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Posted: 17 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: RK_fan111

Robzi how can u say you are not good at romantic scenes with so much of experience ๐Ÿ˜‰ .

Paddu your sooo cute, yaar, but this is a forum filled with teenagers . bacchoi pe burah aasar mauth daaloi.. and yes i can safely say experience to hain but i dont think i can put words down but lets see when i get there..๐Ÿ˜† i'll pm you my first romantic scene to you.before i post it and you can tell me if its too much or too little.๐Ÿ˜‰

I would love to see how you bring about this love story and wow I am waiting for the showdown betn Devika and Robbie which looks to not happen in the show! ๐Ÿ˜†

yaar seriously i am so fed up of these BT writers kuch dhangh se nahin karteh yaar, and yup this was one of my reasons for wanting to write this fan fic....๐Ÿ˜† you know me soo well...robina.. and paddu i could never feel bad about anything you write..๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 17 years ago
#12

OMG Robzi...thats so sweet of you. You made that part at such a short time...and wow what a part yaar. ๐Ÿ‘ I loved the name 'kaspian' ๐Ÿ˜† ..and thanks for imparting some knwoledge about the share business! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
He's a bomb ๐Ÿคฃ loved that ๐Ÿ˜† ofcourse he is nah! ๐Ÿ˜‰ Anita here also! ๐Ÿ˜› Robzi cant stand the suspense yaar..is it that Robbie was taking care of kastu when she had amnesia and she forgot him when she recovered ๐Ÿ˜ญ ...looks very familiar to a famous movie!

Fantastic piece of writing ๐Ÿ‘ and dont ever tell me that u are not good...my heart went out to Robbie in that instant ..I could feel his despair! ๐Ÿ˜ญ He has made a crystal statue! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
This part had a comic touch. Looking forward for more dear!

OK agreed on pming me the romance part...I know for sure you will not cross the borders!๐Ÿ˜†
๐Ÿ˜ณ

Edited by RK_fan111 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13

whooooooooooot Fanfic ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ..i am shocked ๐Ÿ˜† give me some tme dii will read and edit ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

EDITED :

awwwwwwww Robina dii๐Ÿ˜Š..bang on๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘..i loved the title..๐Ÿ˜ณ

and what is this? Kasthu Sabarwaal?๐Ÿ˜† anyways nice swapping of charecters๐Ÿ‘..i loved the track ..but what is this u made Robby as 30 years guy..don't u ya think he and i have too much age difference?๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜†..arre kis ka nishaan hai ye..na koi surname ,na koi tail hai name ke peeche...๐Ÿ˜†..

ok..i am waiting for ur FF love track..don't u dare to tell me that i am still a kid..๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜†..i have grown up damnitttt๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

carry on i will wait for ur next part..๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Edited by sindhurd - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
Asalamoalikum !Ohhoo its that you Appi ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜† can't belive this ๐Ÿ˜ฒ


First thing first This was such a wonderful FanFic, you have a gift that many writers aspire to have... Not only the descriptions themselves, but the depth given to them actually make the characters and the setting peel off the page and implant themselves in the reader's mind.

You're truly an amazing writer! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ I was absolutely spellbound and didn't want your story to end. Do keep on writing;


I absolutely LOVED the first paragraph.That was nice kay kasturi as a devika daughter ๐Ÿ˜†or Robbbie 30 years ka keo??(Bingoo ๐Ÿ˜‰i know y he'is in 30s) ๐Ÿ˜†Acha Appi next time devika ke hair style or dressing kay bray mai kuch zaroor mention kejyea ga ๐Ÿ˜ƒ anyways ..jo bhee hoo Appi this's very desciptive no wonder it's fan fic of the week~ For me

And Thankfully this time i was on time ๐Ÿ˜ณ Gosh mera Paper hai or yeah sabb i was wondering kahee paper mai Fan fic he na likhdoo ๐Ÿ˜†

Well best of luck ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ and try to catch another parts very soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
OMG, Robina!!!! A FF from you!!!!!!!!!!!! I am stumped!!!! When did this start brewing in your head??? This was a serious surprise but a very very plesant one at that!!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

I loved the start and totally loved the charatcers too! I have already started to like Devika here!! And seems like it will be one helluva love story, to think that Robbie has risen to such levels of height for the sake of Kasturi!!
And the showdown between Devika and Robbie......would love to see that!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
And the title of the FF is beautiful!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Waiting for the next part!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh my God!!! I did a double take when I saw ur name next to Fanfic... u r an awesome writer yeh to mujhay putaa thaa but u have such a great imagination wow.... loved it loved it loved it... ๐Ÿ‘ .... I am speechless right now cuz I dont know what else to say except that I love the entire concept ... cant wait for the next part ๐Ÿ˜ณ .... amazing , fantastic ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Fari
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: nrasheed

Devika enters her home of 30 yrs and looks around, she feels the emptiness of her home, that was once filled with kids running up and down and all around.. and wonders where did that chaotic life go... it past by so quickly... all her kids hold a piece of her heart in their hands are they aware of it? she smiles to herself and thinks not.. for kids rarely see how fragile a parents is as they see that their kids once grown up dont need them as much, the one small hand that needed us all of assuden cant even fit in her palm anymore...



Damn right, Robina u r such a bad writer๐Ÿ˜• If u ever say any such thing again, i swear i am gonna bombard u with kasturi's bhashans๐Ÿ˜ก

U R DAMN GOOD!!!!!!!๐Ÿ‘ Fantastic piece of writing, absolutely loved every single word.๐Ÿ˜ณ

shwetha

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Robinaaaaaaaaaa๐Ÿ˜ฒ...mujhe lag raha hai ki meri aaj neend puri nahi huyi ....main koi Sapna dekh rahi hoon?? ...sach meh yee tune hi thread start kiya hai ...teri ID koi aur toh use nahi kar raha ๐Ÿ˜†....OMG ..i can't believe yaar ...ki tune FF start ki ๐Ÿ˜ณ...Thank god mera ek kehna toh mana ๐Ÿ˜ก...nahi toh mujhe keh rahi thi ki nahi likh sakti ๐Ÿ˜†..pagal ๐Ÿ˜ณ...aur tune mujhe PM nahi kiya ki main aaj start kar rahi hoon ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ญ

First i love tittle name ๐Ÿ˜ณ....Bahutttt hi aachi Starting hai ๐Ÿ˜ณ...I really loved Both parts ๐Ÿ˜ณ...aur yee kya kastu ko sabarwal bana diya ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿคฃ...arre wo chawala hi theek thi ๐Ÿ˜†...and Puru ko tune ekta ki tarah soffe par araam ke liye bitha diya ๐Ÿคฃ..arre koi toh bechare par taras khayo ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜†

I love uuuuuuuuuuuuu yaaar ...๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

ab jaldi se Next part Post karna ...aur long parttttttt๐Ÿ˜ณ

Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago
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That's my expression right now...๐Ÿ˜†...I couldn't imagine you writing a FF di robs...Cholly but no that was true...Anyways, I am not really a FF person, for I can't handle the suspense...I am here nevertheless, to give you my support, to tell you that you are an awesome writer and this FF will turn out to be the best thing that happened to this section...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Luv,
Raksha

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Posted: 17 years ago
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@livelygal thanks for all the clapping emoticons, the appaluse went to my head there for a second, thanks for taking the time out and reading...hope to keep you interested...

@RK oyee that crystal statue is not kasturiiiiii๐Ÿ˜† and dont make this into a comedy yaar, but hold that thought cuase you never know๐Ÿ˜‰

@Sindhuuuu you came and read thank youuu, for spending your time yaar, i hope it turns out the way i imagined, but you know i've never really had a creative side to me...i'm very by the book, lets see... how far i can go. but your praise makes my heart sing....and honestly robbie's last name i'm still deciding on it...๐Ÿ˜† but hopefully by the next part i'll have decided by then...or is story main bohut se bloopers hongaay, have to keep with the bt style right???๐Ÿ˜‰ seriously thought luv you sindhuu for your kind words....๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿค—

@Wajeeha, your praise and kind words have me โ˜บ๏ธ.. i dont think its that good yaar, but seriously i know this is more your feeling towards me.. and know that i cherish every word you wrote.. thank, i know your soo busy and you still took the time to read, means the world to me...and i will foresure describe devika's wardrobe to you and hopefully more of robbies and kasturi's too...

and bingo on why robbie is 30๐Ÿ˜‰

luv appiiii๐Ÿค— my prayers are with you.. best of luck on your exams....

@Jima thank you for reading and replying, -tive or +tive will be much apprecieated for its my first time writing ever a story... so please will hold you to that.. and hope to keep all of you interested in the story...hope the creative juices keep flowing..๐Ÿ˜ƒ

@Pragalbha wow, i have to be honest and say i didnt think you would read my fanfic.. i think maybe cause i feel that my writing skills arent as polished as say yours or JW's.. i admire both of your writing skills alot...the creative flow that comes from both of you amazes.. thank you for taking the time out, i really hope i can keep you interested enough to come back and keep reading my fanfic..

@Fariiiiii๐Ÿค— OMG yeah i agree, i myself am hoping to be able to see this story through yaar...wish me the best of luck for i will need it dearly in the coming months.. means the world to me that you read and liked it thanks yaar....

@Shwets ๐Ÿค— thanks for liking my writing style, its a bit on the conservative side i hope to juice it up as the story progresses. and thank for your belief in me try not to dissappoint...๐Ÿ˜ณand please no kasturi type bhashaans, though your bhashaans most welcome anytime...๐Ÿ˜†

@manuu, aach agar story aachi nikhli to phir its not a dream but if the story sucks then tum ek bhurah nightmare samjhe ke bhool jaahnah๐Ÿ˜ณ i hope i just dont embarasse myself, i really hope this story turns out the way i want it to...and awhile back main mention kiya tha tumhain that i wanted to write.. i'm glad you liked the title, it took me while to come up with it...means alot that you support and wonderful words thanks ๐Ÿค—

@Raksha your surprised!!!! this is me after reading your post๐Ÿ˜ฒ i never thought you would read it i took a double take when i saw your name,but deeply apprecieate the time you took for posting your support and giving me the words of encouragement... means alot.. and yup i understand the suspense factor big time, sometimes i'll stay up half the night reading a book trying to finish it because i cant stand the suspense..so totally understand.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ƒ

thanks to all and hope not to dissappoint.. cant tell you all how much your words of encouragment means to me..

humbled by your luv and support robina

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