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Originally posted by: GAPS

THE PARTY

Priyanka( priya) as usual was the first one to arrive at the lake shore.She knew that the lake and its sunset was always so beautifull.But their once-a- month moonlight party made the gorgeous woman, look so sexy with a songs and masthi all night😳. "Why shd boys have all fun😉?" is what they said whenever anyone commented on their get togethers.
Manii:😲Arre Priya ki bachiiii kaisi ho tum😃.Aur Rohin kaisi hai. He is no more hovering around gurls nah...😆😕
Priya:Aree nah baba. now all he talk is abt you and only you. 😉Tell me yaar whats the secret of it..😉 mujhe khud nahi pata to priya ko kya bataungi 😕
Manni: (in a hushed voice) Kissi ko mat battanah...A fine pointed heels😆 ..and she winks😳 while Priya burst into a gr8 smile😃..(Priya is none other than my gorgeous Gauri Of Karam😳).
And as they talk on and on Jima dii, Pragalbha dii and Mannu dii comes in Mannu dii's i-10😉.
Jima dii:"Arre Priya..Manni..How sweet to see you guys.And Manii pls yaar dont sing tu Hai Wohi once more..pls..i'll faint..😆" im not a bad singer 😭
Manni:Ohhh Jima dii aap bhi nah...😆
And then Kasturi and Rosy arrive in Honda Pleasure(Pink).they arethe gals who are responsible to bring the food 😉neat and safe..So Kasturi is in her gorgeous stunning saree and Rosy in her choli..If there were any guys around the place, Mannu dii wud have had a job bringing them back of the shock😆...All the girls are so stunning and describing them will take away another part from me.😳
So all of them walk in to warm, cosy tent,with a fire outside it.The tent is decorated so elegantly and the chairs and tables are all waiting to be filled with food and fun.😳😳😳
The girls set to do the job.It is their party and they are the guests.So they love doing the job😳.And they do the chatting while they are opening the cases of food;
Priya:Jima dii yeh kya hai..(And she smells the packet before opening it....)hmmmmmmmmmmm Halwa.... 😃dii i am sure its the red one nah...😃
Rosy: Nah Jima dii its yellow nah....😃
Pragalbha dii: Its neither yellow, nor red it is brown...😉
Rosy and Priya together: BROWN...WOOOOOW we wud love it..😃😃😃
This is the thing that was best among the gurls.their induvidual thinking must be different, but they had many many more common likings too.😳
Kas:Waisei Manuu dii, tell me how is Alekha. Poor child, Dr.Jessi said both her sis died.😭
Mannu(looking up from unpacking the colas) haan Kastoo both the other kids died and we are not sur of Alekha😭. The accident was so bad and her internal bleeding is still serious.
Jima dii:Mannu dont worry yaar, life will not always give you happiness..
Mannu dii:haan i know it Jima😭, 'mera friend'Raunak always used to say this..😭😭😭
Manni:Mannu dii U R still crazy of that Raunak...😡 did i say dat😲 OMG im gonna knocked out by mannu dii😆
Praglabha dii:Never mind manni, ppl are crazy when it comes to stupid things. 🤣 🤣 🤣 lolz🤣
And before an angry Mannu dii could pounce upon Pragz dii, a car came and braked at infront of the tent.All the gurls looked up to see who is in it😕(it is an open tent guys).
Aishoo stepping out of the Scorpio..:TARAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA 😃Surprizeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😃 wat an entry aishoo😉
All the gurls rush out to hug and kiss their own Aishoo.😳
Jima dii:Aishoo ki bachiiiiiiiii So u R back..Hoo how we missed your choregraphy craze Aishoo..😳😃
Aishoo:But before i say anything, there is anither Surprise...
And the car door opens and out comes Robina dii😲..gorgeous as she can in her maroon Kaanchipuram saaree😳 robinna dii ur luking stuning😉😆
Pragalbha dii:ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOBZ... 😃and they oth broke into a strong hug....... the best friends since college days are meeting after 1 year.And as Pragalbha dii moves out All others take chances to hug her..😳 awwwwww best frndz r uniting😉
A man who is watching them interupts: Hmmmm..Now can I get the attention pls....😉
and all of them turnd his way.Kas's eyes nearly ropped to the floor.It is that crazy guy again..😆
And to her UTMOST surprise she hear her right ear drum, vibrating so hard becos Mannu dii and Jima dii gave two loud screamings 🤢
"ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOBBBBBBBBBBBBIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE" lyk kasturi whn she scream raunaaaaak nah😉😡"who Will Hug him First" competition went to a draw as Ro opened his hands fo both of them.( All angry girls dont worry😭.wipe ur tears..every gorgeous lady will have a day including me.)
Jima dii (So Surprised) Ro tu yahan, achank....I dont beleive it man..😃
Mannu dii:Me too..And Ro tum is stubble mein kaafi hot lagthi hai.😃😃😃.Do u still expt with UR look yaar..😳😳😳
Ro: Maans its cool nah, only a daring young man take challenges😉, esp a hot honey like me....😃
Jima dii: So true Robbie..😃
Manni:So wud you stop drooling😡 and may i have the honor to know who he is??🤢 😲 offcource i noe him yaar😉
Robbie The Heartbeat of 100000000's of gals around the world😳.And me too proud he is my BEST FRIEND😃.
Manni:So How come Mannu dii and Jima dii know him??🤢
Jima dii: Oh Manni he was our neighbour when we were at Delhi Medical College.He lived next to the Girls hostel😳😳😳.
Mannu dii:And all girls used to get up at 4.00 am before the bells to see this chakoo bachoo☺️☺️☺️( and she pulls is cheeks😡, and Ro pass another dimpled smile☺️)😆
Pragalbha dii who was standing opened mouth go to Ro and shake her hands and hug him and kiss him☺️, and so does every other girl.Manni and Rosy were hugging like lizards.😭 y didnt i get a
chance 2 hug him datz not fair😭😭 im not alone aishoo 2 😆
😃😉
b😕...(she was standing a way away, and Ro hadnt noticed her.But now he too see her)
Aishoo: Matlab, some of Rohin's friends who are at Saint Gits.
Rosy:OOOOOHHH I C..See Kas I always said nah we will never know when will the 2 spcl eyes arrive.😉
ro:Hoo U wear lenses then..😕
Rosy: aapka matlab????🤢
Ro: Naah i just asked becos u were talking abt eyes and all nah.🤢.😆 hahaha lolz dis is funnie 😆
urst out laughing 😆except Rosy..😡
Robina dii:Oh my dear Ro ki bachoo wo boys ki baadh kar rahe thei...U R a stupid when it comes to romance, still switched to tu Hai wohi😆..Arre yaar its time you change the made to "Mauja Hi Mauja"😆😉 i dnt mind😉

Priya:Abhi yeh bhashans shuru karo, varna food....🤢
Manni:Yeah food, lets move in guys..😃😆
And all of them move into the tent.
Ro: smelling the air.... hmmmmm.. unniyappam right..😳
Jima di: yah Robbie..I know you love it nah..😳
Pragalbha dii(pushing Jima dii out of the way)..but robbie, i made this Unniyappam with my own hands😳 and Jima neh woh disposible plates laya.🤢.
Ro: hiiiii Pragz "DI" so can i count you in the list.😉 ooo my gosh😲 pragz gonna kill u 4 dis lolz 😆
Pragalbha dii (blushing) :YEAH..Sure..😃😳
Manni: Ahem.... didi we are still alive here..ok.😡 lolz 😆
Rosy:Yeh Manni the thing i dont understand is that we youngsters are all controlled and controlled but yeh SWEET 16's bhi nah..😆 😉
And right then a group of bikes come to a hault infront of the tent and Rosy rushes out to see who it is.
Rosy: MANIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII IIIIIII😲 kya hua mujhe kyun bula rahi ho rosy🥱
And Manni and the others comes out running.Manni is shocked to see Laksh(yeah our Laksh aka Pulkit).
Manni:LAKSH 😲 TUM......................................................... ............😲 oooooo thnx jannu🤗 he was my crush be4 robbie😉 he is so cute naaaa😉
Laksh (stammering on his words and shocked to meet Manni at such a plce): Haan manni mein...woh......Aisha....Rohin.........🤢
Aishoo:So u know each other guys...😕
Manni(with a drawn smile): haan Aishoo yeh hai woh " Sonu Nigam ki Mallu version"😆 wats dat😕😆
Aishoo:Matlab..😕
Dr.Mannu:Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh I see... "Maine Pyaar kiya"😆 wala....Fantaztic .. i was looking for an oppurtunity to meet you😉 Mr....er..
Laksh: Laksh..Lashya Verma.😃
dr.Mannu: yeah..Laksya Verma...And this is ...turning to the twoother guys near him..
Robbie: oh..they are Girish😳 and Nikhil😳 my friends..Rosy and Kasturi know them.
Dr.Mannu and Jima dii throw a "How come🤢" look at Rosy, as they know Kastoo.😉
Rosy:ooh its nothing dii, we met in the match last day.thats all.
Jima dii:Phew...😃
So guys, welcome to our party and pls come in..........

im so in 😆i really wanna noe wats wiv me lakshya nd rohin 😕now post da nxt ASAP

And now the set is ready and what is b/w Manni and Laksh exactly😕.. Jaanei ke liye dekha this FF within a few hrs.....i just wanna type it thats al..
hope you enjoyed it and pls comment fast yaars..
Jaanu

thnx jannu 4 giving me a role in ur fic 😉😆 lved da way ur introducing us👏👏ur really talanted👏👏👏

lv ya lods hun🤗

mani😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

@Manni thanx a looooooooooooooooooot yaar ..i am so happy you liked it.So just know there is something b/w u and Laksh.Leave Rohin..😉keep reading😃

Jaanu

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THE JOURNEY BEGINS...

So all of them are in the tent which is illuminted by candles and lamps.😳
Aishoo :I am sooooo happy guys.its after a long time i see u all and i cant say how happy iam.😃
Manii:arre Aishoo ki bachii we are also so happy yaar😃(throwing a nasty look at Laksh😡😆)
Robina dii:So whats the plan Praggu?😉
Ro:Praggu....Nahh its not fine.i'll call her Pragzi.😉what do you say..😃
Pragalbha dii(rising a feet above grnd):Of course ROBBIe "DEAR"😳😳😳
Kas:So what are you doing Mr.robbie.(Puuuuuuuuure attitude in air)
ro: i own a buisiness group.😊
Aishoo:not a buisiness group. its an empire.😉
Jima:Yeah guys.."Sabherwal Group of companies"
Priya:Oh my God, Sabharwal group..so u must have to be sooooooooo rich.😃
Ro: yeah i am ..i looks and in money😎{passing another11KV wink😉}
Girish: Can you pass that "Sharkara varatti" Rosy😃?
Rosy take the plate and with pure hesitation, give it to Girish.She draw back her hands swiflty that the whole plate fell on Robina diis Saree..🤢
Robina dii:OOOOOOOOH my Saree...😲
Rosy:I am so sorry dii i did the mistake...😲

Robina dii:Its Ok Rosy, and now i have to change this saree varna ants will drool over me.😆
Jima di:No matter Robz, Pragz will give you a frock.😳
Robina dii goes to change while all the others fininsh eating...
And the girls were going to wash the plates when robina dii comes out in her frock.Vintage Clothing, Costume Jewelry, Fashion Accessories VINTAGEOUS.COM


Ro;oh my God Robina You look stunning in it.its a real change from a gorgeous lady to stunning cute girl.😳
Robina dii:arre tum bhi nah RO............☺️☺️☺️
Jima dii from washing the dishes:Aree Robzi ki bache yahan aa aur yeh saare carpets clean kardo warna woh Jaanu ki bachi humein maar daalongi.😈😈😈
So Robina dii go and clean the carpets and after some time the girls come back.
Nikhil:So whats the programme yaar.?😃
Mannu dii:Oh ho yeh kaisa bath Hai..U sound like Saif in the Ads of Lays.😆
Rosy:Oh dii..enuf..Nikhil we'll all go on a ride in the house boat and will saty on it.😳
Nikhil and Giri and Laksh and Ro:House BOATS.....😳woooooooooooow kitna mazaa aatha hai.😃
Ro: i had never slept in a boat.😳
kas:hello sir, We are not gonna sleep in the boat.If u are gonna sleep, u can use the whole lake shore😆.We are gonna hve music and fun in the boat alnight.😳
Ro: oh hooooo...That sounds really exciting Baby😃..I will have fun..😃
Priya:So lets walk to the boat.it is there around the bend.
Nikhil:haan chaei...And they walk to the boat.It is a two storyed boat.(If U havent been to the Keralite ones i'll explain how it is..i had loooooooooooooooot of times on house boats..The houseboats of Kerala are unique to this area of India.The house boats have fully furnished single double triple and five bedrooms with sundeck, private balcony with comfortable chairs, kitchen and toilet with WC. In addition there is also separate rest room. The spectacular beauty of Kerala's backwaters needs no introduction. A cruise along the palm-fringed waterways of Kerala in a luxury houseboat is the most enchanting holiday experience in India today. In this world of simple pleasures, you will skim past ancient Chinese fishing nets, water lilies, lush paddy fields, coir villages, rustic homes, temples and coconut groves. 😳)

One by one each get into the boat and the boys look around to see such a beautifull scene.😃
Ro:woooooooooooooooooow Aishoo u must had warned me yaar..OOOOh i love you so much and he hug 😳Aishoo😍(Aishoo ki bachiiii😡😆)
Jima dii:Ok guys move to the front part, warna Kas will pinch away my skin.😡
Kas(pinching again😡) Jima dii aap bhi nah.😆.
Jima ddi:OUCH Kastooo must do something of that nails.ok..😡
And they go and sit in the sitting room and the boat slowly moves😳.for some mins all of the enjoy the cool breeze kissing their lashes and the lake's smell hugging them..😍
Mannu dii: So lets start.First of all...She draws the lot.."LAKSH"
Everyone else:Hurray..Comeon Laksh....Lakshya..Lakshya....
Jima dii:So Laksh u must do what we say..Agreed..😈
Laksh:Haan😊
Pragalbha dii:Sing "Maine Pyaar Kiya" to Manni
Laksh and Manni:WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAT???😲
Pragz dii:Are u deaf?Cant you hear what i say.?🤢
Jima dii and Mannu di: LAKSHYA..LAKSHYAAAAAAAA..LAKSYA..LAKSHYAAAAAAAAAA
Ro:Come on Laksh..Its not a big deal..😃
Nikhil:Come On Laksh..Come on buddy..😃
Laksh reluctantly go to Manii and the music atart while The camera rolls to the past when Laksh sang this song for the first time..............


Maine pyar kiya pyar kiya tho darna kya
Akele hum akele thum kabhi khushi kabhi e gham
Muje kuch kahna hei kuch kuch hotha hei

Kayamath se kayamath thak hum thumhare hei sanam
E silsila hei pyar ka oh sanam theri kasam
Pyar kiya hei pyar karenge dilwala dulhaniya le jayenge (2)
Chori chori chupke chupke sajan ashiq laila majnu
Heer raja pyar kiya jaay
Muje kuch kehna hei haai.. kuch kuch hotha hei
(maine..)

dho bathan hum he raahi pyar ke hum donom dulha dulhan
hum panchi ek dal ke
daaku haseena dil ki nageena chandni roja Julie reena
mem khiladi thu anadi chalthi ka nam gadi
pyar tho hona hi tha..
muje kuch kahna hei.kuch kuch hotha hei
(maine..)

i say you must ..MUST hear this song..here is the link.it is from a mallu movie,CID MOOSA.😳

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kNHkMypJN9Y

Mannu dii:Hurraaaaaaaaaaaaayy..Manni that was a serious proposal indeed. So we'll keep him in excellent column.
LOUD CHEERINGS...👏

Pragalbha dii:Next is................................................ Aishoo👏..
Others:Yeah...👏👏
Ro: Rock it Aishooooo
Mannu dii:So Aishoo ki bachi Tum ek achi si dance karoongi humare liya.
Aishoo:Ofcourse yaar

and she dance for the song

haan Hai Koi to wajah
To jeena ka maza yun aane laga

Yeh hawaon mein hai kya
Thoda sa jo naasha yun chane laga
Pucho na pucha mujhe kya
Hua hai teri raahon mein aakar Pucho na pucha na
Pucho na pucha mujhe kya
Milega teri bahon mein aakar


Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe bithaye
Jannat dikhaye haan
O raama
Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe bithaye
Jannat dikhaye haan

Todi mene sare hi bandhan zamane Tere
Todongi na mein vada
Aadha hissa mere to dil ki kahani ka tu
Piya Mein baaki aadha

Dekho na dekho mujhe hua hai
Teri yaadhon mein kho kar

Pucho na pucha mujhe kya
Milega teri baton mein jeekar

Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe bithaye
Jannat dikhaye haan
O raama
Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe bithaye
Jannat dikhaye haan

Mere jaise lakho mile honge
Tujhko piya
Mujhe to mila tuu hi

Tu hi mere hooton ki khilti hui se hasi
Gila bhi piya tu hi

Dekho na dekho mujhe kya hua hai
Tujhe sapno mein lakar dekho na dekho

Pucho na pucha mujhe kya
Hua hai teri baaton mein aakar

Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe bithaye
Jannat dikhaye haan
O raama
Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe bithaye
Jannat dikhaye haan

haan Hai Koi to wajah
To jeena ka maza yun aane laga

Yeh hawaon mein hai kya
Thoda sa jo naasha yun chane laga
Pucho na pucha mujhe kya
Hua hai teri raahon mein aakar Pucho na pucha na
Pucho na pucha mujhe kya
Milega teri bahon mein aakar


Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe bithaye
Jannat dikhaye haan
O raama
Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe bithaye
Jannat dikhaye haan

Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe bithaye
Jannat dikhaye haan
O raama
Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe bithaye
Jannat dikhaye haan

and later mannu dii and Giri joins her😉.as the song ends loud cheerings👏."once more..once more..."
Mannu dii: no guys rules are rules.....😳
Mannu dii.:And next comes.......ROBBIE SABHARWAL

Jaanu
ps: guys i'm sorry but iam not feeling well😭.But i'll update tomorrow...hope u understand...😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
ohh so finally robbie hugggggggggggggggg me !!!!!!!!

iwas dreaming of him !!!!!!!!

ohhh just update soon jaanu !!!!!!!!!!!!

love uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

aishooO!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Karan Lover

ohh so finally robbie hugggggggggggggggg me !!!!!!!! yessssssssssssssss😃

iwas dreaming of him !!!!!!!! i know that bachoo and see HE HUGGED YOU😉

ohhh just update soon jaanu !!!!!!!!!!!! tomorrow baby😃

love uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu me tooo😳

aishooO!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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im waitin for you jaan !!!

Love U
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Posted: 17 years ago
@aishoo yaar i did 3 updates today 😲 😆 and i am sooooooooooo tired yaar.But tomm i will turn up with fresh ideas..promise 😃
jaanu
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Posted: 17 years ago
ok jaan will wait !!!


Love U
AishooO!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

januuuu ki bachi mujhe se carpart saaf karvarahi hoi, itnah kaam ghar mein karthi hoon, aub tumhari fanfic main bhi karnah paregah😡😆 just kiddin kiddo.. very amazing part, i dont know how you included everyone in this fanfic, its very wonderful to see us like this😳

aur yeah kya, itnhi khubsoorat saree barbadh kardeyai rosy ne, mannu ne nazaar lagadiya tha 😭😭, and wow what a beautiful dress for moi😃excellent choice jaanuuu👏 Pragalbha koi aub pragzi i like it..

and you arent feeling well i hope you will get better soon, jannu, rest up... and be back with a bang sooon.... cant wait to see what happens on this boat, what a beautiful way of describing and seeing Kerala.. i feel in luv just reading what you wrote.. aub to South India koi dheekha nah hain mujhe...

amazing fantastic jannu, and this time i thought it was a beautiful tent, with all the candles... keep it up girl.. luv you robina diiii

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Posted: 17 years ago

OMG...........What a party!!!!!!!!!!! 😲 Sach kahaa mannu..........issmei hum SAB ki watt lag gayi!!! 😆 😆
I absolutely loved all the characters!!! 😆 😆
Robbie neh mujhe 'Di' kahaa 😡 Chal koi baat nahi, mei na sahi lekin mere patidev toh khush honge yeh sunkar!!!! 🤣

And I absolutely loved the look of that tent in the moonlight!! And the house boats you described are soooo endearing! I won't miss to ride one when I visit Kerala next time! I was there last year.....I came to Guruvayoor 😊 ....but did not have the time for a houseboat! 😕

And the way I greeted and hugged Robina........I would definitely do that if I met her really too!!!! 🤗

I made Unniyapaam for him???? Fat chance 😡 😡 😡 aur woh bhi mujhe 'Di' bulaane ke baad???? 😡 😆
All the 3 songs were great!!!!!!

Jaanu...........hats off to you!!! 👏 👏 👏 I really mean it!!!! This is the only FF I have read where the members have been involved as characters in the FF!!! It is extremely creative of you to come up with such an idea!!!!
Keep it rocking, girl!!!

And hope you feel better soon! 🤗

Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago

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