🤣 Theres so much going on.....Kasturis past, Robbies revenge, Devikas worries........ 😆 😆 cant wait to find out how it all comes together

OMG Kay u are toooo muchhhh🤣...and tu robina ka mazak bana rahi hai 😡

Manpreet