Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93

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Posted: 17 years ago

#771

Pragz wow you have completed 100 pages...that is great news! 👏 👏 👏 Pragz thanks for all the time you have taken to write and entertain us...all your ffs have been a pleasure to read and that is a major attraction for me to have stuck to this show and forum. 😳 May God bless you and wish to read many more ffs of yours in the coming days! 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

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wow 100 pages..me wish karti hu tum 1000 page tak likho..tumari FF ke liye me is forums me aati hu..ab muje serial se jyada tumari ff acchi lagti hai..
tum ek FF khatam karkw dusri start karo..lekin likhti raho..

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pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Robina, Shara, Paddu and Payal...........thanks a bunch for the congratulations and wishes! I appreciate it a lot! 😃

Shara, I got delayed by a day in posting the next part, but I will post it now, in another half an hour. 😊

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pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Re-cap : The whole group gets divided into smaller groups and take part in a trekking adventure. Enroute Shivani chances upon the kidnapped girl held as hostage. While Robbie and Shivani goto get help, Divya and Kasturi release the girl from captivity. A showdown between the kidnappers and police ensues in which Kasturi gets shot.....or ??

PART -28 : SORRY, SHE IS TAKEN!

Robbie dashes towards Kasturi and Divya, going completely crazy with worry and concern!! 😒 😔 🥺 Shivani and a couple of the police personnel follow him on close heels. Divya who had frozen in her tracks, shocked at the sound of the reoccuring shots, 😲 turns back to look at Kasturi! She sees Kasturi on the ground and letting out a gasp, 😲 rushes back to a fallen Kasturi!

The pain in Kasturi's right foot was excruciating! 🤢 She rolls on her back clutching her foot, her face contorted with pain!! 😕 Her foot had crashed against a huge stone and she had falled down!!! But for the people looking at her, it looked like she was shot!!! 😲 😲 But....she was not shot! Most luckily and unexpectedly for her, the backpack she was carrying over her shoulders had saved her from getting shot!!!! 😲 😲 The first shot, the one that the kidnapper had fired, got stuck in her backpack and the second shot...........the police had fired it, to kill the firing kidnapper and save Divya and Kasturi's life!!

Divya reaches Kasturi first and is checking up on her, when the rest of them reach her too. When they find out that neither Kasturi nor Divya have been shot, a wave of relief spreads through them, specially through Robbie's heart and mind!! He offers a silent prayer to God!!! Seeing her brother right next to her, Divya starts crying 😭 😭 and Robbie hugs her and comforts her. 🤗 He is very happy and relieved that she has not been hurt!!! After a few moments the police chief takes Divya away for questioning and Shivani goes with Divya. Robbie turns to look at Kasturi.
"Kasturi???" asks Robbie.... ....He did not have to ask anything else........the way he calls her name serves as a inquiry as well as a concern!!! Kasturi looks up to him through her pain. The concern his eyes were expressing, the worry lines on his face 😕 will make Kasturi forget her discomfort for a moment and to lighten the atmostphere and to relax Robbie she says with a slight smile....."Ab samajh rahi hun, uss din bus stop peh tumhe itnaa ghussa kyun aaya!!" 😉 Robbie laughes involuntarily. 😆 😆 A couple of tears that were sitting on the edge of his eyes blink out! Both of them stop smiling and stare at each other, the magnitude of how fatal this could have been registers in their minds!! Suddenly Robbie grabs Kasturi and hugs her fiercely to himself!!!! Kasturi hugs him back, clutching his shirt tight......the pain, the fear, the fact that they could have been separated forever.....everything converting into desperate intensity to bring the happy reality back into context!
Robbie kisses her left shoulder deeply and whispers......."Mei itnaa darr gayaa tha!!!" Kasturi simply closes her eyes savoring every second of that profound and deep moment! This moment was enough to make her forget all the physical pain she was suffering!!!
Slowly Kasturi opens her eyes and she looks straight upto Shivani who was staring at them from behind, looking shocked, bewildered and confused!!! 😲 😳
Kasturi is disconcerted 😲 and she quickly pushes away from Robbie saying...."Hi Shivani!", in the process letting him know that Shivani was watching them!! An awkward Robbie releases Kasturi and turns back to look at Shivani! 😳 An embarassed Shivani quickly mutters....."Bhaiyya, woh police officer tum seh baat karnaa chah rahe the!".......Robbie looks in the direction she is pointing. The Police chief was taking Divya's statement. He turns back to Kasturi and says........."Tum yahi thehro, I will get somebody to help you!" He gets up and walks to the police chief. Enroute Robbie goes to the team of personnel who had just completed giving first-aid to the abducted girl and who has now come back to senses and was crying incessantly with relief and pain! He requests the team to help Kasturi and walks to the police chief.

Meanwhile Shivani continues to stare at Kasturi and Kasturi is wondering and trying to make out the expression on Shivani's face! 😳 Finally, Kasturi decides to break the silence and starts to say......."Shivani........"
Shivani leans down to Kasturi and asks : Bahut dard ho rahaa hai?
Kasturi shakes her head in the affirmative. Shivani tries to relax her foot a little. Meanwhile the first-aid team arrives there and they clean up Kasturi's wound and try to dress it up. All during that time, Shivani keeps staring at Kasturi! The way her brother had hugged Kasturi, it seemed very special and not an ordinary hug! Were they more than friends?? Kasturi could see these questions run through Shivani's mind but Shivani does not ask her anything!

When Robbie reaches Divya and the police chief, the chief tells Robbie
Police chief : You have one daring sister, Mr.Shabharwal!!! It gladdens my heart to see such an enthusiastic and daring youngster! 👏 👏 👏
Robbie glances proudly at Divya. 😳
The chief continues : Lekin Divya, bahut utaavlaapan bhi accha nahi hai! Hamesha soch-samajh ke kadam badhana!
Divya shakes her head in affirmation.
Pointing to Kasturi, the chief says again : Mei unseh bhi bayaan lenaa chahta hun........woh aapki.....??
Robbie says : Woh meri dost hai, Kasturi Chawla.
Chief : Ek baar unkaa bayaan lele, toh sab waapas chalte hai. I think it will be a good idea to take all 3 of them for a medical checkup.
Robbie agrees and the chief leaves to talk to Kasturi. Robbie looks at Divya fondly. He extends his left hand and pulls Divya into his fold and hugs her from the side. He had wanted to give her some advice about not being so hasty and thoughtless about her actions, but decides to save it for later.

Soon, the whole entourage reaches the Camp Panther office where a mobile medical Unit is awaiting them. The young girl, Kasturi and Divya undergo check-up. Divya is declared fit, Kasturi's foot is attended to. Luckily, she has not fractured anything but the Doctor advises her to be careful as the injury will take about a week to heal. The young girl turns out to be the daughter of a local politician and had been kidnapped to blackmail her family! Her relieved family thanks Divya and Kasturi profusely and blesses them!!

After finishing all the other formalities, Robbie and group are dropped off at their campsite. This whole process has taken about 3 hours and by then the other groups had finished their trek! Rajat, Raunak, Alaana and Ajay had reached the top first and so, they win the prize - each of them get a a 3-day, 2-night package to the Himalayas where another branch of their resort operated!! 👏 👏 But when Rajat comes to know about the adventure Divya and her group had, he is dumbstruck and wishes he had been part of Divya's group!!!! Everyone is shocked and amazed at what had happened!!! 😲 😲 They praise all four of them, specially Divya and Kasturi! 👏 👏

A very concerned Ajay spends the rest of the day with Kasturi. At the first opportunity she gets, Kasturi asks Robbie about Shivani noticing them. Robbie assures her that it is not a problem and that he will talk to Shivani if needed. That night the tired bunch go to sleep early as the next morning they were all going to drive out.

Kasturi cannot trek down because of her injury and so the resort office has arranged a vehicle for her. Ajay and Gia decide to accompany her. They are all packed up in the morning. And before Kasturi leaves, they all pose for some group pictures! Digital cameras are brought out and photos flashed! They get a few of the girls alone, a few with only the guys, Raunak with his cousins, Ajay and Kasturi, Robbie with his sisters and then a few of the whole group's (clicked by the driver of the vehicle). Ajay, Kasturi and Gia travel in the vehicle and the rest of the group treks down. In a couple of hours, all dues are settled and everyone is ready to leave for Delhi. Ajay insists that Kasturi travel back with him. Unable to refuse him, Kasturi joins him and a lonely Robbie drives away wondering if Ajay separating him and Kasturi was going to become a habit!! 😕 😔

When Robbie and the girls reach home, Devika and Puru welcome them fondly! 😳 The house is immediately filled up with excitement and action! With all of them talking and hugging and running around the house, They had missed the kids a lot eventhough it was only 4 days!
Devika says : Tum logon ke binaa toh ghar kaatne jo daud rahaa tha! 😊
Puru agrees. Robbie & the girls are also very happy to be back home! This was one adventure filled holiday they had, that they were not going to forget anytime soon!! Divya can't wait to tell all that has happened and for the next hour and a half they reaccount the whole trip to Devika and Puru. Devika and Puru listen to the happenings spellbound! 😲 😲 They express their appreciation and relief at the abducted girl finally reaching her home 👏 👏 👏 and express their concern at the accidents that Alaana and Divya would have had! 😕 😕
Shivani suddenly says : Agar Kasturi nahi hoti, toh Divya ko toh goli lag chuki hoti!
Robbie looks at her, surprised at that statement!
Devika asks : Robbie, yeh Kasturi kaun hai?
Before Robbie can reply, Shivani says : Kasturi, Kasturi Chawla hai. Bhaiyya ke boss ki behen hai.
Robbie smiles at Shivani and adds : Haan chachi. Aur woh meri dost bhi hai. 😊
He looks at Shivani who is staring at him! Shivani quickly looks away and Robbie decides to not reveal anything, unless asked!
Devika replies : Kabhi milaana uss ladhki seh! I want to thank her for saving Divya's life! 😊
Robbie shakes his head in agreement and thinks........."Aap seh toh usse milaana hi hai! Hope you will like her!"

A week passes by. Robbie gets back to his work and everyone else is back to their routine. Kasturi is recuperating from her injury and Ajay is waiting for Alaana's phone call!
The following Sunday, after dinner, Devika and Puru decide that now is the time to do the 'talk', the talk that they had been planning to have with Alaana for almost a month now. Once Shivani and Divya go to the study room, Puru picks up the topic.
Puru : Betaa Alaana, kai dinon seh yeh baat chedhnaa chah rahaa tha......aage ke baare mei kya socha hai tumne? Aage padhna chahogi kyaa? 😊
Devika adds : Yaa phir hum tumhaare shaadi ke baare mei soche? Bahut seh acche rishten aa rahe hai........hum soch rahe the ke baat chalaayen......
Alaana interrupts and says : Maa, mei abhi shaadi nahi karnaa chahti! Its too early!!
Devika says : Mei maanti hun ke its a little early, magar sirf yeh ek kaaran ki wajah seh, 'naa' karnaa shaayad theek baat nahi hogi! Haan, agar tumhe kuch aur karne ka mann hai toh theek hai!
Alaana says : Haan, mei kuch aur karnaa chahti hun. Mei naukri karnaa chahti hun! 😳
Devika and Puru look at each other. They had not planned on this option! They listen to her quietly. Alaana does not tell them about Ajay's offer instead she simply says
Alaana : Meri ek saheli ek job ke baare mei bataa rahi thi......ek apparel designer kaa job! Aap toh jaante hai, mujhe yeh kaam kitnaa pasand hai! Toh mei soch rahi thi, kyun na try kare.........agar aapki permission ho toh!
A discussion ensues and Robbie is asked for his opinion too. Alaana did not have the courage to tell them, it was Ajay who had offered the job! She assumes that her parents would have reacted differently and fearing that reaction she had lied to them! Robbie whole-heartedly approves Alaana's taking up a job and so it is settled that Alaana should try to get a job.

Eventhough the decision is taken that day, Alaana finally musters courage to call Ajay only a week after! She finally calls him and Ajay is overjoyed to receive her call as well as with her decision to take up his offer, though he takes care not to express it to Alaana. 😳 He quickly talks with his friend and arrangements are made for Alaana to attend an interview with the manager of one of his friend's store, a lady - Ritu Malhotra. Ritu knows the interview was a mere formality and that Alaana already had her boss's recommendation. But Ritu still goes through the excercise and Alaana is hired to start work within a week.
The next day Raunak calls Robbie. His cousins were leaving, back to London and he was throwing them a casual bash. Since they all had so much fun together, he wanted to invite Robbie and his sisters also to the party. Robbie accepts the invitation. The party is on Saturday at the Country Club. They could not hold the party in any nightclub as there were youngsters in the group below 18 and they would not be allowed into the nightclubs.
When the girls are informed about the invitation, they react differently! Alaana's thoughts immediately fly to Ajay! 😳 😳 The thought of seeing him again will bring a blush to her face! ☺️ Divya is happy to meet Rajat and the whole group again! Shivani is the only one who is not really interested in the party! She wishes not to go but Alaana and Divya force her to join them and not to be a spoil-sport!
Soon, Saturday arrives. It is an excited bunch of Sabharwals that await the party. Alaana had been fretting the whole week not knowing what to wear! She knew this was a high class party and she had no clue how to get dressed for that! 😕 She was attending one of those for the first time! Divya never cared how she looked and so she slaps on her jeans and T-shirt and the only dressing up she does is, she wears a pair of dangling earrings, which will look very good on her! Shivani too wears a simple cotton skirt and blouse and she is ready. Robbie who was just too casual to be bothered with such things, wears black jeans and a cream T-shirt that he had chanced upon suddenly a few weeks ago. The T-shirt had "I make robots, but I am NOT one!"...written on it, in black! They all are ready and waiting for Alaana who was still matching things up and working out her look!!

An irritated Robbie yells from the living room
Robbie : Jaldi kar Alaana, yahin cheh baj rahe hai! 😡
Alaana yells back : Aaai!! Bas do minute!
Robbie mutters : Aadhe ghante seh 'do minute' kar rahi hai! 😡
Divya says : Arre bhaiyya, Apartment complex mei party ke liye hi dii, do ghante lagaati hai tayaar hone mei..........yeh toh upscale party hai, char ghante toh lagegaa hi! 😉 😆
Robbie shakes his head and says : I swear, mujhe kabhi samajh mei nahi aayega, ke ladkiyaan tayyar hone mei itnaa waqt kyun lagaati hai!!
Shivani says with a sly smile on her lips : Kasturi seh poochiye bhaiyya, jawaab mil jaayega! 😉
A shocked Robbie quickly looks at his aunt to see if she has heard it 😲 but Devika was busy correcting some test papers! He stares at a giggling Shivani!! He just cannot believe she said that!!! He again yells back at Alaana
Robbie : Alaana, jaldi karo......bahut late ho rahaa hai! 😡
Finally after 15 minutes, Alaana comes out looking gorgeous in a black, full-length silk dress that she herself had sequined with beads. 😳 😳 The dress is beautiful and Alaana looks absolutely breathtaking in it!!! (This is the dress) Everyone stares at her! Devika cannot help but think how gorgeous Alaana really was! Divya hates that dress and she says making a face...."GROSS!!" Shivani stares at Alaana with admiration in her eyes and says....."Dii! Aaj toh, kai ladhke gaye kaam seh!"
Devika is shocked at such a statement from Shivani and thinks......."Iss ladhki ko pehle kabhi aise baat karte nahi sunaa!!" 😲 Alaana turns to look at Robbie for approval. Two conflicting thoughts were crossing Robbie's mind......one, he admired his sister for her flawless beauty but he was also skeptical about the need to wear such a formal dress! As far as he knows, these parties were pretty casual and he felt that Alaana was dressed up too much for the party! He tells her......."Mujhe lagtaa hai tum thodi overly dressed ho, Alaana! This is too formal!" But he sees her face fall with disappointment and so quickly adds......"Ofcourse, kya pataa, tumhe dekhkar sabko aisa lage ke woh log bhi kuch formal pehen keh aate!!!" 😃 Alaana recovers and smiles happily and they all set out.

They reach the club by 6.30 PM. Both Rajat and Sameer are mighty glad to see the Sabharwals again!! 😃
Alaana turns everyone's head! Her striking beauty is such that people always turned to look at her a second time and the other thing that was making people look at her was that she was the only one dressed so formally! She simply stood out from the rest of them and it was making her feel very uncomfortable and embarassed! 😕 Gia had already arrived at the party. She immediately comes over and falls in with the girls and they start talking excitedly!

Unknown to each other, both Robbie and Alaana are scanning the crowds for Kasturi and Ajay, respectively! But they don't find them. Apparently the Chawlas were running late. The party gets into full swing. There are games and dancing and a lot of food and drink. Shivani and Divya look on to see girls and guys guzzling down alcohol like water! The skimpy dresses and low necklines will make them both shrink away with disgust! 🤢
After a while, Ajay arrives. He was late, as a prior appointment of his was running late. After greeting Raunak and others, he quickly scans the crowd and notices her immediately....after all she was one of a kind, there! 😳 😳 Alaana was busy chatting with the girls and so does not notice him! Ajay simply stands and stares at her, amazed at how beautiful she looked! 😳 😳 Feeling somebody's eyes on her, Alaana and turns and sees Ajay staring at her! She blushes involuntarily! ☺️☺️ It was for this moment that she had dressed up but when the moment was upon her she was too scared to even look at him! Ajay makes his way towards her and with his decreasing the distance between them, her heart beat is increasing by leaps and bounds!!
He reaches her and simply says : Hi!
Alaana croaks out of her dry mouth : Hello!
They look at each other for a moment and then Ajay looks away, sipping his drink! He was treading dangerous ground! She was looking so hot, he had to look away!!
Alaana clears her throat and says : Woh.....mei aapko Thank you karnaa chah rahi thi.....mujhe aap hi ki wajah seh woh job mil gayaa hai!
Turning back to her, Ajay says : That's great! Congratulations! Magar issmei Thank you ki koi zaroorat nahi, you are qualified for the job!
Suddenly, some one slaps Ajay on the back. Both Ajay and Alaana turn to look and Neha Baweja comes from behind Ajay. She hugs him tight and kisses his cheeks and says........"If its not Ajay Chawla!!! 😳 Darling.....aaj kal kahin nazar hi nahi aate! Itni bhi kya naraazagi humseh!"
Ajay winces a little but brings a smile to his face and says to his ex-girlfriend........"Hey Neha! Kaisi ho!"
Neha shrugs her shoulders and says : Kaisi ho sakti hun??? Tumhaare binaa tadap rahi hun like fish out of water!!
Ajay again forces a smile onto his lips and curses himself for having asked that question! He knew that would be Neha's answer! It was this precise fakeness of Neha that had made Ajay dump her after a few dates!!! But she still did not seem to get his point!! He glances at Alaana uncomfortably. Alaana was staring at both of them!
Ajay says again : Oh haan Neha, meet my friend......Alaana Sabharwal! And Alaana, this is Neha Baweja, a......a friend of mine!
Neha brings a huge fake smile to her face and says : Oh come on Ajay, stop being so coy......nobody is a kid here, right?? Then why such a modest introduction??
She extends her hand towards Alaana and says : Hey! I am Ajay's ex-girlfriend and you.......his current one???
Alaana does not take her hand and simply says : Hello!
Neha withdraws her hand feeling awkward and slighted! She turns to Ajay and says
Neha : Good choice Ajay........she is quite beautiful!
Ajay frees his hand from her hands and changes the topic saying : So, how come you are here Neha?
Neha asks : Why not? Is this not a party? Raunak neh invite kiyaa......woh tumhaare jaisa nahi hai....jo hamesha mujhe ignore kare!
She continues looking at Alaana with contempt : Ofcourse, Raunak neh casual party kahaa tha, yahaan aake pataa chalaa ke thode logon ko casual aur formal mei difference nahi pataa!
Alaana is taken aback by how blunt and rude she was! 😲 😲 She thinks its better to go away from this uncomfotable situation and so mumbles
Alaana : Excuse me.....see you later!
Neha cuts her short and eyeing her dresss, says : Alaana, next time..........tone down a little! Ajay ko phaasne ke liye itni tayaari karne ki zaroorat nahi hai......You are so pretty, woh toh waise hi tumhaare ishaaron peh naachne ke liye ready ho jaayega! 😉
Alaana is too shocked 😲 to answer and her eyes are brimming with tears. She quickly walks away from there. She needed to be alone for a moment and so walks out of the room into the empty balcony. She walks till she reaches the edge of it and stops trying to collect herself!! She should have listened to her brother! Atleast she would not have suffered such ridicule and contempt from the likes of Neha!!! And all those other people who had been looking at her and laughing among themselves! She closes her eyes trying to control her tears!

Inside the party, a furious Ajay was giving Neha a piece of his mind 😡 😡 .........."Tum hamesha poochti ho na ke why I dumped you?? Abhi tak toh mei chup rahaa, kyonki I did not want to hurt your feelings! 😡 Lekin aaj.....today I will tell you the truth!! I dumped you because it did not take me long to see through this facade of culture and notice that in reality you had a very cheap and construed mind! 🤢 Grow up Neha and maybe just in time you will be able to find someone that really appreciates you! 😡 Till date, I did not regret my decision about breaking up with you! But today, I am jubilant that I did what I did!! 😡
He starts to walk away but turns back to her and says : It is simple to be difficult, it is difficult to be simple but it is simply difficult to be beautiful!!! And Alaana is beautiful! By the way, she is not my girl-friend but thanks for the great idea.........now she will be my girl-friend and who knows one day she might be Alaana Chawla too!!!
He gives one final withering look to a shocked Neha and walks away from her! 😲 😲 😲

He had walked upto her quite noiselessly because Alaana is startled when she hears him next to her
Ajay : Sorry! Neha ki taraf seh mei sorry boltaa hun!
Alaana turns to look at him. Ajay notices that she had taken that incident very much to heart and so he says........."You know Alaana, duniya mei bahut seh log bahut jealous hote hai! Aur wahi jealousy jab bardaasht seh baahar ho jaaye, toh jali-kati baaton ka roop dhaaran karke, logon ke aankhon seh aur hoton seh behne lagti hai! You should not care for such comments!! You look amazing! All these people don't stand a chance in front of you and that is why they pass such comments! 😊
Alaana smiles and says : Sahi keh rahe hai aap......mujhe aisi baaton ka buraa nahi maananaa chahiye! I need to be more strong! 😊
Ajay says : And that strength will give you the confidence to face any kind of situation without faltering!
Alaana nods her head. She is so happy to note that he was going out of his way to make her feel comfortable! They talk for long during which Ajay mentions to Alaana that she was looking beautiful! The bond between them gets stronger and they feel more comfortable with each other!! Finally, they decide to go back to the party and walking back Ajay cannot help but say......."I am actually glad ke aaj Neha hame mili! Varnaa aapke saath baat karne ka itnaa accha maukaa miss ho jaata!"
They both smile at each other and enter the party, knowing in their hearts that they had covered a lot of ground today and were on the verge of taking a leap into the world of love!

Kasturi had still not arrived and so a bored Robbie is trying to while away time. She had been really busy for the past 2 weeks and he had not been able to talk to her much. The Singapore Dance Theater was celebrating their 20th annivesary towards the end of July and so the SDT had formulated a fantastic show for 3 days, showcasing all forms of Eastern dance. Several artits from India had been invited and Kasturi was one of them! She had been invited to perform both in the classical as well as contemporary dance forms!! It was a very prestigious stage to perform and Kasturi was thrilled to receive the invitation! 😳 She had been working out the details of performing in this gala event and so had been really busy! Almost half the party is over when she turns up! Ajay had just them stepped into the balcony.

As soon as she comes, she scans for Robbie. He waves to her........he has been constantly looking at the entrance. 😛 Kasturi waves back at him but immediately she is accosted by Raunak. Robbie's eyes follow her as Raunak takes her hand and leads her to a table. Raunak has been waiting for her too!! Robbie sees him order a drink for Kasturi and they seemed to be in deep conversation! After a while, he sees a strained look on Kasturi's face and Robbie decides to interrupt. He walks towards their table when he hears Kasturi saying.........."Raunak, mei pehle bhi tumhe bataa chuki hoon......meine tumhe uss nazar seh kabhi nahi dekha! Tumhe hamesha sirf ek accha dost samjha hai!
A frustrated Raunak asks her : Theek hai Kasturi. Lekin baat aage badhane mei kya harz hai? I like you and I was hoping......
Robbie's arrival interrupts him and Kasturi is relieved to see him! But Raunak is not too happy to be interrupted and he says to Robbie......."Robbie, if you don't mind, I need a couple of minutes......I need to talk to Kasturi!"
Kasturi gets up and says : But I am done Raunak! Aur tum yahi jaananaa chahte ho na, why I am not interested in you?? Well, because........
She moves towards Robbie and holding his arm says softly........."because I am in love with Robbie and he, with me!" 😳
Both Robbie and Kasturi stare at a shocked Raunak, 😲 staring back at them.

Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago

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pop77

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Posted: 17 years ago

#775

nice part..thank god kasturi ko goli nahi lagi..
robbie ne police cheif ko Kasturi Sabharwal kuy bola?
shivani ko patta chal gaya..robbie & kasturi dosti se kuch jayada rista hai..
finally alaana ko job karne ki permission mil gayi..lekin usne scchai batai nahi hai..i hope ronak kuch robbie ko batane ki kaushish na kare after he knows about robbie & kas..
neha ka sukriya kahena chaiye..usne ajay ko aheshash karvya ko such me alaana se pyar karta hai..
waiting for next part whr ronak reaction..

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simpleL0VE38

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Posted: 17 years ago

#776

Hey Pragalbha🤗 🤗. Wow this is a fantastic part 👏 👏 👏. Kasturi and Divya are both okay!😊 Poor Robbie.. he must have been going through hell at that moment.

OMG Shivani saw RK. Let's hope she won't be angry or anything 😳.

And Robbie called Kasturi 'Kasturi Sabharwal'😆.. was that a typo or was it intended to be like that 😉.

Haha Divya is sooo cute & funny, I like her daring, upbeat attitude. I loved this line-"do ghante lagaati hai tayaar hone mei..........yeh toh upscale party hai, char ghante toh lagegaa hi"😆 LOL

Ajay and Alaana are just adorable 😊. That black dress is really pretty by the way 😳.

And the biggest shocker in this part 😲.....now Raunak knows about RK. I wonder how he'll take it 🤔. Upload the next part soon 😃.

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bikerider

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Posted: 17 years ago

#777

pragz 😃 thanks yaar once again a nice part and that too on saturday , i can read at leisure 😉

you are doing excellent job with AA 👏 👏
hmm shivani being naughty 😉
again a cliffhanger with raunak's shaocked face 😆

this is for you 🤗

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pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#778

Originally posted by: pop77
nice part..thank god kasturi ko goli nahi lagi.. Glad, you are relieved! 😆
robbie ne police cheif ko Kasturi Sabharwal kuy bola? Woh meri galti thi. 😆 I corrected the typo. Thanks for drawing my attention to it!
shivani ko patta chal gaya..robbie & kasturi dosti se kuch jayada rista hai.. Haan, aur woh abhi confused hai ke kaise iss baat peh react kare!
finally alaana ko job karne ki permission mil gayi..lekin usne scchai batai nahi hai.. Haan, aur yeh baat shaayad baad mei problem create kare! i hope ronak kuch robbie ko batane ki kaushish na kare after he knows about robbie & kas..
neha ka sukriya kahena chaiye..usne ajay ko aheshash karvya ko such me alaana se pyar karta hai.. That's right! 😆
waiting for next part whr ronak reaction.. [color=blue] From next part a new twist and track will start, this part I was just tying up all the loose threads. 😃

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pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#779

Originally posted by: mike00rules
Hey Pragalbha🤗 🤗. Wow this is a fantastic part 👏 👏 👏. Hey Pooja.....Good to see you here! And thanks! Kasturi and Divya are both okay!😊 Poor Robbie.. he must have been going through hell at that moment. He was very worried for both of them and qually relieved to find out they were not hurt!

OMG Shivani saw RK. Let's hope she won't be angry or anything 😳. Nah.........she won't be angry but she is definitely confused about how to react to this!

And Robbie called Kasturi 'Kasturi Sabharwal'😆.. was that a typo or was it intended to be like that 😉. A typo!!!! 😆 Though that will become true later!

Haha Divya is sooo cute & funny, I like her daring, upbeat attitude. I loved this line-"do ghante lagaati hai tayaar hone mei..........yeh toh upscale party hai, char ghante toh lagegaa hi"😆 LOL She is a very perky yougster and a darling of the fanily!

Ajay and Alaana are just adorable 😊. That black dress is really pretty by the way 😳. They make a cute couple! And thnaks for liking the dress! 😊

And the biggest shocker in this part 😲.....now Raunak knows about RK. I wonder how he'll take it 🤔. Upload the next part soon 😃. I will try to update ASAP.........am writing it now!

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pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#780

Originally posted by: lwfw
pragz 😃 thanks yaar once again a nice part and that too on saturday , i can read at leisure 😉 That's good! 😃

you are doing excellent job with AA 👏 👏 Thank you, Shara......am trying to give them equal footage with RK
hmm shivani being naughty 😉 That's a new facet of her personality that I am trying to reveal here onwards! 😛
again a cliffhanger with raunak's shaocked face 😆 This is really not such a big cliffhanger! There will be one more coming up in 2-3 parts! That will be the REAL cliffhanger!!! 😉 😆

this is for you 🤗 Thank you dear! Sometimes I feel very unmotivated to write. But when I see the genuine warmth and interest of people like you, I push myself again! 😳 🤗

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