Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93 - Page 76

Originally posted by: RK_fan111

Wow!! what a adventure filled part👍🏼.. I just loved the way you have written and not filmy at all....Thanks for that appreciation Paddu!! 😳 I was a bit worried! I have to applaud you for the writing was so fabulous 👏..... that I never knew when it ended and I simply felt I could keep reading and I never wanted it to end!😳Aahh.......that makes me feel so good! Thanks! 🤗 😃

Really you are bringing out AA story so fantastically that I just loved the way they are falling for each other..I liked the dialogues u have given them....it is coming out very cutely and I like this Ajay guy😛 ..just that I dont want him to change his feelings for Alaana when he comes to know of RK!😕That's a thought.....Have not thought through that yet as something else happens before that!

RK...I cant have enough of them😆...Me neither!!!! 😉 😆 I was all thru thinking how nice it would be if they show some of these things on the show😆 Then the show will rock 😆 😆.....just get RK together and nothing else is needed!

Poor kastu is accident prone just like Robbie is in the show😉.So true Paddu....😆 😆 😆.....Robbie must have been very affected by her actions ...he would love her all the more😳 He is!!! And yes.....he is going to love her even more! I am curious to know how Robbie can control his feelings now in front of others..he is stuck..poor guy😳Yes.....he is in a tight spot! 😆

who is the other who is shot at?...kya yaar iss baar toh dhamakedaar suspense..comeon now dont take too long to update .. make it faster..please!😳Can't say anything now.....but next update will be by thursday! 😳 😃

hi pragal..enjoyed reading yet another part of u r FF.

in group 1 alaana with 3 boys, in group 4 robbie with 3 girls... good combination...ummmm gia is with anand...😉

riddles were good...i liked it..👏

i luved the new ring tone of kasturi's cell phone...😊

claimming the mountain itself is a adventure...u added another adventure of rescuing the kidnapped girl...doubble adventure...👍🏼

Originally posted by: robbii

hi pragal..enjoyed reading yet another part of u r FF. Thanks robbii! 😃

in group 1 alaana with 3 boys, in group 4 robbie with 3 girls... good combination. good observation!!! 😆 😆 ..ummmm gia is with anand...😉 Oh no......I will get someone better for Gia! 😉 😆

riddles were good...i liked it..👏 Thank you! 😃

i luved the new ring tone of kasturi's cell phone...😊 That's a favorite song of mine and I figured I will use it here as her ringtone! 😆

claimming the mountain itself is a adventure...u added another adventure of rescuing the kidnapped girl...doubble adventure...👍🏼 Yes, double adventure! Wanted to get as much adventure out of this part as possible! 😆 Because once they all go back to Delhi, it is going to be a couple of emotional parts, filled with sentiment! 😃

Fantasticcccccccccc part 👏this part was totally Adventurous 👍🏼absolutely love this part😃

AA geting closer and closer and closer😆awww so cute 😳their bits were written naturally👍🏼 loved it👏

hmmmm AA together🤔 awww 😳if 2 Chawlas are together (1 is going to be😆) then all Sabharwal is family together😉😆 (1 is going to be) lolz😆

Sammer do not try to interfare in AA lives 😡you can have the Mumbai girl😆 she already fancy you😉 you two make a good pair👍🏼 lolz😆

NOOOOOOOOOOOO Alanna Ajay is very kind Hearted😳 dont compare him and Sameer😕

Go Divya Go Rajat lolz😆

Raunak is aware of the love birds😉 hmmm i must say inteligent guy😆

RoKa☺️☺️☺️

Ajay😡 hate him now😡 why hes trying to make up RaKa 😭nooo if hes trying then we will not give him Allana😆 so now Ajay if u tried making up RaKa 😡i wont give you Allana😡😆 understand lolz😆

Cluless about the Riddles😆

Go Kasturi your not less than Sabarwals😆

OMG i think Kasturi and Divya both has been shot😕😭 1st KA and then Divya 😭😭😭OMG this is horrified😭

waiting impatiently for the next part please update soon😃

wowwwwwwwwwwww, real shocking part Ppp di, i was too busy thinking of the other characters there that i had already had forgotten about that kidnapped girl, never knew that u would bring it back.
the part was very very well portrayed, i got too into it, that i'm heart beat is still racing . it was bit filmy but well portrayed.👏
yeah, this thingy is also struck in my mind, that wen robbie knew how divya is, then why didn't he take her with him instead of shivani, i guess, at that situation he was just thinking of that kidnapped girl and nervousness mein didn't think tooo much about divya.

but i don't blame divya for doing that,i mean she waited for 45 mins, that so long man, i get really upset wen i have to wait for the bus for 4 or 5 min wen i go to school, so i usually go late and the bus driver usually stop the bus seeing me running towards the bus with my backpack and buks in hands😆 one is real sweetheart, she a little big, she never get upset at me,😃 another one is really sadaloo type, even though i say sorry per phir sur hilati rehati hai mujha dekh kar, as i've done any crime.
and wonder wat the other groups might be doing now, yaar, kasturi really impresssed me, wen she made everyone lie down, 👏
so kasturi got shot, let's see. and that was gud idea of making alaana a fashion designer. waiting for that, this couple has made its own place in my heart. 😃

now, i understood, wat u meant by that, u and ur mom's situation. i thought u and mom r like my mom too. anyways

update soon, i'm waiting

love
harman 😛

hey Pragalbha...sorry summer break is here so really busy trying to keep my little one's busy..this usually is me at the end of the day.. i apologize for the late reply, anway on to the Sizzling part..uff, action, drama, intrigue...romance you had it all. and did i find it filmy? Hell yes it was like a film i have to say, and this story of yours could easily be turned into one i say.. 👏 Bravooo, this part went by soo fast i read it 3 times.. fantastic... no scrap that Brilliant Pragalbha..👏

really love how ajay and alaana are coming closer..very natural and nothing too strong.. agree with anju that ajay is becoming more loveable then robbie. for me tooo!!😳(all your fault prazs)

and i just wanted to slap divya for her not listening to her brother...😡 uff she could have gotten herself killed, what an adrenaline rush the whole saving the girl scene was..

and i luved the robbie and kasturi romance in between the trek up the mountain.. very well put in..

and the riddles were superb, i got the first 2. but the third one had me...

and i liked how not just one person solved the riddles, i'm glad you had all three solve diff. riddles.. group work ... way to gooo..

and ronauk hmm i'm wondering about his future role...

wonderful part.. really enjoyed it... thanks sooo much..

robina😃