Whispers in Wind (the game)Pt. 40PG 115 - Page 3

Robinaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, u writing an FF???😲 Even my reaction was this seeing ur name...

I read it, And I want to ask u if Devika is the main lead in this FF??😆😆 And is this based on Puru-Devika relation?

The first part seems very interesting and I know tat u have made lot of changes in Devika to make her a gud mother in ur FF😆.... U have really carried the suspense of Kas's past well in this part....

Sooo, Continue sooooooooooooooon and I want to see how u take this story..... this sure is going to be one Desi story FF with foreign actions/dialogues [Like the phrase keep the porch light on]😆😆😆

Oyyyyyeee u didnt give an identity to Robbie???😡😆😆 I dont mind giving my surname to him😆

Sooo, All the Best as I know u sure must feeling like a nervous wreck😆

@krishiii, thank you for the words of encouragment and nope this is a robbiee kasturi story, but yes devika will have a huge role to play, and puru's role i'm still thinking about...and yup this fanfic will have i geuss more of a western aura to it, for well me unfortunatly only visited India once and that was when i was very small..so i geuss i could call them bloopers...cause something i just wont know...like the porch line...good catch.. hope to keep your interest peeked...

Part 3...

recap, Robbie is planning to come to India..to reap his revenge...On an resort in India......

Kasturi Saberwal layed by the pool trying to focus on reading a book... but couldnt concentrate because of the kids playing in the pool, she found her eyes watching them as they froliced away in the pool, no worries no burdens of life. ohh life was passing kasturi by she thought, this year she would be turning 26...most of her college friends were and or getting married..Lekin Kasturi for some reason when ever mom brought up marriage her heart just wouldnt respond, and it wasnt like kasturi shaadi nahin karna chaati thi, in fact she did, Kasturi so wanted to be able to give her heart to a man that would love her for her, make her feel complete. Lekin milligah kahan aasa larka...kasturi shook her head in despair. Truth be told there was a part of her life that kasturi new was missing, and it was a huge part, she never confessed to her mom, but there were nights that she would dream of someone drowning, and as much as she tried to lift the fog the person was never revealed, was it me? kasturi couldnt even answer that simple questions. it was slowly becoming a bane to her exisistence..and then there was the fact that everytime she looked at a guy her mother would like her to consider to marry, how was she suppose to tell her mom that mom, i think i know what i'm looking for, i know what he looks like, yet i dont? kasturi slapped her forehead, yeah right try telling that to my mom, she'd pack me off to some loony bin.. 😕Kasturi always wanted to go back to Switzerland,to try to piece the past 4 yrs of her life, but her mother wouldnt let her.. but in her heart kasturi new that a very huge part of her life was empty, literally a black hole..If her mom found out kasturi was secretly seeing a psychiatrist to try to jog her memeory, and she had made a break through.. she had mentioned a crystal statue...just then a waiter came up and handed her a piece of paper she thanked him as she took it and read, that her flight was booked, for tomorrow at 9 am.. a smile light up on her face, i'm coming home....and she got up and went to pack... kasturi failed to notice that someone had taken a couple of pics of her...

Swiss alps...

Robbie was getting ready to pack his bags for he couldnt say when or if he'd be coming back...if all went according to plan perhaps India main he settle hojayonga...he smirked...the packers were hustling and bustling around his office, and one of the packers reached for the statue, robbie said sorry please dont touch that statue.. i'll pack it thanks...

packer:but sir Miss. Anita said for us to pack everything in the office.I'll pack it really well and put a fragile sticker on it sir..

robbie: no thanks please let be...i'll do it myself..

Robbie:(thinking to himself) god i should loosen up a bit, i'm so uptight...i almost chopped the poor guys head off..but what the statue has been with him for 5 yrs..it has been with him throught it all. the good and the bad times..

Packer: sir must be very important to you.. given to you by a luved one?

Robbie didnt realize the packer hadnt moved away and was talkin to him: yes its irreplacable to me.. worth more then i can say...

Packer: ahhh sir given to you by your girlfriend?

Robbie: she was way more then that...and he smiled...

Packer: is she not with you anymore?

Robbie:sadly no she is not, but thats about to change...or so i hope.

Packer: where is she sir?

Robbie: Who?

Packer: This lady luv of yours?

Robbie:oh yeah sorry dont you have some packing to do? for my flight is off soon. i'd like you out of here in the next 3 hrs.. thanks,. and guys you did a fantastic job.. thanks...robbie grabbed his Canali Rain Coat and walked out of his office, holding the statue..

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, robina. what a lovely ff. it's very different ff than all the ffs i have ever read. u describe everything very well. loved robbie's character in this ff. and kasturi seeing a psychatrist 😲 😆 can't wait until the whole story is revealed. please write the next part soon.

love
harman 😛

Robinaaa😃

I have a request yaar... Can u index the parts and the page numbers on the first page? It will be easy for members to find the parts if they missed😳

And also, If u update ur FF then can u please edit the title and write the part number and page number u posted the part😳

This is becos I only read part-1 and now Iam seeing Part-3, So I missed reading Part-2.... Will leave my comments once I finish reading both the parts😆

@herman thanks soo much for stopping by and giving my fanfic a read, soo sweet that you liked it, yeah i get that comment alot that it is different, but is that really good or bad?? i'll be happy with in btween the two..😆 but i know i'm a total novice at this and its gonna take time for me to get it right..bare with me thanks..means alot to read comment....

robina

@krishi gr8 idea and will do it right now... see these were the bloopers i was talking about, its gonna be awhile for me to get this right.. 😆

Part 4:

Recap Kasturi and Robbie both are heading to New Dehli...

Kasturi's flight landed on time and she took a taxi home..as she approached her home, her cell phone rang.

devika: Kasturi kahan hoi tum? Tumhara flight time pe tha.. and its shows its landed on time...

Kasturi: Mom main ghar ke paas hi hoon, bas thora dheer main poonchrahi hoon.

Devika: teek hain.. i'll be waiting dear.

kas: bye mom.

Devika: nandu, kasturi pohoonch rahi hain, uska kaamrah set hogay hain nah?

Nandu : JI maaam, saarah naaya furniture set hogay hain..

Devika: great nandu, kas is going to luv it.... ohh i hope...

Kasturi enters her home, and runs to hug her mom. devika give her a once over look and says: kasturi did you loose even more weight? bohut kamzoor hoka aayi hoi?

kasturi: woh issliya mama, kunki wahan naanduu ka khaanah nahin miltah hain, in baarh baarh hotels main...infact jitnah mengha khaanah uthanah hi kaam khana hota hain plate par.. and she winks at nandu..😉

nandu: welcome home choti memsaab...kuch khaanah ke liya laaoun?

Kasturi: nahin thanks nandu, main flight pe breakfast kar chuki hoon. lekin ek nandu ke special chai milsakti hain?

nandu: of course madame.

nandu leave towards the kitchen and kasturi looks around mom you been redecorating the house again!!!!!

devika: well you know its a pet peev of mine... tell me do you like the new enterence? I thought well since half the people we know luv looking at themselves we might as well put in a huge mirror and a waterfall on the otherside, its says the flow of smooth water soothes the soul..... and the colors well i wanted to do something dark, so i went with the wooden oar color(a dark green mix btw mehndi green and brown) and the dark beige wall colors... ohh and i finally did my coffered ceiling in the dinning room... come take a look kasturi...she drags kasturi to the dinning room and shows off her grid ceiling with glee, kasturi says i luv it mom the ambiance is wonderful.. and i luv the black covered leather chairs...very chic...

devika : yes yes, baqui baad main abhi tum thak gayi hongi, so lets chat up stairs in your room... comeon....dragging kasturi up teh circular grand staircase with wrought iron spindals....as devika reaches kas's room she tells her to close her eyes, for she has a surprise for her...okay kasturi says...

One , two , three, tadaaaaaaa devika yells.....

kasturi upon opening her eyes to her new decorated bed room, wow mom, i luve the new furniture, the chaise done in white floral pattern..with bright throws. and her bed was simple it had a headboard of fabric,(moss green and gold fine lines, and a bench at the foot end...over all the room wasnt over done, very minimalistic but had a cozyness to it adn kasturi jumped up and hugged her mom with glee...devika smiling all her pearly whites...and laughed out loud... together...

just then Puru enters sayin: yeh awaaz kahan se aarahi hain?

kasturi runs to puru saying: Papa namaste and hugs him..

Puru: jeeti rahoi, aur bathoui kaasah lagay tumharah naya kaamrah?

kas: i luv it papa, aap logon koi yeah sub nahin karnah chaiye tha.

Just then from behind the hear

She's absolutely right you know...

devika, puru and kasturi all turn around and stare at alaanah who has just entered the room, reeking havoc on their senses with her new perfume...

devika: Alaanah what is that god aweful smell?

Alaana: mom its the newest perfume from Gucci and i simply luv it..

Puru: a little too much dont you think:

Alaan: hmmm: anyway main kya kehrahi thi, yes i think mom and papa app logon koi kasturi pe ithna kaarcha kyun kiya? she's bound to get married very soon and leave this house. (or so i hope she says to herself)

Devika: Alanaa kaasi baathi kareahi hoon, tum dono to hamassha is ghar ki betiyan hoi...tum dono main hum ne kabhi farque nahin kiya hain...

alaana: haan teekha hain, anyways mama mujhe kuch paasia ki zaroorat hain?

Devika: kissliya Alaana?

Alaanah: aap to jaanti hain na mama, aaj kaal kya mehnghai hoigayi hia, toi kaal joi outfit 10,000 ka tha aub 13,000 ki hogayi hain...

devika: alaan have you gone mad? i am not forking over 13 grand so you can buy an outfit... sorry Alaana, i just spent alot on the renovations of the house... and i did spent a lot on your room as well..aglaa mahinah main baath karengay, okay..

everyone leaves kasturi alone in her room...she looks around and walks into her walkin closet and searches for her diary, and finds that it has gone missing.. where is it she thinks and searches frantically for it, everywhere..Yeha kya horah hain.... just then kasturi gets a call from Shivani her PA from Saberwal Enterprises..

kasturi : hiya Shiv, how are you ?

shiv: kassi ki baachi aagayi tummmm? mujhe phone kyun nahin kiya tum ne😡

kas: sorry yaar, abhi phoonchi thi, tum kahan hoi, aur phone kyun karrahi hoon, milneh kyun nahin aayi😡 Foorun ghar phoonchoo shivi

Shivani:kas sunah please kuch zaroori kaam se phone ki yah hain main ne,

kasturi bohut parashaan hojati hai for she can hear tension in Shivani's voice, her best friend and PA...and says: bolo shiv kya baath hain, auntie uncle sub ghar pe to teekh hain nah?

shivani: haan kassii sub teekh hain, but yaar Paradise Point hotel and convention center is being booked up by this company called Kaspian Conglamerate for 3 months...is this not feel weird to you.

Kasturi: why would that be weird, we have international companies always stayin at the hotel/ and operating out of the coventions center besides its state of the art..and perfect for people to stay and do buisness from...kinda like home away from home...kasturi quotes her sales pitch...

Shivani says: kas tum nahin jaanti hoi, the CEO of Kaspian is coming to India to take over companies...trust me you dont want this menance staying at our hotel and operating in close quarters to us...i smell a rat yaar...

Kasturi: achaa teekh hain, aapni naakh band karlo.. and dont worry so much your get worry lines..on your forehead anyway its good to keep your friends close and your enemies even closer...if indeed that is what Kaspian Cong. is...and abhi this is just speculation yaar..chaal aaj raat khaan pe chaalte hain, i want to see the new movie race.. i was listening to the song all the way home on my mp3 player...i luv it...

shivani:okay to phir Kaspian Cong. koi main email behj dethi hoon, ke unkilya 3 floor of the convention center rent pe deyteh hain.. right?

kasturi: haan baaba bhejdo email aur tum forun yaha phoonchooo. i missed you... bohut saari baathein karni hain tum se....bye..

Swiss Alps....

as kasturi hangs up, she puts on the song Pheli nazaar at the sametime robbie is working out on this crosstrainer listening to Pheli nazaar... just then his Blackberry buzzes on teh coffee table and he stops and picks it up and reads the email sent from Shivani,, Perfect he says after reading it...

robbie goes and takes a bath in his spa shower sprays hitting him everywhere...comes out with a towel around his waist and his doorbell rings he goes and answers it. In walks anita...(who secretly has harboured a huge crush on robbie for yrs..) she like god that guy could be a greek god....

robbie: hiya anita

Anita: she stutters for a second before sayin i got Shivani email, seems like we have the green light to move to India, paradise point is a beautiful place to operate from...the change will do us good...

Robbie, was about to close the door when the fedex man was about to ring his doorbell.

Robbie: courier for me?

Fedex man: yes sir..sign here please.

robbie signs and take the courier. thanks and shuts the door...he looks at the courier and realizes its from the Private investigator... from india he had hired..he carefully places the courier on his walnut desk..and goes to offer anita some coffee.. anita thinking why doesnt he ever notice me, its not like he doesnt date girls just havent seen anyone stay...

Robbie: make sure i have everything i'll need to operate from Paradise point.. i want the transition to go smoothly..

Anita thinking to herself as smooth as your skin on your back? then to robbie she says: ummm yeah sure robbie no hitches i promise.. we leave in 2 days...be ready.

Robbie: I've been ready for much longer then that..

anita: say what?

robbie: nothing i said i'll be ready before that...goodby anita.

anita departs feeling yet again rejected, as she leaves she paases by JP saab, robbie's butler, robbies pretty much everything.. wrapped into one...she says her regards and leaves..

Robbie : JP saab kaasia hain aap?

JP: bilkul teekh, aur tum sunahoi, lagtha hain aap kahni jaanah ke tayaari karrahin?

Robbie: jee, bilkul aur aap koi main saath lekar jarahi hoon JP saab...

JP: par jaah kahan rahin hain hum?

Robbie: New Dehli shift hora hain hum...

JP stopped dead in his traxs...and stares hard at robbie.robbie chooses that time to turn around and look out his penthouse windows...

JP: sorry beta main nahin jaa sakoongha..

robbie: lekin aap kyun nahin jaa saktha?

jp: wajah aap koi batha nahin saktah.. sorry beta

Robbie: main aap ke bina kaasah jaa sakhoongha, you know how much i need you JP please, please agar beta kaha hain to maanoi bhi beta ki baath? and he pleads with his eyes. and JP nods his head silently....but in his depths was fear... for the unknow.....

hey your FF is wunnerful!!!I love it ...it kept me engrossed!!!sach me yaar I feel its time ppl like you replace jerks like ekta..wat say?

Originally posted by: livelygal

hey your FF is wunnerful!!!I love it ...it kept me engrossed!!!sach me yaar I feel its time ppl like you replace jerks like ekta..wat say?

hey Livelygal, you foresure can replace ekta's writers anyday, me i dont think sooo, but thanks for the wonderful kind words yaar. i mean it your one hell of a nice person, ohh i updated my part 4, sorry i have to do it in pieces cause of family...do finish reading robbie's part of part 4..thanks again'

robina

Originally posted by: nrasheed

hey Livelygal, you foresure can replace ekta's writers anyday, me i dont think sooo, but thanks for the wonderful kind words yaar. i mean it your one hell of a nice person, ohh i updated my part 4, sorry i have to do it in pieces cause of family...do finish reading robbie's part of part 4..thanks again'

robina

hey I really mean wat I say or I keep my mouth shut...This FF is really good ...You truly deserve the praise!!

Robinaaaaaaaaaaa, I just cudnt sleep after knowing tat u updated FF😆, So I had to read it...

Yaar, Iam going to point out some bloopers if I ever find some and I hope u really dont mind😃... The title shows Part 3 on Page 4 which actually is Part 4 on Pg 4😆.....

JP is Robbie's butler????🤣🤣🤣 Aaawww man, this is the best thing in this FF so far😆😆😆....

Yaar, ur FF is really mysterious yaar.... Its soo full of suspense and Iam very eager to know whose statue it is tat Robbie thinks of soooo highly and also wat is Kas' past... I understood tat she went thro some heartbreak, and wat revenge is Robbie talking abt? Aaaaarggggg so many Qs but the answers are coming very slowly😆😆

Pleaseeeeeeeeeee continue soooooooooooooon and update a new part everyday pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😃