Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93 - Page 46

nice part..kasturi impress robbie..robbie kuyu apne aap rok raha hai..kasturi prove herself that she can leave wht you can leave and do..now robbie realise he loves her..when he going to kiss her..
sorry i don't have time to write some comment your previous part..today i came here to put some comment but i already get new part 😛 ..so now..thanks for sonia..for panjabi dialogs..
teri writing to bat hi mat karo.....mindblowing.. 👏

waiting for next part..

reserved when I finish studying my syllabus today I will comment!!!

Pragz wow what a part 👏 👏 👏

hila your RK part was excellent it was typical high romantic k-serial scene hope one day ekta will copy this 😳

love the bus stuff, ok finally robbie has cometo conclusion that he is in love with kas and no use denying it 😆

love your detailed explanation you write very well 🤗

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A very long and interesting part Prag! 😃 😃 I didnt want to come to the end of it 😆 😆

Finally Robbie has admitted to his feelings.....to himself atleast! 👏

I could totally imagine Robbies challenging face when he was talking about the village 😳 im glad Kasturi adjusted very well! The short skirt bit was funny 😆 😆Poor Kasturi the old man staring at her legs 😡 🤣

I liked how you portrayed the way Robbie was trying to keep himself away from her, the emotional battle he was going through came across very well....initially on the bus, then when their eating etc....but he had to give in at the end 😉 😉 👏

The old lady's baby comments 🤣 🤣 poor Kasturi being embarressed like that 😆 😆 😆

I really like your detailed explanations of the scenes it helps me mentally imagine it 😃 especially the last bit.....Kasturi clutching his T-shirt, leaning on him, Robbie putting his arm around her etc 😳 😳 😳

He came so close to kissing her 😆 😆 control Robbie control yourself 😉 😉

Waiting for next part Prag 😃 😃

by the way.......was Kasturi awake...did she hear him whisper his feelings to her? 😉 😉

oh ye and thanks alot for the english translation to the Punjabi dialogues 😊 😊 i wouldnt have had a clue what they were saying to each other! 😆 😆

Kay

Hey Praggg wow dear Great part ..bahut aacha part tha ..dil nahi kar raha tha ki khatam ho 😳...jaddu hai tere aur teri FF meh jo humhe aur bhi crazy kar deta hai 😳

robbie nahi sudhrega 😆..bechari ko darra diya 😆..lekin pyar meh bechari ko yee bhi karna pardega yee nahi socha hoga kastu ne ..nahi toh kabhi pyar na karti 😆 ...but i love yaar ki kis tarah kasturi ne apne aap ko robbie ke liye change kar diya 😳...pehle bahut hi proudy thi ..lekin ab bikul opposite hai 😳

i love this scene jab robbie kastu ke baal haath se hatta raha tha 😳..serial yaad aa gaya ..wo purane din 😭..Thanku Praggg ...humhe itne aache Moments dene ka😳😃 ..kyu ki serial se toh ab koi umeed nahi 😕

and jis tarah robbie ne usse suit pehne ko kaha i love this ..kyu ki insaan usse hi kehta hai ..jiske dil meh kisi ke liye kuch ho 😳..aur wo usne last scene meh Prove kar diya 😳...and jis tarah se tumne iss scene ko likha hai pragg hatts of u👏 ...insaan read nahi balki dekh sakta hai ki robbie kya mehsoos kar raha hai 😳..par ab toh wo pyar meh hai 😉....and jo usne I love kaha hai ..aggar kastu ne sun liya toh ???..kya hoga 😆

God Brilliant part yaar ....pragg tera har part ek se bard kar ek hota hai 👏👏...Koi kammi nahi hai ....main tere har part se saticfied hoon 😳😃..Love u dear

ab Next part kab likh rahi hoo??😳

Manpreet

Paddu : Thanks a lot for the great comments. Makes me feel very good!
The biggest problem was, I wanted to write a lot in this part. In fact I have written only 60% of what I wanted to write and the part was already over 20 K!! So I had to kind of rush through a few details and just reach the concluding part and that was leaving me dissatisfied.
The dance is coming in the next part. 😊
And the pushing her hair away is one of my my most fav RoKa actions and I was totally imagining that when I wrote that! 😆 😆 😆
Glad you liked it! 😃 Pre-cap not given purposefully but I am sure you will like it!

Robina...........thanks a lot!!! No, I am not a classical dancer but I have seen friends traning in classical dance. But I wonder why you had that doubt because I did not write any dance scene yet. In fact it will come in the next part. 😃 You know how the elderly women are specially from the country side 😆.........she was behaving just like a typical grandmother and I found her very genuine! The part where Nithya gets angry was my attempt to make Robbie look more human! I realized I was portraying him too good and so wantd to make him seem a little realistic. 😉 😆 Thanks a bunch Robina............next part will be up by weekend.

Hey Payal.....thanks yaar! Yes, Kasturi had really put up with a completely different lifestyle to prove to Robbie that she is adjustable! And she has impressed Robbie too! So lets see what Robbie will do next! 😉 Thanks for making the time for this FF!! 😃



Pallavi............very good decision! Pehle kaam phir aaraam!!! 😊



Shara............thank you so much dear!!! The bus trip is very typical Indian travel. I myself have travelled so many times in a bus that I could really write it out easily and very comfortably!!! And the romance in the bus was an idea that I had wanated to implement for long!
The denying will end soon..........atleast he has confessed to himself now instead of denying and so that's a step in the right direction! 😆



Kay...... 🤗 Badaa mazaa aaya tere comments padhke!
I myself would not have had a clue about the dialogs if not for Sonia and Mannu (who helped me with dialogs for Kashmakash) 🤗!!
Yes, Robbie is in the right direction...........now its just a matter of a combusting point before he breaks open!!! 😆 😆
Ha Ha Kasturi hearing him??? That will be revealed in the next part!!!!
Next part will be on Sunday! 😃

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww what a part Pragz dii
hw r u?
well all I cn say is im soooooooo happy after reading your part.
Go robbie he is totally in love
His changed Kasturi totally go robbie you ttoally rock!!!
hmmmmm i couldn't imagine this arrogant kasturi going to the village and actually living there. But i guess al that has changed 😆
Yhp Pragz dii the romance in the bus scene awwwwwwww 😳 how sweet. Only if kasturi was awake and she had heard him she would be over the moon lol.
Ok Now Update the nxt part asap i just cnt w8 2 read it.
Once again you rock Pragz dii!!!
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Mannu.....bahut bahut shukriyaa!! I am so glad ke tujhe accha lagaa! 😊
Robbie dekhna chah rahaa tha ke, Kasturi mei kitnaa dum hai! Aur haan Kasturi neh apne aap ko bahut badlaa.
Aur woh baal hataane waala scene toh meraa bhi favorite hai! 😳 Aur yeh tune sahi kahaa, ki jiski humkoh chinta hoti hai, usi ke baare mei hum concerned hote hai!
Thanks mannu, ke tujhe pasand aaya......Kasturi neh kya sunaa, kya nahi...yeh agli part mei pataa chal jaayega!
Aglaa part Sunday ko. 😃



Hey Humaira.......I am doing good! Yes, Robbie is totally in love! And kasturi did make an all out effort to convince him that she is not all that bad! I think the ball is now in his court! That's true!!! If Kasturi had heard it then she would have gone bonkers! 😆 😆
The next part will be up on Sunday!!! Thanks for the wonderful comments! 😃

Oyyyyyeeeee why are u making Robbie suffer soooooooooo much???😆😆 He is such a cutie pie with all those confusions in his head. Iam glad he didnt Kas wen she was asleep. I want it to be as romantic as possible wen they kiss for the first time😳😆😆 I dont want them to have any guilty pangs wen they kiss, so u take ur own sweet time to unite them😆

Iam luving Alaana and Ajay's pair too.... Start their luv story, I promise I wont say tat as filler😆.

Its sooooooooooooooo gud to see Kas trying to do her things by herself and Iam proud of her. Hahaaa Nithya rightly said to Robbie to keep his practicality speech away for a little while😆😆😆 He needs tat😡😆😆

Write sooooooooooooooooooon, wen posting next part???😃