Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93 - Page 39

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Posted: 17 years ago
aww...pragz.....cho cute and yet so saaad! 😳 😭

first off....kya? robbie accepted the offer so easily???...well its believable of his character....since he wanted it so bad...but I wld hv liked him to make Ajay plead!...he he he...sorry...i dunt like AJAY here very much....which means u've dun a gr8 job wit his character!

and Kas...ab kya kahun?...iqraar kar diya...woh bhi aise hi...uff!...it was delightful...and yet abrupt...which made it all the more enjoyable...

aur robbie? rejecting her...so natural of him in ur FF...luv the way u kept him realistic and logical...but afterall..RoKa r made for each other...toh aaj nahi to kal bacchu..robzie tumhe bhi iqraar karna hoga aapne pyaar ka!...can't wait for it!...luvvvly part pragz!

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Posted: 17 years ago
pragz dii hats off 2 u⭐️ ur describination is superb 👍🏼
yay robbie got da job 😃 wohoo nd ajay is so 😡 😡 arghhhh
kasturi declare her love 4 robbie😲 woooo but robbie should'v accepted nd i lv gia 😆 because of her kas declares it 😉 at least 🤪 😆 da song suits perfectly dii 👏 this is a crucial satge dii u hv 2 continue ASAP 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
🤗🤗This big hug for you Dii ! 😃
You've left me wordless today..I really wanted Kasturi to be the first one to confess her love for Robbie..But I never spectulized it to happen so fast and this way... 😳
What to say of Robbie...you have really understood him so well..It definetley takes time for a man to ventilate his feelings !
And I really wanted it to happen this way..I am loving the way you are taking the story to a another level ! 😛
Thankyou so much !!🤗

Sofia
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Posted: 17 years ago

Pallavi......I am very happy you enjoyed it soo much!! 😃 You worked hard for it....... 🤣 And I am soooo glad you could relate to the emotions in the part!!! And yes the song is too good....very happy you liked it!!! 😳 😃

Kay dear........thanks a lot!!!! I can imagine how shocking it must have been to see Kasturi reveal her feelings just like that! 😲 but she really did not have a choice..... 😊
And yes it is really hard for her now because she will have to put double the efforts to get Robbie to accept her!!
I will try to update as fast as possible, but thoda gap toh hoga...... 😃

Krishi..........so madam decided to grace the thread with her appearance, huh?? 😡 Thanks a lot for enjoying the part! 😃 And I agree that giving the Guy's perspective being a girl is very tough.....because we have no idea how their brain works.....I did have to put a little extra effort to get into Robbie's skin!!!

Payal...........thanks a lot dear!!!Kasturi ko kehna padha 😆, ab the ball is in Robbie's court, lets see how he handles it!!! He will not be able to stay away from her for too long.....there is something very strong between them though he does not know it yet! I will continue with Bhagya Rekha too......aaj shaam ko uskaa next part update hoga! 😃

Harman.......😳 Thanks a lot dear!!! 😃 I am very very glad that I had you surprised! I am sooo glad you can relate to Robbie. He was really shocked and was absolutely stumped! I am very happy you enjoyed both the twists!!! 😃

Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Robina.....I am very very happy that you found Robbie accpeting the job very realistc! Because that is how he is......he does not function within the parameters of constrained thought parameters.....he does not think that by accepting the offer immediately and by expressing his intentions, he has become a smaller man! 😊
I am glad you like Ajay too because I like him too....he is a difficult one but ht will play a MAJOR role in the story later.........
Gia and Divya are very adorable and cute 😃
The confession was something I spent time on yesterday!! 😆 😆 I had it all typed up but did not post because I wanted to mull on it. So while making lunch yesterday, I was constantly thinking about it and finally after sitting on it for a few hours I felt I was the right direction and then I posted it!!! 😃 Its surprising how an FF can become part of your life.....I end up thinking about it soo much, it surprises me!! 😊
And no, Kasturi haar nahi maanegi..... 😆 😆 She is gonna go after him..... 😉 😆

Star.....I can totally understand what you mean when you say that Robbie should have played a little hard to get.........that is gonna happen, a little later when he once starts working with Ajay....I am sure that situation will leave you satisifed! 😆 Abrupt is the perfect word for that situation.... when she woke that morning, she had no idea what was going to happen!!! 😛 And yes RK are made for each other, he will have to come around....I will make sure he does 😉 🤣 🤣

Mani......😆 😆 Yes Kasturi shocked all of us!!! Robbie will accept but not now....he needs time......contrary to the way guys are projected in TV and movies, they really take time to express their true feelings......personal expereince 😆 😆 The song is too good.....I am so happy you liked it! I will continue soon........

Sofia.........🤗 Thanks a lot! I am very happy that you enjoyed it and that you completely understood Robbie's point of view! 😃 And yes Kas was going to confess first...remember we all wanted this to be different fromt he serial!! 😆 😆 I feel so satisfied when I am able to make you all love the story!!!

Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Pragggg ....yaar yee kaha aa kar rok diya ...kya hoga aage ??😆

ok ..very well written 👏...Robbie ne offer accepte kar liya ??...wesse maine socha nahi tha ki essa hoga ..lekin robbie ke character ke hisab se theek hai ...aur wesse bhi yee uska Dream job tha 😳...but ajay...mujhe aacha nahi lagta ...isse sidha karne ki dava hai humhare pass😉 😆..Alaana!!😆

Aur yee kya kasturi ne apna pyar ka ijhaar kar diya 😆...main jo chahti thi wahi huya 😆...and jis tarah tumne Robbie aur kasturi ke part ko likha hai very well ...ki juba toh kuch nahi keh rahi ..lekin aankhon ki bhasha keh rahi hai ..ki robbie love her deeply ..lekin manta nahi hai 😳..but don't mind ..abhi tarasne dete hai kasturi ko 😉😆

aur tumhare liye kya likhu ...actully mere pass words nahi .....and jab bhi kuch likhna chahti hoon ..samaj nahi aata ki kya likhu ....but main sirf itna kahungi ki ....tumhe dekha nahi ...tumse kabhi baat nahi ki ..lekin phir bhi main tumse bahut pyar karti hoon ...tumhare writing style se bahut pyar karti hoon 😳...tumhari respect karti hoon ...main sab logo ki tarah aacha aacha comment toh nahi de pati ..lekin jo bhi main likhti hoon tumhare liye ..usmeh 100% sachayi hai ...I really love u Pragg 😳😃...u are very intelligent and great person 😃

ab tum next part kab likh rahi ho ??😳..i can't wait yaar

Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Mani......😆 😆 Yes Kasturi shocked all of us!!! Robbie will accept but not now....he needs time......contrary to the way guys are projected in TV and movies, they really take time to express their true feelings......personal expereince 😆 😆 The song is too good.....I am so happy you liked it! I will continue soon........

hahaha..that is what my mother always tells me !!😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

😆Guys.....I am really really happy to see such wonderful feedback!

Mannu.......mei kya kahoon tumhaari tareef ke badle? 😊
This is what I want to say, and I want to say this to everyone of you all.....my writing skills are but a fraction of what some great writers and orators in this world have written and whose books I have read. I cannot even stand in comparison with them! But in our own small world here in this forum, in this section.......I am glad that I am able to give satisfaction to you all and make you enjoy the story! 😳 It means a lot to me and I am sure all the other FF writers of this section will agree with me when I say that! Every one of us has a different style of writing ,that is unique........which gives even more an insight into how our minds think and how we perceive! 😊
Thanks a lot for your wonderful comments...... 🤗
Now coming to the part........mujhe aisa kyun lag rahaa hai ke tumhe Robbie kaa itni jaldi job accept karna accha nahi lagaa?? 😃 Actually mei uss track ko aur zyaada kheenchna nahi chahti thi 😆 Mei Ajay aur Robbie ke beech relationship jaldi build karna chahti thi aur Robbie kaa character aisa hai ke usse sacchai bataane mei koi sharm nahi hai....ke usse job chaiye tha! 😊

Jima.............Thanks a bunch for such swwt comments!!! 😃 I totally agree with your perspective about why Robbie should not declare or accept her love yet........my mind is also functioning, just like your's!!! 😆

Kasturi needs to realize the importance of love............everything has been coming too easy for her and Robbie needs confirmation that she is absolutely honest about this!! I will try to update as soon as possible, but can't give a day yet, I hope you understand! 😊

Ha Ha....Sofia...........trust your mom, she is speaking the absolute truth!!! 😃

Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG PRAGZ DII
i know ive read the part l8
But OMG im thinking to my self why didnt i read it b4
What a gr8 part i aynt got no words to express how good it is
What a gr8 part with so many mixed emotions.
I cant beleive it Kasturi actually expressed her love to him. OMG. Aur yeh kya robbie hurt her 😭
But yh i guess i got a feeling why his doing this?
His lost his parents in his life is that why his not trying to get any one else closer to him because he might lose them 😕
I dont know lolz. All i can say is that Robbie loves her soooooooooooooooooooooooo much.
Oh Robbie got the job CONGRATZ to him 👏 👏 👏
Oh and OMG i love Jordan sparks song NO AIR with Chris Brown. Gr8 song to go with the situation tehy were in lolz.
So this is to you and i seriously cant tell yuo in words what an awesome writer you are Pragz dii
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Now ab jaldi se nxt part post karo. I cant w8 2 read it
XxXxX
Edited by PrInCeZz07 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pragalbha

😆Guys.....I am really really happy to see such wonderful feedback!

Mannu.......mei kya kahoon tumhaari tareef ke badle? 😊
This is what I want to say, and I want to say this to everyone of you all.....my writing skills are but a fraction of what some great writers and orators in this world have written and whose books I have read. I cannot even stand in comparison with them! But in our own small world here in this forum, in this section.......I am glad that I am able to give satisfaction to you all and make you enjoy the story! 😳 It means a lot to me and I am sure all the other FF writers of this section will agree with me when I say that! Every one of us has a different style of writing ,that is unique........which gives even more an insight into how our minds think and how we perceive! 😊

Pragg ..honestly ..maine jo bhi storys read ki hai sirf iss forum meh ki hai ..actully ... mujhe Novels and books read karna aacha nahi lagta 😕...and meri life meh maine pehli story FF read ki wo tumhari thi kasmakash ...aur uss FF se main bahut attach ho gayi thi ..lekin jab tumne uska end kar diya ...mujhe bahut dukh huya 😭...isliye tumhe force kiya ki ek aur FF start karo 😳...meri iss comment ka matlab kisi another writter ki feeling ko hurt karna nahi hai ..kyu ki apni jagah sab aache hai 👏...lekin tum jessa mujhe koi nahi lagta 😳cos u are best 😳👏...aur tumhare baad kisi ka number hai toh wo Sonu aur robina hai 😳...

and Pragg ...mere dil meh jo tha wo keh diya 😳...aur yahi main tumhare liye feel karti hoon 😳.....and sirf FF hi nahi ..even tum post bhi bahut aacha likhti ho ..characters ko samaj kar ....
Thanks a lot for your wonderful comments...... 🤗

Thanks tumhe nahi humhe karna chahiye 😳


Now coming to the part........mujhe aisa kyun lag rahaa hai ke tumhe Robbie kaa itni jaldi job accept karna accha nahi lagaa?? 😃 Actually mei uss track ko aur zyaada kheenchna nahi chahti thi 😆 Mei Ajay aur Robbie ke beech relationship jaldi build karna chahti thi aur Robbie kaa character aisa hai ke usse sacchai bataane mei koi sharm nahi hai....ke usse job chaiye tha! 😊

So ..tumne Note kar liya ??😆..Really yaar ...maine itna jaldi nahi socha tha ki wo job accept kar lega 😆...par tumne sahi kaha ..ki uska character essa hai ...par haan aggar iske piche ajay aur robbie ke relation aache karne ki baat aati hai toh phir theek hai 😆

Lekin tum ab next part kab likh rahi ho ??😳

Thankkksss dear for wonderfullll FF🤗..and love u 😳

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