Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93 - Page 37

ohhh pragz....hmmm....cho chad...bechara robbie! 😭 ....such a tragic past he has!...ye sunke bohot bura laga...but very nice how he coped wit it and moved on in lyfe!...dats a gud boy Robbie! 😃

wonderful part pragz...truly amazing! 👏 👏 ....

luv dat in ur ff kas will b chasing after robbie...v funny n innovative....luv how ur developing kas' character here...seems very cool....

aww...robbie doen't call devu "maa"...n she'ws sad...but i guess its understandable...he loves her like hus ma...but can't seem to call her that yet...seems genuinely believable...

next part jaldi likhna...thnchu 4 the wonderful time pragz.... 😳

hey pragalbha, first off, i have to say that joke was soooo funny, it had me rotf...🤣 and i thought you said humour comes hard to you., yeah right, that cant be true...😆

okay back to the actual part.. really emotional..part, the bond btw devika, robbie and Puru are simply heart wrenching.. all three of them just really luv one another and want to do the best for one another... i luv this devika... she's simply an amazing lady with the fortitude of patience...👏👏 and of course the tragic death of robbie's parents was very hard read, for its always very hard to say goodbye to someone before their time...

your hard work really paid off Pragalbh, i enjoyed the meeting of kas and robbie, it was done with just the right amount of sizzle nothing to heavy... bravoooo..

and i like the way robbie is slowly bringing kasturi around to his way of thinking... not forcefully but in a more intelligent manner...

waiting to find out what job robbie ends up taking, and how kasturi adn robbie meet again..

throughly a great read...👏👏

robina

first of all this is 4 u- 🤗
Awesome part....well I wish this would have been the actual storyline of the serial...in these times of frustration when nuthing is going right in the story your FF is like a relief flooder!!!
This is simply outstanding!!! I loved your potrayal of robbie's past! It was so touching!
yaar wat to do we are compelled to write-UPDATE FAST 😃 !

star : Thanks dear! Yes Robbie is strong, does not allow the past to interfere too much with his present! It has gone through some tough times!
Kas is really falling for him 😃......lets see where this leads to!
Thanks for liking the part 😃

Robina.........First off that joke is not mine! I don't have that much talent!! 😆 It is one of those jokes that floats around on the net. A friend of mine had sent it to me a long time ago and I simply used it here. But I love that joke...it is too good! 😆 😆
Yes it was a very emotional part. I felt very bad for Devika too while writing. But that is the ultimate thing a mother really wants.....that her child call her his mother, she really does not expect anything else!
Thanks Robina for liking RK meeting. I know I am going a little slow but I really don't want to rush it! Once they own up their love for each other, phir toh they are always gonna be together!
And yes Robbie is bringing her around, she just does not know it yet! Thanks a lot for liking it!

Pallavi.........thanks a lot! The stupid serial is partly why I updated this part faster......just want some relief from all the heartbreak!
Thanks for liking it 😊 and next part will be Sat evening!

Aaahhhh Paddu........your comments are getting longer 😉 😆 😆 Love to read them!
Robbie just has a very emotional past that has hardened his heart! And yes Devika is amaxing with him. She had poured even more love on him because of what he had suffered! Puru is a wonderful father and I am glad you could relate to his situation!
Here Kasturi is the chaser. She is gonna have to make the efforts because Robbie is not gonna open up so easily!! 😳 Gnanopadesh..... 🤣 🤣 🤣 It was meant for Kas but if the rest of us learn something too, then it will be good! 😆 😆
Glad you liked the joke and the song! It was most perfect for Kas and I HAD to use it!
I am glad you are able to find my take on Robbie's character realistic! Thanks for liking this part so much! 🤗

first of all😃 lemme say dat this part was funny🤣, emotional😭 and starting of RK love😉 lolz 😆

i feel sorry 4 robbie😭 i must say devika is a sweet maa😳 lolz

kasturi control urself😡 lolz 😆but isme uski bhi galti nahi hai jo bhi robbie ko dekhle baas pyar ho jata hai😍

update soon 😉

Awesome!!!!!1 👏
Please update faaassstttt!

Thanks Mani! RK love has definitely started and it will get into a new level in the next part! And I agree, issmei Kasturi is galti nahi hai! 😆

Thanks a lot moon.....the next update will be up by Sat evening. 😊

Aah Jima........sorry to make you emotional but Robbie and Devika relationship is really an emotional one! OK, Robbie is now close to 23 and a half and this happened about 9 years ago so he was 14 and a half. Hope that helps 😊 I was waiting for your comments!

Thanks Jima.........But I want you to add the color back to your posts! You and Raksha, and Krishi and Robina have these unique colors that help me to recognize you instantly!!! I love seeing those colors!!! 😆 😆

Alright then..........next part will be up Saturday night (my time)!! 😊